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读后续写之情绪描写技巧
Ways of describing emotions描
Master some ways to describe emotions:
1. Advanced words
2. Advanced phrases
3. Advanced sentence patterns
Learning objective
Lead in:What are the emotions of different people in this video?
换成孙悟空金平府 can someone tell me about the emotions? omneky king
Lead in: What are the emotions of different people in this video?
sad
angry
scared
nervous
worried
regretful
Can you translate and upgrade the following emotion adj.&n.?
Skill1 . Advanced words
情绪 情绪形容词 情绪名词
开心 joyful delighted happy joy delight happiness
激动 thrilled excited thrill excitement
难过 sorrowful sad sorrow sadness grief
惊讶 amazed astonished surprised amazement astonishment surprise
紧张 anxious nervous anxiety nervousness
害怕 frightened scared panicked horror fear panic
尴尬 embarrassed awkward ashamed embarrassment shame
后悔 guilty regretful guilt regret
愤怒 angry annoyed anger annoyance rage
感激 grateful thankful gratitude thankfulness
失望 disappointed frustrated depressed disappointment frustration
1. The angry Monkey leaped out of his chair with a roar.
2. Zhu Bajie was too anxious to speak anything.
3. Shu Wujing was so sad that he asked Monkey King again.
4. Sun Wukong was tired and was unable to move.
annoyed
sorrowful
nervous
exhausted
Practice: Upgrade the underlined words.
一起回答
1. be overwhelmed with/by + 情绪名词 被...(情绪)淹没/感到非常...(情绪)
2. 情绪名词 + flash across one’s face ...(情绪)在某人脸上一闪而过
Skill2 . Advanced phrases
3. be immersed in+情感名词 某人沉浸在某种情绪中
当看到孙悟空来救他时,他极为兴奋。
When seeing that Monkey came to rescue him,
.
he was overwhelmed with thrill
喜悦的神情在他脸上一闪而过。
An expression of joy .
flashed across his face
他沉浸在焦虑中,忍不住哭了。
, and couldn’t help crying.
He was immersed in tension/anxiety
带读单词overwhelm , immerse,一起回答
感到焦虑紧张,孙悟空去到天宫
Anxious and nervous, Monkey went to the heaven.
add emotion adjectives
1. 情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sb... 感到…,某人…
Skill3: Advanced sentence patterns
Monkey went to the heaven.
孙悟空去到天宫。
(1) 惊讶又惊奇,我注意到骑自行车的人们都井然有序.(2025年八省联考卷)
Surprised and amazed, I noticed that the bikers were all in an orderly manner.
(2) 沮丧又失落,汤姆考试失利后独自坐在教室里. (2025年浙江1月卷)
Frustrated and disappointed, Tom sat alone in the classroom after failing the exam.
Skill3: Advanced sentence patterns
2. What+情绪动词+sb was that + 从句 让某人觉得...的是...
让他惊讶的是玉皇大帝。
What astonished him was the Jade Emperor.
让他惊讶的是玉皇大帝决定帮助他。
add a predicative clause
(1) 让他紧张的是,他即将面对一场大型公开演讲。(2025年浙江1月卷)
What made him nervous was that he was about to face a large public speech.
(2) 让他们担忧的是,天气预报说明天会有一场大暴雨。(2025年浙江1月卷)
What worried them was that the weather forecast said there would be a heavy rainstorm tomorrow.
What astonished him was that the Jade Emperor decided to help him.
他又一次去救他的师傅。
He went to save his master again.
虽然他很累,他又一次去救他的师傅。
3. 情感的形容词+as + 主语+be 尽管某人(感到).... ...
Skill3: Advanced sentence patterns
add a adverbial
clause of concession
(1) 尽管我很焦虑,但我没有表现在脸上。(2021年全国卷)
Anxious as she was, she still managed to finish the task on time.
(2) 尽管他很伤心,他还是努力忍住了眼泪。(2025年新高考卷)
Sad as he was,he tried hard to hold back his tears.
Exhausted/ Tired as he was, he went to save his master again.
He felt delighted.
无灵主语句:用无生命的事物来做主语
欣喜涌上他的心头
他感到高兴:
Delight welled up in his heart.
Skill3: Advanced sentence patterns:
4.无灵主语:“(a sense/wave of)情绪名词+精准动词+sb”
一股…的情绪涌上心头
情绪名词
精准动词
seize 抓住
catch (过去式caught)
strike (过去式struck)
surround 围绕着
well up涌起
take hold of 抓住
envelop 笼罩
overwhelm 使难以承受
creep渐渐蔓延
sb
Practice
(1)当我看到一大群骑自行车的人都戴着徽章时,一阵恐慌席卷了我。 (2025年八省联考卷)
A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
(2)听到这个消息的那一刻,一股强烈的喜悦之情笼罩了我。
A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news.
(3)当他看到那些难题时,一股绝望感笼罩了他。(2025年新高考卷仿写)
A sense of despair seized him when he saw the difficult exam questions.
再找两个其他的高考例句,身体部位等
Summary
Emotion description
Advanced phrases
1. be overwhelmed with+情绪名词
2. 情绪名词 + flash across one’s face
3.be immersed in+情绪名词
Advanced words
Advanced sentence patterns
1. 形容词做状语
2. 主语从句
3. as 的倒装句
4. 无灵主语句
Worried and guilty (既担忧又愧疚), Tom walked into the living room, holding the broken vase he’d knocked over that morning. What eased him was that (让他松了口气的是), his grandma didn’t look angry at all—she just smiled and patted his shoulder. Relieved as he was (虽然心里踏实了些),, he still lowered his head, ready to apologize.
Grandma pulled out an old photo album then, and surprise flashed across his face (惊讶瞬间掠过他的脸庞), when he saw a picture of little him playing with the same vase. As she told stories about how he’d once tried to put flowers in it (and spilled water everywhere), Tom was immersed in warmth (Tom沉浸在温暖之中),, forgetting all about the broken ceramic.
Before he left, Grandma handed him a small potted sunflower. “Put this here instead—it’s sturdier,” she said. Gratitude wrapped Tom (一股感激之情将Tom包裹), as he held the pot, and when he said “Thank you, Grandma,” he was overwhelmed with affection (心中充满了爱意), knowing her kindness was the best gift of the day.
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读后续写情绪描写技巧
Ways of describing emotions
Teaching aims:
1. Master some ways to describe emotions, including advanced words, advanced phrases and advanced sentence patterns.
2. Apply these ways into practice.
Teaching procedures:
Lead in:
1. Appreciate a video and answer the following question.
2. What are the emotions of different people in this video?
Skill1: Advanced words
情绪
情绪形容词
情绪名词
开心
joyful
delighted
happy
joy
delight
happiness
激动
thrilled
excited
thrill
excitement
难过
sorrowful
sad
sorrow
sadness
grief
惊讶
amazed
astonished
surprised
amazement
astonishment
surprise
紧张
anxious
nervous
anxiety
nervousness
害怕
frightened
scared
panicked
horror
fear
panic
尴尬
embarrassed
awkward
ashamed
embarrassment
shame
后悔
guilty
regretful
guilt
regret
愤怒
angry
annoyed
anger
annoyance
rage
感激
grateful
thankful
gratitude
thankfulness
失望
disappointed
frustrated
depressed
disappointment
frustration
Practice 1: Upgrade the underlined words.
(1) The angry _______________________Monkey leaped out of his chair with a roar.
(2) Zhu Bajie was too anxious _____________________ to speak anything.
(3) Shu Wujing was so sad ______________________ that he asked Monkey King again.
(4) Sun Wukong was tired ________________________ and was unable to move.
Skill2: Advanced phrases
(1) be overwhelmed with/by + 情绪名词 被...(情绪)淹没/感到非常...(情绪)
当看到孙悟空来救他时,他极为兴奋。
When seeing that Monkey came to rescue him, ____________________________________________.
(2) 情绪名词 + flash across one’s face ...(情绪)在某人脸上一闪而过
喜悦的神情在他脸上一闪而过。
An expression of joy ____________________________.
(3) be immersed in+情感名词 某人沉浸在某种情绪中
沉浸在焦虑中,忍不住哭了。
____________________________, and couldn’t help crying.
Skill3: Advanced sentence patterns
1. 情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sb... 感到…,某人…
(1) 惊讶又惊奇,我注意到骑自行车的人们都井然有序.(2025年八省联考卷)
____________________________, I noticed that the bikers were all in an orderly manner.
(2) 沮丧又失落,汤姆考试失利后独自坐在教室里. (2025年浙江1月卷)
______________________________________________________ _________________________
2. What+情绪动词+sb was that + 从句 让某人觉得...的是...
(1) 让他紧张的是,他即将面对一场大型公开演讲。(2025年浙江1月卷)
____________________________ he was about to face a large public speech.
(2) 让他们担忧的是,天气预报说明天会有一场大暴雨。(2025年浙江1月卷)
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
3. 情感的形容词+as + 主语+be 尽管某人(感到).... ...
(1) 尽管我很焦虑,但我没有表现在脸上。(2021年全国卷)
____________________________, she still managed to finish the task on time.
(2) 尽管他很伤心,他还是努力忍住了眼泪。(2025年新高考卷)
_____________________________________________________________________________
4.无灵主语:“(a sense/wave of)情绪名词+精准动词+sb” 一股…的情绪涌上心头
(1) 当我看到一大群骑自行车的人都戴着徽章时,一阵恐慌席卷了我。 (2025年八省联考卷)
_____________________________________ as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
(2) 听到这个消息的那一刻,一股强烈的喜悦之情笼罩了我。
_____________________________________ the moment I heard the news.
(3)当他看到那些难题时,一股绝望感笼罩了他。(2025年新高考卷仿写)_____________________________________________________________________________
Practice
__________________ (既担忧又愧疚), Tom walked into the living room, holding the broken vase he’d knocked over that morning.________________________ (让他松了口气的是), his grandma didn’t look angry at all—she just smiled and patted his shoulder. __________________________ (虽然心里踏实了些), he still lowered his head, ready to apologize.
Grandma pulled out an old photo album then, and___________________________ (惊讶瞬间掠过他的脸庞), when he saw a picture of little him playing with the same vase. As she told stories about how he’d once tried to put flowers in it (and spilled water everywhere), ____________________________(Tom沉浸在温暖之中),forgetting all about the broken ceramic.
Before he left, Grandma handed him a small potted sunflower. “Put this here instead—it’s sturdier,” she said. ____________________________ (一股感激之情将Tom包裹), as he held the pot, and when he said “Thank you, Grandma,” ____________________________ (心中充满了爱意), knowing her kindness was the best gift of the day.
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