Unit 1 课时5 写作（主书）-【宝典训练】2025-2026学年新教材七年级上册英语高效课堂教学课件（沪教版2024）

该初中英语课件聚焦“介绍朋友及表达友谊看法”的写作教学，通过征稿启事等真实任务导入，以“基本信息-外貌-爱好-品质-友谊看法”为脉络，借助造句训练、连句成文及词汇句型积累等学习支架，帮助学生逐步构建结构化写作能力。 其亮点在于分层递进的训练设计，从基础造句到连句成文，搭配丰富词汇短语句型库，结合真实广播稿情境，有效提升学生语言能力（规范表达）、思维品质（逻辑构建）和学习能力（策略运用）。教师可直接使用系统教学资源，学生在实战中掌握写作方法，提升英语表达与逻辑思维能力。

天骄出品 必属精品 深圳天骄文化传播有限公司 宝典训练 配套教学课件 高效课堂 课件使用说明 本课件需用office2010及以上版本打开，如果您的电脑是office2007及以下版本，可能会出现不可编辑的文档，建议您安装office2010及以上版本。 01 本课件显示比例为16:9，如您的电脑显示器分辨率为4:3，课件显示效果可能比较差，建议您将电脑显示器分辨率更改为16:9。 win 10:右击桌面--选择“显示设置”--点选要显示PPT的屏幕--设置该屏幕分辨率为16:9。 win7、win8(8.1):右击桌面一-选择“屏幕分辨率”--选择要显示PPT的屏幕--设置该屏幕分辨率为16:9。 02 如果您在使用课件的时候,有问题可联系天骄文化售后客服,我们将竭诚为您服务。 03 目录、返回目录均设有超链接，点击即可跳转至相应的页面。 04 课时5　写作 Unit 1　Friendship 目录 CONTENTS 1 写作目标 2 写作指导 3 课堂写作 【课堂写作】 （一）造句训练 1. My best friend is James. He is thirteen years old and from Sunshine Middle School. 2. James has an attractive appearance， with a handsome face and dark hair. 3. James has a lot of hobbies， such as playing basketball， listening to music and playing the guitar. 4. His favourite subjects are history and mathematics， and he is also very interested in ancient Chinese history. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 5. After class， we often study mathematical problems together. With his help， I have made a lot of progress in mathematics. 6. James’ dream is to become a historian. He has the indomitable perseverance and a kind heart. 7. Through his efforts， I believe that his dream will come true. 8. In my opinion， true friendship is honesty， understanding and trust. Especially when you’re in trouble， a friend can lend you a helping hand. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 （二）连句成文 My Best Friend 　　My best friend is James. He is thirteen years old and from Sunshine Middle School. James has an attractive appearance， with a handsome face and dark hair. 　　James has a lot of hobbies that reflect his diverse interests. He loves playing basketball and enjoys listening to music during his free time. Additionally， he often practises playing the guitar at the weekends. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 　　When it comes to academics， James’ favourite subjects are history and mathematics. He has a great interest in ancient Chinese history， and often discusses funny stories and events with me. After class， we often study mathematical problems together. With his help， I have made a lot of progress in mathematics. 　　James’ dream is to become a historian. He has the indomitable perseverance and a kind heart that is always ready to lend a helping hand.Through his efforts， I believe that his dream will come true. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 　　As for me， true friendship is honesty， understanding and trust. Especially when you’re in trouble， a friend can lend you a helping hand. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 　　本单元的写作主题是社会服务与人际沟通。英语课上， 你的英语老师要你介绍一下你的好朋友，并谈一谈你对友谊 的看法，请以“My Good Friend”为题写一篇80词以上的英 语作文。 要求：1.你朋友的基本信息； 2.你朋友的外貌； 3. 你朋友的爱好以及梦想； 4.你朋友的个性、品质； 5. 你对友谊的看法。 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 细审题，列要点 　　我们在确定写作主题后，就开始寻找写作素材。既可以从 课本Unit 1中找出相关的内容，也可以结合生活实际，谈谈关 于介绍你的一位好朋友的内容和感受；然后再根据所给的提示 列好提纲。 1. 我们要写的是一篇说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以 第一和第三人称为主。 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 2. 我们要写的内容要点是： （1）朋友的基本信息。 （2）朋友的外貌。 （3）朋友的爱好以及梦想。 （4）朋友的个性、品质。 （5）对友谊的看法。 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 重结构，找素材 1. 本篇书面表达可用框架： 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 2. 重点词汇、短语和句型： （1）词汇 appearance 外貌 good-looking 好看的 medium height中等身高 round/square face圆/方脸 straight/curly hair直发/卷发 slim 苗条的 dream 梦；梦想 friendship 友谊 hobby 兴趣；爱好 future 未来 helpful 乐于助人的 honest 诚实的 patient 有耐心的 brave 勇敢的 smart 聪明的 warm-hearted 热心的 easy-going 随和的 out-going 外向的 hard-working 勤奋的 lovely 可爱的 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 humorous 幽默的 careful 细心的 active 活跃的 confident 自信的 caring 关心他人的 friendly 友好的 attractive 迷人的 polite 有礼貌的 funny有趣的 supportive 支持的 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 （2）短语 with one’s help 在某人的帮助下 in one’s spare time 在某人的空闲时间 （be）good at 擅长 （be）interested in 对……感兴趣 （be）ready to 乐于/愿意做…… make friends with 与……交朋友 give a hand to sb. 帮助某人 share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物 look forward to 盼望；期待 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 （3）句型 He likes sports and often plays basketball after school. 他喜欢运动，放学后经常打篮球。 His dream is to be an astronaut when he grows up. 他的梦想是长大后当一名航天员。 When I meet difficult problems with my study， she is always there to help me. 当我在学习上遇到困难时，她总是在那里帮助我。 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 After school， he told me that copying answers was not good for my study. 放学后，他告诉我，抄答案对我的学习没有好处。 Then he taught me how to work out the problem carefully. 然后他仔细地教我如何解决问题。 I think trust， understanding and honesty make our friendship stronger. 我认为信任、理解和诚实会使我们的友谊更加牢固。 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 We not only count on each other but also trust each other. We never lie to each other. 我们不仅互相依靠，而且互相信任。我们从不互相撒谎。 Friendships are not only about having fun， but also about love， honesty， understanding and trust. 友谊不仅仅是关于玩乐，还关乎爱、诚实、理解和信任。 I am lucky to have such a good friend.I hope we can be friends forever. 我很幸运能有这样一个好朋友。我希望我们永远是朋友。 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 My Good Friend 　　I have made a lot of good friends in my school.One of them is Wang Xia.She’s 13.She is of medium height and she has long black hair and bright eyes.She loves reading and painting. She often spends her free time creating beautiful artworks. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 　　Wang Xia is really helpful and patient.When I meet difficult problems with my study， she is always there to help me.For me， friendship is like a precious gift.It gives me support and makes me feel happy and confident. What’s more， close friends should count on each other for love， honesty， understanding and trust. I am lucky to have such a good friend.I hope we can be friends forever. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 　　学校广播站英语栏目正在征稿，题目是“My Best Friend”，请你结合所学的介绍朋友的方法，写一篇广播稿， 80词以上，包含以下要点： 　　1. 你朋友的年龄、外貌等基本信息； 　　2. 你朋友的爱好及梦想； 　　3. 你朋友的性格和品质； 　　4. 简要谈一下你对交朋友的看法。 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 （一）造句训练 1. 我最好的朋友叫James，他13岁，来自阳光中学。 ⁠ ⁠ 2. James有着迷人的外貌，英俊的脸庞，黑黑的头发。 ⁠ ⁠ My best friend is James. He is thirteen years old and from Sunshine Middle School. James has an attractive appearance， with a handsome face and dark hair. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 3. James有很多爱好，比如打篮球、听音乐、弹吉他。 ⁠ ⁠ 4. 他最喜爱的学科是历史和数学（mathematics），他对中国古 代历史也很感兴趣。 ⁠ ⁠ James has a lot of hobbies， such as playing basketball， listening to music and playing the guitar. His favourite subjects are history and mathematics， and he is also very interested in ancient Chinese history. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 5. 下课后，我们经常在一起研究数学难题。在他的帮助下，我 的数学取得了许多进步。 ⁠ ⁠ 6. James的梦想是成为一名历史学家（historian）。他有着坚韧 不拔的毅力（indomitable perseverance）和一颗善良的心。 ⁠ ⁠ After class， we often study mathematical problems together. With his help， I have made a lot of progress in mathematics. James’ dream is to become a historian. He has the indomitable perseverance and a kind heart. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 7. 经过他的努力（efforts），我相信他的梦想一定会实现。 ⁠ 8. 在我看来，真正的友谊是忠诚、理解和信任。尤其是在你遇 到麻烦时朋友能够伸出援助之手。 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ Through his efforts， I believe that his dream will come true. In my opinion， true friendship is honesty， understanding and trust. Especially when you’re in trouble， a friend can lend you a helping hand. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 （二）连句成文 My Best Friend ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ My best friend is James. He is thirteen years old and from Sunshine Middle School. James has an attractive appearance， with a handsome face and dark hair. James has a lot of hobbies that reflect his diverse interests. He loves playing basketball and enjoys listening to music during his free time. Additionally， he often practises playing the guitar at the weekends. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ When it comes to academics， James’ favourite subjects are history and mathematics. He has a great interest in ancient Chinese history， and often discusses funny stories and events with me. After class， we often study mathematical problems together. With his help， I have made a lot of progress in mathematics. James’ dream is to become a historian. He has the indomitable perseverance and a kind heart that is always ready to lend a helping hand.Through his efforts， I believe that his dream will come true. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 ⁠ ⁠ ⁠ As for me， true friendship is honesty， understanding and trust. Especially when you’re in trouble， a friend can lend you a helping hand. 写作目标 写作指导 课堂写作 返回 目录 本课件由深圳天骄文化出品，仅限教师教学使用。 本课件所有权和著作权归本公司所有， 任何人不得以非法形式进行销售或传播，违者必究! 谢谢观看 $