内容正文:
读后续写
[一]读后续写的写作思路
读后续写,一般都是围绕conflict(冲突,矛盾),solution(解决方案)来组织
的,在阅读文章时你要找到文章中到底有什么样的冲突或问题。基本模板如下:
情绪
一般是消极情绪
细节
进一步细节描写
转折
个人的努力或借助外界
转机
事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到宽慰
失望
但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
想法
突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
结局
过了一段时间,事情有了最后的转折
总结
点题,呼应前文
当然,并非每个环节都需要,也可能不是这个顺序,甚至可以穿插进行,这不
是固定不变的。详述如下:
1.情绪
典型表达:感到;因…颤抖
①感到(这个可以有多种表达方式,如可用非谓语动词或介词短语,并且可以
结合在每一个环节中)
a flush/,wave/feeling/sense of...(表情绪的短语)
flooded over sb./swept over sb..一阵…席卷了某人
(表情绪的名词有anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/,embarrass-
ment/disappointment/guilt/shame/joy/excitement/pride)
②因…颤抖
tremble/shake with fear/panic/excitement/rage...
2.进一步细节描写
典型表达:流泪;心里想
①流泪
Tears blurred one's eyes..泪水模糊了某人的双眼。
One's eyes got misty..某人的双眼模糊了。
One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.
泪水模糊了某人的双眼。
be close to tears惶惶欲泪
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Tears rolled down one's eyes/cheeks/face.
泪水顺着某人的眼睛/脸颊/脸流下来。
②心里想
An inner voice told sb.that...
内心的声音告诉某人…
thought/,said to oneself自己盘算;自思自忖
3.转折(个人努力或借助外界)》
典型表达:鼓起勇气(或通过另外一方的鼓励);毫不犹豫
①鼓起勇气
pluck up/take/gather one's courage(to do...)
②毫不犹豫
sb.could hardly wait to do sth.
without a second thought
without even thinking
without delay/hesitation
4.事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到宽慰
典型表达:似乎;希望;宽慰
①似乎
It was like doing sth.
It seemed that.../as if...
②希望
Hoping that...
..see/feel a glimmer of hope...
trying hard to do sth.
③宽慰
.breathed a sigh of relief松了一口气
.sighed with relief如释重负
A wave of relief flooded/washed over sb.
一阵如释重负的感觉淹没了某人。
to one's relief...令某人宽慰的是…
5.但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
典型表达:不幸的是;不知道(接下来)做什么
①不幸的是
But bad luck for sb.,..但是某人真不走运,…
..but in vain.…但徒劳无益。
..but without success.…但没有成功。
..but no luck.…但不走运。
②不知道(接下来)做什么
wondering what to do next
not knowing what to do next
unsure of what to do next
be at a loss what to do
be in a dilemma about whether to do or not
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6.突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
典型表达:某人突然想到/明白…;某人突然有了主意
①某人突然想到/明白…
It suddenly occurred to sb.that...
=It hit sb.that...
It struck sb.that...
=It struck sb.that...
②某人突然有了主意
(idea,thought...)occurred/came to sb.
=..came/flashed into one's mind.
=..crowded in one's mind.
One's mind began to race...
某人的脑子开始飞快地运转起来…
7.过了一段时间,事情有了最后的转折
典型表达:过了一段时间;有了结果;皆大欢喜
①过了一段时间Not long after that,,.
=Shortly afterwards,...
Before long,...
=It didn't take long before...
=It took some time before..
②有了结果
To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough,it turned out that...
令某人吃惊(高兴)的是/奇怪的是,结果…
But on second thoughts,..但是转而一想,…
But what happened next was pure magic.
但是接下来发生的事非常奇妙。
③皆大欢喜:格式参考“情绪”
8.点题,呼应前文
典型表达:直到…某人才意识到…;还记得某人的话,…还在某人的脑
海中;经验与教训
①直到…某人才意识到…
倒装句:Not until-+时间状语+did sb.realize/notice that...,
强调句:It was only+时间状语+that sb.realized that...
②还记得某人的话,…还在某人的脑海中
One's words rang out in one's ears.
One's words(voice/song)whispered in one's mind/head.
One's head was still full of...
③经验与教训
What a/an...lesson sb.taught me!
What a/an...lesson sb.learned from sb.(valuable/useful/great/painful)
What a/an...experience sb.had!
(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)
Down deep in one's heart,...
在某人的内心深处,…
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