第二部分 第六讲 续写话题演练-【衡中学案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习学案（北师大版）

tears of anxiety and worry. 2.burst into a big toothy smile waved to me with excitement 4.Not until I experienced the event did I realize a small act of care cani3.felt a gentle pat with a smile Amazingly melt people's loneliness. 4.I was gradually overwhelmed by a strong sense of joy and happiness. 5.Hardly had Mike finished his performance when the audience all5.He patted me gently.It is my considerate teacher who inspires me to rose to their feet,clapping wildly. face my fear bravely and positively. II.1.Painful and a bit embarrassed as/though he was 6.Without hesitation,David nodded in agreement,finally deciding to 2.so desperate was I that I felt as if I were torn into pieces join in the cross-country team. 3.on top of which stood an old temple 7.When the students stepped off the bus,James's eyes widened in 4.Not until I experienced the accident was I aware that surprise. 5.I opened the door,and there stood Michael,all covered in mud. 8.My teacher entered the classroom with an infectious smile spreading 即时训练7 on his face. I.1.It was my determination and efforts that helped me achieve my dream. 第六讲 续写话题演练 2.It was on that day that I came to know a truth-a small act of Writing 1 kindness can make a big difference. 第一步 3.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious,my dad,Mr.Slaight,Mr.Slaight'secretary before working in atmosphere. television at home,at Ryerson in Toronto,at the station A dream 4.It was at that moment that Devin made his final decision. of working in television-my dad encouraged me-I was admitted to II.1.It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed the radio and television arts program-His secretary asked me to come through my body. and audition for a new school life show ambitious-afraid-confident 2.It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something →anxious→excited努力奋斗，实现梦想 unusual happen finally. 第二步 3.It was the special experience that made me realize forgiving is an1.只有我面试通过，这样才有机会在电视上表演。所以我的表现 important virtue. 最后一定是不错的，并且获得了面试机会。开始感到紧张+受 4.It was on that day that I realized what Dad had accomplished at my 到鼓励→建立信心→努力排练 age was much greater than I did. 2.我开始第一次亮相，可以写表演的顺畅，是因为多天的排练和 第三节生动描写 努力。演出大获成功，名声大噪等等，事业蒸蒸日上，最后点题 呼应第一段由于爸爸的支持、帮助和鼓励进行点题。在舞台 即时训练1 上专心表演一大受欢迎→心中充满了无限的喜悦→父母激励 I.1.Lorna came to the window,opened it and looked out up at the 我继续努力实现自己的梦想 night sky. :第三步 2.She picked up the photo,stared at it for a while and placed it1.Hardly had I said a few words when my mind went blank. carefully into the album. 2.Whenever I felt worn out,my fatigue magically faded away after 3.Feeling stronger now,Jane walked along the stream,hoping that it i imagining the bright smile on my parents'cheeks when they saw my would lead her to the lake. performance on TV. 4.Standing beside the empty road,they looked up into the sky,feeling3.Through the spotlight,what came into my sight was a full house. the precious peace 4.I deeply knew that without my father's help and encouragement,I 5.Wearing my usual running clothes,I brushed past them with a wouldn't have fulfilled my dream and achieved so much. confident smile. 第四步 Ⅱ.the twins got up early,tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some参考范文： flour out of the bag their father slid into the kitchen,patting the When I arrived at the station,I went direct into the audition and twins'shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice they carried began my short performance.Hardly had I said a few words when my the breakfast,advanced upstairs and woke up their mother i mind went blank.Overwhelmed by a sense of nervousness,I began 即时训练2 to stumble over my words.When I was at a loss,the chief examiner 1.She crept along the path,bent over swiftly and cupped her handsslowly came over and gently patted me on the shoulder, around the butterfly gently. encouraging me not to be tense.Slowly,my previous restlessness 2.She dashed forward,knelt down and gathered her son into her amms. gave way to the full confidence to well finish the performance.The 3.The children rushed excitedly to the lake,took off their clothes and next three minutes witnessed my smooth performance and I was told to dived into the water. have passed the audition.During the next few days,I often threw 4.The singer glanced at the audience,took a deep breath and began tomyself into the rehearsal round the clock.Whenever I felt worn out, sing. my fatigue magically faded away after imagining the bright smile on my 5.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder,and flashed a bright parents'cheeks when they saw my performance on TV. smile. Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV 6.Putting the book where it belonged,the boy tiptoed out of the room with my parents at home watching.Through the spotlight,what as lightly as possible came into my sight was a full house.With every line deeply 即时训练3 engraved in my mind,I stood on the stage and devoted myself to the 1.hugged him tightly saying thankfully performance.Eventually,the show became a hit and its ratings were 561- more than high.With infinite joy in my heart,I couldn't wait to share:4.We exchanged a knowing smile,realizing that sincerity,trust and the good news with my parents.They inspired me to carry on and strive communication were always the key to clearing up the to shine in the industry.I deeply knew that without my father's help misunderstanding between friends. and encouragement,.I wouldn't have fulfilled my dream and第四步 achieved so much. 参考范文： Writing 2 That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that 第一步 all three of us liked.Thrilled and inspired,I sprang in front of my my mother and I at her age of eighty-five years old at home desk,racked my brains and started drawing a few scenes of three of us Mother wanted to sell her house→lcan't believe-→Mother explained-→ giggling,chattering and enjoying each other's company like we I felt shocked and explained-We woudn't make good housemates usually did.On the last page,I wrote,"Dear Kash,you are not the one 第二步 left behind.Liya and I are so sorry about the way we messed things 1.作者得知母亲真的在卖房子时的恐慌，后来母亲生病住院及照 up."Pierced to the heart with guilt,I gingerly tucked the 顾母亲的情景。恐慌→确认→母亲生病住院→照顾母亲 paintings into an envelope,hoping this would be an ice-breaker 2.描写作者把康复后的母亲接回自己的家中，开始照顾她，并带 The next day,I handed my pages of apology to Kash.He took it, 她去旅行，实现她的梦想。接母亲回自已家住→意识到亲情looking surprised at the first sight.Afer heead t,an expression of 的价值→带母亲旅行→实现她的梦想 intense joy illuminated his eyes.Blushed,I broke the silence,"I'm 第三步 sorry,dude.We should have talked to you."With her eyes fixed on 1."Are you serious?"I asked her one day the floor,Liya came over and apologized in a low voice,"You mean a 2.Luckily,she recovered. lot to us."Hearing her words,Kash shook his head and beamed,"I 3.Actually,I am not saying we would get along perfectly,but I see was too sensitive.We exchanged a knowing smile,realizing that things differently. sincerity,trust and communication were always the key to clearing up 4.Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our the misunderstanding between friends. world so wamm and beautiful. Writing 4 第四步 第一步 参考范文： i Baby-Girl,My dad and I Christmas Eve morning at the shelter I really panicked when she started having yard sales."Are you My cat was missingMy dad and I searched for herI believed that serious?"I asked her one day."Of course,"she answered.I forced we would be reunited one day-We walked through rows of cages myself to face what was happening,.and I begged for some cherished faithful-一→determined关爱动物，初心不改 items.Then one day Mom caught a bad cold and had a high fever.I第二步 was afraid and sent her to the hospital..During those days,I was no.作者在那个房间发现自己心爱的猫咪。 传来了喵喵叫声→ longer stressed about her floater plan.whether it was right or 发现我的小猫→收容所的工作人员怀疑不是我的 logical.I just wanted her to be okay.Luckily,she recovered. 2.作者通过自己与猫咪的互动证明这只猫就是自己丢失的那只。 I took her to my home from the hospital happily,no longer 证明她是我的猫→我训练小猫→确认小猫 bothered by her moving in.Actually,I am not saying we would get第三步 along perfectly,but I see things differently.Her moving in with me1.Suddenly,there came a familiar meow. hadn't been part of the plan-living next to her had been.I've realized2.The shelter staff were skeptical too,saying the cat had just been I don't have to understand her,just love her while she's here and take i brought in during the morning storm. every moment I have with her as a gift.Whenever I had time,I3.Cautiously,I grabbed the carrier. would take her to travel,to realize her dream.Only then did I realize4.As a saying goes,"Stick to your hopes and never give up." that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and第四步 beautiful. 参考范文： Writing 3 I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room. 第一步 Suddenly,there came a familiar meow.I followed the sound and my Kash,teacher,Liya,I when we had a reading competition at eyes fell on a little cat with big green eyes.She was skinnier than I school We're going to be in teams of two-Our third friend Kash remembered,but it was Baby-Girl!My eye swelled up with tears.I became angry-We were stuck in this dilemma relieved and excited opened the cage door.Baby-Girl practically jumped into my arms.I →awkward and frustrated-→forgivable消除误会，再续友情 held her close as Dad looked on."There's just no way...,"he 第二步 mumbled.The shelter staff were skeptical too,saying the cat had just 1.我们写道歉信、弥补友情的过程。两人商量→写出道歉信 been brought in during the moming storm. 2.卡什接受我们的道歉、重新修复友谊的过程。 接受道歉→重 Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove she was my cat. 归于好 Cautiously,I grabbed the carrier.I'd trained Baby-Girl to walk inside 第三步 i the carrier.Sure enough,when she was letdown,she made a dash for 1.Thrilled and inspired,I sprang in front of my desk,racked my the carrier and rushed right inside.I was overjoyed to have her back. brains and started drawing a few scenes of three of us giggling,It was a miracle that she had managed to survive on her own for so chattering and enjoying each other's company like we usually did.long,and I was filled with admiration for her strength and 2.Pierced to the heart with guilt,I gingerly tucked the paintings into ani determination.I thanked my lucky stars that I had never given up envelope,hoping this would be an ice-breaker. hope,and that I had come back to the shelter one last time.As a 3.He took it,looking surprised at the first sight. saying goes,"Stick to your hopes and never give up. 562我。是我体贴的老师激励我勇敢而积极地面对 7.当学生们下车时，詹姆斯惊讶地睁大了 我的恐惧。 眼睛。 6.(2022·新高考I卷)大卫毫不犹豫地点 8.(2023·新高考I卷)我的老师走进教室 头表示同意，最终决定加入越野赛队。 时，脸上露出了一种富有感染力的微笑。 第六讲 续写话题演练 Writing1个人成长类一电台实习生成长记 phone."I've heard that your studio facilities are 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开 amazing.I could come at eleven o'clock on Monday 头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 or eleven o'clock on Sunday for a tour.What would (2024·临沂市统考一模)suit you better?”I caught him totally off guard.He I had a dream from primary school:to work stuttered a bit,and then picked a day.When I in television.My parents owned a little grocery hung up,I was scared but excited. store,so we were definitely not fancy people. I arrived at the studio on the appointed day. Thankfully,my dad had raised me to have a lot of When Mr.Slaight took me around,he looked at confidence.He often said,"You can do anything me and said,"What do you want?"He sounded you want to do."My dad was particularly furious but curious."All I want is a chance to supportive.He was my steady rock-always there audition ()I just want you to know my face. 总 for me. That's all I'm asking." With his help and encouragement,I was I didn't know whether I'd ever hear from him 英 admitted to the radio and television arts program at again,but two weeks later,his secretary called, Ryerson in Toronto.I really loved the program and"Mr.Slight wants to know if you'd like to come 39 worked hard and I was named the most outstanding and audition for a new school life show."I graduate.I felt like I was already living my dream. immediately answered,“Sure！” I began to think that maybe I could apply for an 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 internship(实习资格)in CBC or CTV. When I arrived at the station,I went direct Luckily,Global Television had just started into the audition and began my short performance. broadcasting in Canada that year.I thought to myself:I'm new and they're new,so if I'm going to get to know one person at Global,it might as well be the president.I was scared,but I knew deep down inside that this was what I wanted.When I Finally came the day of my first public called my dad and told him my plan,he said, appearance on live TV with my parents at home "Good,Faye.That's exactly what you should do." watching. With my heart just about pounding out of my body,I called up the president of Global Television.Suddenly Mr.Slaight was on the 第一步 细读原文，获取双线 人物 (与第二段首句衔接，介 时间 词短语作状语). 地点 4. (主旨升华，虚 情节线 拟语气) 第四步语言提升，写作定稿 情感线 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生 主旨 动化。 第二步研读首句，巧定框架 When I arrived at the station,I went direct 1.两段首句定一框 into the audition and began my short performance. 由第一段首句和第二段首句可以构思第 段内容： 构思情节如下： 398 Finally came the day of my first public 225 2.二框二首正能量 appearance on live TV with my parents at home 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第watching. 年 二段内容： 创 设 中 构思情节如下： Writing2家庭亲情类一母子情深 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开 头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·揭阳市高三联考) 第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 Moving In When I arrived at the station,I went direct My eighty-five-year-old mother offered that into the audition and began my short performance. familiar tilt()of the head,the one that told 1. me something was up.I tensed my shoulders and (与第一段首句衔接，倒装 bit my lip,waiting for whatever was coming next. 句)· I could handle it.She was predictable, 2 though dramatic.I expected her to express her thoughts on the latest news or share the senior community news. (与第二段首句衔接) Instead,she calmly said,as though she were Finally came the day of my first public sharing her dinner menu,"I'm going to downsize appearance on live TV with my parents at home and sell my house and nearly everything I own." watching. The breaking news was followed by a matter of fact stare. I took her to my home from the hospital "Do what?"I asked."I'll be a floater,"she happily,no longer bothered by her moving in. said. "I'll stay with you,then with my brothers in Maine,and then with some of my friends.I'll just float around and enjoy myself.She laughed as though she'd just discovered the perfect lifestyle. 第一步 细读原文，获取双线 "I'll take my cat everywhere with me.I can't bear 人物 to leave him behind or give him away.What do you think?” 时间 "No one will want you to show up with your 地点 cat."My answer seemed a shock to her.After only seconds,she added,"Well,I just won't tell them 情节线 he's coming.We'll just show up.What can they do?" 情感线 puzzled-→shocked Shocked,I took a deep breath and forced myself to respond by explaining all the reasons why 主旨 理解母亲，尊重母亲 selling,moving in with me,and fearlessly 第二步 研读首句，巧定框架 dragging the cat across the country in secret were 1.两段首句定一框 terrible ideas. 由第一段首句内容“她开始搞庭院甩卖的 Unbothered,she simply said,“You're so时候，我真的慌了”可知，第一段可描写 dramatic.It'll be fine." 总 I didn't take her announcement seriously.A few days after her announcement,my brother and I 构思情节如下： 语 enjoyed a few laughs over her idea.After all,our mother was too independent to be placed in a place 2.二框二首正能量 399 long-term with any of her children.She had made 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第 this clear on many occasions when I'd begged to 二段内容： live next door to her.I'd wanted to be close enough to watch over her but not too close,but she'd always refused. 构思情节如下： I enjoyed living alone,hearing the quiet, writing and reading.I hated noise.My mother loved radio,television,and phone calls,endless 第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 phone calls.We would not make good housemates. I really panicked when she started having 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 yard sales. I really panicked when she started having 1. yard sales. （与第一段首句衔接，运用对话).· 2. (与第二段首句 衔接)I took her to my home from the hospital happily,no longer bothered by her moving in. I rank in the friendship lineup."Kash replied in 与 an angry tone. 第二段首句衔接，副词作状语).· I knew he was mad for a reason.If I were 4. him,not only would I think that I ranked last in that group,but I'd also be panicking about what (主旨升华，倒装句) team I could join.But now,I was on the inside 第四步 语言提升，写作定稿 and Kash wasn't,I felt like the only way to fix this 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生 would be three people on a team.So,as the 动化。 teacher walked by our table,I asked for her I really panicked when she started having permission.What surprised me was that she had yard sales. intended to draw names to assign random groups, but didn't get a chance to say it before lunch. Awkward and frustrated,we were stuck in I took her to my home from the hospital this dilemma.Having first teamed up without Kash happily,no longer bothered by her moving in. didn't mean we didn't like him.I knew we- especially I-wouldn't be able to enjoy any prize if our friend felt bad about being left out.So,I 400 decided to do something to make it up for him and Writing3友情友爱类一风雨之后见彩虹 convince Kash he was an equal friend. D25 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 年 That night,I was struck by an idea as I read (2024·扬州市高三调研测试) 创 a graphic novel that all three of us liked. 新 I looked up from my desk to see the teacher 计 writing on the board:“Battle of the Books！”She 衡 smiled and said,"This time it's a teamwork.You're 中 The next day,I handed my pages of apology going to be in teams of two,and set a reading to Kash. goal.Every team that meets their goal by the end of the month will get a prize!"The lunch bell sounded before she could explain any more rules. 第一步 细读原文，获取双线 As I gathered my things,Liya passed my desk 人物 and said,"Teammates?"Since Liya and I shared 时间 the same interest in graphic novel(漫画小说)， 地点 and we took Hindi language class together,we teamed up automatically.I was both relieved and 情节线 excited to have my team.Then we got to the cafeteria and quickly threw out a bunch of ideas of what to do at our table. 情感线 I looked to our third friend Kash,with whom the three of us always do stuff together,"Kash,do 主旨 you have ideas for us?”“Why would I give you 第二步研读首句，巧定框架 guys ideas?”he said gloomily(阴沉地).“I'll save 1.两段首句定一框 that for my team...whoever that is.Now I see how 由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，当我读了一 本我们三个人都喜欢的漫画小说时，我被一个Vriting4和谐自然类一人猫情未了 想法打动了。”和第二段首句内容可知，第一段 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开 可描写 头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 构思情节如下： (2025·南通市调研) It was Christmas Eve morning,and I awoke 2.二框二首正能量 with a mission:to find my lost cat,Baby-Girl.As 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第 I got ready,I could hear icy rain pelting the 二段内容：第二段可描写 windows.Baby-Girl was out there somewhere in the storm.I could just feel it.Sure,it had been a 构思情节如下： couple of weeks since she'd gone missing,but I still had faith.This was the season for miracles, 第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 after all. That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a About two weeks ago,my sweet kitty graphic novel that all three of us liked disappeared from my parents'house in my 1 hometown.Baby-Girl had been staying with them while I was between apartments.At the time,I lived and worked in another city.I was staying with friends until I rented my own house.Baby-Girl had （与第一段首句衔接，形容词作状语). gotten out of my parents'house the day before I 2. was set to drive back home to pick her up. My dad and I had spent that entire visit (与第二段首句衔接) searching for her.Dad was a“realist”,which 轮 总 The next day,I handed my pages of apology to meant he spent a whole lot of time trying to Kash. prepare me for the worst."She's either been hit by 英 3. a car or been taken in by someone who found (与第二段首句衔接，现在分词作状her,”he said.I rolled my eyes.He could do with 401 语).. a little more faith! 4 Besides,though I couldn't explain it,I knew I'd see Baby-Girl again.She could survive all on her own.If any cat could do the impossible,it was (主旨升华，现在分词作状语)》 my Baby-Girl.Even after I returned to my house 第四步语言提升，写作定稿 without her,deep down I had this undeniable feeling 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生that we would be reunited one day. 动化。 Now,home again for the holidays,I was That night,I was struck by an idea as I read determined to pick up my search right where I'd a graphic novel that all three of us liked. left off.I grabbed Baby-Girl's cat carrier and loaded it into the car,then asked my dad to drive me to the shelter. The next day,I handed my pages of apology At the shelter,a staff member took us to see to Kash. the cats.We walked through rows of cages.My eyes scanned cats of all colors and sizes.None of them was my Baby-Girl.Then I noticed a room farther back.I pushed ahead."Sweetheart,that's 2.二框二首正能量 where they keep the cats that just came in,"Dad 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第 said.“Your cat wouldn't be in there.” 段内容：可描写 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped 构思情节如下： into the room. 第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room. 1. Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove she was my cat. (与第一段首句衔接，倒装句). 2. (与第二段首句衔接) Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove she 402 was my cat. 第一步 细读原文，获取双线 3. （与第 2025 人物 二段首句衔接，副词作状语)..· 年 时间 4. 创 地点 (主旨升华，引用名言) 第四步语言提升，写作定稿 浮 情节线 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生 动化。 衡中学案 I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped 情感线 into the room. 主旨 第二步研读首句，巧定框架 1.两段首句定一框 由第一段首句内容“我坚持认为看看没有 Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove 关系，并走进了房间。”可知，第一段可描写 she was my cat. 构思情节如下：