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课时作业二十三 读后续写
话题 体育锻炼
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
一、(2025·浙江绍兴一模)
For years,swimming was one of those things where I thought:“I'm not good at it,and I never will be.” That thought lingered there most of my childhood.
This all changed last year when the company I worked for announced that they were going to arrange a swimrun,a race where you partially swim and partially run to finish the race.Of course,it was a voluntary activity and I was not going to participate.
However,as the weeks progressed,I started thinking to myself.“What would it feel like to break through my comfort zone and finally face my insecurity?” To help the swimrun participants prepare for the race,the company arranged an opportunity to learn how to swim freestyle with a swim instructor.I ultimately decided to at least participate in the first swimming lesson.
I was mentally prepared to be the worst student during the lesson.However,as it turned out,I had plenty of co-workers that were equally bad at swimming.After a few swimming lessons,I even got compliments for how quickly I managed to improve.Not only had I shattered my old belief about my disability in water,but something else had started to stir.I had gotten a taste for swimming and was curious to see where it could lead me.“How would it feel like to be completely comfortable in the water?” I wondered.
I started going to the public bathhouse to practice the few tips I had gotten from the swimming instructor.I'd watch YouTube videos and try and mimic the movements by myself in the water to the best of my abilities.
Without a doubt-in the beginning,I looked like a drowning monkey.I would swim;I would sink,coughing up water,and repeat it all over again.I'd get yelled at for swimming too slow at the freestyle range.However,I focused on the process and the soon-to-be new skillset that I did not get discouraged by the slow progress nor the occasional scolding.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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The thoughts of gliding through water effortlessly was what kept me going.
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Regarding the swimrun,I eventually decided to participate.
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【参考范文】
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The thought of gliding through water effortlessly was what kept me going. At a certain point,I hit a plateau,So,I decided to contact my swimming instructor for more swimming lessons.Under his guidance,I started to practice more by myself.Some days,I would come back seriously wondering if my body constitution was meant for swimming at all.On other days,I would feel fantastic while completing my laps.Still,there was one single thing that stood out during my practice sessions:while repeating thousands and thousands of crawling strokes,I slowly but surely started to enjoy the process of swimming thoroughly.
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Regarding the swimrun,I eventually decided to participate. For me,this challenge was pushing me to my limits,as I had been utterly scared to confront this weakness of mine.The race began,and soon I was completely breathless from the physical exertion.However,I solely focused on all the movements I had been practicing repetitively throughout the summer.Before I knew it,I had finished.The swimrun had been my end goal but I already knew by then that I was going to continue swimming.I wished my childhood self could meet my present-day self to see that I was not naturally bad at swimming.It was possible to change and surpass the boundaries of my comfort zone.
【语篇解读】 本文以作者学习游泳为线索展开,讲述了不喜欢游泳的作者在公司宣布安排一项游泳比赛时,作者开始打算突破舒适区,作者打算参加游泳课开始学习游泳,在学习的过程中作者打破了自己水中无能的观念,还逐渐对游泳产生了兴趣,进而开始自己学习一些游泳的技巧,尽管偶尔因为太慢而被骂,作者仍旧专注于过程以及学到新技能的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“在水中毫不费力地滑行的想法是我前进的动力。”可知,第一段可描写作者在学习游泳时是如何让自己不断前进的,以及最终作者开始享受游泳的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“关于游泳比赛,我最终决定参加。”可知,第二段可描写作者在接下来的比赛中的表现以及比赛结束后自己的感悟。
2.续写线索:遇到麻烦——寻求帮助——不断进步——决定参加比赛——努力完成比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回来:come back/return/get back
②面对:confront/be faced with/face
③超越:surpass/exceed/tower over/go beyond
情绪类
害怕:scared/frightened
【点睛】
[高分句型1]On other days,I would feel fantastic while completing my laps.(运用了状语从句中的省略结构)
[高分句型2]However,I solely focused on all the movements I had been practicing repetitively throughout the summer.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句修饰先行词movements)
[高分句型3]It was possible to change and surpass the boundaries of my comfort zone.(运用了“it作形式主语,动词不定式短语作真正主语”结构)
二、(2025·浙江台州一模)
“Why can't Grandpa just be normal? Why does he have to be so odd?” Carter asked his Grandma.
Grandma laughed.“I've considered that for many years.”
They sat on a Florida beach,watching Grandpa and his friends riding wave-skis in the ocean.The early morning sun warmed their faces as the sand gradually heated beneath them.
Carter scooped up a handful of sand and let it sift through his fingers.“Why do we have to come here so early?” he questioned,noting that the rest of his family was still asleep.
With a smile,Grandma explained that the morning waves were calmer with less wind.She mentioned how Grandpa loved the thrill of a big wave's shadow looming over him before it hit.
Carter grumbled that none of his friends knew what a wave-ski was,and they thought it was odd when he tried to explain it.He wondered why Grandpa didn't pick a more typical hobby,like restoring old cars,which he thought seemed cooler.
Grandma patted Carter's shoulder and replied that wave-skiing was like surfing on a short kayak (皮艇),combining elements of kayaking and surfing.She added how they paddled out to catch bigger waves like surfers,steering with a paddle,and highlighted the thrill of the experience.
“Nobody's grandpa does this.I love you both,but neither of you act s like typical grandparents,” Carter remarked.
Grandma laughed again,sharing that Grandpa's friends were also grandparents and asked what else they should be doing.
Carter,unsure,simply muttered,“I don't know.Grandparent stuff.”
“Each summer,your family visits.We enjoy the beach,swim,and cherish our time together.That's what truly matters.Everyone has their own way of enjoying life,and for Grandpa,it's wave-skiing.” Grandma paused,her eyes sparkling with warmth.
Carter sighed.“I guess.But it's still odd.”
“Why don't you give it a try? You might find it's more fun than you think,”
Grandma encouraged.Carter hesitated but agreed. “Okay,I'll give it a shot.”
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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The next morning,Carter and Grandpa headed out early.
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By the end of the morning,Carter was grinning from ear to ear.
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The next morning,Carter and Grandpa headed out early. Grandpa handed him a smaller waveski and helped secure the strap before they paddled out.In the golden sun,Carter,drowsy-eyed,watched in awe as Grandpa skillfully demonstrated how to balance and steer,riding up and down waves effortlessly.Amid the rolling waves,his “odd” grandpa was no longer an old guy but a marvelous waveskier.“Ready,champ?” Grandpa's shouts brought Carter's thoughts back.“Yes!” Carter yelled,a flicker of excitement bubbling inside him.Despite frequent tumbles into the cool and salty water,he finally caught “his” first wave,savoring the thrilling rush like never before.
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By the end of the morning,Carter was grinning from ear to ear.“I did it,Grandpa! I could ride waves!” Carter exclaimed breathlessly.Grandpa beamed,clapping him on the back.“You sure did,buddy.” While paddling back,Carter had a newfound appreciation for Grandpa and his unusual hobby.Back on the beach,Grandma smiled and asked,“How was it?” “Awesome! I bet my friends will like it,too!” Carter replied proudly.Over the following weeks,Carter and Grandpa shared many early morning waveskiing sessions,creating cherished memories and deepening their bonds.Through these times,Carter realized being “odd” was just a unique way to embrace life's unexpected joys.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了卡特的爷爷喜欢和朋友在海里玩滑水板,卡特一开始不理解,后来尝试过以后,也喜欢上了这种刺激的感受。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上,卡特和爷爷很早就出发了。”可知,第一段可描写卡特和爷爷在海中的经历。
②由第二段首句内容“上午结束时,卡特笑得合不拢嘴。”可知,第二段可描写卡特得到爷爷的表扬以及卡特的感悟。
2.续写线索:出发——开始玩耍——感受刺激——玩的开心——得到表扬——卡特感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①喜爱:like/be fond of
②叫喊:yell/shout
③接受:embrace/accept
情绪类
①激动:excitement/thrill
②意外:unexpected/surprising
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Grandpa handed him a smaller waveski and helped secure the strap before they paddled out.(运用了before引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]While paddling back,Carter had a newfound appreciation for Grandpa and his unusual hobby.(运用了状语从句的省略)
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