内容正文:
Reading for Writing
(Writing about your school life)
Unit 3 Our Colorful School Life
Developing
Learning aims
1. 基于写作目的、文体和要求,分析课文结构,列出介绍校园
生活的内容要点;
2. 绘制主旨细节图表,谋篇布局,拟定框架,完成写作任务;
3. 通过自评和互评,改进文章的结构、内容和语言;
4. 积极、快乐地融入多彩、有意义的校园生活。
What do you know about
English students’ school life?
Hi! I’m Li Ming. I want to share my school life with you.
What do you think of their school life?
Analyze the text structure.
My School Life
I am a middle school student, and my school life is colorful.
We usually start our day at 8:00 a.m., and our classes end at 4:00 p.m. We learn many different subjects like Chinese, math, science, history and English. After school, we play games. There are also many interesting after-school activities. We can join the clubs, play sports or go to the library.
I really love my school life!
Title
Beginning
Body
End
School time
Subjects
After-school activities
Activity 1
Skim the passage for the Main idea.
文段主旨一般在第一段或者最后一段。
Main idea:
My school life is__________.
colorful
My School Life
I am a middle school student, and my school life is colorful.
We usually start our day at 8:00 a.m., and our classes end at 4:00 p.m. We learn many different subjects like Chinese, math, science, history and English. After school, we play games. There are also many interesting after-school activities. We can join the clubs, play sports or go to the library.
I really love my school life!
Activity 1
school time
subjects
after-school activities
Main idea:
My middle school life is___________
Detail:
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Detail:
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Detail:
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We usually start our day at 8:00 a.m. and our classes end at 4:00 p.m.
We learn many different subjects like Chinese, math, science, history and English.
After school, we play games. There are also many interesting after-school activities. We can join the clubs, play sports or go to the library.
colorful
Read the text and complete the main idea and detail chart.
Activity 1
Read the essay carefully and answer the questions:
1. How is the writer’s school life?
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2. What time does the first class start?
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3. How many subjects does the writer list?
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Colorful.
It usually starts at 8:00 a.m.
Five.
Activity 1
My School Life
I am a middle school student, and my school life is colorful.
We usually start our day at 8:00 a.m., and our classes end at 4:00 p.m. We learn many different subjects like Chinese, math, science, history and English. After school, we play games. There are also many interesting after-school activities. We can join the clubs, play sports or go to the library.
I really love my school life!
Learning
join 和 take part in 的用法
① join “加入”,指加入某个政党,团体,组织并成为其中的一员。
② join sb.(in doing sth.) 和某人一起(做某事)
③ join in = take part in = be in 参加某项活动
练习:
I will ___________________ the swimming club.
Let’s ___________________ them in playing basketball .
She often ___________________ the football game .
join
join
takes part in /joins in
play sports =do sports 做运动
How is your school life ?
An Essay
Title
Beginning
Body
End
题目
开头
主体
结尾
来熟悉下文章结构吧!
Pre-writing
Learning
Activity 2
Draw a main idea and detail chart about your school life.
Main idea:
My middle school life is___________
Detail:
__________________
__________________
__________________
Detail:
__________________
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Detail:
______________________________________________________.
school time
subjects
after-school activities
While-Writing
Activity 3 Draft your essay about your school life.
School time
Subjects
After-school activities
__________________
I go to school_____________. My middle school life is ______________________.
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I really _______________________________!
Title
Beginning
Body
End
While-Writing
While-Writing
Activity 4 Make your final draft in your exercise book.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. My middle school life is interesting and colorful.
My first class starts at 8:00 a.m. I always go home at 4:30 p.m. I learn different subjects like Chinese, math, English, biology, history and so on. I have biology every Tuesday. It is my favorite. After school, I like to play football with my friends on the playground. There are so many clubs. I join the sports club and I make many friends there.
I really enjoy my school life.
My School Life
范文
Activity 5 Invite your partner to rate your final draft. Write 1(more improvements needed), 2(fair), 3(good), or 4(excellent) for the ratings.
How well can you ________________ ? Partner’s rating
express your love for school life
use the thinking skill of organizing the main idea and details
introduce your school life
organize ideas into a well-balanced structure
use the theme vocabulary of the unit
use there be...
use punctuation
spell the words
Post-writing
1. 学会分析课文结构,列出介绍校园生活的内容要点;
2. 基于写作任务,能够绘制主旨细节图表,谋篇布局,拟定框架,完成写作任务;
3. 通过自评和互评,改进文章的结构、内容和语言。
Summary
假如你是比尔(Bill),请你结合下面表格内容用英语写一篇60词左右的短文简要介绍你的校园生活。包含所有要点,可适当拓展,标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
校园环境 干净而美丽……
学习 学科多而有趣……
课后活动 参加锻炼……
感受 快乐……
My School Life
Hi, I’m Bill. This is my school life.
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书面表达
My new school is not very big, but it’s clean and beautiful. The teachers and students here are very nice. They help me a lot. I have so many interesting subjects.
I like Chinese, math and English best because they are easy to learn. I often do sports after class. I like playing basketball with my classmates. It’s very relaxing.
I love my new school very much. I’m happy to study here. My school life is colorful.
Homework
1. Make your final draft in your exercise book.
2. Invite your partner to rate your final draft.
Thank you !
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