第二部分 第六讲 续写话题演练-【衡中学案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习学案（人教版）

,crying“I made it！I made it!" 3.然后，他感到有人轻轻地拍了拍他的肩膀。 妈妈微笑着说，“令人惊讶的是，他们相处得很好，曾 6.(2022·新高考I卷)大卫毫不犹豫地点头表 经精力充沛的波比又回来了。” 示同意，最终决定加入越野赛队。 Then he on his shoulder.It was Mom they get along so well and the once energetic Poppy came back again." 7.当学生们下车时，詹姆斯惊讶地睁大了眼睛。 4.(2023·新高考I卷)我逐渐被一种强烈的喜 悦和幸福感所淹没。 8.(2023·新高考I卷)我的老师走进教室时， 脸上露出了一种富有感染力的微笑。 5.(2023·新高考I卷)他轻轻地拍了拍我。是 我体贴的老师激励我勇敢而积极地面对我的恐惧。 第六讲 续写话题演练 Writing 1个人成长类一电台实习生成长记When I hung up,I was scared but excited.. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语 I arrived at the studio on the appointed day.When 续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mr.Slaight took me around,he looked at me and said. 470 (2024·临沂市统考一模)“What do you want'?”He sounded furious but curious.. I had a dream from primary school:to work in "All I want is a chance to audition ()I just want 2026 television.My parents owned a little grocery store,so you to know my face.That's all I'm asking." we were definitely not fancy people.Thankfully,my dad I didn't know whether I'd ever hear from him again, 年 had raised me to have a lot of confidence.He often but two weeks later,his secretary called,"Mr.Slight wants 创 said,"You can do anything you want to do.My dad to know if you'd like to come and audition for a new school 的 was particularly supportive.He was my steady rock- life show."I immediately answered,“ure!” 计 always there for me. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 衡 With his help and encouragement,I was admitted to When I arrived at the station,I went direct into the 中 学 the radio and television arts program at Ryerson in audition and began my short performance. Toronto.I really loved the program and worked hard and I was named the most outstanding graduate.I felt like I was already living my dream.I began to think that maybe I could apply for an intership(实习资格)in CBC or CTV, Finally came the day of my first public appearance Luckily,Global Television had just started on live TV with my parents at home watching. broadcasting in Canada that year.I thought to myself:I'm new and they're new,so if I'm going to get to know one person at Global,it might as well be the president.I was scared,but I knew deep down inside that this was what I wanted.When I called my dad and told him my plan,he 第一步 细读原文，获取双线 said,"Good,Faye.That's exactly what you should do." 人物 With my heart just about pounding out of my body, 时间 I called up the president of Global Television.Suddenly Mr.Slaight was on the phone."I've heard that your 地点 studio facilities are amazing.I could come at eleven o'clock on Monday or eleven o'clock on Sunday for a 情节线 tour.What would suit you better?"I caught him totally off guard.He stuttered a bit,and then picked a day. 情感线 Finally came the day of my first public appearance 主旨 on live TV with my parents at home watching. 第二步研读首句，巧定框架 1.两段首句定一框 由第一段首句和第二段首句可以构思第一段内 容： Vriting2家庭亲情类一母子情深 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语 续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 构思情节如下： (2024·揭阳市高三联考) Moving In 2.二框二首正能量 My eighty-five-year-old mother offered that familiar 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段 tilt()of the head,the one that told me something 内容： was up.I tensed my shoulders and bit my lip,waiting for whatever was coming next. I could handle it.She was predictable,though dramatic.I expected her to express her thoughts on the 构思情节如下： latest news or share the senior community news. Instead,she calmly said,as though she were sharing her dinner menu,"I'm going to downsize and sell my house and nearly everything I own."The 第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 breaking news was followed by a matter of fact stare. When I arrived at the station,I went direct into the “Do what??”I asked..“I'll be a floater,”she said. audition and began my short performance. "I'll stay with you,then with my brothers in 1. Maine,and then with some of my friends.I'll just float (与第一段首句衔接，倒装句).· around and enjoy myself."She laughed as though she'd just discovered the perfect lifestyle."I'll take my cat 教版 everywhere with me.I can't bear to leave him behind or give him away.What do you think?" (与第二段首句衔接) “No one will want you to show up with your cat..” 471 Finally came the day of my first public appearance My answer seemed a shock to her.After only seconds, on live TV with my parents at home watching. she added,"Well,I just won't tell them he's coming. 3. We'll just show up.What can they do?" (与第二段首句衔接，介词短语作 Shocked,I took a deep breath and forced myself to 状语).。 respond by explaining all the reasons why selling, moving in with me,and fearlessly dragging the cat across the country in secret were terrible ideas. (主旨升华，虚拟语气) Unbothered,she simply said,"You're so 第四步 语言提升，写作定稿 dramatic.It'll be fine. 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。 I didn't take her announcement seriously.A few When I arrived at the station,I went direct into days after her announcement,my brother and I enjoyed the audition and began my short performance. a few laughs over her idea.After all,our mother was too independent to be placed in a place long-term with any of her children.She had made this clear on many occasions when I'd begged to live next door to her.I'd wanted to be close enough to watch over her but not too close,but she'd always refused. I enjoyed living alone,hearing the quiet,writing第一段首句衔接，运用对话).. and reading.I hated noise.My mother loved radio, 2. (与第二段首句衔 television,and phone calls,endless phone calls.We I took her to my home from the hospital happily,no would not make good housemates. longer bothered by her moving in. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 3. I really panicked when she started having yard （与第二段首句 sales. 衔接，副词作状语).· 4. (主旨 升华，倒装句) I took her to my home from the hospital happily, 第四步语言提升，写作定稿 no longer bothered by her moving in. 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。 I really panicked when she started having yard sales. 第一步 细读原文，获取双线 I took her to my home from the hospital happily, 人物 no longer bothered by her moving in. 时间 472 地点 Writing3友情友爱类一风雨之后见彩虹 2026 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语 情节线 年 续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·扬州市高三调研测试) 创 情感线 puzzled-→shocked I looked up from my desk to see the teacher writing on the board:“Battle of the Books！”She smiled and 计 主旨 理解母亲，尊重母亲 said,"This time it's a teamwork.You're going to be in 衡 第二步 研读首句，巧定框架 teams of two,and set a reading goal.Every team that 学 1.两段首句定一框 meets their goal by the end of the month will get a 由第一段首句内容“她开始搞庭院甩卖的时候， prize!"The lunch bell sounded before she could 我真的慌了”可知，第一段可描写 explain any more rules. As I gathered my things,Liya passed my desk and said,"Teammates?"Since Liya and I shared the same 构思情节如下： interest in graphic novel(漫画小说)，and we took Hindi language class together,we teamed up 2.二框二首正能量 automatically.I was both relieved and excited to have 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段 my team.Then we got to the cafeteria and quickly threw 内容： out a bunch of ideas of what to do at our table. I looked to our third friend Kash,with whom the three of us always do stuff together,"Kash,do you have 构思情节如下： ideas for us?”“Why would I give you guys ideas?”he said gloomily(阴沉地).“'I save that for my team.. whoever that is.Now I see how I rank in the friendship 第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 lineup."Kash replied in an angry tone. I really panicked when she started having yard I knew he was mad for a reason.If I were him,not sales. 1 only would I think that I ranked last in that group,but 1 I'd also be panicking about what team I could join.But now,I was on the inside and Kash wasn't,I felt like第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 the only way to fix this would be three people on a That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a team.So,as the teacher walked by our table,I asked graphic novel that all three of us liked. for her permission.What surprised me was that she had intended to draw names to assign random groups,but didn't get a chance to say it before lunch. Awkward and frustrated,we were stuck in this (与第一段首句 dilemma.Having first teamed up without Kash didn't 衔接，形容词作状语).·。 mean we didn't like him.I knew we-especially I- 2 wouldn't be able to enjoy any prize if our friend felt bad about being left out.So,I decided to do something to (与第二段首句衔接)》 make it up for him and convince Kash he was an equal The next day,I handed my pages of apology to Kash. friend. 3. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 (与第二段首句衔接，现在分词作状语)..· That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a 4 graphic novel that all three of us liked. (主旨升华，现在分词作状语) The next day,I handed my pages of apology to 第四步语言提升，写作定稿 Kash. 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。 That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a 总 graphic novel that all three of us liked. 第一步 方 细读原文，获取双线 人物 英 时间 The next day,I handed my pages of apology to Kash. 地点 教版 情节线 Writing4和谐自然类一人猫情未了 473 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语 续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 情感线 (2025·南通市调研) It was Christmas Eve morning,and I awoke with a 主旨 mission:to find my lost cat,Baby-Girl.As I got ready, 第二步研读首句，巧定框架 I could hear icy rain pelting the windows.Baby-Girl was 1.两段首句定一框 out there somewhere in the storm.I could just feel it. 由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，当我读了一本我Sure,it had been a couple of weeks since she'd gone 们三个人都喜欢的漫画小说时，我被一个想法打动missing,but I still had faith.This was the season for 了。”和第二段首句内容可知，第一段可描写 miracles,after all. 构思情节如下： About two weeks ago,my sweet kitty disappeared from my parents'house in my hometown.Baby-Girl had 2.二框二首正能量 been staying with them while I was between apartments. 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段At the time,I lived and worked in another city.Iwas 内容：第二段可描写 staying with friends until I rented my own house.Baby- Girl had gotten out of my parents'house the day before I 构思情节如下： was set to drive back home to pick her up. My dad and I had spent that entire visit searching for her.Dad was a“realist'”,which meant he spent a第二步研读首句，巧定框架 whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. 1.两段首句定一框 "She's either been hit by a car or been taken in by 由第一段首句内容“我坚持认为看看没有关系， someone who found her,"he said.I rolled my eyes.He 并走进了房间。”可知，第一段可描写 could do with a little more faith! Besides,though I couldn't explain it,I knew I'd see 构思情节如下： Baby-Girl again.She could survive all on her own.If any cat could do the impossible,it was my Baby-Girl.Even after I returned to my house without her,deep down I had 2.二框二首正能量 this undeniable feeling that we would be reunited one day. 根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段 Now,home again for the holidays,I was 内容：可描写 determined to pick up my search right where I'd left off. I grabbed Baby-Girl's cat carrier and loaded it into the 构思情节如下： car,then asked my dad to drive me to the shelter. At the shelter,a staff member took us to see the cats.We walked through rows of cages.My eyes 第三步3句衔接，主旨升华 scanned cats of all colors and sizes.None of them was my Baby-Girl.Then I noticed a room farther back.I I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room. pushed ahead."Sweetheart,that's where they keep the 1 474 cats that just came in,"Dad said."Your cat wouldn't be in there.” 026 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 (与第一段首句衔接，倒装句). I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the 2 年 room 创 (与第二段首句衔接) 新 Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove she was 计 my cat. 3. (与第二段 中 首句衔接，副词作状语).·· Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove she was x my cat. (主旨升华，引用名言) 第四步 语言提升，写作定稿 注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。 I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room. 第一步 细读原文，获取双线 人物 时间 Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove she was my cat. 地点 情节线 情感线 主旨5.Tears welled up in her eyes 4.Not until I experienced the accident was I aware that 6.a wave of guilt washed over me 5.I opened the door,and there stood Michael,all covered in mud. 7.A feeling of relief/Relief swept over him 即时训练7 8.(a sense of)fear seized her I.1.It was my determination and efforts that helped me achieve my II.1.surprise and unbelief surrounded me dream. 2.A feeling of incredible happiness swept over him 2.It was on that day that I came to know a truth-a small act of 3.her mother's tears gave way to laughter kindness can make a big difference. 4.Her face lit up with sheer delight and happiness 3.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious 5.A burst of pride/Pride welled up inside her as she successfully saved atmosphere. the old man. 4.It was at that moment that Devin made his final decision. 6.The sadness robbed me of the power to say anything. II.1.It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed 即时训练2 through my body. 1.Satisfied with his performance 2.It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something 2.ready to let her see the anger and disappointment in my eyes unusual happen finally. 3.helpless and hopeless 3.It was the special experience that made me realize forgiving is an 4.Worried about her mother's health,she had to return home ahead of important virtue 4.It was on that day that I realized what Dad had accomplished at my 5.Five hours later,they arrived home eventually,tired but excited. age was much greater than I did. 6.Anxious about my daughter's safety,I called her many times. 即时训练3 第三节生动描写 I.1.resting her aching feet 即时训练1 2.Dressed in a Santa Claus costume I.1.Lorna came to the window,opened it and looked out up at the 3.slamming the door angrily night sky. 4.Having waited in line for an hour at the bank 2.She picked up the photo,stared at it for a while and placed it 5.Misunderstood by his teacher and laughed at by everyone carefully into the album. 6.Sitting down on the bench saying gently 3.Feeling stronger now,Jane walked along the stream,hoping that it 7.Having reviewed his lessons for a whole weekend at home would lead her to the lake. II.1.Hearing my teacher's encouragement 4.Standing beside the empty road,they looked up into the sky,feeling 2.Struck by his words the precious peace 3.Overwhelmed with cheers 5.Wearing my usual running clothes,I brushed past them with a 4.Knowing my strengths and weaknesses all too well confident smile. 5.Hearing that using all her strength II.the twins got up early,tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some 6.Having promised that we would get there before five flour out of the bag their father slid into the kitchen,patting the 7.Feeling unbearably cold and exhausted twins'shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice they carried 8.Feeling a surge of sadness,she couldn't help crying. the breakfast,advanced upstairs and woke up their mother 即时训练4 即时训练2 I.1.his mouth dry and his legs trembling with his mouth dry and hisi 1.She crept along the path,bent over swiftly and cupped her hands legs trembling around the butterfly gently. 2.Her eyes sparkling With her eyes sparkling i2.She dashed forward,knelt down and gathered her son into her arms. 3.his face wearing a wam smile with his face wearing a warm smile i 3.The children rushed excitedly to the lake,took off their clothes and 4.her eyes full of tears with her eyes full of tears dived into the water. II.1.(with)tears blurring my eyes 4.The singer glanced at the audience,took a deep breath and began to 2.with a paper bag held tightly in her hand | sing 3.eyes sparkling with curiosity and a little uneasiness 5.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder,and flashed a bright 4.With)his eyes fixed on the family album smile. 5.With)tears welling up in his eyes 6.Putting the book where it belonged,the boy tiptoed out of the room 6.With the sky turning dark gradually,Jane got lost in the forest. as lightly as possible. 7.He rushed to the room with his heart beating wildly and his face即时训练3 flushing. 1.hugged him tightly saying thankfully 8.He was lying on the grass,(with)his hands crossed under his head. :2.burst into a big toothy smile waved to me with excitement 即时训练5 i3.felt a gentle pat with a smile Amazingly I.1.Without/But for your advice i4.I was gradually overwhelmed by a strong sense of joy and happiness. 2.Had you taken my advice 5.He patted me gently.It is my considerate teacher who inspires me to 3.Had it not been for your selfless help face my fear bravely and positively. But for/Without your selfless help 6.Without hesitation,David nodded in agreement,finally deciding to II.1.How I wish I had worked hard before join in the cross-country team. 2.Had it not been for you,mister,I wouldn't have made it 7.When the students stepped off the bus,James's eyes widened in 3.wishing that he had joined the party last night surprise. 4.Without/But for Eric's encouragement 8.My teacher entered the classroom with an infectious smile spreading 5.But for my rudeness,we wouldn't have quarreled with each other. on his face. 6."If only I had listened to my mother's advice!"the little girl whispered to herself. 第六讲续写话题演练 即时训练6 Writing 1 I.1.Stressed out as/though we were 第一步 2.out rushed the boy in an instant I,my dad,Mr.Slaight,Mr.Slaight'secretary before working in 3.So particular about/over food was the little girl that her parents shed television at home,at Ryerson in Toronto,at the station A dream of tears of anxiety and worry. working in television-my dad encouraged me-I was admitted to the 4.Not until I experienced the event did I realize a small act of care can radio and television arts program-His secretary asked me to come and melt people's loneliness. audition for a new school life show ambitious-afraid-confident- 5.Hardly had Mike finished his perfommance when the audience all rose anxious-→excited努力奋斗，实现梦想 to their feet,clapping wildly. 第二步 II.1.Painful and a bit embarrassed as/though he was :1.只有我面试通过，这样才有机会在电视上表演。所以我的表现 2.so desperate was I that I felt as if I were torn into pieces 最后一定是不错的，并且获得了面试机会。开始感到紧张+受 3.on top of which stood an old temple 到鼓励→建立信心→努力排练 647 2.我开始第一次亮相，可以写表演的顺畅，是因为多天的排练和努：We're going to be in teams of two→Dur third friend Kash became angry 力。演出大获成功，名声大噪等等，事业蒸蒸日上，最后点题呼 -We were stuck in this dilemma relieved and excited-awkward and 应第一段由于爸爸的支持、帮助和鼓励进行点题。 在舞台上frustrated-→forgivable消除误会，再续友情 专心表演二，大受欢迎心中充满了无限的喜悦→父母激励我继第二步 续努力实现自己的梦想 1.我们写道歉信、弥补友情的过程。两人商量→写出道歉信 第三步 :2.卡什接受我们的道款、重新修复友谊的过程。 接受道歉→重 1.Hardly had I said a few words when my mind went blank. 归于好 2.Whenever I felt worn out,my fatigue magically faded away after 第三步 imagining the bright smile on my parents'cheeks when they saw my :1.Thrilled and inspired,I sprang in front of my desk,racked my brains performance on TV. and started drawing a few scenes of three of us giggling,chattering 3.Through the spotlight,what came into my sight was a full house. and enjoying each other's company like we usually did. 4.I deeply knew that without my father's help and encouragement,I:2.Pierced to the heart with guilt,I gingerly tucked the paintings into an wouldn't have fulfilled my dream and achieved so much. envelope,hoping this would be an ice-breaker. 第四步 3.He took it,looking surprised at the first sight. 参考范文： 4.We exchanged a knowing smile,realizing that sincerity,trust and When I arrived at the station,I went direct into the audition and communication were always the key to clearing up the began my short performance.Hardly had I said a few words when my misunderstanding between friends. mind went blank.Overwhelmed by a sense of nervousness,I began to 第四步 stumble over my words.When I was at a loss,the chief examiner 参考范文： slowly came over and gently patted me on the shoulder, That night,I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that encouraging me not to be tense.Slowly,my previous restlessness all three of us liked.Thrilled and inspired,I sprang in front of my gave way to the full confidence to well finish the performance.The desk,racked my brains and started drawing a few scenes of three of us next three minutes witnessed my smooth performance and I was told to have passed the audition.During the next few days,I often threw myself giggling,chattering and enjoying each other's company like we into the rehearsal round the clock.Whenever I felt worn out,my usually did.On the last page,I wrote,"Dear Kash,you are not the one fatigue magically faded away after imagining the bright smile on my left behind.Liya and I are so sorry about the way we messed things parents'cheeks when they saw my performance on TV. up."Pierced to the heart with guilt,I gingerly tucked the paintings Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with into an envelope,hoping this would be an ice-breaker my parents at home watching.Through the spotlight,what came into my The next day,I handed my pages of apology to Kash.He took it, sight was a full house.With every line deeply engraved in my mind,looking surprised at the first sight.After he read it,an expression of stood on the stage and devoted myself to the performance.Eventually,the intense joy illuminated his eyes.Blushed,I broke the silence,"I'm show became a hit and its ratings were more than high.With infinite joy sorry,dude.We should have talked to you.With her eyes fixed on in my heart,I couldn't wait to share the good news with my parents.They i the floor,Liya came over and apologized in a low voice,"You mean a inspired me to carry on and strive to shine in the industry.I deeply knew lot to us."Hearing her words,Kash shook his head and beamed,"I that without my father's help and encouragement,I wouldn't have was too sensitive.We exchanged a knowing smile,realizing that fulfilled my dream and achieved so much sincerity,trust and communication were always the key to clearing up Writing 2 the misunderstanding between friends 第一步 Writing 4 my mother and I at her age of eighty-five years old at home 第一步 Mother wanted to sell her houseIcan't believe-Mother explained Baby-Girl,My dad and I Christmas Eve morning at the shelter My felt shocked and explained-We woudn't make good housemates cat was missingMy dad and I searched for her-I believed that we 第二步 i would be reunited one day-We walked through rows of cages faithful 1.作者得知母亲真的在卖房子时的恐慌，后来母亲生病住院及照 ;→determined关爱动物，初心不改 顾母亲的情景 恐慌+确认一+母亲生病住院→照顾母亲 ；第二步 2.描写作者把康复后的母亲接回自己的家中，开始照顾她，并带她1.作者在那个房间发现自己心爱的猫咪。 传来了喵喵叫声→发 去旅行，实现她的梦想。 接母亲回自己家住→意识到亲情的 现我的小猫→收容所的工作人员怀疑不是我的 价值带母亲旅行+实现她的梦想 2.作者通过自己与猫咪的互动证明这只猫就是自己丢失的那只。 第三步 证明她是我的猫→我训练小猫→确认小猫 1."Are you serious?"I asked her one day 第三步 2.Luckily,she recovered. 1.Suddenly,there came a familiar meow. 3.Actually,I am not saying we would get along perfectly,but I see 2.The shelter staff were skeptical too,saying the cat had just been things differently. brought in during the morning storm 4.Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our i 3.Cautiously,I grabbed the carrier. world so warm and beautiful. 4.As a saying goes,"Stick to your hopes and never give up." 第四步 第四步 参考范文： 参考范文： I really panicked when she started having yard sales."Are you I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room. serious?"I asked her one day."Of course,"she answered.I forced Suddenly,there came a familiar meow.I followed the sound and my myself to face what was happening,and I begged for some cherished eyes fell on a little cat with big green eyes.She was skinnier than I items.Then one day Mom caught a bad cold and had a high fever.I was remembered,but it was Baby-Girl!My eye swelled up with tears.I afraid and sent her to the hospital.During those days,I was no longer opened the cage door.Baby-Girl practically jumped into my arms.I stressed about her floater plan,whether it was right or logical.I held her close as Dad looked on."There's just no way...,"he just wanted her to be okay.Luckily,she recovered mumbled.The shelter staff were skeptical too,saying the cat had jus I took her to my home from the hospital happily,no longer i been brought in during the morning storm. bothered by her moving in.Actually,I am not saying we would get Sensing their doubts,I was ready to prove she was my cat. along perfectly,but I see things differently.Her moving in with me Cautiously,I grabbed the carrier.I'd trained Baby-Girl to walk inside hadn't been part of the plan-living next to her had been.I've realized I the carrier.Sure enough,when she was letdown,she made a dash for don't have to understand her,just love her while she's here and take every moment I have with her as a gift.Whenever I had time,I would the carrier and rushed right inside.I was overjoyed to have her back. take her to travel,to realize her dream.Only then did I realize that it It was a miracle that she had managed to survive on her own for so was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful. long,and I was filled with admiration for her strength and Writing 3 determination.I thanked my lucky stars that I had never given up 第一步 hope,and that I had come back to the shelter one last time.As a Kash,teacher,Liya,I when we had a reading competition at school saying goes,"Stick to your hopes and never give up. 648