九年级上册 Unit 1 课时4 写作-【宝典训练】2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语高效课堂教学课件（沪教牛津版 广州深圳沈阳通用）

天骄出品 必属精品 深圳天骄文化传播有公司 宝典训练 配套教学课件 高效课堂 课时4　写作 Unit 1　Wise men in history 目录 CONTENTS 2 课时过关 1 写作指导 写作指导 要点词汇 1. patient smart 苗条的 friendly brave tall lovely outgoing short polite honest shy 好看的 strong confident 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 2. be born in 对……负责 come from 获得……奖 be good at at the age of… 献身于…… get on well with… 高度评价 make friends with… 树立好榜样 be interested in… 保持联系 向……学习 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 句子训练 1. Mo Yan was born in 1955 in Gaomi， Shandong Province. 2. Although Helen Keller was blind and deaf， she kept on learning and overcame many difficulties. 3. Teacher Zhang Guimei is always ready to help poor students and devotes her life to education. 4. His bravery and fearlessness had a deep influence on me. 5. Einstein is regarded as one of the most creative and intelligent figures in the world. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 课时过关 Ladies and Gentlemen， 　　Today， I am honored to introduce to you all my role model， Quan Hongchan， one of China’s most outstanding divers who has gained numerous awards. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 　　Quan Hongchan was born into a poor family in Zhanjiang， Guangdong on March 28， 2007.She is the third of five children in her family.She started her diving journey at Zhanjiang Sports School in 2014.Her hard work led her to the national team in 2020.At the Tokyo Olympic Games in 2021， she won the gold medal in the 10 m Platform Women event， setting a new world record. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 　　Quan is a symbol of success and courage.She shows us that with a strong will， dreams can be reached.I’m proud of her not only for her diving skills but also for her strong spirit.She’s a true role model， inspiring us to aim high and work hard. 　　Thank you. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 　　本单元侧重介绍历史名人，写作内容需要渗透本单元的话 题和语言目标——对人物进行描写。通过对人物的年龄、身 份、外貌、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面的描述，达到对描述 的对象有初步了解的目的。在写作过程中要明确以下几点： 一、开头点题 　　开篇第一部分点明人物是谁，以及他/她所处的时代或所从 事的行业。 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 二、主体叙事 　　按照时间顺序讲述人物的重要经历，描述时着重突出人物 成长历练、克服困难后成功的过程。 三、结尾评价 　　结尾总结人物的贡献，并表达你的看法。 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 1. 重点词汇 ⁠耐心的 ⁠友好的 ⁠可爱的 ⁠礼貌的 ⁠诚实的 helpful乐于助人的 hard-working 勤奋的 ⁠自信的 patient 　 friendly　 lovely　 polite　 honest　 confident　 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 ⁠聪明的 ⁠勇敢的 ⁠外向的 kind-hearted热心的 ⁠害羞的 good-looking ⁠ ⁠强壮的 slim ⁠ ⁠高的 smart　 brave　 outgoing　 shy　 好看的　 strong　 苗条的　 tall　 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 ⁠矮的 be of medium build 中等身材 be of medium height 中等身高 short　 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 2. 重点短语 ⁠ 出生于 ⁠ 来自 ⁠ 擅长 在……岁时 与……相处融洽 与……交朋友 对……感兴趣 take an active part in 积极参与 be born in 　 come from 　 be good at 　 at the age of…　 get on well with…　 make friends with…　 be interested in… 　 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 give up one’s hope 放弃希望 be responsible for… ⁠ win the prize of… ⁠ make great contributions to… 对……做出贡献 devote one’s life to… ⁠ speak highly of ⁠ set a good example ⁠ be remembered as… 作为……而被记住 keep in touch with ⁠ learn from… ⁠ 对……负责　 获得……奖　 献身于……　 高度评价　 树立好榜样　 保持联系　 向……学习　 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 3. 重点句型 Jerry was born on Sept 12th， 2006. 杰瑞出生于2006年9月12日。 She has a round face， big eyes， a big mouth and a big nose. 她有一张圆脸，大眼睛，大嘴巴和大鼻子。 Tim is a junior high school student who comes from New York. 蒂姆是一个来自纽约的初中生。 Mary is a 12-year-old girl who shows great interest in singing and dancing. 玛丽是一个12岁的女孩，她对唱歌和跳舞非常感兴趣。 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 Mark Twain is regarded/considered as one of the most famous writers in the world. 马克·吐温被认为是世界上最著名的作家之一。 I’m so proud that I have such a successful father. 我很自豪我有一个如此成功的父亲。 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 1. 莫言出生于 1955 年，山东高密人。 ⁠ 2. 海伦·凯勒尽管失明且失聪，但坚持学习，克服了重重困 难。 ⁠ ⁠ Mo Yan was born in 1955 in Gaomi， Shandong Province. Although Helen Keller was blind and deaf， she kept on learning and overcame many difficulties. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 3. 张桂梅老师总是帮助贫困学生，将自己的一生奉献给教 育事业。 ⁠ ⁠ 4. 他的勇敢无畏对我产生了深刻的影响。 ⁠ 5. 爱因斯坦被认为是世界上最具有创造性才智的人物之一。 ⁠ ⁠ Teacher Zhang Guimei is always ready to help poor students and devotes her life to education. His bravery and fearlessness had a deep influence on me. Einstein is regarded as one of the most creative and intelligent figures in the world. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 　　海伦·凯勒（Helen Keller）凭借意志和勇气成就了自己坚 强的人生。你校正举办以“The hero in my heart”为题的英语 征文活动，请根据以下要点介绍海伦·凯勒，并谈谈你的看法： 个人信息 著名作家，自幼残疾，毕业于顶尖大学 原因 1.为残疾人筹集善款；2.作品鼓励了很多人； 3.……（自行补充） 评价 1.是残疾人的骄傲；2.……（自行补充） 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 1. 审体裁：本章节要撰写的属于记叙文。 2. 审时态：如文章的人物已故，用一般过去时。（其余情况用 一般现在时） 3. 审人称：自我介绍类的题目用第一人称，介绍他人的题目用 第三人称。 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 4. 审结构： 第一部分：开头。人物的背景信息，如出生、外貌和性格特 征等。 第二部分：正文。人物的兴趣爱好和经历等。 第三部分：结束语。对人物的评价。 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 The hero in my heart 　　Helen Keller is the hero in my heart. She is a well-known writer who graduated from a top university. Although she became disabled when she was a child， Helen Keller still managed to build her own fantastic and meaningful life. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 　　I am deeply impressed with her for three reasons. To begin with， she raised money for the disabled and devoted herself to spreading love and hope， which earned her the respect from all over the world. In addition， she wrote many books. And many of her readers have been greatly encouraged by her books so that they can get through the difficulties in life. Finally， nothing seemed too hard to prevent her from achieving her dream. Once the goal was set， she would not give up trying until she succeeded. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 　　In conclusion， Helen Keller was not only the pride of the disabled but also the model for the young. We should learn from her strength and bravery against difficulties. That’s why she remains the hero in my heart. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 　　为了树立榜样，创建优良的校风，你校英语俱乐部近日 开展主题为 “A role model around me”的英语演讲大赛， 写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的 “模范少年” （Role Model） 全红婵。 　　要求：1.须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理 清晰； 2. 词数：不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总 词数。 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 介绍 中国最优秀的跳水运动员之一；获得过许多奖 经历 1.2007年3月28日出生于广东湛江一个贫苦家庭；家 里一共五个孩子，排行老三。2.2014年在湛江体校开 始训练；训练刻苦努力。3.2020年加入国家队。 4.2021年获得东京奥运会女子单人10米跳台金牌，并 打破世界纪录。 你们的 感想 成功和勇气的象征　　（补充两点）…… 　　参考词汇：跳水运动员diver 　女子单人10米跳台 10 m Platform Women　 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 东京奥运会Tokyo Olympic Games　湛江体校 Zhanjiang Sports School ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Ladies and Gentlemen， Today， I am honored to introduce to you all my role model， Quan Hongchan， one of China’s most outstanding divers who has gained numerous awards. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Quan Hongchan was born into a poor family in Zhanjiang， Guangdong on March 28， 2007. She is the third of five children in her family. She started her diving journey at Zhanjiang Sports School in 2014. Her hard work led her to the national team in 2020. At the Tokyo Olympic Games in 2021， she won the gold medal in the 10 m Platform Women event， setting a new world record. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Quan is a symbol of success and courage. She shows us that with a strong will， dreams can be reached. I’m proud of her not only for her diving skills but also for her strong spirit. She’s a true role model， inspiring us to aim high and work hard. Thank you. 课时过关 返回 目录 写作指导 $