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求真务本 明德自强 高三英语复习---写作讲评课 Polish the language in an essay 1 假定你是李华，将写信给联合国教科文组织（UNESCO）干事Audrey女士，对中国的一项物质文化遗产（tangible cultural heritage）申请保护，内容包括： 1、该文化遗产的名称； 2、保护该遗产的原因； 3、希望得到回复。 注意：1、词数100左右； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— intangible cultural heritage: various practices, performances, festivals, traditional knowledge and skills Spring Festival paper-cutting tangible cultural heritages: architectures,cultural relics Great Wall Hakka Tu Lou 假定你是李华，将写信给联合国教科文组织（UNESCO）干事Audrey女士，对中国的一项物质文化遗产（tangible cultural heritage）申请保护，内容包括： 1、该文化遗产的名称； 2、保护该遗产的原因； 3、希望得到回复。 注意：1、词数100左右； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 评分的四大维度 内容 语言 思想 框架---组织结构 要点全，拓展有度，有效 连接词，作文结构紧凑；流畅 准确，复杂语法结构，高级词汇，多种句型 开放能引起读者的共鸣,灵魂 19 Polish the essay 1.My name is Li Hua and I am a high school’s student. I am Li Hua, a high school student coming from HongXing school. 同位语 非谓语 2.It is known to all that Hakka Tu Lou is world-famous and has a long history. Having/Enjoying a long history, Hakka Tu Lou is world famous,representing a unique form of architecture. I do believe that Hakka Tu Lou is world famous, representing a unique form of architecture with a long history. As we know,Hakka Tu Lou is world famous,which has a long history. 非 谓 语 强调 定从 3.So I want to apply for protection. apply to sb. for sth./ n. application 1). I am writing to apply to you for protecting a remarkable tangible cultural heritage 2). I am writing to make an application for the protection of.... 3). Knowing that you are an officer of UNESCO, I can’t wait to make an application concerning the protection about a remarkable tangible cultural heritage 写作目的 短语更高级 句式更生动 4. From my point of view, protecting this tangible cultural heritage is meaningful and important. A. As far as I’m concerned, it is of great meaning and significance to protect this tangible cultural heritage . B. Undoubtedly,/There is nothing ambiguous that/There is no doubt that cultural relics play an important/critical/crucial/significant /essential /vital role in our life. C. As we can see, great emphasis should be laid on protecting tangible heritage. 词性转换技巧 同义词替换 被动 5.In the early days, Hakka Tu Lou was designed to defend against enemy attacks. Later, this building also played a role in preventing wind and sand for its location in coastal areas. Designed to defend against enemy originally, Hakka Tu Lou is now also playing a crucial role in preventing wind and sand for its location in coastal areas. 保护原因1 句子精练 非谓语 形容词 6.What’s more,this building is so magnificent that many tourists come to visit it. What ’s more, so magnificent is this building that many tourists come to pay a visit to it. But some tourists carve their names or Chinese characters on the wall, which does damage to the precious relics. 保护原因2 In addition, how magnificent this building is so that many tourists pay a visit to it. 感叹句 倒装句 句式多变 结尾 望采取措施、采纳上述内容、望回复 we are supposed to take action to protect.... Measures should be taken to protect our cultural heritage. 措施： It’s high time that measures should be taken to protect the ... 被动语态添光彩 虚拟语气 采纳上述内容： Please take my application into consideration/account. 期待回复： I sincerely hope you can give me a reply at your earliest convenience. Your early reply will be highly appreciated. 高级短语，句型 As is mentioned above, I hold the firm belief that Hakka Tu Lou deserves the position .I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Your early reply will be highly appreciated. Perfect ending 再次点题 Dear Audrey， It’s widely accepted that Hakka Tu Lou is world-famous, representing a unique form of architecture with a long history.I can’t wait to make an application for protecting it. I do believe that it is of great meaning and significance to protect this heritage. Designed to defend against enemy originally,Hakka Tu Lou is now also playing a crucial role in preventing wind and sand .What ’s more, so magnificent is this building that many tourists pay a visit to it. But some tourists carve their names or Chinese characters on the wall,which does damage to it. As is mentioned above，Hakka Tu Lou deserves the position .I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Your early reply will be highly appreciated. Yours,Li Hua 连句成篇 语言表达升级策略： 1.词汇多变化，多用同义词，高级词汇替换，掌握词性转化技巧，能用短语就不用单词。 2.句式多样化，巧用感叹句，倒装句，强调句等。 3.主动被动自由切换，增加语言的生动性。 4.适当使用名词性从句，定语从句等复合句 5.善用非谓语动词，使句子更上一层楼。 2.围绕话题中国传统节日预写一篇演讲稿，介绍春节，题目如下： 一 个英文网站面向中学生征稿，请你写一篇英语演讲稿件，以“The Spring Festival”为题介绍春节及这个节日里的主要活动。 写作内容： 1.该节日的庆祝日期；2.人们的庆祝方式 。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Assignment 1.请根据作文升级策略将自己的作文升级再造。 $