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课时作业二十一　写作综合提分练 话题　建议信 一、(2025·河北三模) 假定你是李华，近日你发现一些招聘广告对应聘者设置了年龄限制。请你给当地英文报写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．描述你对此现象的看法； 2．说明存在的问题； 3．提出你的建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Editor， I've noticed some job advertisements in our area set age limits for applicants.I find it inappropriate. By focusing on age，employers might miss out on talented individuals who don't fit within the required age range.These age limits may also be seen as discriminatory，potentially leading to negative attitudes towards these companies.Instead，I believe job advertisements should focus on skills，qualifications，and experience. I suggest that you discuss this issue in your newspaper.Encouraging businesses to prioritize capabilities over age can make our local job market fairer. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的身份，给当地英文报写一封邮件，对招聘广告中的年龄限制现象提出看法和建议。 【详解】 1．词汇积累 不合适的：inappropriate→unsuitable 问题：issue→problem 建议：suggest→advise 集中于：focus on→concentrate on 2．句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I suggest that you discuss this issue in your newspaper. 拓展句：It is suggested that this issue be discussed in your newspaper. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]By focusing on age，employers might miss out on talented individuals who don't fit within the required age range.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]These age limits may also be seen as discriminatory，potentially leading to negative attitudes towards these companies.(运用了现在分词作结果状语) [高分句型3]Encouraging businesses to prioritize capabilities over age can make our local job market fairer.(运用了动名词作主语) 二、(2025·河南豫东部分名校三模) 假定你是李华，近日，你发现同学们参与外教Thomas组织的“英语月”活动的兴趣不高，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1．说明问题； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Thomas， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Thomas， I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to render what I've found about students' interest in our English Month. Aimed at cultivating students' interest in English learning，your English Month undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency. However，I've found students lacking enthusiasm to get involved lately.I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance.Additionally, why not undertake a survey to know about what really interests students? I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change，in which case，the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts. Yours truly， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Thomas写邮件，说明同学们参与“英语月”活动兴趣不高的问题，并提出建议。 【详解】 1．词汇积累 培养：cultivate→foster 提高：enhance→improve 参与：get involved→participate 独特的：unique→distinct 2．句式拓展 同义句 原句：I think it would be a good idea to showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance. 拓展句：I think that it would be a good idea if we showcase the unique charm of English Month by adding more interactive activities like English Drama Performance. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Aimed at cultivating students' interest in English leaning，your English Month undoubtedly offers us students a great platform to enhance our English proficiency.(运用了过去分词短语作状语) [高分句型2]I would appreciate it if you could make a bit change，in which case，the English Month will surely become one of the fondest memories rooted in our hearts.(运用了“介词＋关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句) 三、(2025·陕西咸阳二模) 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练，请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表示理解； 2．给出建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter， I'm sorry to hear that you're considering quitting football training due to academic pressure. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Peter， I'm sorry to hear that you're considering quitting football training due to academic pressure. I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like football.The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming，making you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football. But think about it.Football isn't just a sport；it's a great stress reliever.After focusing on textbooks for hours，a short training session can help you relax and recharge.My suggestion is to draw up a well-organized schedule.Set fixed time for study，training，and rest.By doing this，you can keep up with your studies while still enjoying football.I sincerely hope you won't give it up. Best wishes， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练这事给他写一封邮件。内容包括：表示理解和给出建议。 【详解】 1．词汇积累 困难的：difficult→tough 放弃：let go of→give up 专注于：focus on→concentrate on 帮助：help→assist 2．句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming，making you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football. 拓展句：The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming，which will make you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like football.(运用了how引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]By doing this，you can keep up with your studies while still enjoying football.(运用了状语从句的省略) 四、(2025·山东青岛一模) 假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing)，现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．具体活动； 2．你的理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Chris， I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the botanical garden.There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.I'm looking forward to the activity. Yours， Li Hua 【语篇解读】　本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信，就其计划于下周六组织一次春游活动一事给出自己的建议。 【详解】 1．词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 建议：suggest→advise 各种各样的：various→a variety of 机会：chance→opportunity 2．句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Also，we can have a picnic in the garden.It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. 拓展句：Also，we can have a picnic in the garden，which will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I'm glad to hear that we'll have a spring outing next Saturday.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]There，we can admire various plants and learn about different species，which is both educational and relaxing.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $