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天骄出品 必属精品 深圳天骄文化传播有公司 宝典训练 配套教学课件 高效课堂 课时4　写作 Unit 1　Wise men in history 参考范文： 基础版 My Ideal Classmate 　　In my heart， my ideal classmate is named Tom.He is tall and always wears a warm smile on his face. 　　Tom is really kind.He often helps others without hesitation.Once， I was confused about a math problem， and he patiently explained it to me until I fully understood.Besides， he studies hard and always tries his best to improve himself.In class， he listens attentively and actively answers questions.Moreover， Tom is an active boy.No matter what difficulties he meets， he always looks at the bright side.His positive attitude influences me a lot. 　　I am so lucky to have such an ideal classmate like Tom.I hope we can always be friends and make progress together. 高阶版 My Ideal Classmate 　　When it comes to my ideal classmate， a brilliant figure named Lily immediately pops into my mind.She is of medium height， with long hair.Lily’s kindness is as warm as the sunshine in spring.She has a heart full of empathy and is always ready for helping others.For instance， during the school’s volunteer activities in the community， she dedicated herself to taking care of the elderly， chatting with them and helping with various chores.Her selfless actions not only brought joy to others but also set a wonderful example for the rest of us. 　　Academically， Lily is a high-achiever.She approaches her studies with great enthusiasm and a strong sense of discipline.In class， she listens attentively， absorbs knowledge like a sponge， and actively participates in discussions.Her excellent grades are the result of her consistent efforts and effective learning methods， which she is always willing to share with her classmates. 　　What’s more， Lily is incredibly resilient.Facing challenges and setbacks， she never gives up easily.Instead， she views them as opportunities for growth and learning.Once， she failed an important exam， but rather than being discouraged， she analyzed her mistakes carefully， adjusted her study plan， and eventually achieved remarkable improvement. 　　In conclusion， Lily， with her kindness， academic excellence， and resilience， is truly my ideal classmate.She enriches my school life and constantly inspires me to become a better person.I am truly fortunate to have her as a partner during my school journey. 书面表达 　　为了配合学校正在进行的“最美少年”评选活动，报社开 展了题目为My Ideal Classmate 的短文比赛，要求用英文写出自 己心目中的同学，需要说明少年的“美”在哪，以及谈谈个人 看法。要求：80词左右。 基础版 My Ideal Classmate ⁠ ⁠ In my heart， my ideal classmate is named Tom. He is tall and always wears a warm smile on his face. ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Tom is really kind. He often helps others without hesitation. Once， I was confused about a math problem， and he patiently explained it to me until I fully understood. Besides， he studies hard and always tries his best to improve himself. In class， he listens attentively and actively answers questions. Moreover， Tom is an active boy. No matter what difficulties he meets， he always looks at the bright side. His positive attitude influences me a lot. I am so lucky to have such an ideal classmate like Tom. I hope we can always be friends and make progress together. 高阶版 My Ideal Classmate ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ When it comes to my ideal classmate， a brilliant figure named Lily immediately pops into my mind. She is of medium height， with long hair. Lily’s kindness is as warm as the sunshine in spring. She has a heart full of empathy and is always ready for helping others. For instance， during the school’s volunteer activities in the community， she dedicated herself to taking care of the elderly， chatting with them and helping with various chores. Her selfless actions not only brought joy to others but also set a wonderful example for the rest of us. ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Academically， Lily is a high-achiever. She approaches her studies with great enthusiasm and a strong sense of discipline. In class， she listens attentively， absorbs knowledge like a sponge， and actively participates in discussions. Her excellent grades are the result of her consistent efforts and effective learning methods， which she is always willing to share with her classmates. ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ What’s more， Lily is incredibly resilient. Facing challenges and setbacks， she never gives up easily. Instead， she views them as opportunities for growth and learning. Once， she failed an important exam， but rather than being discouraged， she analyzed her mistakes carefully， adjusted her study plan， and eventually achieved remarkable improvement. ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ 温馨提示：高阶版供学有余力的学生选做。 In conclusion， Lily， with her kindness， academic excellence， and resilience， is truly my ideal classmate. She enriches my school life and constantly inspires me to become a better person. I am truly fortunate to have her as a partner during my school journey. $