UNIT 5 Section Ⅴ Writing—创建动物档案-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版）

UNIT 5　Into the wild Section Ⅴ　Writing 　　　 　　——创建动物档案 内容索引 模仿写作　学范文 1 模仿写作　学范文 返回 原文呈现 　　In Chinese culture，the red-crowned crane has long been regarded as a symbol of happiness and good luck.It is one of the largest cranes in the world，standing at about 150 cm tall.The feathers of the bird are as white as snow，except for some black ones on its face，neck and wings.Its unique feature，from which it gets its name，is the bright red skin on the top of its head.The red-crowned crane is found in China，Russia，Mongolia，Japan and the Korean Peninsula.In China，it spends the warmer months in the rivers and wetlands in the north-east.When the weather gets cold，it migrates to east-central China.Its food includes fish，snails and water plants.It only breeds where the natural habitate is safe.Thanks to increasing protection measures，the number of red-crowned cranes in China is on the rise. 名师圈点 学语言 本文主要介绍了中国的一种珍稀动物——丹顶鹤。范文介绍了丹顶鹤的外形、栖息地、迁徙行为以及在中国文化中的寓意。时态主要运用了一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；语言上使用as...as结构，把丹顶鹤的羽毛比喻成白雪。 另外，作者运用了高级句式，如使用动词-ing形式短语作定语，“介词＋关系代词”引导定语从句等，给文章增色不少。 知结构 其他介绍(文化寓意)→总体介绍(世界上最大的鹤之一)→具体介绍(外形特征、栖息地、迁徙行为、饮食习惯) 情境任务写作 　　假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想了解大象。请你给他写一封邮件，根据下面的提示介绍一下大象这种动物。 　　1．是陆地上最大的动物，出生时约有90千克重，一米高。 　　2．到12岁时，就不再生长了。皮肤是灰色的，有长鼻子和两只大耳朵，通常生活在河谷中，以草和树叶为食。每天喝大量的水。 　　3．经常群居，互相照顾；非洲大象每年迁徙。 　　4．大象现在是并且将来也会是最伟大的生物之一。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。j 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 首段：______________________________； 主体：____________________； 尾段：________________。 开门见山，引入主题：介绍大象 具体介绍大象的情况 进行评论和总结 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①大象出生时重约90千克，高约1米。 The elephant _____________________________________________________ when it is born. ②大象的皮肤是灰色的，有长鼻子和两只大耳朵。 The elephant __________________________________________________． ③大象通常生活在河谷中。 The elephant __________________________． ④这些河谷中有足够多的草或者树叶。(there be句型) ___________________________________ in these valleys. weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre high is grey in color and has a long trunk and two big ears usually lives in valleys There are enough grass or leaves 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑤用省略句改写句① ____________________________________________________________________________________ ⑥用定语从句改写句② ________________________________________________________________ ⑦用where引导的定语从句把句③和句④合成一个句子 ________________________________________________________________ The elephant weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born. The elephant，whose color is grey，has a long trunk and two big ears. The elephant usually lives in valleys where there are enough grass or leaves. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Peter， 　　The elephant is the largest animal on land today.It weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born.When it is 12 years old，it does not grow any more.The elephant，whose color is grey，has a long trunk and two big ears.It usually lives in valleys where there are enough grass or leaves，for it mainly feeds on grass and leaves.It drinks a lot of water every day.The elephants in Africa migrate to find nice food every year.Usually living in groups and caring for each other，the elephant is and will continue to be one of the greatest creatures. Yours， Li Hua 精彩素材积累 常用开头句： 1．Many trees are being cut down and more and more forests are lost，making animals lose their homes to live in. 许多树木被砍伐，越来越多的森林消失，使动物失去了赖以生存的家园。 2．The giant panda is an animal that/which lives in the mountains. 大熊猫是一种生活在山里的动物。 3．The giant panda feeds/lives on bamboo shoots. 大熊猫以竹笋为食。 常用中间句： 1．As forests are being cut down，its habitat is becoming smaller and smaller. 由于森林被砍伐，它的栖息地变得越来越小。 2．Many fields are being turned into desert，which makes the animals living there have no place to find food to eat. 许多田地正在变成荒漠，这使得生活在那里的动物没有地方找食物吃。 3．Many animals are being killed so that some of them are in danger of dying out. 许多动物被捕杀，以致于其中一些有灭绝的危险。 常用结束句： 1．To protect pandas，measures should be taken to set up some nature reserves. 为了保护大熊猫，应该采取措施建立一些自然保护区。 2．If we don’t protect them，they’ll probably die out soon. 如果我们不保护它们，它们很快就会灭绝。 3．Finally，we should let people know the importance of protecting endangered animals. 最后，我们应该让人们知道保护濒危动物的重要性。 4．In a word，we must take some measures to prevent rare animals from extinction. 总之，我们必须采取措施防止珍稀动物灭绝。 学以致用 　　假定你是李华，你校校报向同学们征集介绍野生动物的稿件，请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇介绍老虎的文章。 　　1．外形：大型猫科动物；黑黄相间的条纹；长而有力的尾巴； 　　2．生活习性：主要生活在密林中；以小型动物为食； 　　3．现状：栖息地被破坏，数量越来越少； 　　4．呼吁大家保护老虎。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：条纹stripe 猫科动物cat ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 　　Tigers are a kind of big cats living in thick forests.They are very fierce and mainly eat small animals.With yellow and black stripes all over the body，they look very beautiful.They also have long and strong tails. 　　During the past years，many forests have been destroyed and therefore the habitats of tigers are becoming smaller and smaller.As a result，there are fewer tigers living in the world now. 　　Tigers are endangered animals，so we must do our best to protect their habitats and improve their living conditions. 返回 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $