九年级上册 Unit 4 课时4 写作(课时作业)-【宝典训练】2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语高效课堂教学课件（沪教牛津版 广州深圳沈阳通用）

该初中英语课件聚焦“问题与建议”主题的书信写作，以朋友Mary因成绩压力向Tina求助为情境导入，衔接此前“问题表达”“建议句型”等语言知识，通过提供基础版（简单句式、直接建议）和高阶版（复杂结构、分点策略）分层范文搭建写作支架，帮助学生从基础表达逐步过渡到逻辑清晰的建议类书信写作。 其亮点在于立足语言能力培养，通过真实情境任务（朋友求助回信）提升学生的书面表达能力，同时借助分层范文设计（基础版适合基础学生，高阶版供学有余力者选做），培养学生的学习能力，引导不同水平学生主动调适学习策略。范文中Tina分析Mary困扰并提出沟通、请教老师等具体建议，渗透思维品质的培养，帮助学生学会分析问题和解决问题。学生能在分层练习中提升写作信心，教师可利用该资料实现因材施教，优化教学效果。

天骄出品 必属精品 深圳天骄文化传播有公司 宝典训练 配套教学课件 高效课堂 课时4　写作 Unit 4　Problems and advice 参考范文： 基础版 Dear Mary， 　　I’m sorry you’re feeling stressed about your grades.You work so hard， and that’s what really matters！ Don’t forget—grades don’t show how smart or kind you are. 　　Try talking to your parents.Tell them you’re trying your best.Maybe they’ll understand.Also， don’t worry about getting all A’s at once.It’s a good idea to focus on one subject at a time.Study a little every day instead of waiting until the last minute.Small steps will help you improve. 　　You’re doing great！ I’m always here to cheer you up. Yours， Tina 高阶版 Dear Mary， 　　How is everything going？You’ve mentioned in your last letter that your parents have high expectations.I can understand you because my parents used to push me to get good grades too.I have some advice for you. 　　First of all， you need to talk with your parents and tell them you have tried your best.Communication will make your relationship better.What’s more， you can ask your teachers about how to study better.They may give you more effective ways to study better.Above all，you’re supposed to put their ways into practice.Action speaks louder than words. 　　Keep working hard and you can make it.I believe you will have a good relationship with your parents. 　　Best wishes！ Yours， Tina 书面表达 　　假如你是Tina，你的好朋友Mary最近很烦恼。她虽然 学习很用功，但总是达不到父母对她全科得A的期望。现在 她写信向你求助，请你用英文给她写一封回信，帮助她解决 这个困扰。 　　写作要求：1.信中不得出现真实校名和姓名； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；80词左右。 　　参考词汇： put…into practice 付诸实践 Dear Mary， ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ I’m sorry you’re feeling stressed about your grades. You work so hard， and that’s what really matters！ Don’t forget—grades don’t show how smart or kind you are. 基础版 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Yours， Tina Try talking to your parents. Tell them you’re trying your best. Maybe they’ll understand. Also， don’t worry about getting all A’s at once. It’s a good idea to focus on one subject at a time. Study a little every day instead of waiting until the last minute. Small steps will help you improve. You’re doing great！ I’m always here to cheer you up. 高阶版 Dear Mary， 　　How is everything going？You’ve mentioned in your last letter that ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ your parents have high expectations.I can understand you because my parents used to push me to get good grades too. I have some advice for you.　 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ First of all， you need to talk with your parents and tell them you have tried your best.Communication will make your relationship better.What’s more， you can ask your teachers about how to study better.They may give you more effective ways to study better.Above all，you’re supposed to put their ways into practice.Action speaks louder than words. Keep working hard and you can make it.I believe you will have a good relationship with your parents. 　　Best wishes！ Yours， Tina 温馨提示：高阶版供学有余力的学生选做。 $