第一部分 应用文写作-【衡中学案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习学案（北师大版）

7.dowm考查动词短语。固定短语：turn down拒绝。故填dowm。 We are expecting your arrival.Your presence would add to the 8.of考查动词短语。固定短语：take some time off请假一段时warmth and happiness of our family gathering.If you are available, 间。故填off。 please let me know at your earliest convenience. 9.in考查介词。in表示“在某方面”，get a degree in...意为“在 Your sincerely, 某方面获得某项学位”。故填in。 Li Hua l0.comes考查动词的时态。根据语境可知，Sarah认为当下 应该是学业第一，说明现在的情况应该用一般现在时。故填 三、感谢信一真诚道谢，学会感恩 演练提能 IIl.1.made it 2.keep up with the others his small body rocking 参考范文： from side to side 3.on the top of the mountain 4.in good condition 5.On the whole 6.made it a habit the key to Dear Mike, How are you?Thank you for sending me the photos that bring 7.the first to worry about back those wonderful memories. IV.1.encouraging us to speak more The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just 2.is responsible for/takes responsibility for 3.under his professional guidance incredible.We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea.On the 4.boosted our confidence in expressing ourselves way back,we tasted the fine local food,which was impressive indeed. 5.a really enjoyable experience And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home.I really had a great time 写作培优 高分进阶 I'd like to invite you over this weekend.It will be a chance for you to meet my family.Looking forward to your coming. Yours, 第一部分应用文写作 Li Hua 四、申请信—一毛遂自荐，心诚则成 第二讲应用文写作实战操作 演练提能 ! 参考范文： 一、建议信—分析问题，献计献策 Dear Henry, 演练提能 I'm glad to hear that a school website will be set up in our school. 参考范文： I'm writing to apply to be an English reporter. Dear Andrew, Not only do I have a good command of English,but I also do well Thank you for your asking me about whether to introduce some in Chinese,especially in writing.Actually,I have won some prizes in knowledge of British history in our upcoming lessons.However,Iboth English and Chinese writing contests.More importantly,I have believe that it isn't necessary. i been interested in,and familiar with joumalism,especially the new Our focus should be on improving students'English language media,such as Weibo,WeChat,and Douyin. skills.While learning about British culture is interesting,it may not I do believe I'm well qualified for the position.Given the chance, be directly relevant to their language development.Therefore,II'm sure I will do a great job and won't let you down.I'm looking suggest we continue with our current lesson plan. forward to hearing from you. However,if there is a specific aspect of British history that relates Yours sincerely, to the language or culture,we can certainly incorporate it into our Li Hua lessons.But overall,our primary objective should be to improve 五、道歉信—一真诚致歉，前嫌尽释 students'language proficiency. Best regards. 演练提能 Yours,! 参考范文： Li Hua Dear Peter, 二、邀请信—热情相邀，以诚待人 I'm writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to the English classic Gone with the Wind you kindly lent me. 演练提能 Yesterday evening I was absorbed in the book when I carelessly 参考范文： i knocked down the cup,the hot water pouring over the book.I was Dear Chris, upset that the whole book was in bad shape.Knowing how precious the Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese traditional book is to you,I'm terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused. festivals,I'm writing to extend a sincere invitation to you to come over i I expect to make it up to you by replacing the book with a new to my house to celebrate the upcoming Spring Festival. copy.I've purchased one online,which will be sent to you in 3 days. This year,the festival falls on February 10th.Apart from I hope this unfortunate incident won't affect our friendship.Please enjoying a feast,we will spend the day visiting relatives and friends,i accept my heartfelt apology. setting off fireworks,or watching the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Yours, Generally,children will get lucky money. Li Hua 558 六、求助信—阐述困境，委婉请求 benefits and drawbacks.Technology has greatly improved our efficiency, allowed for global communication,and enhanced our entertainment 演练提能 ioptions.It has revolutionized the way we communicate,learn,work, 参考范文： and entertain ourselves.However,it has also led to issues such as eye Dear Mr Black. strain,addiction,and privacy concerns.Balanced use is crucial to How are you doing? maximize its benefits as well as minimize its negative impacts.We Ive signed up for the English poetry recitation contest to be held must prioritize real-world interactions,protect our privacy,and ensure by our school,and I'm writing to see whether you could provide me that technology does not overshadow our daily lives. with some help. The contest requires that each participant should recite a poem 十、报道—所见所闻，客观陈述 about nature,and I've found three poems.Could you be kind enough to演练提能 help me choose the most suitable one?Besides,I hope you could also!参考范文： give me some advice on how to recite it. A climbing event to celebrate the New Year I would be very grateful if you could offer me some help.Looking i To welcome the new year,our school hosted a climbing activity forward to hearing from you soon! on New Year's Day. Yours sincerely, The climb began at 10 a.m.and lasted for an hour and a half. Li Hua We took part in a launching ceremony at the Happy Valley gate to warm up before the climb began.We wrote our New Year's wishes on 七、演讲稿—激情洋溢，畅所欲言 red ribbons and tied them to trees along the way,Reaching the top, 演练提能 we got a bird's-eye view of the entire resort. 参考范文： As"climbing high"symbolizes growth and new accomplishments Good morning,everyone. in Chinese culture,the event helped demonstrate the spirit of"striving Many teachers have taught me in my life but I think Miss Green is i upward"and express our wishes for a happy and prosperous 2025 the most respectable one Miss Green teaches us English,who I think is smart and pretty. 十一、通知—提前告知，周全准备 You can always see a smile on her face.She goes to school early and;演练提能 goes back home late.She is helpful and patient.She is always ready 参考范文： to help students in need.She teaches English well.She tries her best Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition to make her lessons interesting.With her help we have made great To raise students'awareness of saving food,our school English progress in English.She is not only a good teacher but also our close newspaper is scheduled to hold a writing competition,whose theme is friend,playing with us after class and sharing little secrets with us “Hand in Hand,Save the Food”. Miss Green loves us and is loved by us.We will respect her forever.i Anyone in our school interested in the competition is welcome to 八、倡议书—发现问题，呼吁行动 participate.Entries should consist of an original piece of writing with 400 words or fewer.They should be related to the theme and show how 演练提能 we can contribute to saving food.Please mail your entry to our email 参考范文： address englishpaper@hotmail.com by January 31 and the result will Say No to Phubbing be published on May 1,2024 With the wide use of the mobile phone,phubbers can be seen Looking forward to your active participation and creative writings. everywhere-at home,in the office,on the bus,and on the street. Those so-called phubbers usually lower their heads looking at 第二部分 读后续写 their smartphones and ignore whatever happens around them.Needless i to say,it's bad manners to neglect your friends or family members 第二讲续写文本解读 around you.What's worse,phubbing can be dangerous.For example, if you stare at your phone while crossing the street,chances are that -1.I,my social studies teacher,my older sister When I was in accidents may happen. middle school in middle school My fellow students,it's time to raise your head and pay attention 2.my social studies teacher I(a middle school student)my to people around you.Look at them,talk to them,and care about i older sister them.After all,you should live in real life instead of virtual life. 二、I.my teacher asked me to enter a writing contest→ny teacher The Students'Union encouraged me to have a try-I chose a subject and began to write 九、投稿—抓住时机，直抒胸臆 resistant-→willing to do-一→persistent--→enjoyable 3.1When I was in middle school,my social studies teacher asked me 演练提能 to enter a writing contest. 参考范文： 2My family came from Brazil,so English was only my second The impact of technology on our lives ! language. The impact of technology on our lives is profound,with both 3Encouraged by his words,I agreed to give it a try. 559写作培优高分进阶 第一部分 应用文写作 第一讲应用文写作技巧概述 一、应用文写作命题透视 应用文写作以新课标核心素养为命题宗旨，以新高考评价体系为命题依据，以真实情境为考 查载体，以解决问题为考查导向，主要测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息、表达观点、 解决问题的能力。文体可以是书信（邮件）、新闻报道、短文投稿、通知、发言（演讲）稿、日记、倡议 书、海报等。话题主要覆盖学校生活、社会生活、旅游、文化习俗、课外活动等方面。命题形式多为 文字提示，词数为80左右，满分15分。 2021.6 2022.6 2023.6 2024.6 新高考I&Ⅱ卷 新高考I&Ⅱ卷 新课标I&Ⅱ卷 新课标I&Ⅱ卷 真题回眸 投稿 邀请信 建议信 告知信 人与自我 :人与自我 人与自我 人与自我 生活与学习 生活与学习 生活与学习 生活与学习 向校英文报Yout止 写邮件邀请外教 就外教“将学生 分享公园美术 投稿庆祝创刊十 做一次访谈 随机分组练习口 课的经历 轮总复习 周年 语”提建议 1.考查形式今后会更加灵活多变。命题形式以提纲型和半开放型为主，给出简明的场景文字提示(40-70词 之间)，让学生有一定的自由发挥空间。 349 2.考查主题仍然以贴近学生的学习与生活为主。“学校体育赛事、学校邀请外教做访谈节目、学校外教口语课 随机分组练习、美术课”等主题对学生有亲切感，利于学生下笔答题。这种趋势会继续下去，中国传统文化 风 也是今后考查的热点主题之一。 向 3.考查内容在思维难度上会加大。例如：2024·新课标I&Ⅱ卷应用文写作，要求写一封电子邮件，描述在公 园里上美术课的经历和感受。情景设置真实自然，学生融入度高。但是也有不小的挑战。首先，描述自己 画作不好表达。其次，既要描述经历，又要表达感受的夹叙夹议的要求。另外还要兼顾题干隐性信息写作 要素：在公园上美术课。 二、应用文写作高分攻略 1.评分标准 应用文评分细则 (1)本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。 (2)评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为： ①对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性： ②使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性； ③上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 各档次的给分范围和要求 备注 档次 描述 ①覆盖所有的内容要点，表达清楚、合理： 第五档 ②应用了丰富的语法结构和词汇，有少许错误，但完全不影响理解； (1)评分时，先根据 (13-15分) ③有效使用语句衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯，完全达到预期的写作 作答的整体情况初 目的。 步确定其所属档次， 然后以该档次的要 求来综合衡量确定 第四档 ①覆盖所有内容要点，表达清晰： 或调整档次，最后 (10-12分) ②应用了丰富的语法结构和词汇，有些许错误； 给分。 ③有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 (2)评分时还应 注意： 第三档 ①漏掉了一些内容，但覆盖了主要内容； ①词数少于60或多 ②应用了一定的语法结构和词汇，有一些错误； 于100的，从总分中 (7-9分)》 ③应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 减去2分； ②单词拼写和标点 符号是写作规范的 第二档 ①漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容； 重要方面，评分时应 350 ②应用了丰富的语法结构和词汇，有很多错误； (4-6分)》 视其对交际的影响 ③只是使用了很少语句间的连接成分。 程度予以考虑，英美 2025 拼写及词汇用法均 年 第一档 ①明显漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求； 可接受。书写较差， ® ②应用了无关的语法结构和词汇，有太多错误，严重影响理解； 以致影响交际的将 (1-3分) ③没有衔接，全文松散，意义不连贯，完全未达到预期目的。 分数降低一个档次。 计 零分 未作答，内容太少，完全无关。 累 2.解题攻略 篇80词左右的短文，不允许拖泥带水，进行过多的渲染。四步模板，有路可循： 第一步：审题谋篇 1.定体裁2.定时态3.定人称4.定结构 提纲要点化：根据提示，列全要点； 列要点 要点句式化：将要点扩展成精确的句子，尽可 能使用高级词汇及句式 “语”众不同，避免人云亦云： 第二步：组句成文 精选词 尽量避免重复使用相同的词语； 词汇运用，短语优先： 应用文写作 用高级词汇取代简单词汇 四步解题 各种句式， 编排巧妙： 特殊句式，风景独好； 用靓句 活用非谓，手法老道； 适时感叹，必要强调； 高级表达，佳作之道 第三步：衔接润色 创造良好开端，顺势承上启下： 巧妙转折过渡，完美结束全文 第四步：检查誊写 检查单词拼写、标点符号、大小写错误等，工整誊写 第二讲应用文写作实战操作 应用文写作属于半开放式文体，考查内容种类繁多，自由灵活性强。现根据近年来考查频率， 进行分类突破，量体裁衣。 一、建议信— 分析问题，献计献策 文体解读 : 写作指导 建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析针对这 本篇作文要求学生写一封建议信。 些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接 1.文章应包含题中所列要点，内容分为三 受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信 部分：开头（介绍自己并表明写信目的）、主体 可以写给个人、某个组织或机构，就其遇到的某 (表达意见和建议)和结尾（希望被采纳）。 个问题提出自己的看法、观点或忠告。具体写 2.学生需认真审题，就本题而言，题干所示 作结构为： 的问题可能是被随机分组的两个意愿和基础程 陈述事由 度不一致、口语水平不均衡，解决方案可以是按 开头 写信目的 表达观点 照个人意愿和口语水平进行分组。 建议信 具体建议 主体 陈述建议 3.提建议时要有理有据、态度诚恳、用语礼 说明原因 貌且委婉。 小结建议 结尾 表达希望 表达愿望 佳作赏析 典例导学 Dear Ryan, (2023·新课标I卷)假定你是李华，外教 I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I'm writing to Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课 express my concerns about the upcoming oral 后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你 practice after class. 总 给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： I understand that you plan to pair all the 复习 1.说明问题； students randomly for oral practice.However, 英 not all students have the same level of proficiency 2.提出建议。 注意： in English,resulting in some pairs being too 1.写作词数应为80左右； challenging for one student while being too 2.请按如下格式作答。 easy for the other,which can lead to Dear Ryan, frustration or a lack of progress.Therefore,I think it is better to assign students to practice in I'm Li Hua from Class 3.: pairs based on their language proficiency and interests,rather than pair them randomly.Only in this way can each pair have a good match and effectively communicate with each other. Moreover,not only will it improve our English communication skills,but it will also build our confidence. Therefore,I hope that you will consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention. Yours sincerely, Yours sincerely, Li Hua Li Hua 佳作点评 1.I hope these suggestions above will be of 1.本篇范文要点齐全，结构完整，角色代some help to you.. 入感强，体现了语言的交际性原则。在结构 我希望以上建议将对你有所帮助。 上，学生按照三段式结构进行布局谋篇，使得 2.I hope these suggestions will be of use 文章条理清楚、层次分明。 to you 2.在遣词造句方面，词汇和句型的选择灵 我希望这些建议会对你有用。 活多样，尤其是句型高级多变，如that引导的宾 3.I hope that my suggestions will be helpful 语从句，动词-ing短语作状语，which引导的非限to you anyway 制性定语从句，t作形式主语，过去分词短语作 无论如何，我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。 状语，only置于句首引起的部分倒装以及not 演练提能 only开头的部分倒装结构。 (2024·福建省漳州市第二次质量检测) 3.对连接和过渡成分(However,Therefore, 假定你是学校英语俱乐部负责人李华。你 Moreover)的使用，让学生扎实的英语语言功底的英国外教Andrew询问你在接下来的课程中 和较强的语言表达能力得到了体现。 是否需要介绍一些有关英国的历史知识。请你 素材积累 写一封邮件回复他。内容如下： 第一部分（首段）：表达写信目的 (1)你的态度； 352 1.I am writing to give you some suggestions/ (2)你的理由； offer you some advice. (3)你的建议。 2025 我写信给你一些建议/忠告。 注意： 年 2.You have asked me for my advice with (1)词数80左右； 创 regard to how to learn Chinese,and I will try to (2)可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 新 make some suggestions here. 计 你询问我关于如何学习汉语的建议，那么 衡 中 我就在此给出一些建议。 第二部分（主体段）：针对问题，提出建议 1.You'd better.......It's best to... 你最好…/最好是… 2.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following measures. 在我看来，采取如下措施是明智的。 3.I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我认为如果你能…会更有益。 4.If you want a deep experience in the city, shared bikes would be the best choice 如果你想对这个城市有深度的体验，共享 自行车将是最好的选择。 第三部分（结尾段）：希望采纳建议，并表示 谢意 二、邀请信一热情相邀，以诚待人 文体解读 写作指导 邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动，一定 本篇作文要求学生写一封邀请信。内容可 要注意态度诚恳且措词委婉有礼貌。邀请信的：分为三部分：(1)写信者的身份以及写信的目 末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具的：(2)节目的相关信息以及访谈的时间和话 体写作结构为： 题；(3)最后一段收尾表示期待。 问候 1.首先列出提纲要点，以防遗漏主要内容。 简要说明活 自我介绍 开头 动并邀请 写信背景 2.人称以第一、二人称为主，注意采用角色 对方 写信目的 代入的方式来体现语言的交际性。 活动的时间、地点 3.访谈尚未发生，涉及访谈的内容应以一 主体 介绍邀请的 活动的主题、方式 具体事项 般现在时和一般将来时为主。 信 活动的意义 佳作赏析 希望对方接 希望参加 Dear Caroline, 结尾 受邀请，表 感谢 示感谢 期待回复 I am Li Hua from our school's radio station, 典例导学 writing to invite you to be the guest of the (2022·新高考I卷)假定你是校广播站英 English program'“Talk and Talk'”. 语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教 The program invites guests to talk on certain Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： topics, aimed at broadening students' 1.节目介绍： horizons.If it is convenient for you,please come 2.访谈的时间和话题。 to the studio at 19:00 on Thursday.You are 轮 总 注意： expected to talk about independence of the youth 1.写作词数应为80左右； in the West.A 20-minute talk followed by 10 2.请按如下格式作答。 minutes' question answering would be 语 Dear Caroline, appreciated. I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 佳作点评 1.文章开头作了自我介绍，并表明写信目 的：邀请外教参加访谈节目，言简意赅。 2.范文中使用了大量亮点词汇，如aimed at, broadening students'horizons,convenient, appreciated等。在句式方面，既有动词-ing短语 writing to invite you to be the guest of the English Yours sincerely, program“Talk and Talk”作状语，又有过去分词 Li Hua 短语aimed at broadening students'horizons和 followed by 10 minutes'question answering作定 语等，展示了较强的语言运用能力，增加了文章to the club. 的亮点。 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你公寓前的322 3.文章结尾使用了邀请信的套语：I would路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 appreciate it if you.·.表达了希望对方接受邀请 第三部分（结尾段）：期待对方接受邀请并 的愿望。 尽快回复。 素材积累 1.We will feel much honoured if you could 第一部分（首段）：介绍自己，简要说明活 come 动，并邀请对方。 如果您能来，我们会非常荣幸。 2.I do hope you will accept our/my invitation 1.It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to if it is convenient for you. invite you to participate in/attend/join us in... 我真心希望，如果您方便的话能接受我们 我非常高兴/荣幸地邀请您参加…/和我 我的邀请。 们一起… 3.Would you please let me know as early as 2.To broaden our horizons,our school will possible if you could accept my invitation? hold...I'm delighted to invite you to participate in 如果您能接受我的邀请，能否尽早让我 it. 知道？ 为了开阔我们的视野，我们学校将举行…， 演练提能 354 我很高兴邀请您参加。 (2024·广西高中毕业班摸底检测)》 3.A music festival will be held in our school 假定你是李华，你的同学Chis作为交换生 2025 hall at 2:00 p.m.on 5 June.And I'm greatly 来中国已经一年了，他对中国传统节日很感兴 年 honoured to invite you to attend it. 趣。恰逢今年春节2月10日他在中国，请你给 创 他写一封邀请函，邀请他去你家欢度春节。内 新 音乐节将于6月5日下午2点在我们学校 设 容包括： 计 礼堂举行。我很荣幸邀请您参加 1.表达你诚挚的邀请； 衡 第二部分（主体段）：介绍活动具体内容，并 中 2.节日简介（庆祝时间、主要活动安排）。 学 说明受邀人参加的理由。 注意： 案 1.The following are some details about.../ 1.词数80左右； Here are some details about.../Some details 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 about...are as follows. Dear Chris, …的细节如下。 2.To begin with,we will...Besides,there will be a number of/various activities such as..., which will... 首先，我们将；此外，将会有许多/各种 各样的活动，例如…，这将…。 3.We will start at 7:00 a.m.and arrive there at about 10:00 我们将在上午7点出发，10点左右到达 那里。 4.By the way,you may take Bus No.322 in Your sincerely, front of your apartment and it will take you directly Li Hua 三、感谢信一真诚道谢，学会感恩 文体解读 写作指导 感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集 本篇作文要求学生写一封感谢信。内容可 体或个人表达感谢的信件。感恩是一种美德， 分为三部分：(1)表达谢意；(2)回顾往事； 因此，感谢信在我们的生活中非常重要，也非常 (3)再次感谢。 普遍。感谢信的写作对象可以是同学、朋友、老 1.人称以第一、二人称为主。 师、机构等。写感谢信时一定要态度诚恳，言词 2.回顾Alex对你的帮助应用一般过去时 热切，让对方感受到你发自内心的感激之情。 和虚拟语气等。 具体写作结构为： 佳作赏析 表达目的 开头 写信日的 Dear Alex, 表达谢意 I'm sorry to hear that you are going to return 感谢信 道谢的原因 主体 事情经过 to your country very soon and I'm writing this 具体事情 email to express my gratitude for your help. 再次表达谢意 结尾 再次感谢 First of all,thank you for helping me learn 希望回报 典例导学 English.Without your help,I would not have made such great progress in English learning. 假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋 友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封 Besides,what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in 邮件，内容包括： 1.表示感谢； foreign culture. 2.回顾Alex对你的帮助； I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey. 轮 3.临别祝愿。 总 注意： Yours, Li Hua 1.写作词数应为80左右； 英 2.请按如下格式作答。 佳作点评 Dear Alex, 1.文章开头简明扼要地说明了写信目的， 使用了感谢信的套语：I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help. 2.书信的主体部分陈述了道谢的原因，使 用了过渡性词语：First of all,Besides;高级词 汇：make great progress,broaden,arouse;感谢信 的套语：..thank you for..,Without your help, I would...;还使用了what引导的主语从句。 3.信的结尾使用感谢信的套语表达了 祝愿。 素材积累 第一部分（首段）：表达真挚谢意 1.Thank you so much for your generous/ timely help. Yours, 非常感谢您慷慨的/及时的帮助。 Li Hua 2.I want to send/express my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning 我想真诚地感谢您对我英语学习的帮助。 演练提能 3.On behalf of my whole family,I would like (2024·江苏省南通市第一次调研测试)》 to extend my sincere gratitude for your help. 假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一 我谨代表我全家对您的帮助表示真诚的 起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他 感激。 回一封邮件，内容包括： 第二部分（主体段）：解释感谢的原因 1.收到照片表示感谢； 1.Thanks to your help,I have made rapid 2.回顾一起度过的时光； progress in my English. 3.邀请他周末来家作客。 多亏了您的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的 注意： 进步。 1.写作词数应80左右； 2.Without your help,I would not have been 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 a top student in English. Dear Mike, 没有您的帮助，我就不会成为英语尖子生。 3.But for your help If it were not for your help),I would not have made so much progress in my oral English. 要是没有您的帮助，我的英语口语不会取 356 得如此大的进步。 225 第三部分（结尾段）：再次感谢 1.I deeply/greatly appreciate your entertainment. 年 我非常感激你们的盛情款待。 创 新 2.I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks. 计 如果您能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜 衡 中 感激。 学 3.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories,and we will remember them forever. 没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永 Yours, 远牢记在心。 Li Hua 四、申请信—毛遂自荐，心诚则成 文体解读 自我介绍 申请信是指求职、加入某组织或活动的申 开头→写信目的 点明信息源 表明自己能胜任 请等。写申请信让对方了解自己的经验、能力、 相关经验 成就、愿望等，申请信尽可能向对方说明个人的 申 主体→详述优势 性格品质 请信 相应的专业技能 长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。具体 成绩优秀 写作结构为： 表示感谢 结尾→期盼回复 简述打算 期盼批准 典例导学 volunteer. 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地 I have the following advantages.First of all,I 美术馆要举办中国画展览。请你写一封信申请 speak English fluently,which allows me to 做志愿者，内容包括： communicate with visitors without difficulty. 1.写信目的； What's more,as a Chinese painting lover,I know a 2.个人优势； lot about this art form.If accepted,I can 3.能做的事情。 introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors, 注意： helping them know more about Chinese 1.写作词数应为80左右； culture. 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I 3.开头结尾已为你写好。 would be grateful if you could give me a Dear sir, chance. Yours, Li Hua 佳作点评 1.信的开头简明扼要地做了自我介绍，使 用了who引导的非限制性定语从句，同时使用 了申请信的套语I am writing to apply to..发出 申请。 2.信的主体部分介绍了自身的优势，使用 了过渡性词语：First of all,.What's more;还使用 总 了非限制性定语从句、条件状语从句的省略结 复 构以及动词-ing短语作状语。 英 Yours, 3.信的结尾使用了申请信的套语：I would Li Hua be grateful if...表达了感谢和希望。 写作指导 素材积累 这是一篇应用文。要求学生写一封信，申 第一部分（首段）：说明写信目的 请成为当地美术馆的志愿者。 1.Knowing some volunteers are wanted,I am 1.首先说明写信目的； writing to win the chance. 2.主体段陈述个人优势以及能做的事情； 得知（你们）需要一些志愿者，我写信争取 3.结尾段表达个人期待； 这个机会。 4.人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在 2.I am writing this letter to recommend 时和一般将来时为主。 myself as a qualified candidate for the job of 佳作赏析 secretary Dear Sir, 我认为我是秘书工作的合格人选，所以我 I am Li Hua,a student from China,who is写信推荐自己。 studying in London during the summer 第二部分（主体段）：表达个人优势 holiday.Knowing an exhibition of Chinese 1.I'm an excellent student,among the top 5 paintings will be held at the gallery next in my class of 50 students. month,I am writing to apply to become a 我是一名优秀的学生，在我班50名学生中 名列前五名。 演练提能 2.I have the following advantages.Firstly,I 假定你是李华，你校将成立一个校园网站， love to communicate with other people.Secondly, 需要几名英语小记者。请你给网站负责人 what I study at university is marketing. Heny写一封申请信，内容包括： 我有以下优点。首先，我喜欢和别人交流。 1.提出申请； 其次，我在大学里学的是市场营销。 2.说明自己的优势。 3.Upon graduation,I first worked as a 注意： salesman,then a shop assistant,and now I am 1.写作词数应为80左右； working in a supermarket. 2.请按如下格式作答。 毕业后，我先是当了一名销售员，然后当了Dear Henry, 一名店员，现在我在一家超市工作。 4.I feel I am able to meet the requirements you have listed. 我觉得我能满足你们所列的要求。 第三部分（结尾段）：恳请招聘单位考虑自 己的申请，期望回复 358 1.I think I am qualified to be a manager. Please give me a chance. D25 我想我有资格成为一名经理。请给我一次 年 机会。 创 2.I hope I may be granted an interview, 新 when I can show my qualifications more fully 计 我希望获得面试机会，届时我可以更详细 Yours sincerely, 中 地展示我的技能。 Li Hua 五、道歉信 真诚致歉，前嫌尽释 文体解读 包括： 道歉信通常是因为自己的过失或疏忽给别 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 人带来了麻烦或损失的情况下，为了向对方表 2.提出建议并给出理由。 示歉意而写的信件。具体写作结构为： 注意： 寸写信目的 写作意图 开头 1.写作词数应为80左右； 表达歉意 2.请按如下格式作答。 作出解释 道歉信 主体 为说明原因 请求凉解 Dear Jim, 补救措施 再次道歉 结尾表达希望 希望得到谅解 典例导学 假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英 国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能 赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容