专题12 读后续写十类情感描写素材积累与仿写(词-句-文) （知识清单）（全国通用）2026年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

专题12读后续写十类情感描写素材积累与仿写 (词-句-文) 原卷版 目录 01--情感细节描写——紧张和焦虑 02--情感细节描写——喜悦和快乐 03--情感细节描写——惊吓和恐惧 04--情感细节描写——吃惊和震惊 05--情感细节描写——激动和兴奋 06--情感细节描写——感激和感动 07--情感细节描写——焦虑和担忧 08--情感细节描写——生气和愤怒 09--情感细节描写——悲伤和难过 10--情感细节描写——羞愧和后悔 11--情感细节描写—综合训练6篇 01--情感细节描写——紧张和焦虑 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：nervous, uneasy, tense, anxious, nervously 2.名词/动词：tension, anxiety, tremble, shake 3.固定短语： ①感觉手心出汗喉咙发紧 feel one’s palm sweating and throat tight　 ②感觉坐立不安 feel like sitting on pins and needles　 ③心里发慌 with/have butterflies in one's stomach　 ④因焦虑而颤抖 tremble with anxiety 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.她的心剧烈跳动，腿打着颤。(beat) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我焦虑不安，坐立不安。(pin) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.我的心跳加速，头脑一片空白。(blank) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.他的脸色苍白，站在那里说不出话。(tongue-tied) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.期末考试前，我总是紧张不安。(stomach) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 When I was standing backstage, 1 . When my name was called I could 2 . My trembling legs brought me on stage, and I could 3 . However, the hall crowded with audience made me even more uneasy. My heart was 4 , as if it were about to pop. I stood there so nervously that I 5 , wondering what to do next. 我站在后台时，紧张感突然涌上心头。听到自己的名字被喊到，我顿时心怦怦直跳。我拖着发颤的双腿走上台，只觉得手心在冒汗，心跳也越来越快。然而，坐满观众的大厅让我更加不安。我的心怦怦狂跳，仿佛下一秒就要跳出来。我紧张地站在那里，感觉喉咙发紧，完全不知道接下来该做什么。 02--情感细节描写——喜悦和快乐 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词/名词：joy, joyful, joyfully, pleased, pleasant, pleasure, glad, gladly, enjoy, enjoyable, happy, happiness, happily, delight, delighted, cheerful, cheerfully, overjoyed, merry, merrily 2.动词/介词短语：to one's delight/joy/happiness/pleasure, be seized by joy, be overcome with happiness, be wild with joy 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。(twinkle) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。(light) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 一阵激动声穿过他们。(ripple) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。(shine) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他炫耀着自己的新自行车，咧着嘴笑个不停。(grin) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 (2020新课标卷) Learning the children's idea, Mrs Meredith was 1 that she smiled brightly. Then, children got down to preparing popcorn joyfully. With a basket of popcorn, they left for Bernard's house 2______________to share with Bernard the good plan. Hearing what they said, Bernard was so delighted that he almost jumped up, 3 . At the sight of the basket of popcorn, his parents 4____________________________too．Later, 5 , the popcorn was so tasty that it was soon sold out. 得知孩子们的想法后，梅雷迪思太太欣喜若狂，笑容灿烂。随后，孩子们兴高采烈地开始准备爆米花。他们提着一篮爆米花，开开心心地动身去伯纳德家，想和他分享这个好计划。听完他们的话，伯纳德高兴得差点跳起来，眼里满是泪水。看到那篮爆米花，他的父母也满心欢喜。后来，让他格外高兴的是，这爆米花味道极佳，很快就卖光了。 03--情感细节描写——惊吓和恐惧 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词：afraid, alarmed, scared, scary, frightened, frightening, fearful, panicky, terrified, terrifying 2.名词/动词：fear, scare, fright, frighten, terror 3.短语： ①吓得发抖 shake/tremble with fear/terror　 ②把……吓死 scare/frighten...to death　 ③吓得魂不附体 be scared out of one's wits　 ④吓呆/吓傻 freeze/be frozen with fear　 ⑤吓得呆若木鸡 stand rooted to the spot with fear　 ⑥惊慌失措 be seized with panic　 ⑦吓得要死 be dead with fright 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.她吓得双手颤抖。(shake) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我害怕极了。(overwhelm) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.她吓得浑身发抖。(flood) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。(tremble) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.我的腿在颤抖，心在砰砰跳。(pound) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 (2021浙江1月卷)You could hardly imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear. 1_____________________ held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. 2 , I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating. Beside me was my wife, who was rooted to the ground, 3 . At the sight of the polar bear's bloody mouth, she 4 . Waves of fear swept over us．5 . 你根本难以想象，当北极熊靠近时我们有多害怕。一阵恐惧彻底攫住了我，我整个人寸步难移。我怕到了极点，只觉得双腿在发抖，手心全是汗。我身边的妻子则像被钉在地上，吓得一动不动。一看到北极熊那张沾满鲜血的嘴，她更是吓得几乎晕厥过去。一波又一波的恐惧不断向我们袭来。我们喉咙发紧，膝盖也阵阵发软。 04--情感细节描写——吃惊和震惊 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：astonished, surprised, shocked, astonishing, surprising, shocking, surprisingly, amazingly 2.名词/动词：shock, astonishment, surprise, amazement, amaze, astonish 3.短语： ①令某人震惊的是 to one's shock/astonishment/surprise/amazement　 ②震惊地/惊异地 in astonishment/surprise/shock/amazement　 ③难以置信地 in disbelief　 ④让某人很震惊 come as a shock to sb……　 ⑤吃惊地倒吸一口冷气gasp in astonishment 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.惊愕的表情在她的脸上蔓延开来。(spread) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.当我看到这么多观众时，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。(astonishment) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大眼睛。(wide) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.听到这个意外的消息，Mary呆住了，动弹不得。(root) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.我们靠近，发现车主是一个六岁男孩，都惊呆了。(freeze) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 1 , a tornado occurred in a small town nearby. At the bad news, Mary 2 . Then, Mary shared the news with her children, and asked if they would like to share what they had with the less fortunate people. She was astonished that all the children were willing to donate something. When Anne placed her favorite toy in the box, 3 her brother's face．He 4 . Without a word, he went back to his room and ran back with his favorite toy to the living-room. 5 , Mary realized that he had also recognised what her action meant. 令人震惊的是，附近的一个小镇遭遇了龙卷风。听到这个坏消息，玛丽震惊得僵在原地，像被钉在地上一样。随后，玛丽把这个消息告诉了孩子们，并问他们是否愿意把自己的东西分享给那些不幸的人。让她惊讶的是，所有孩子都愿意捐出一些物品。当安妮把自己最喜欢的玩具放进箱子时，弟弟脸上掠过一丝惊讶。他睁大眼睛盯着安妮，没说一句话，转身跑回自己的房间，又抱着自己最喜欢的玩具跑回了客厅。玛丽感到惊讶，她意识到弟弟也明白了姐姐这个举动的意义。 05--情感细节描写——激动和兴奋 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词/名词：excited, thrilled, exciting, thrilling, excitedly, excitement, thrill 2.高级短语词块： ①令某人激动的是to one's excitement/thrill　 ②激动得满脸通红flush with excitement　 ③抑制内心的激动contain one's excitement　 ④激动地with/in excitement 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。(light up) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.这对双胞胎互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。(shed) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.当她接过献花时，激动的泪水充满了她的眼睛。(well up) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。(surge) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。(flood) 三、情感描写类语篇运用 On the journey to the lake, 1 . Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, 2 . The moment we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent．Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came 3 ．Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom 4 ．Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped Father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we 5 ． 在去湖边的路上，一股兴奋感涌上妈妈心头。妈妈坚持要我们去下一个村子露营，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。我们一到露营地，妈妈就迫不及待地冲了出去，兴奋地催促我们搭帐篷。接着，妈妈朝湖边走去，随后传来一声兴奋的尖叫。欣赏着美丽的景色，妈妈几乎抑制不住自己的兴奋。当然，因为这是我们第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭，我和弟弟也感到特别兴奋。呼吸着新鲜空气，闻着美食的香味，我们兴奋得蹦蹦跳跳。 06--情感细节描写——感激和感动 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.名词/动词：gratitude, appreciation, thank, move, touch, appreciate 2.形容词/副词：thankful, grateful, moved, touched, thankfully, gratefully 3.固定短语： ①流下感激的泪水 shed tears of gratitude　 ②感动得落泪 be moved to tears ③对……深怀感激 have a deep gratitude towards　 ④心怀感激地 with gratitude/appreciation ⑤非常感激某人 owe sb a lot/a great deal　 ⑥被……深深感动 be deeply moved/touched by... 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。(fill) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我们一句话也说不出来，泪水模糊了双眼。(blur) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.喜悦的泪水涌了出来，兄弟姐妹紧紧拥抱在一起时。(well) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.他泪流满面，跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前，对她说了声谢谢。(stream) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.当她听到消息的那一刻，一股暖流涌过心头，消融了她的所有恐惧。(wave) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passer­by pushed him to safety. 1 , he thanked the passer­by 2 , “Thank you so much!” But the passer­by just smiled warmly. 3 on the cold day, and he began to believe there was kindness in every corner. It was very touching to see how much strangers could care for each other. 4 , the crowd clapped their hands loudly. Later, knowing what had happened, Peter's mother 5 . 彼得差点撞上一辆路过的汽车，这时一位路人把他推到了安全的地方。感激的泪水在他眼眶里打转，他喉咙哽咽着向路人道谢：“太谢谢您了！” 但路人只是温暖地笑了笑。寒冷的天气里，一股暖意涌上彼得的心头，他开始相信每个角落都有善意存在。看到陌生人之间能如此彼此关怀，场面十分感人。众人深受触动，纷纷大声鼓起掌来。后来，彼得的妈妈得知了事情的经过，流下了喜悦又感激的泪水。 07--情感细节描写——焦虑和担忧 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：anxious, worried, worrying, helpless, hopeless, concerned, anxiously 2.名词：anxiety, worry, helplessness, hopelessness, concern 3.固定短语： ①with anxiety 焦虑地　 ②be concerned about 担忧　 ③be worried about 担心　 ④full of anxiety 焦虑不安　 ⑤feelings of anxiety and concern 焦虑和担忧的感觉 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。(pace) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.他慢慢感到一丝焦虑。(anxiety) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.陌生的房间使她感到紧张不安。(uneasy) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.被一种强烈的焦虑感抓住，我开始感到恐慌。(seize) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.父亲皱起眉头，困惑而焦虑地望着我。(worried) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 Having strayed from the hiking trail, they were stuck in the mountain—with nothing to do but wait anxiously for rescue, 1 . As evening wore on and the sun set behind peaks, 2 , fears of a night in the wild flooding their minds. Worse still, thick fog crept into the forest, soon swallowing everything in pitch darkness and 3 . Tony stood there helpless, 4 . Mary, meanwhile, was close to tears, her body 5 . 他们偏离徒步路线后，便困在了山里 —— 除了焦急地等待救援，别无他法，焦虑正一点点涌上心头。随着夜幕渐深，太阳落到山峰后方，他们愈发担忧，在野外过夜的恐惧充斥着脑海。更糟糕的是，浓雾渐渐渗入森林，很快便将一切吞噬在漆黑之中，让他们更觉无助。托尼无助地站在那里，凝视着雾气。与此同时，玛丽几乎要哭出来，身体因焦虑与恐惧微微颤抖。 08--情感细节描写——生气和愤怒 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：angry, annoyed, annoying, angrily 2.名词/动词：anger, annoyance, rage 3.短语： ①气得发抖 tremble with anger　 ②感到一股怒火 a burst of anger　 ③气红了脸 flush with anger　 ④生某人的气 get mad/cross at sb　 ⑤令某人生气的是to one's annoyance　 ⑥内心愤怒地 in anger 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他怒容满面。(cloud) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.他气得浑身发抖。(tremble) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。(utter) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。(flush) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.他双手抓着那个包，一股怒火在心中燃烧。(burn) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 Tom's recent behavior would always make Mr. Smith 1 ．Finding his homework was unfinished again, Mr. Smith 2 , with 3 . Mr. Smith, whose patience had worn thin, called his father to complain angrily．Learning his son had been so badly­behaved, Tom's father felt so angry that he 4 , “You'd better explain what's going on!”However, Tom hung his head and said nothing. His father's color came up, and 5 ．Eventually, unable to contain his anger, his father 6 . 汤姆最近的表现总让史密斯先生怒火中烧。看到他的作业又没完成时，史密斯先生怒喝一声，眼里满是不耐烦。此时耐心早已耗尽的史密斯先生，怒气冲冲地给汤姆的父亲打了电话告状。得知儿子表现这么差，汤姆的父亲气得重重地捶了一下桌子：“你最好解释清楚到底怎么回事！” 可汤姆只是耷拉着脑袋，一言不发。父亲的脸涨了起来，浓重的怒火像乌云一样笼罩在他脸上。最终，父亲再也按捺不住怒火，摔门而出，身后的门被重重甩上。 09--情感细节描写——悲伤和难过 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：sorrowful, sad, depressed, frustrated, lonely, upset, depressing, sadly 2.名词：sorrow, loneliness, sadness, depression 3.短语： ①一阵孤独/悲伤 a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness　 ②难过得麻木 be numb with sorrow/sadness ③心情沉重 with a sinking heart  ④悲伤不已 be overcome with sorrow ⑤流泪 be reduced to tears  ⑥悲伤如潮涌 sadness comes in waves 　 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.一阵悲伤袭身而来。(grief) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.查理悲痛欲绝。(overcome) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。(well) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。(shake) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。(sob) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 I was selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year. But I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. In the end I walked off the stage, my eyes filled with tears. Finally, results were announced after the contest. I did not win any prizes. I 1 . I 2 and moved out of the lecture hall. I hung my head in sadness, 3 . On entering the classroom, 4 and tears streamed down my cheeks. The next following days, I felt like 5 , not wanting to do anything. 今年，我被选中代表学校参加即将到来的比赛。可我太过骄傲，竟忽视了为比赛练习的重要性。比赛当天，我开始对自己失去信心，还犯了怯场。最后，我退出了舞台，眼里满是泪水。比赛结束后，结果公布了。我没有获得任何奖项。我咬着下唇，心里满是难过。我拖着沉重的双腿，心情沉重地走出报告厅，难过地低着头，浓重的悲伤笼罩着双眼。一走进教室，失望与悲伤就阵阵袭来，眼泪顺着脸颊流下。在那之后的几天里，我感觉自己像沉浸在悲伤的海洋里，什么都不想做。 10--情感细节描写——羞愧和后悔 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.动词类：shame使感到羞耻embarrass使尴尬；使难堪regret易混后悔 2.名词类：embarrassment使人难堪的事awkwardness尴尬笨拙shame羞愧羞耻心guilt内疚regret后悔 3.形容词类：embarrassed感到尴尬的awkward令人尴尬的ashamed感到羞愧的shame害羞的 4.短语类： ①掩饰某人的尴尬 hide one’s embarrassment　 ②因尴尬而满脸通红 one’s face flushed with shame ③感到脸阵阵发烫 feel blood rushing to one’s face ④感觉如坐针毡 feel like sitting on pins and needles ⑤如热锅上的蚂蚁 act as a rat on the hot brick ⑥后悔做某事 be ashamed of... ⑦满心愧疚 be consumed with guilt　 ⑧令某人深感遗憾的是much to one’s regret　 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他脸上掠过一阵羞赧的神情。(cross) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我满怀内疚，冲出去向汤姆道歉。(guilt) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。(brun) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.我被一阵内疚所压倒，言语无法表达我的遗憾。(overcome) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.我觉得鼻子一酸，不争气地的眼泪掉了下来。(lump) ____________________________________________________________________________ 三、情感描写类语篇运用 By now we were standing in the long holiday line to pay the bill and I figured it was a good chance. I threw myself on the ground, screaming, “I want that telephone.” over and over again. “Becky, you’d better get up at once”, my mother said with a trembling voice, 1 . Turning a deaf ear to her, I was still in full tantrum. Ashamed, my mother stood there, 2 . She suddenly lay down beside me on the floor, likewise kicking and screaming out for a string of such items as she was eager to possess. Seeing that, I became increasingly embarrassed and could 3 , with 4 . 5 and I felt as if the whole world was watching us. “Mama, stop. Mama, get up.” I tearfully pleaded. She gave me a look and rose up, brushing the dust from her clothes. 到这时，我们正排在节假日的长队里等着结账，我觉得这是个好机会。我往地上一躺，大喊着 “我就要那个电话（玩具）”，一遍又一遍。“贝基，你赶紧起来！” 妈妈声音发颤，满脸通红，难掩尴尬。我根本没理她，还在撒泼。妈妈很羞愧地站在那儿，感觉脸都发烫了。她突然也在我旁边躺下，学着我的样子又踢又喊，还嚷嚷着要一堆她自己 “超想要” 的东西。我一看这架势，尴尬得不行，心怦怦狂跳，脸也烧得厉害。周围的空气好像都凝固了，我感觉全世界的人都在盯着我们看。“妈妈，别闹了！妈妈，起来啊！” 我带着哭腔哀求道。她看了我一眼，然后站起来，拍了拍衣服上的灰。 11--情感细节描写—综合训练6篇 1．（25-26高三上·湖南·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When entering seventh grade, I was excited about many new things, but one thing really bothered me — I started getting acne (青春痘). Initially, it was just a little, but then, it seemed like overnight, my face was covered with it. I tried to hide it with my hair, but it just wouldn’t work. I was consumed with worry that my peers would make fun of me. I couldn’t concentrate in class, as my mind was constantly preoccupied with my appearance, causing my grades to slip sharply. I started to feel inferior to my classmates and even avoid interaction with them. I tried to get rid of the acne. I washed my face multiple times a day, using all sorts of acne creams I found. I also avoided snacks that might cause it. But all ended up in vain. One day, our school announced a sports day and the teacher asked us to form our own teams. As a sports enthusiast, I had been eagerly expecting it, but I was scared that no one would join me because of how I looked. Standing in front of the mirror, I kept imagining how my classmates would react when I asked them to team up with me. The fear of rejection held me back from approaching them. But then, Kim came to me, “Do you want to join us for the relay race (接力赛)? I’ve seen you run before and you’ve got the speed. If you join us, we’ll have a good chance to win.” In disbelief, I managed to utter “Yes”, still feeling self-conscious but also incredibly grateful. Along with three other classmates, I signed up for the relay race. We trained and discussed strategies together, with no one paying any attention to my acne. Thanks to my speed advantage, I was even assigned to run the final leg — the most critical role in the race. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then came the long-awaited sports day. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The victory was a turning point in my junior life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（25-26高三上·河南·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Hank sat glued to the TV as meteorologists (气象学家) tracked Hurricane Helene. The storm, packing 140 mph winds, was set to hit Florida before moving towards the Carolinas. For Hank, 65, the target hit closer to home: Boiling Springs, South Carolina, where he and his second wife, Debbie, had just moved to care for her 84-year-old mother. But Hank had more urgent matters than the storm. On Saturday, his oldest daughter, Judith, 33, would marry in Johnson City, Tennessee. Hank, who'd once joked about his poor sense of time, had been ordered to arrive on time. So he and Debbie planned a two-hour drive to Johnson City on Friday, staying overnight in their old home, where he could changed into the suit he had prepared for the wedding, then walking Judith down the aisle (过道) in the church at 10 a. m. sharp. By Friday morning, Helene's winds rocked their new house. By 6 p. m. , power and cell service were still out. Debbie, though, refused to leave her mother. "I'll stay, ” she said sadly. "I can't miss this, ” Hank replied, hugging her goodbye. He packed his SUV and headed for Johnson City. The highway quickly turned chaotic. Crews cleared fallen trees as cars inched along. By 10: 30 p. m. , Hank had driven less than 40 miles. At a roadblock, state policemen delivered bad news: "Bridges washed out. Nobody's getting through. ” Hank leaned in. "My daughter's getting married tomorrow. I'm walking her down the aisle. ” The policeman shook his head. "Back roads are flooded too. Wait until morning. ” But Hank couldn't wait. He plotted a detour (绕路) . After a seven-hour drive, his SUV had an empty gas tank. It was 2: 15 a. m. Hank locked his SUV, put a backpack over his shoulder. "Not battle-ready,” he thought, "but it'll do.” He grabbed a tree branch for protection and set off with his cell phone flashlight. The dark hid dangers. A 7-foot wall of mud and trees blocked his path. He crawled through a narrow gap, losing a shoe in the mud. By 4 a. m. , Hank reached the Jackson Bridge over the Nolichucky River. He rushed across, only to be stopped by flashing lights. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答； "Are you the one trying to get to your daughter's wedding? ” a policeman asked, smiling. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Shining in white, Judith stood before him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（25-26高三上·广东·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 Two weeks after the argument, on a Friday, I tried to focus only on exams—but couldn’t stop thinking how long it had been since I’d seen Nick. Not just two days, but two whole weeks. That evening, I slumped at the breakfast bar where my sister Victoria sat. “You look two hundred percent happier than the last two weeks combined,” she remarked.“I need to talk to Nick. Soon,” I said, my voice firm.She rolled her eyes dramatically. “Finally! Revelation of the century!” Then she held up a disposable camera. “Found this between the cushions (沙发靠垫). Yours?” “Nick’s,” I mumbled, taking it. The counter showed zero shots left. He must’ve taken them all the day before the party — the last good day we had. I knew what I had to do. After my Saturday shift, I hurried to Boots to develop the photos. On the bus home, I finally looked through them.The first was a selfie of us, sunlight flaring across Nick’s chest, both of us smiling. My chest ached. That Thursday felt like forever ago.And A photo of us at the tennis court surfaced, stirring a memory. We had argued that day over going to watch a match. I remember shouting at him, met only with his silence. But as I kept flipping, I realized — most photos were just of me. Me laughing on his bed, hugging his dog Henry, trying to give him a piggyback, walking ahead in the fields behind his house…So many moments, all tinted with soft blues and oranges, slightly blurry, like memories already fading. Nick had no artistic streak, nor the least interest in photography — he’d only touched a camera to snap Henry mid-snore. These photos weren’t about skill or style; they were about preservation: preserving our unremarkable, wonderful days — movie nights bickering over plots, dawn walks with Henry’s paws in dew, mornings tangled in sheets too warm to bear but too cozy to leave. It hit me then, sharp as a gust: he wasn’t shooting on a whim. He was clinging to us, desperate to freeze this messy, mundane our life — before he left for Leeds, before this town felt empty without him. Tears pricked my eyes. I loved this — loved us, loved the beautiful monotony of our days — and I knew I couldn’t let it slip. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 I pulled out my phone, snapped a picture of one photo — us in the field, happy — and sent it to Nick. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look up and watch as Nick walks through the tennis-court gate. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2025·广东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Neighbors Are Like Families I was always afraid of storms, ever since a childhood incident that I never forgot. That day, I felt that same fear again. It was a dark and stormy afternoon. The wind was blowing hard and the rain was falling heavily. The trees were shaking wildly. Suddenly, there was a loud CRACK A strong gust of wind had blown over the big tree in my yard. It fell right onto the roof of my house with a huge BANG The whole house shook. Just then, something fell and hit my head. I almost fell down, feeling a slight pain on my forehead. Outside, the storm was still loud and everything felt like it was spinning (旋转). I was frozen in place, feeling helpless and so scared. Later, the wind stopped and the rain slowed. It was quiet and dark inside my house. I was standing in despair in my damaged living room. Seeing the broken glass and wood on the floor, I was at a loss, not knowing what to do next. Just at that moment, a beam of light shone directly into my eyes — it was my neighbor Mr. Johnson. He was a quiet man. We usually just nodded hello and never really talked. He was holding a flashlight and looked very worried. Mr. Johnson held my arm firmly. “It’s okay. I know how it feels,” he said. He took me to his garage which was safe, dry, and clean inside. He found his first-aid kit and gently cleaned the cut on my head. “Storms can be scary,” he said in a soft voice. “Don’t worry. Let’s check your house together”. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Then, he handed me a flashlight and we walked back to my damaged home together. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Hours later, as the last box was settled down, I handed Mr. Johnson a steaming cup of tea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26高三上·浙江杭州·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My brother and I are only a year apart in age. When we were little, people would ask if we were twins. We lived in the mountains and only had each other for a long time, so we weren't just brother and sister, we were best friends. Everything changed after our parents divorced. He went to live with my father, I with my mother. Sometimes he visited us and sometimes I visited them, but we grew more distant each time. By the time I was thirteen, we'd stopped hanging out altogether. I think the only time we ever spoke was at Christmas, and it was all polite but painfully awkward, like he was a complete stranger instead of my little brother. Several years later, after being accepted to a major university three thousand miles away, I made a bold plan: to drive across the country on my own. The idea of traveling alone thrilled me, filling me with excitement and a hint of nervousness, though I knew that the road could be lonely and unpredictable — endless stretches without seeing a single person, and sometimes even wild animals crossing out of nowhere. My parents, however, thought it would be safer if my brother came along as my travel companion on the long drive to college. Needless to say, we were both furious (愤怒的) about the idea. The last thing either of us wanted was to spend a week in a car together — he, with a sister he barely knew, and I, with a “babysitter” I never asked for. But it was settled. Two weeks later, we set off. For the first six hundred miles, neither of us spoke much unless absolutely necessary.The silence was thick with tension, and it didn't take long before we argued over what music to play, how fast to drive, and when to take breaks, each of us stubbornly sticking to our own way, rolling our eyes and sighing in frustration. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something unexpected happened.                  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my hand.                                          ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（25-26高三上·江苏南通·开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Champa loves singing more than anything else in the whole wide world. She sings in the bathroom. And on the roof. She sings to the hills. And to the moon. She sings through rain. And through heat. When Champa sings, she is filled with the most marvellous feeling in the world. One day, when Champa sings, Basant’s eyes light up. “I have an amazing idea!” he says. Basant is Champa’s best friend and he is always bursting with ideas. “You should sing on Annual Day!” says Basant. “What a terrible idea!” says Champa. “Why not! You love to sing.” Champa hasn’t told Basant about the only time she got on stage and nearly fainted with fear. “I...I can’t sing in front of so many people. I don’t even sing in front of Ma and Pa!” “You do sing around me! All you need is a little practice, Champa.” “Should I?” “Yes! Yes! Yes!” “What if people laugh at me?” “If they do, it just makes them silly and mean. You’re an amazing singer.” The very thought of singing in front of a crowd fills her stomach with butterflies. Champa is excited and terrified at the same time. But she loves singing so much! She decides to give it a try. Champa practises long and hard. She rolls out of bed with a soft hum. She sings while multiplying and dividing. She makes her voice go up and down and down and up while taking a bath. Everyone at home is excited about Champa’s big day. They give her advice. “Take long and deep breaths before you sing.” “Give the audience your widest smile. Just be yourself.” “Drinking enough water and avoiding spicy and acidic food are essential for protecting your throat.” The day before her performance, Champa holds a special rehearsal (排练). It is a roaring success! Finally, it’s Annual Day. Champa is wearing the sweater that her grandfather knit specially for the show. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15 / 16 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题12读后续写十类情感描写素材积累与仿写 (词-句-文) 解析版 目录 01--情感细节描写——紧张和焦虑 02--情感细节描写——喜悦和快乐 03--情感细节描写——惊吓和恐惧 04--情感细节描写——吃惊和震惊 05--情感细节描写——激动和兴奋 06--情感细节描写——感激和感动 07--情感细节描写——焦虑和担忧 08--情感细节描写——生气和愤怒 09--情感细节描写——悲伤和难过 10--情感细节描写——羞愧和后悔 11--情感细节描写—综合训练6篇 01--情感细节描写——紧张和焦虑 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：nervous, uneasy, tense, anxious, nervously 2.名词/动词：tension, anxiety, tremble, shake 3.固定短语： ①感觉手心出汗喉咙发紧 feel one’s palm sweating and throat tight　 ②感觉坐立不安 feel like sitting on pins and needles　 ③心里发慌 with/have butterflies in one's stomach　 ④因焦虑而颤抖 tremble with anxiety 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.她的心剧烈跳动，腿打着颤。(beat) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我焦虑不安，坐立不安。(pin) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.我的心跳加速，头脑一片空白。(blank) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.他的脸色苍白，站在那里说不出话。(tongue-tied) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.期末考试前，我总是紧张不安。(stomach) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1.Her heart beat wildly and her legs trembled.  2.Full of anxiety, I felt like sitting on pins and needles.  3.My heart began to race and my mind went blank. 4.His face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.  5.Before the final exam, I always have butterflies in my stomach. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 When I was standing backstage, 1 . When my name was called I could 2 . My trembling legs brought me on stage, and I could 3 . However, the hall crowded with audience made me even more uneasy. My heart was 4 , as if it were about to pop. I stood there so nervously that I 5 , wondering what to do next. 我站在后台时，紧张感突然涌上心头。听到自己的名字被喊到，我顿时心怦怦直跳。我拖着发颤的双腿走上台，只觉得手心在冒汗，心跳也越来越快。然而，坐满观众的大厅让我更加不安。我的心怦怦狂跳，仿佛下一秒就要跳出来。我紧张地站在那里，感觉喉咙发紧，完全不知道接下来该做什么。 【参考答案】 1. nervousness came flooding over me 2. feel butterflies in my stomach 3. feel my palms sweating and heart racing 4. pounding/thumping hard 5. felt my throat tight 02--情感细节描写——喜悦和快乐 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词/名词：joy, joyful, joyfully, pleased, pleasant, pleasure, glad, gladly, enjoy, enjoyable, happy, happiness, happily, delight, delighted, cheerful, cheerfully, overjoyed, merry, merrily 2.动词/介词短语：to one's delight/joy/happiness/pleasure, be seized by joy, be overcome with happiness, be wild with joy 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。(twinkle) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。(light) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 一阵激动声穿过他们。(ripple) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。(shine) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他炫耀着自己的新自行车，咧着嘴笑个不停。(grin) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 2. Her smile lit up the whole room. 3. A ripple of excitement ran through them. 4. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 5. He grinned from ear to ear as he showed off his new bike. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 (2020新课标卷) Learning the children's idea, Mrs Meredith was 1 that she smiled brightly. Then, children got down to preparing popcorn joyfully. With a basket of popcorn, they left for Bernard's house 2______________to share with Bernard the good plan. Hearing what they said, Bernard was so delighted that he almost jumped up, 3 . At the sight of the basket of popcorn, his parents 4____________________________too．Later, 5 , the popcorn was so tasty that it was soon sold out. 得知孩子们的想法后，梅雷迪思太太欣喜若狂，笑容灿烂。随后，孩子们兴高采烈地开始准备爆米花。他们提着一篮爆米花，开开心心地动身去伯纳德家，想和他分享这个好计划。听完他们的话，伯纳德高兴得差点跳起来，眼里满是泪水。看到那篮爆米花，他的父母也满心欢喜。后来，让他格外高兴的是，这爆米花味道极佳，很快就卖光了。 【参考答案】 1. so overjoyed/delighted/pleased 2. cheerfully/happily/joyfully 3. with tears filling his eyes 4. were seized with happiness 5. much to his delight 03--情感细节描写——惊吓和恐惧 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词：afraid, alarmed, scared, scary, frightened, frightening, fearful, panicky, terrified, terrifying 2.名词/动词：fear, scare, fright, frighten, terror 3.短语： ①吓得发抖 shake/tremble with fear/terror　 ②把……吓死 scare/frighten...to death　 ③吓得魂不附体 be scared out of one's wits　 ④吓呆/吓傻 freeze/be frozen with fear　 ⑤吓得呆若木鸡 stand rooted to the spot with fear　 ⑥惊慌失措 be seized with panic　 ⑦吓得要死 be dead with fright 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.她吓得双手颤抖。(shake) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我害怕极了。(overwhelm) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.她吓得浑身发抖。(flood) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。(tremble) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.我的腿在颤抖，心在砰砰跳。(pound) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1.Her hands were shaking with fear. 2.I was seized by a sense of horror. 3.Fear flooded over her, making her shake all over. 4.I trembled all over and my palms were sweating. 5.My legs were shaking and my heart was pounding rapidly. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 (2021浙江1月卷)You could hardly imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear. 1_____________________ held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. 2 , I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating. Beside me was my wife, who was rooted to the ground, 3 . At the sight of the polar bear's bloody mouth, she 4 . Waves of fear swept over us．5 . 你根本难以想象，当北极熊靠近时我们有多害怕。一阵恐惧彻底攫住了我，我整个人寸步难移。我怕到了极点，只觉得双腿在发抖，手心全是汗。我身边的妻子则像被钉在地上，吓得一动不动。一看到北极熊那张沾满鲜血的嘴，她更是吓得几乎晕厥过去。一波又一波的恐惧不断向我们袭来。我们喉咙发紧，膝盖也阵阵发软。 【参考答案】 1. A burst of horror 2. Extremely frightened 3. frozen with fear 4. was nearly dead with fright 5. Our throats tightened and our knees felt weak 04--情感细节描写——吃惊和震惊 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：astonished, surprised, shocked, astonishing, surprising, shocking, surprisingly, amazingly 2.名词/动词：shock, astonishment, surprise, amazement, amaze, astonish 3.短语： ①令某人震惊的是 to one's shock/astonishment/surprise/amazement　 ②震惊地/惊异地 in astonishment/surprise/shock/amazement　 ③难以置信地 in disbelief　 ④让某人很震惊 come as a shock to sb……　 ⑤吃惊地倒吸一口冷气gasp in astonishment 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.惊愕的表情在她的脸上蔓延开来。(spread) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.当我看到这么多观众时，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。(astonishment) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大眼睛。(wide) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.听到这个意外的消息，Mary呆住了，动弹不得。(root) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.我们靠近，发现车主是一个六岁男孩，都惊呆了。(freeze) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1. A look of surprise spread over her face. 2. My jaw dropped in astonishment when I saw the size of the audience. 3. The moment I opened the box, my eyes grew wide in great surprise. 4. Hearing the unexpected news, Mary was numb with shock, as if rooted to the ground. 5. Frozen with shock, we approached and found the driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.  三、情感描写类语篇运用 1 , a tornado occurred in a small town nearby. At the bad news, Mary 2 . Then, Mary shared the news with her children, and asked if they would like to share what they had with the less fortunate people. She was astonished that all the children were willing to donate something. When Anne placed her favorite toy in the box, 3 her brother's face．He 4 . Without a word, he went back to his room and ran back with his favorite toy to the living-room. 5 , Mary realized that he had also recognised what her action meant. 令人震惊的是，附近的一个小镇遭遇了龙卷风。听到这个坏消息，玛丽震惊得僵在原地，像被钉在地上一样。随后，玛丽把这个消息告诉了孩子们，并问他们是否愿意把自己的东西分享给那些不幸的人。让她惊讶的是，所有孩子都愿意捐出一些物品。当安妮把自己最喜欢的玩具放进箱子时，弟弟脸上掠过一丝惊讶。他睁大眼睛盯着安妮，没说一句话，转身跑回自己的房间，又抱着自己最喜欢的玩具跑回了客厅。玛丽感到惊讶，她意识到弟弟也明白了姐姐这个举动的意义。 【参考答案】 1. To people's shock 2. froze with shock, as if rooted to the ground 3. a spark of surprise flashed across 4. stared at her with wide eyes 5. Astonished 05--情感细节描写——激动和兴奋 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词/名词：excited, thrilled, exciting, thrilling, excitedly, excitement, thrill 2.高级短语词块： ①令某人激动的是to one's excitement/thrill　 ②激动得满脸通红flush with excitement　 ③抑制内心的激动contain one's excitement　 ④激动地with/in excitement 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。(light up) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.这对双胞胎互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。(shed) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.当她接过献花时，激动的泪水充满了她的眼睛。(well up) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,他感到一阵兴奋。(surge) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自已。(flood) 【参考答案】 1. His face was lit up with excitement. 2.The twins hugged each other and shed tears of excitement and joy. 3. Tears of excitement welled up in her eyes as she accepted the flowers. 4. The teacher's encouragement warmed his heart and he felt a surge of excitement. 5. When the host announced that she won the prize, a wild excitement flooded over her. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 On the journey to the lake, 1 . Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, 2 . The moment we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent．Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came 3 ．Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom 4 ．Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped Father cook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we 5 ． 在去湖边的路上，一股兴奋感涌上妈妈心头。妈妈坚持要我们去下一个村子露营，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。我们一到露营地，妈妈就迫不及待地冲了出去，兴奋地催促我们搭帐篷。接着，妈妈朝湖边走去，随后传来一声兴奋的尖叫。欣赏着美丽的景色，妈妈几乎抑制不住自己的兴奋。当然，因为这是我们第一次帮爸爸在户外做饭，我和弟弟也感到特别兴奋。呼吸着新鲜空气，闻着美食的香味，我们兴奋得蹦蹦跳跳。 【参考答案】 1. a wave of excitement swept over Mom 2. her eyes glittering /twinkling with excitement 3. an excited scream/ a scream of excitement 4. could hardly contain her excitement 5. jumped up and down with excitement 06--情感细节描写——感激和感动 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.名词/动词：gratitude, appreciation, thank, move, touch, appreciate 2.形容词/副词：thankful, grateful, moved, touched, thankfully, gratefully 3.固定短语： ①流下感激的泪水 shed tears of gratitude　 ②感动得落泪 be moved to tears ③对……深怀感激 have a deep gratitude towards　 ④心怀感激地 with gratitude/appreciation ⑤非常感激某人 owe sb a lot/a great deal　 ⑥被……深深感动 be deeply moved/touched by... 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。(fill) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我们一句话也说不出来，泪水模糊了双眼。(blur) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.喜悦的泪水涌了出来，兄弟姐妹紧紧拥抱在一起时。(well) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.他泪流满面，跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前，对她说了声谢谢。(stream) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.当她听到消息的那一刻，一股暖流涌过心头，消融了她的所有恐惧。(wave) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude. 2. We failed to utter a single word, tears blurring our eyes. 。 3. Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.  4. With tears streaming down her face, he ran to mum’s warm hug, and said thanks to her. 5. The moment she heard the news, a wave of warmth moved through her, melting away all his fears. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passer­by pushed him to safety. 1 , he thanked the passer­by 2 , “Thank you so much!” But the passer­by just smiled warmly. 3 on the cold day, and he began to believe there was kindness in every corner. It was very touching to see how much strangers could care for each other. 4 , the crowd clapped their hands loudly. Later, knowing what had happened, Peter's mother 5 . 彼得差点撞上一辆路过的汽车，这时一位路人把他推到了安全的地方。感激的泪水在他眼眶里打转，他喉咙哽咽着向路人道谢：“太谢谢您了！” 但路人只是温暖地笑了笑。寒冷的天气里，一股暖意涌上彼得的心头，他开始相信每个角落都有善意存在。看到陌生人之间能如此彼此关怀，场面十分感人。众人深受触动，纷纷大声鼓起掌来。后来，彼得的妈妈得知了事情的经过，流下了喜悦又感激的泪水。 【参考答案】 1. With grateful tears welling up in his eyes 2. with a lump in his throat 3. A feeling of warmth swept over Peter 4. Moved deeply 5. shed tears of joy and gratitude 07--情感细节描写——焦虑和担忧 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：anxious, worried, worrying, helpless, hopeless, concerned, anxiously 2.名词：anxiety, worry, helplessness, hopelessness, concern 3.固定短语： ①with anxiety 焦虑地　 ②be concerned about 担忧　 ③be worried about 担心　 ④full of anxiety 焦虑不安　 ⑤feelings of anxiety and concern 焦虑和担忧的感觉 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。(pace) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.他慢慢感到一丝焦虑。(anxiety) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.陌生的房间使她感到紧张不安。(uneasy) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.被一种强烈的焦虑感抓住，我开始感到恐慌。(seize) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.父亲皱起眉头，困惑而焦虑地望着我。(worried) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1.He was pacing nervously up and down the room. 2.A slight feeling of anxiety slowly crept up on him. 3.The unfamiliar room made her feel nervous and uneasy. 4.Seized by a strong sense of anxiety, I began to panic. 5.My father wrinkled his forehead and gazed at me, confused and worried. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 Having strayed from the hiking trail, they were stuck in the mountain—with nothing to do but wait anxiously for rescue, 1 . As evening wore on and the sun set behind peaks, 2 , fears of a night in the wild flooding their minds. Worse still, thick fog crept into the forest, soon swallowing everything in pitch darkness and 3 . Tony stood there helpless, 4 . Mary, meanwhile, was close to tears, her body 5 . 他们偏离徒步路线后，便困在了山里 —— 除了焦急地等待救援，别无他法，焦虑正一点点涌上心头。随着夜幕渐深，太阳落到山峰后方，他们愈发担忧，在野外过夜的恐惧充斥着脑海。更糟糕的是，浓雾渐渐渗入森林，很快便将一切吞噬在漆黑之中，让他们更觉无助。托尼无助地站在那里，凝视着雾气。与此同时，玛丽几乎要哭出来，身体因焦虑与恐惧微微颤抖。 【参考答案】 1. anxiety sweeping over their hearts 2. they grew increasingly worried 3. leaving them more helpless 4. feeling helpless and gazing into the fog 5. trembling slightly with both anxiety and fear 08--情感细节描写——生气和愤怒 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：angry, annoyed, annoying, angrily 2.名词/动词：anger, annoyance, rage 3.短语： ①气得发抖 tremble with anger　 ②感到一股怒火 a burst of anger　 ③气红了脸 flush with anger　 ④生某人的气 get mad/cross at sb　 ⑤令某人生气的是to one's annoyance　 ⑥内心愤怒地 in anger 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他怒容满面。(cloud) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.他气得浑身发抖。(tremble) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。(utter) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。(flush) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.他双手抓着那个包，一股怒火在心中燃烧。(burn) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1.His face was clouded with anger. 2.He trembled with anger from head to foot. 3.Filled with fury, Jim was unable to utter a single word. 4.A flush of anger spread across Mr. Stone's cheeks. 5.He grasped the bag in both hands, a fire of rage burning in his heart. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 Tom's recent behavior would always make Mr. Smith 1 ．Finding his homework was unfinished again, Mr. Smith 2 , with 3 . Mr. Smith, whose patience had worn thin, called his father to complain angrily．Learning his son had been so badly­behaved, Tom's father felt so angry that he 4 , “You'd better explain what's going on!”However, Tom hung his head and said nothing. His father's color came up, and 5 ．Eventually, unable to contain his anger, his father 6 . 汤姆最近的表现总让史密斯先生怒火中烧。看到他的作业又没完成时，史密斯先生怒喝一声，眼里满是不耐烦。此时耐心早已耗尽的史密斯先生，怒气冲冲地给汤姆的父亲打了电话告状。得知儿子表现这么差，汤姆的父亲气得重重地捶了一下桌子：“你最好解释清楚到底怎么回事！” 可汤姆只是耷拉着脑袋，一言不发。父亲的脸涨了起来，浓重的怒火像乌云一样笼罩在他脸上。最终，父亲再也按捺不住怒火，摔门而出，身后的门被重重甩上。 【参考答案】 1. explode with anger 2. let out a cry of anger 3. his eyes shining with annoyance 4. slammed his fist on the table 5. a heavy rage came over his face like a dark cloud 6. stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him 09--情感细节描写——悲伤和难过 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.形容词/副词：sorrowful, sad, depressed, frustrated, lonely, upset, depressing, sadly 2.名词：sorrow, loneliness, sadness, depression 3.短语： ①一阵孤独/悲伤 a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness　 ②难过得麻木 be numb with sorrow/sadness ③心情沉重 with a sinking heart  ④悲伤不已 be overcome with sorrow ⑤流泪 be reduced to tears  ⑥悲伤如潮涌 sadness comes in waves 　 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.一阵悲伤袭身而来。(grief) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.查理悲痛欲绝。(overcome) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。(well) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。(shake) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。(sob) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1.A flash of grief swept upon me. 2.Charles was overcome with grief. 3.A wave of sadness welled up inside her.  4.He shook his head sadly, tears rolling down his cheeks. 5.She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help sobbing bitterly. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 I was selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year. But I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. In the end I walked off the stage, my eyes filled with tears. Finally, results were announced after the contest. I did not win any prizes. I 1 . I 2 and moved out of the lecture hall. I hung my head in sadness, 3 . On entering the classroom, 4 and tears streamed down my cheeks. The next following days, I felt like 5 , not wanting to do anything. 今年，我被选中代表学校参加即将到来的比赛。可我太过骄傲，竟忽视了为比赛练习的重要性。比赛当天，我开始对自己失去信心，还犯了怯场。最后，我退出了舞台，眼里满是泪水。比赛结束后，结果公布了。我没有获得任何奖项。我咬着下唇，心里满是难过。我拖着沉重的双腿，心情沉重地走出报告厅，难过地低着头，浓重的悲伤笼罩着双眼。一走进教室，失望与悲伤就阵阵袭来，眼泪顺着脸颊流下。在那之后的几天里，我感觉自己像沉浸在悲伤的海洋里，什么都不想做。 【参考答案】 1. bit my bottom lip with sadness filling her heart 2. dragged my heavy legs with a sinking heart 3. great sorrow clouding my eyes 4. disappointment and sadness came in waves 5. I was floating in an ocean of sadness 10--情感细节描写——羞愧和后悔 一、情感描写类经典词汇 1.动词类：shame使感到羞耻embarrass使尴尬；使难堪regret易混后悔 2.名词类：embarrassment使人难堪的事awkwardness尴尬笨拙shame羞愧羞耻心guilt内疚regret后悔 3.形容词类：embarrassed感到尴尬的awkward令人尴尬的ashamed感到羞愧的shame害羞的 4.短语类： ①掩饰某人的尴尬 hide one’s embarrassment　 ②因尴尬而满脸通红 one’s face flushed with shame ③感到脸阵阵发烫 feel blood rushing to one’s face ④感觉如坐针毡 feel like sitting on pins and needles ⑤如热锅上的蚂蚁 act as a rat on the hot brick ⑥后悔做某事 be ashamed of... ⑦满心愧疚 be consumed with guilt　 ⑧令某人深感遗憾的是much to one’s regret　 二、情感描写类句式精炼 1.他脸上掠过一阵羞赧的神情。(cross) ____________________________________________________________________________ 2.我满怀内疚，冲出去向汤姆道歉。(guilt) ____________________________________________________________________________ 3.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。(brun) ____________________________________________________________________________ 4.我被一阵内疚所压倒，言语无法表达我的遗憾。(overcome) ____________________________________________________________________________ 5.我觉得鼻子一酸，不争气地的眼泪掉了下来。(lump) ____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1.An expression of shame crossed his face. 2.Filled with guilt, I rushed out to apologize to Tom. 3.She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning. 4.I was overcome by a wave of guilt and words failed to express my regret. 5.A lump came into my throat, and tears rolled down my cheeks without struggle. 三、情感描写类语篇运用 By now we were standing in the long holiday line to pay the bill and I figured it was a good chance. I threw myself on the ground, screaming, “I want that telephone.” over and over again. “Becky, you’d better get up at once”, my mother said with a trembling voice, 1 . Turning a deaf ear to her, I was still in full tantrum. Ashamed, my mother stood there, 2 . She suddenly lay down beside me on the floor, likewise kicking and screaming out for a string of such items as she was eager to possess. Seeing that, I became increasingly embarrassed and could 3 , with 4 . 5 and I felt as if the whole world was watching us. “Mama, stop. Mama, get up.” I tearfully pleaded. She gave me a look and rose up, brushing the dust from her clothes. 到这时，我们正排在节假日的长队里等着结账，我觉得这是个好机会。我往地上一躺，大喊着 “我就要那个电话（玩具）”，一遍又一遍。“贝基，你赶紧起来！” 妈妈声音发颤，满脸通红，难掩尴尬。我根本没理她，还在撒泼。妈妈很羞愧地站在那儿，感觉脸都发烫了。她突然也在我旁边躺下，学着我的样子又踢又喊，还嚷嚷着要一堆她自己 “超想要” 的东西。我一看这架势，尴尬得不行，心怦怦狂跳，脸也烧得厉害。周围的空气好像都凝固了，我感觉全世界的人都在盯着我们看。“妈妈，别闹了！妈妈，起来啊！” 我带着哭腔哀求道。她看了我一眼，然后站起来，拍了拍衣服上的灰。 【参考答案】 1. embarrassment written in her red face 2. feeling the blood rushing to her face 3. feel my heart thumping wildly 4. my face burning badly 5. All the air seemed to disappear 11--情感细节描写—综合训练6篇 1．（25-26高三上·湖南·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When entering seventh grade, I was excited about many new things, but one thing really bothered me — I started getting acne (青春痘). Initially, it was just a little, but then, it seemed like overnight, my face was covered with it. I tried to hide it with my hair, but it just wouldn’t work. I was consumed with worry that my peers would make fun of me. I couldn’t concentrate in class, as my mind was constantly preoccupied with my appearance, causing my grades to slip sharply. I started to feel inferior to my classmates and even avoid interaction with them. I tried to get rid of the acne. I washed my face multiple times a day, using all sorts of acne creams I found. I also avoided snacks that might cause it. But all ended up in vain. One day, our school announced a sports day and the teacher asked us to form our own teams. As a sports enthusiast, I had been eagerly expecting it, but I was scared that no one would join me because of how I looked. Standing in front of the mirror, I kept imagining how my classmates would react when I asked them to team up with me. The fear of rejection held me back from approaching them. But then, Kim came to me, “Do you want to join us for the relay race (接力赛)? I’ve seen you run before and you’ve got the speed. If you join us, we’ll have a good chance to win.” In disbelief, I managed to utter “Yes”, still feeling self-conscious but also incredibly grateful. Along with three other classmates, I signed up for the relay race. We trained and discussed strategies together, with no one paying any attention to my acne. Thanks to my speed advantage, I was even assigned to run the final leg — the most critical role in the race. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then came the long-awaited sports day. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The victory was a turning point in my junior life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Then came the long-awaited sports day. My palms were sweaty as I stood at the final position of the track. When the third runner approached, I grabbed the baton firmly and sprinted like the wind. Cheers erupted as I overtook two opponents. Crossing the finish line first, I saw my teammates rushing towards me with joyful screams. To my surprise, classmates patted my shoulder excitedly, their eyes shining with admiration instead of judgment. Kim hugged me, “You’re our superhero!” No one mentioned my acne — they only remembered my flying figure on the track. The victory was a turning point in my junior life. Gradually I realized people valued my abilities more than my appearance. I started raising my hand in class again and joined the school basketball team. Though acne still occasionally troubled me, I stopped hiding behind my hair. When a new student once asked about my skin, Kim immediately defended, “That’s just his warrior paint from saving our relay race!” We all laughed, and I finally understood true friendship sees beyond surfaces. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者进入七年级后因长青春痘而自卑，担心同学嘲笑，成绩下滑，在运动会接力赛报名时，Kim邀请作者加入，作者最终和队友们一起训练并在比赛中获胜的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“终于到了期待已久的运动会了”可知，第一段可描写作者在运动会接力赛上的表现，以及获胜后同学们的反应，突出大家对作者能力的认可，而非关注其青春痘。 ②由第二段首句内容“这次胜利是我初中生活的一个转折点”可知，第二段可描写这次胜利对作者的影响，作者开始积极融入集体，不再因青春痘而自卑，明白了真正的友谊是超越外表的。 2.续写线索：运动会开始——努力比赛——同学欣赏——作者感悟——明白友谊真谛 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①抓住：grab/seize ②拥抱：hug/embrace ③举手：raise one’s hand/put up one’s hand 情绪类 ①激动地：excitedly/with excitement ②欣赏：admiration/appreciation 【点睛】【高分句型2】My palms were sweaty as I stood at the final position of the track.(运用了as引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Gradually I realized people valued my abilities more than my appearance. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) 2．（25-26高三上·河南·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Hank sat glued to the TV as meteorologists (气象学家) tracked Hurricane Helene. The storm, packing 140 mph winds, was set to hit Florida before moving towards the Carolinas. For Hank, 65, the target hit closer to home: Boiling Springs, South Carolina, where he and his second wife, Debbie, had just moved to care for her 84-year-old mother. But Hank had more urgent matters than the storm. On Saturday, his oldest daughter, Judith, 33, would marry in Johnson City, Tennessee. Hank, who'd once joked about his poor sense of time, had been ordered to arrive on time. So he and Debbie planned a two-hour drive to Johnson City on Friday, staying overnight in their old home, where he could changed into the suit he had prepared for the wedding, then walking Judith down the aisle (过道) in the church at 10 a. m. sharp. By Friday morning, Helene's winds rocked their new house. By 6 p. m. , power and cell service were still out. Debbie, though, refused to leave her mother. "I'll stay, ” she said sadly. "I can't miss this, ” Hank replied, hugging her goodbye. He packed his SUV and headed for Johnson City. The highway quickly turned chaotic. Crews cleared fallen trees as cars inched along. By 10: 30 p. m. , Hank had driven less than 40 miles. At a roadblock, state policemen delivered bad news: "Bridges washed out. Nobody's getting through. ” Hank leaned in. "My daughter's getting married tomorrow. I'm walking her down the aisle. ” The policeman shook his head. "Back roads are flooded too. Wait until morning. ” But Hank couldn't wait. He plotted a detour (绕路) . After a seven-hour drive, his SUV had an empty gas tank. It was 2: 15 a. m. Hank locked his SUV, put a backpack over his shoulder. "Not battle-ready,” he thought, "but it'll do.” He grabbed a tree branch for protection and set off with his cell phone flashlight. The dark hid dangers. A 7-foot wall of mud and trees blocked his path. He crawled through a narrow gap, losing a shoe in the mud. By 4 a. m. , Hank reached the Jackson Bridge over the Nolichucky River. He rushed across, only to be stopped by flashing lights. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答； "Are you the one trying to get to your daughter's wedding? ” a policeman asked, smiling. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Shining in white, Judith stood before him. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: “Are you the one trying to get to your daughter’s wedding? ” A policeman asked, smiling. “We’re all talking about you. Want a ride?” Tears of gratitude filled Hank’s weary eyes. The policeman drove him to his old Johnson City home. The moment they arrived, it was 6 a. m. After showing appreciation to the policeman again and again, Hank hurried into his old house. Inside, everything was as he’d left it: a comfortable bed, clean clothes and a wedding suit he’d prepared. He hadn’t slept in 24 hours, but he refused to collapse. He showered in ice-cold water, shaved, and pulled on the suit. He got to the church and saw Judith. Shining in white, Judith stood before him. Hank broke down and so did his daughter. “Dad, I thought you wouldn’t make it,” she shed tears of surprise and excitement, wrapping him in a hug. The music swelled. Hank took Judith’s arm, smiling through tears. Sixteen hours after leaving Boiling Springs—through mud, storms, and strong will—he did what he’d promised. As they walked, Judith leaned in and asked, “What’s in your ear, Dad? ” Hank touched it: a smudge of mud. A keepsake from the journey. He grinned at her, “Nothing would ever keep me from you, sweetie. ” 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了65岁的汉克在飓风来袭时，不顾恶劣天气和交通中断，执意前往田纳西州约翰逊市参加大女儿朱迪思婚礼的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“您是那个要去参加女儿婚礼的人吗？”一位警察微笑着问道。可知，第一段可描写警察与汉克之间的交流以及警察对汉克提供的帮助。 ②由第二段首句内容“朱迪思身着白色衣裙，站在他面前。”可知，第二段可描写父女见面后的对话以及心理活动。 2.续写线索：飓风来袭——女儿婚礼——执意前往——警察帮助——准时到达——感慨万千 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①讨论：talk about/discuss ②到达：arrive/get to/reach ③匆忙进入：hurry into/rush into 情绪类 ①舒适的：comfortable/easeful/cozy ②惊讶：surprise/astonishment 【点睛】【高分句型1】The moment they arrived, it was 6 a.m.(运用了the moment引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Hank took Judith’s arm, smiling through tears.(运用了现在分词作状语) 3．（25-26高三上·广东·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 Two weeks after the argument, on a Friday, I tried to focus only on exams—but couldn’t stop thinking how long it had been since I’d seen Nick. Not just two days, but two whole weeks. That evening, I slumped at the breakfast bar where my sister Victoria sat. “You look two hundred percent happier than the last two weeks combined,” she remarked.“I need to talk to Nick. Soon,” I said, my voice firm.She rolled her eyes dramatically. “Finally! Revelation of the century!” Then she held up a disposable camera. “Found this between the cushions (沙发靠垫). Yours?” “Nick’s,” I mumbled, taking it. The counter showed zero shots left. He must’ve taken them all the day before the party — the last good day we had. I knew what I had to do. After my Saturday shift, I hurried to Boots to develop the photos. On the bus home, I finally looked through them.The first was a selfie of us, sunlight flaring across Nick’s chest, both of us smiling. My chest ached. That Thursday felt like forever ago.And A photo of us at the tennis court surfaced, stirring a memory. We had argued that day over going to watch a match. I remember shouting at him, met only with his silence. But as I kept flipping, I realized — most photos were just of me. Me laughing on his bed, hugging his dog Henry, trying to give him a piggyback, walking ahead in the fields behind his house…So many moments, all tinted with soft blues and oranges, slightly blurry, like memories already fading. Nick had no artistic streak, nor the least interest in photography — he’d only touched a camera to snap Henry mid-snore. These photos weren’t about skill or style; they were about preservation: preserving our unremarkable, wonderful days — movie nights bickering over plots, dawn walks with Henry’s paws in dew, mornings tangled in sheets too warm to bear but too cozy to leave. It hit me then, sharp as a gust: he wasn’t shooting on a whim. He was clinging to us, desperate to freeze this messy, mundane our life — before he left for Leeds, before this town felt empty without him. Tears pricked my eyes. I loved this — loved us, loved the beautiful monotony of our days — and I knew I couldn’t let it slip. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 I pulled out my phone, snapped a picture of one photo — us in the field, happy — and sent it to Nick. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I look up and watch as Nick walks through the tennis-court gate. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I pulled out my phone, snapped a picture of one photo — us in the field, happy — and sent it to Nick. My hand brushed the disposable camera in my bag: Nick’s, the one I found between couch cushions, its last shots taken the day we argued at the tennis court. When my phone buzzed, I fumbled it. “I thought I’d lost this,” his text read. The voice note made my throat tight: his voice shook, with a rustle like he was twisting the camera’s frayed strap — the one I’d joked was “too mushy.” “Tennis court?” I typed. Grabbing the album, I rushed off, and a photo slipped out: me hugging Henry. I tucked it back, thumb brushing the edge — just like Nick used to, quiet, like he knew these moments mattered. I look up and watch as Nick walks through the tennis-court gate. He wore the blue jacket I’d bought him for his birthday, and in his hand was the disposable camera — now hung with a little key chain of Henry. “I got the photos developed too,” he said, pulling out a stack from his pocket. My eyes watered as I saw the same shots I’d kept, plus one of us laughing at the tennis court. “I’m sorry I shut down that day,” he said. I hugged him, Henry trotting beside us, tail wagging. The sun dipped low, gilding our shoulders — just like the day we took that first photo, our friendship whole again. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与Nick争吵后，许久未见Nick，心中十分想念。作者偶然拿到Nick的相机，发现里面全是自己的照片，意识到Nick用拍照的方式珍藏他们共同度过的平凡却美好的日子，害怕分别后失去这些回忆。作者深受触动，明白自己不能让这份感情和美好溜走。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“我掏出手机，给其中一张照片拍了照——照片里是我们在田野上，笑得很开心——然后发给了Nick。”可知，第一段可描写Nick收到照片后的反应以及作者和Nick的短信互动过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“我抬头望去，正好看见Nick走过网球场的大门。”可知，第二段可描写Nick和作者和好的过程以及他们对友谊的感悟。 2.续写线索：Nick回复短信——相约在网球场见面——Nick拿出洗的照片——作者眼睛湿润——Nick道歉——二人和好——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①拥抱：hug/embrace ②重要：matter/count ③发现：find/discover 情绪类 ①眼睛湿润：My eyes watered/Tears came to my eyes/Tears welled up in my eyes ②抱歉的：sorry/regretful 【点睛】【高分句型1】He wore the blue jacket I’d bought him for his birthday, and in his hand was the disposable camera — now hung with a little key chain of Henry.（运用了省略了that的定语从句和完全倒装句） 【高分句型2】I hugged him, Henry trotting beside us, tail wagging.（运用了独立主格结构） 4．（2025·广东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Neighbors Are Like Families I was always afraid of storms, ever since a childhood incident that I never forgot. That day, I felt that same fear again. It was a dark and stormy afternoon. The wind was blowing hard and the rain was falling heavily. The trees were shaking wildly. Suddenly, there was a loud CRACK A strong gust of wind had blown over the big tree in my yard. It fell right onto the roof of my house with a huge BANG The whole house shook. Just then, something fell and hit my head. I almost fell down, feeling a slight pain on my forehead. Outside, the storm was still loud and everything felt like it was spinning (旋转). I was frozen in place, feeling helpless and so scared. Later, the wind stopped and the rain slowed. It was quiet and dark inside my house. I was standing in despair in my damaged living room. Seeing the broken glass and wood on the floor, I was at a loss, not knowing what to do next. Just at that moment, a beam of light shone directly into my eyes — it was my neighbor Mr. Johnson. He was a quiet man. We usually just nodded hello and never really talked. He was holding a flashlight and looked very worried. Mr. Johnson held my arm firmly. “It’s okay. I know how it feels,” he said. He took me to his garage which was safe, dry, and clean inside. He found his first-aid kit and gently cleaned the cut on my head. “Storms can be scary,” he said in a soft voice. “Don’t worry. Let’s check your house together”. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Then, he handed me a flashlight and we walked back to my damaged home together. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: Hours later, as the last box was settled down, I handed Mr. Johnson a steaming cup of tea. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Then, he handed me a flashlight and we walked back to my damaged home together. Under the beam of light, the scene was even more heartbreaking: the living room was in a total mess. Rainwater was dripping from the ceiling onto my sofa and my books were scattered near the broken window... Seeing my home like this, my eyes welled up with tears. Mr. Johnson didn’t say anything but patted me on the back. His eyes fell on the boxes of books, and he suggested, “Let’s start with what we can save.” His voice was gentle but calm. With that, we got to work. Together, we moved the undamaged items to the safety of his garage. Trip after trip, through the damp and messy house, his quiet determination gave me hope and strength. Hours later, as the last box was settled down, I handed Mr. Johnson a steaming cup of tea. After having a taste, he softly said, “If you still need any help tomorrow, just knock on my door.” The warmth of the cup as well as the kindness I received seemed to melt away the last of my fear. Looking at this kind man who was wiping sweat from his brow, I sincerely said, “Thank you so much for everything. I couldn’t have done this without you.” He offered a kind smile and replied that neighbors were just like families. At that very moment, the memory of past storms no longer terrified me. It was replaced by a new and strong feeling: a sense of human connection and profound gratitude. 【导语】本文以“暴风雨中邻居约翰逊先生对“我”的帮助”为线索展开，讲述了暴风雨吹倒“我”家院子里的大树，砸坏房屋，“我”陷入绝望时，邻居约翰逊先生伸出援手，帮“我”清理、转移物品，让“我”感受到邻里温情的故事。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“然后，他递给我一个手电筒，我们一起走回我那受损的屋子里”可知，第一段可描写“我”和约翰逊先生回到受损的家，看到惨状“我”难过，约翰逊先生提议先抢救能救的物品，两人一起转移未受损物品的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“几个小时后，当最后一个盒子放好后，我递给约翰逊先生一杯热气腾腾的茶”可知，第二段可描写“我”给约翰逊先生递茶，对他表达感谢，约翰逊先生表示邻里如家人，“我”内心的恐惧被温暖和感激取代。 2. 续写线索： 回到受损房屋——看到惨状难过——提议抢救物品——一起转移物品——递茶感谢——感受邻里温情 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ① 流下(眼泪)：well up/ stream down ② 开始(做某事)：get to work/ set out to work ③ 移动(物品等)：move/ transfer ④ 提供(帮助)：offer help/ provide assistance/ lend a (helping) hand 情绪类 ① 害怕：terrify/ scared frighten ② 感激：gratitude/ appreciation 【点睛】【高分句型1】Seeing my home like this, my eyes welled up with tears. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】He offered a kind smile and replied that neighbors were just like families. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 5．（25-26高三上·浙江杭州·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My brother and I are only a year apart in age. When we were little, people would ask if we were twins. We lived in the mountains and only had each other for a long time, so we weren't just brother and sister, we were best friends. Everything changed after our parents divorced. He went to live with my father, I with my mother. Sometimes he visited us and sometimes I visited them, but we grew more distant each time. By the time I was thirteen, we'd stopped hanging out altogether. I think the only time we ever spoke was at Christmas, and it was all polite but painfully awkward, like he was a complete stranger instead of my little brother. Several years later, after being accepted to a major university three thousand miles away, I made a bold plan: to drive across the country on my own. The idea of traveling alone thrilled me, filling me with excitement and a hint of nervousness, though I knew that the road could be lonely and unpredictable — endless stretches without seeing a single person, and sometimes even wild animals crossing out of nowhere. My parents, however, thought it would be safer if my brother came along as my travel companion on the long drive to college. Needless to say, we were both furious (愤怒的) about the idea. The last thing either of us wanted was to spend a week in a car together — he, with a sister he barely knew, and I, with a “babysitter” I never asked for. But it was settled. Two weeks later, we set off. For the first six hundred miles, neither of us spoke much unless absolutely necessary.The silence was thick with tension, and it didn't take long before we argued over what music to play, how fast to drive, and when to take breaks, each of us stubbornly sticking to our own way, rolling our eyes and sighing in frustration. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something unexpected happened.                  ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my hand.                                          ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something unexpected happened. We were driving through a remote stretch of countryside when a deer darted out from the woods. I slammed on the brakes instinctively, and the car skidded sharply on the wet road before coming to a halt. My heart raced as I stared at the deer, which stood frozen for a second before vanishing into the trees. When I finally calmed down, I realized the car wouldn’t start — the engine just sputtered and died. We were in the middle of nowhere, with no cell phone signal. I sighed, feeling helpless, but to my surprise, my brother didn’t snap at me like I expected. Instead, he got out of the car and knelt down to check the engine, saying, “Let’s see what’s wrong.” Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my hand. His palm was warm, and his grip was firm — a gesture I hadn’t felt from him in years. “It’s gonna be okay,” he said softly, his voice free of the usual irritation. We worked together for over an hour: he popped the hood and checked the wires, while I fetched tools from the trunk and held a flashlight for him. When the engine finally roared to life, we both laughed in relief. On the rest of the drive, we talked more — about our favorite childhood memories of playing in the mountains, about the things we’d missed while living apart. By the time we reached my university, the tension was gone. As I got out of the car, he hugged me and said, “Call me if you need anything.” That trip didn’t just get me to college; it brought my brother back to me. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与曾是最好朋友的弟弟因父母离婚关系逐渐疏远、形同陌生人，多年后作者考上远方大学计划独自驾车前往，父母却安排弟弟陪同，两人虽不满仍一同出发，起初旅途充满沉默与争执。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“正当我以为这次旅行会令人难以忍受时，意想不到的事情发生了。”可知，第一段可描写作者和弟弟开车穿过一片偏僻的乡村时遇见鹿紧急停车后，车子无法启动的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“我还在因事故而颤抖，意识到他握着我的手。”可知，第二段可描写作者和弟弟共同修车并且找回往日亲情的过程。 2.续写线索：遇到鹿紧急刹车——车子启动不起来——弟弟安慰作者——聊天找回曾经的温暖——到达大学——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①迅速窜出：dart out/rush out ②盯，凝视：stare at/peer at ③消失：vanish/disappear 情绪类 ①令我惊讶的是：to my surprise/to my amazement ②柔和地：softly/mildly 【点睛】[高分句型1] We were driving through a remote stretch of countryside when a deer darted out from the woods.（when引导的时间状语从句） [高分句型2] My heart raced as I stared at the deer, which stood frozen for a second before vanishing into the trees. （由as引导时间状语从句和关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型3] As I got out of the car, he hugged me and said, “Call me if you need anything.”（as引导的时间状语从句和if引导条件状语从句） 6．（25-26高三上·江苏南通·开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Champa loves singing more than anything else in the whole wide world. She sings in the bathroom. And on the roof. She sings to the hills. And to the moon. She sings through rain. And through heat. When Champa sings, she is filled with the most marvellous feeling in the world. One day, when Champa sings, Basant’s eyes light up. “I have an amazing idea!” he says. Basant is Champa’s best friend and he is always bursting with ideas. “You should sing on Annual Day!” says Basant. “What a terrible idea!” says Champa. “Why not! You love to sing.” Champa hasn’t told Basant about the only time she got on stage and nearly fainted with fear. “I...I can’t sing in front of so many people. I don’t even sing in front of Ma and Pa!” “You do sing around me! All you need is a little practice, Champa.” “Should I?” “Yes! Yes! Yes!” “What if people laugh at me?” “If they do, it just makes them silly and mean. You’re an amazing singer.” The very thought of singing in front of a crowd fills her stomach with butterflies. Champa is excited and terrified at the same time. But she loves singing so much! She decides to give it a try. Champa practises long and hard. She rolls out of bed with a soft hum. She sings while multiplying and dividing. She makes her voice go up and down and down and up while taking a bath. Everyone at home is excited about Champa’s big day. They give her advice. “Take long and deep breaths before you sing.” “Give the audience your widest smile. Just be yourself.” “Drinking enough water and avoiding spicy and acidic food are essential for protecting your throat.” The day before her performance, Champa holds a special rehearsal (排练). It is a roaring success! Finally, it’s Annual Day. Champa is wearing the sweater that her grandfather knit specially for the show. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When it was her turn to sing, she seemed to get tongue-tied. The bright stage lights blinded her for a moment, and the sea of faces in the audience kept her heart pounding. Her palms grew sweaty, and the lyrics she had practiced so hard suddenly slipped her mind. An awkward silence filled the hall as she stood frozen, her throat tight with fear. Whispers rippling through the crowd, Champa felt her cheeks burning with embarrassment. She clenched her fists, willing herself to remember the melody — but only her heartbeat answered. She was at a loss what to do next. That was when she saw Basant, waving wildly at her. His encouraging smile and exaggerated thumbs-up were like a lifeline. Taking a deep breath, Champa closed her eyes and imagined singing alone on the roof. Slowly, the familiar tune returned to her. She started softly, then her voice grew louder, clearer and stronger, filling the auditorium. The audience fell silent, then burst into applause when she finished the last tune. Basant jumped to his feet, cheering the loudest. At that moment, Champa realized that singing wasn’t about perfection — it was about sharing the love for music. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Champa喜爱唱歌却害怕在被人面前唱歌，她最好的朋友Basant鼓励她在周年纪念日那天唱歌，Champa在Basant的鼓励下，最终克服恐惧和怯场开始唱歌。她最终明白，唱歌并不是要做到完美，而是要分享对于音乐的爱的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“轮到她唱歌的时候，她似乎有点不知所措了。”可知，第一段可描写Champa在舞台上的窘迫和紧张，不知所措的样子。 ②由第二段首句内容“就在那时，她看到了Basant，只见他正疯狂地向她挥手。”可知，第二段可描写Champa看到了Basant，克服恐惧和怯场，唱出了动听的歌声及她的感悟。 2.续写线索：登上舞台——十分恐惧——不知所措——看到Basant——调整自己——开始唱歌——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①关闭：close/shut ③意识到：realize/be aware 情绪类 ①恐惧：fear/dread ②不知所措：at a loss/all at sea 【点睛】[高分句型1] An awkward silence filled the hall as she stood frozen, her throat tight with fear.(运用了as引导的状语从句和独立主格结构) [高分句型2] At that moment, Champa realized that singing wasn’t about perfection — it was about sharing the love for music.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 21 / 23 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $