UNIT 6 Section Ⅴ Writing—概要写作-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版）

UNIT 6　At one with nature Section Ⅴ　Writing 　　　 　　——概要写作 内容索引 模仿写作　学范文 1 模仿写作　学范文 返回 　　本单元的写作任务是写一篇概要写作。概要写作是对原文的内容和思想进行浓缩，用精炼的词句概括出文章的要点、次要点等内容，再现原作者的思想、观点。主要包括阅读和写作两个过程。首先，要求考生能够读懂所给阅读材料的内容；其次，要求考生将原文的要点及所理解的内容用自己的语言准确地表达出来。 原文呈现 Fruit and herbal teas 　　British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs (主旨句).Such a habit is so popular that many people plant easy-to-grow herbs in their own tea gardens.There are many flavours of fruit and herbal teas (要点1)，including traditional lemon and ginger，as well as many flavours such as mango，strawberry，apple，pear，blackberry leaf and dandelion.Aside from the variety of flavours，herbal tea also has various health benefits.(要点2) Some can help people relax，and some like ginger tea，are good for the immune system，while others，such as mint tea，are beneficial for digestion. 名师圈点 学语言 　　本文为概要写作。范文分为三部分，三部分中心内容分别为Their popularity，Unusual flavours，Health benefits。范文正是从文章中心内容入手，然后用不同的表达，如so...that...结构，there be句型等；另外作者用不同的连接词或短语将不同段落的内容连接起来，使文章更加顺畅；除此之外，范文还对信息进行了适当地整合与重组。 知结构 范文正是从文章主题入手，然后用不同的连接词或短语将不同段落的内容连接起来，使文章衔接自然；除此之外，范文还对原文信息进行了适当地整合与重组。 情境任务写作 　　阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 　　Growing coffee beans is a huge，making-money business.However，unluckily，full-sun production is replacing the industry and causes a lot of damage.The change in growing coffee from shade-grown production to full-sun production brings certain animals and birds in danger，and even breaks the world’s ecological balance (生态平衡). 　　On a local level，the damage of the forest that is required by full-sun fields affects the area’s birds and animals.The shade of the forest trees gives a home to birds and other species which depend on the trees’ flowers and fruits.Full-sun coffee growers destroy this forest home.As a result，many species are quickly in extinction. 　　On a more global level，the damage to the rainforest for full-sun coffee fields also does harm to human life.Medical research often makes use of the forests’ plant and animal life，and the ruin of such species could keep researchers from finding ways for certain diseases.In addition，new coffee-growing methods are harmful to the water locally，and lastly the world’s groundwater. 　　Both locally and globally，the continued spread of full-sun coffee plantations(种植园)could mean breaking the balance of the rainforest ecology.The loss of shade trees is already causing a little change in the world’s climate，and studies show that the loss of oxygen-giving trees also leads to air pollution and global warming.Besides，the new growing methods are bringing about acidic (酸性) soil conditions. 　　It is clear that the way much coffee is grown affects a lot，from the local environment to the global ecology.But coffee users do have a choice.They can buy shade-grown coffee whenever possible，although at a higher cost.The future health of the planet and mankind is surely worth more than an inexpensive cup of coffee. 仿写程序步骤 第一步：总览全文，确定体裁 　　本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了全阳光咖啡生产虽然有利可图，但对当地和全球都造成了很多不良影响。作者建议消费者买阴凉种植的咖啡，因为地球和人类未来的健康肯定比一杯便宜的咖啡更有价值。 第二步：找出要点，确定主题句 1．主旨句： The change in growing coffee from shade-grown production to full-sun production brings certain animals and birds in danger，and even breaks the world’s ecological balance. 2．要点句： ①As a result，many species are quickly in extinction. ②The damage to the rainforest for full-sun coffee fields also does harm to human life. ③The continued spread of full-sun coffee plantations could mean breaking the balance of the rainforest ecology. ④But coffee users do have a choice. 第三步：改写要点，灵活表达 1．缩写主旨句 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 2．改写要点句 ①(扩写要点句①)Many species are dying out owing to ________________________． ②(整合要点句②和句③) __________________________________ have been affected a great deal. ③(扩写要点句④)Considering the bright future of mankind and the world，people should _____________________． Some growers choose to plant coffee beans in the full-sun instead of in the shade. the loss of the forest home Human life and the rainforest ecology make a wiser choice 第四步：检查修改，整理誊写 　　___________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　 Some growers choose to plant coffee beans in the full-sun instead of in the shade.(主旨句) Because of that，several terrible results have come up.Many species are dying out owing to the loss of the forest home.(要点1)In addition，human life and the rainforest ecology have been affected a great deal.(要点2和3) Considering the bright future of mankind and the world，people should make a wiser choice.(要点4) 概要写作方法 1．总览全文，确定体裁和结构 体裁 结构 记叙文 使用“要素串联法”，明确记叙文的六要素(who，when，where，what，how，why)的内容，如果是夹叙夹议文，还要写出故事给读者带来的启示或寓意 说明文 使用“段意合并法”，找出文章要说明的对象、观点或建议 议论文 使用“主题概括法”，提取议论文的三要素(论点、论据、论证) 2.找出要点，确定主题句 明确各段的主旨大意，略去次要信息和不必要的细节。 3．改写要点，灵活表达 灵活采用同义词或近义词整合每段大意，用不同的句式进行转换，并在必要的地方添加衔接词，使各要点之间能够通顺流畅。 4．检查修改，整理誊写 核对要点是否全面，检查语言运用是否准确，以及行文是否流畅；另外，还要注意词数限制和书写规范。 学以致用 　　阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 　　The largest land animal remaining on the earth，the African elephant is of much importance to African ecosystem.Unlike other animals，the African elephant is to a great extent the builder of its environment.As a giant plant-eater，it significantly shapes the forest-and-savanna (大草原) surroundings in which it lives，therefore deciding the conditions of existence for millions of other animals that live in its habitat. 　　It is the elephant’s great desire for food that makes it both a disturber of the environment and an important builder of its habitat.In its continuous search for the 300 pounds of plants it must have every day，it kills small trees and underbush，as well as pulls branches off big trees.This results in numerous open spaces in not only deep tropical forests but also the woodlands that cover part of the African savannas.In these open spaces are numerous plants in various stages of growth，which attract a variety of other plant-eaters. 　　Take the rainforests for example.In their natural state，the spreading branches overhead shut out sunlight and prevent the growth of plants on the forest floor.By pulling down trees and eating plants，elephants create open spaces，allowing new plants to grow on the forest floor.In such situations，the forest becomes suitable for large-hoofed plant-eaters to move around and for small-sized plant-eaters to obtain their food as well. 　　Scientists are worried now that the African elephant has become an endangered species.If the elephant dies out，scientists say，many other animals will also disappear from vast areas of forest and savanna，greatly changing and worsening the whole ecosystem. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 　　The African elephant is essential for African ecosystem.(要点1) By consuming quantities of plants in its habitat，the elephant produces enough room for abundant new plants，then feeding various animals.(要点2) Thanks to elephants，rainforests are less dense，which is more proper for mutual survival of creatures.(要点3) Once the African elephants go extinct，the entire ecosystem will be threatened.(要点4) 返回 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $