Unit 2 Section Ⅲ Developing ideas & Presenting ideas-【金版教程】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第二册创新导学案Word（外研版）

英语　必修 第二册 WY Section Ⅲ　Developing ideas (Reading & Writing) & Presenting ideas 一、阅读单词 1．eve n. 前夕，前一天 2．software n. (计算机)软件 3．adult n. 成人，成年人 4．token n. 象征，标志 5．overseas adv. 在海外，在外国 6．citizen n. 公民，市民 7．audience n. 听众，观众 二、核心单词 1．embrace v. 欣然接受，乐意采纳(新思想、意见等) 2．admit v. (不情愿地)承认 3．effort n. 力气，精力 4．loss n. 失去，丧失 5．retired adj. 退休的 6．exist v. 存在，实际上有 7．interact v. 互动 8．phenomenon n. 现象 三、拓展单词(可查字典) 1．editor n. (报纸、杂志的)主编，编辑→edit v. 编辑，校订 2．global adj. 全球的，全世界的→globally adv. 全球地；全局地；世界上 3．nationality n. 国籍；民族→national adj. 国家的，全国的→nation n. 国家，民族；国民 4．joy n. 欢欣，愉快，喜悦→joyful adj. 高兴的，快乐的，令人愉快的→joyfully adv. 高兴地，快乐地，令人愉快地 四、熟词生义 process 熟义：n. (为达到某目标的)过程，进程 生义：v. 加工，处理 五、核心短语 1．be__keen__on 喜欢，对……着迷；渴望，热衷于 2．no__less__than 不少于，多达 课文三维剖析 Time for a Change? 传统该不该变？ A family dinner is an important tradition to celebrate Spring Festival1. Nowadays, some people choose to have the dinner2 in a restaurant, but not everyone is keen on this idea3. What do our readers think？ 年夜饭是春节的一项重要传统。如今，有些人选择在饭店吃年夜饭，不过，不是每个人都支持这一想法。读者朋友们，你们怎么看呢？Dear Editor, We have eaten out for the Spring Festival family dinner for the last three years, and4 we have enjoyed it no less than eating at home. I don't understand why5 some people refuse to embrace the change. 尊敬的编辑： 最近三年，我家都是在外面吃年夜饭的，和在家吃比起来，在外面吃一样开心。我不理解为什么有些人拒绝接受改变。　　 Can't they admit that6 the preparations for the dinner are hard work? I really don't think it's worth the effort of spending so much time7 preparing for a single meal, and then another hour cleaning up the mess after8 it's over. We work all year, so why can't one day be about spending time with family and9 relaxing? 难道他们不觉得准备年夜饭很辛苦吗？花这么长时间准备一顿饭，饭后再花一个小时收拾，我真心觉得不值。辛苦一年了，为什么不能用这一天的时间陪陪家人，放松放松呢？ Eating out10 is a good choice and it has nothing to do with loss of traditions. We still have the dinner with the same people, just in a　 different place. The occasion is more enjoyable without all that tiring cooking, and the dishes taste better! 在外面吃年夜饭是个挺好的选择，而且这也谈不上丢弃传统。我们还是和同样的人一起吃饭，只是换了地方而已。不用辛苦地做饭，用餐会更加愉快，而且(饭店的)饭菜味道也更好！　　 In my opinion, what or where11 we eat on Spring Festival Eve really doesn't matter. Eating out may change the form of this tradition, but the love between the family members sitting around the table12 together remains the same. Wang Peng, software engineer 在我看来，除夕夜我们吃什么、在哪里吃，真的不重要。在外面的饭店吃年夜饭可能改变了这个传统的表现形式，但是围坐在餐桌前的家人之间的亲情并没有改变。 王鹏，软件工程师 Dear Editor, For this year's Spring Festival family dinner, my son has booked a table at the best restaurant13in town14, but15 I'm a bit unhappy about it. For me, it just won't feel like Spring Festival having the dinner out. 尊敬的编辑： 今年我儿子在城里最好的饭店订了桌年夜饭，可我不怎么高兴。对我来说，在外面吃年夜饭就不像过年。　　When16 I was a little boy, the dinner on the eve of Spring Festival was what17 I looked forward to most. It was not only for the delicious food that18 we seldom got to eat, but19 for the opportunity to have our whole family gathered together20. I would run around the house, listening to the adults chatting about their year. I'd get under my mother's feet in the kitchen, watching her make dumplings. She'd put tokens in some dumplings: candies for a sweet life and peanuts for a long and healthy one. In the evening, all of us would sit around the table, enjoying the food and being together again21. We toasted each other, we laughed, and the simple, homemade dishes tasted more delicious than anything cooked by a top chef22. 小时候，我最期待的就是除夕的年夜饭，不仅可以吃到平时难以吃到的美食，而且全家人能有机会团聚在一起。那时我会在家里跑来跑去，听大人们闲聊他们这一年的情况。我还会缠着在厨房做饭的妈妈，看她包饺子。她会在有些饺子里放一点儿“彩头”：糖果寓意生活甜美，花生代表健康长寿。到了晚上，我们都围坐在餐桌前，享受美食和团圆的乐趣。大家互相敬酒，谈笑风生，简简单单的家常菜吃起来比顶级大厨做的菜都要美味。 I hope my children and their children will still value our memories of preparing the dinner together23. To me, the process is even more important than the dinner itself. Liu Yonghui, retired teacher 我希望我的子孙后代依旧珍视全家人一起做年夜饭的回忆。对我来说，准备的过程甚至比年夜饭本身更重要。 刘永辉，退休教师 1不定式短语作后置定语 2不定式短语作宾语 3部分否定句 4连接两个并列句 5引导宾语从句 6引导宾语从句 7动名词短语作宾语 8引导时间状语从句 9连接两个并列成分spending和relaxing，作介词about的宾语 10动名词短语作主语 11引导主语从句 12现在分词短语作后置定语，修饰the__family__members 13介词短语作地点状语 14介词短语作后置定语 15连接两个并列句 16引导时间状语从句 17引导表语从句 18引导定语从句，修饰food 19not only ... but (also) ... 连接两个表语：for__the__delicious__food和for__the__opportunity 20不定式短语作后置定语，修饰the__opportunity；过去分词短语gathered together作宾语补足语 21三个现在分词短语作伴随状语 22过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰anything 23动名词短语作宾语 阅读领悟 一、阅读课文并填空 二、问题链 1.Where is the text most likely from? A__lifestyle__magazine__or__newspaper__column. 2．Wang Peng is in favour of eating out while Liu Yonghui thinks eating at home is better. What's your opinion? Why? I__think__both__of__the__two__opinions__are__reasonable.__If__you__think__the__preparations__for__the__Spring__Festival__family__dinner__are__too__tiring,__you__can__choose__to__eat__out.__If__you__enjoy__the__process__of__preparing__the__Spring__Festival__family__dinner,__you__can__choose__to__eat__at__home. 探究一　高频词 1．admit v. (不情愿地)承认；接纳；准许……进入；容纳(教材P27) →admission n. 准许进入；入场费 admit ... into/to ... 准许……进入…… be admitted into/to ... 被接纳进入……；被录取到…… admit doing/having done/that ... 承认…… admit sb/sth to be ... 承认某人/某物…… be admitted as ... 作为……被接受 It is generally admitted that ... 人们公认…… 【语境感知】 ①She was admitted into/to Peking University, which made her and her parents very happy. 她被北京大学录取了，这件事让她和她的父母非常高兴。 ②She said sorry to me and admitted taking/having taken my umbrella by mistake. 她向我道歉并承认错拿了我的雨伞。 ③They freely admit that they still have a lot to learn. 他们坦率承认，他们要学的东西还很多。 ④Whatever your opinion of the man, you have to admit him to be clever. 不管你对这个人的看法如何，你不得不承认他很聪明。 ⑤He was admitted as a member of the basketball team. 他被接纳成为篮球队的一员。 (1)admit的过去式和过去分词均为admitted，现在分词为admitting。 (2)admit后常接名词、动词­ing形式或从句，而不能接不定式作宾语。 【靶向小练】 ①Anna admitted feeling/having__felt (feel) hurt by what I had said. ②The new law was generally admitted to__be (be) difficult to enforce. ③We have to admit that many cities around the world today are heavily polluted. ④No one can go into the room without my admission (admit)． ⑤我承认犯了一个错误。 I admitted my__mistake． ＝I admitted making/having__made__a__mistake． ＝I admitted that I__made__a__mistake. 2．effort n. 力气，精力(教材P27) make efforts/an effort to do sth 努力做某事 make every effort to do sth 尽力做某事 spare no effort (to do sth) 不遗余力(做某事) in an effort to do sth 为了做某事 with (an) effort 费力地 without effort 容易地，不费力地 【语境感知】 ①I will make efforts to achieve my goal. 我会努力实现我的目标。 ②The school clubs are making every effort to interest more students. 学校俱乐部正在尽一切努力来吸引更多的学生。 ③They promised to spare no effort to help those in poverty. 他们承诺会不遗余力地帮助那些生活贫困的人。 ④They've been working night and day in an effort to get the bridge ready on time. 为了使这座桥按时完工，他们一直夜以继日地工作。 ⑤They lifted the heavy rock with effort. 他们费力地抬起那块沉重的石头。 【靶向小练】 ①We will make efforts (effort) to offer you the best service. ②It takes a lot of time and effort to__get (get) an exhibition ready. ③They rebuilt the cinemas in an effort to attract young people. ④Just as Rome was not built in a day, no one can achieve anything without effort. ⑤All the participants tried their best to reach the finish line. →All the participants make__every__effort/spare__no__effort__to__reach the finish line. 3．loss n. 失去，丧失(教材P27) →lose v. 失去，丧失 →lost adj. 丢失的，迷路的 at a loss 不知所措 suffer losses 遭受损失 weight loss体重减少 a sense of loss失落感 【语境感知】 ①The company suffered huge losses in the last financial year. 这家公司在上一个财政年度损失惨重。 ②Symptoms of the disease include fever and weight loss. 这种疾病的症状包括发烧和体重减轻。 ③When she died I was filled with a sense of loss. 她去世后我心里充满了失落感。 【靶向小练】 ①The man looked surprised and he seemed at a loss. ②His first week of business ended in a huge loss (lose)． ③这里有许多有趣的书可供选择，但我不知道该借哪本。 There are many interesting books to choose from, but__I'm__at__a__loss as to which to borrow. 4．exist v. 存在，实际上有；生活，生存(教材P29) →existence n. 存在；生存 →existing adj. 现存的，现行的 (1)There exists ... 某地有……；存在…… exist on ... ＝live on ... 依靠……生存，依靠……生活 exist in ... 存在于……中 (2)come into existence产生；成立；开始存在 in existence 现存的，现有的 bring ... into existence 使……出现，使……产生 【语境感知】 ①A new law will soon replace existing legislation. 新法律即将取代现行法律。 ②There exists a good way to solve the existing problem in geography. 有一个解决现存的地理问题的好办法。 ③The worker earned little money a month, so he had to exist on only instant noodles. 这个工人一个月挣的钱很少，因此他不得不靠方便面度日。 ④No one knows when such a custom first came into existence. 没有人知道这种风俗是什么时候开始存在的。 exist是不及物动词，没有被动语态，也不用于进行时。 【靶向小练】 ①The hostages existed on bread and water for over five months. ②Happiness does not exist in wealth. ③We must take measures to solve the existing (exist) problems. ④没有人知道这个世界是如何开始存在的。 No one knows how this world began__to__exist． ＝No one knows how this world came__into__existence． 探究二　拓展词 5．joy n. 欢欣，愉快，喜悦→joyful adj. 高兴的，快乐的，令人愉快的→joyfully adv. 高兴地，快乐地，令人愉快地 【语境感知】 I can still remember that we got together to share our joy and joyfully talked about our dreams. It's the most joyful thing in my life. 我仍然记得我们聚在一起分享我们的快乐，愉快地谈论我们的梦想。这是我一生中最快乐的事情。 【靶向小练】 ①Let's sing some songs to celebrate this joyful (joy) occasion. ②I ran 42 kilometres, crossing the finishing line joyfully (joy) and received my medal proudly. ③There was a time when I was getting along well with my classmates and we shared troubles and joys (joy)． ④旅行的乐趣不在于到达目的地，而在于旅行本身。 The__joy__of__travel(l)ing lies not in arriving at your destination but in the journey itself. 探究三　熟词生义 6．process [熟义]n. (为达到某目标的)过程，进程 [生义]v. 加工，处理 【语境感知】 ①And in the process, I've experienced things that really surprise me at times. 并且在这个过程中，我经历了一些令我时常感到非常惊讶的事情。 ②All the information was then ready to be processed into film negatives. 所有的信息都准备好被加工成底片。 【靶向小练】 ①Fat and salt are required to deal with the food we eat, to recover from injury and for several other functions.汉意：处理　同义词：process ②我强烈建议他们应该关注积极的结果，而非令人尴尬的过程。 I strongly advise they should focus on positive results rather__than__embarrassing__processes． 探究四　长难句分析 7．It was not only for the delicious food that we seldom got to eat, but for the opportunity to have our whole family gathered together.(教材P28) 不仅可以吃到平时难以吃到的美食，而且全家人能有机会团聚在一起。 【分析】　not only ... but (also) ... 为固定用法，意为“不仅……而且……”，在此处连接两个并列的表语；that引导限制性定语从句，修饰限定先行词the delicious food。 not only ... but (also) ... 的用法： (1)连接两个对等的成分 (2)连接两个主语时，强调的是后面的主语，谓语动词应和后面的主语在人称和数上保持一致，即遵循“就近原则” (3)连接除主语以外的成分时，若not only位于句首，后面句子需要使用部分倒装，但but (also)后的句子不倒装 【语境感知】 ①It was not until I came here that I realized this place was famous for not only its beauty but also its weather. 直到我来到这里，我才意识到这个地方很有名，不仅是因为它的美丽还因为它的天气。 ②Not only the children but also their coach likes playing football. 不仅是孩子们，他们的教练也喜欢踢足球。 ③Not only did we forget to turn off the lights in the kitchen, but we also failed to lock the front door. 我们不仅忘记关厨房的灯，而且也忘了锁前门。 【靶向小练】 ①Practising Chinese kung fu can not only build up one's strength, but also develop one's character. ②Not only my parents but also I am (be) fond of traveling around. ③它不仅让我们接近自然，而且促进了我们之间的友谊。 Not__only__did__it get us close to nature but also promoted the friendship among us. Ⅰ.写出单词 1．This software (软件) is designed to help students improve their language skills. 2．Finally your child will leave home to lead her own life as a fully independent adult (成年人)． 3．This machine can process (处理) large amounts of plastic waste. 4．All the audience (观众) stay in their seats, cheering for their teams, despite the rain. 5．This is the most interesting way that I can come up with to interact (互动) with the audience. 6．The Northern Lights are a natural phenomenon that attracts thousands of tourists every year. 7．The biodiversity of the rainforest is vast, with numerous species of plants and animals existing in nature. 8．Our university encourages students to participate in overseas exchange programs. 9．Families gather for a big dinner on the eve of the Spring Festival. 10．She opened her arms wide and embraced her long－lost friend tightly, tears streaming down her face. Ⅱ.单句语法填空 1．It was so noisy that we couldn't__hear (not hear) ourselves speak. 2．It was generally admitted that the government had acted too quickly. 3．Detectives are so far at a loss to explain the reason for his death. 4．She would__have__achieved (achieve) greater progress, if you had given her more chances. 5．I can make a lantern now, but I couldn't (not) when I was a child. 6．My grandfather is a retired (retire) teacher, who has worked in a middle school for more than 40 years. 7．The company has laid off 150 workers in an effort to__save (save) money. 8．That old man exists on a diet of bread and water most of the time. 9．His hobby of collecting stamps has nothing to do with his career as an engineer. 10．The city provides various services to meet the needs of its citizens (citizen)． Ⅲ.语段填词 1．The little girl found a beautiful flower in the garden, and joy spread across her face. She ran around the garden in a joyful way. (joyful) 2．This editor is very strict. She will edit the article carefully, not letting any small error pass by. (edit) 3．She was too proud to admit she was jealous. But her actions betrayed her, and she finally made an admission of her true feelings. (admit) 4．Our nation has faced many challenges. But through national cooperation, we have overcome difficulties time and time again. (national) 5．Global culture is a blend of different traditions. It is being shared globally through the spread of movies, music, and art. (global) Ⅳ.翻译 1．Many believe that the universe came__into__existence (出现) through the Big Bang. 2．You must__be__careful (一定要小心) with the camera. It costs! 3．When his best friend moved away, he felt a__deep__sense__of__loss (深深的失落感)． 4．我家乡三月份的天气通常很暖和，但有时也会很冷。(can) It__is__usually__warm__in__my__hometown__in__March,__but__it__can__be__rather__cold__sometimes. 5．她不仅擅长绘画，还在音乐方面有天赋。(not only ... but also ...) She__is__not__only__good__at__painting__but__also__talented__in__music. 课后课时作业 较易题(占比30%)　中档题(占比70%)　拔高题(占比0%) 题号 Ⅰ Ⅱ Ⅲ 难度 ★★ ★★ ★ Ⅰ　阅读 Yunnan offers exciting experiences of unique customs. If you are already planning to visit Yunnan, see our festival tours. The Torch (火把) Festival Date: July/August (days 24 to 26 of the sixth lunar month) Location: Lijiang It is a traditional festival among the Yi, Naxi, and Bai minority (少数民族) groups. According to the ancient rule of the Naxi people, the Torch Festival should last three days, and every family should light a big torch in front of their doors for the three days. Recommended Tour: 3­Day Ancient Lijiang Tour The Water Splashing (泼洒) Festival Date: April 13 to 15 Location: Xishuangbanna It is the most important festival observed by the Dai people of Xishuangbanna in southern Yunnan. It involves splashing water, lantern floating and other joyful activities. Recommended Tour: 6­Day Xishuangbanna Tour The Horse Race Festival Date: May/June (5th of the fifth lunar month) Location: Shangri­La Falling on the same date as the Dragon Boat Festival, it is the biggest gathering of Tibetans in Yunnan and usually lasts about 3 days. During the celebrations, traditional performances and competitions like horse racing and wrestling (摔跤) will be held. Recommended Tour: 8­Day Yunnan Tour of the Nu River and Tengchong The Third Month Fair of the Bai Group Date: April/May (days 15 to 21 of the third lunar month) Location: Dali It is one of the most important festivals celebrated by the Bai people in Dali in western Yunnan. During the March Fair, the streets of Dali Ancient Town are packed with people selling amazing minority items. Recommended Tour: 6­Day Yunnan Minorities Tour 篇章导读：本文是一篇应用文。文章主要介绍了去云南旅行时人们可以参加的几个节日。 1．What do the Torch Festival and the Water Splashing Festival have in common? A．The date. B．The location. C．The lasting time. D．The celebratory events. 答案：C 解析：细节理解题。根据The Torch (火把) Festival部分中的“Date: July/August (days 24 to 26 of the sixth lunar month)”和The Water Splashing (泼洒) Festival部分中的“Date: April 13 to 15”可知，火把节和泼水节都持续三天，即它们的持续时间相同。故选C。 2．Which festival will you attend if you like to buy local gifts while travelling? A．The Torch Festival. B．The Water Splashing Festival. C．The Horse Race Festival. D．The Third Month Fair of the Bai Group. 答案：D 解析：细节理解题。根据The Third Month Fair of the Bai Group部分中的“During the March Fair ... selling amazing minority items.”可知，如果你想在旅行时购买当地的礼物，可以参加The Third Month Fair of the Bai Group。故选D。 3．Where is the text probably taken from? A．A business study. B．A newspaper report. C．An educational magazine. D．An advertising leaflet. 答案：D 解析：推理判断题。通读全文可知，文章主要介绍了去云南旅行时人们可以参加的几个节日，由此可推知，该文章可能选自一张旅游广告传单。故选D。 Ⅱ　七选五 As the season of celebrations begins, many of us find it difficult to let go of the pressure to pause what we are doing. __1__ They think the holidays often feel like a chain of fake－celebrations, full of forced gratitude, and capturing picture－perfect moments for our carefully－planned lives on social media. __2__ Thanksgiving Day is meant to reflect gratitude and connection. Yet, for many, these ideals can feel out of reach, especially when they spend long hours with family members they rarely see or don't feel close to. __3__ Friendsgiving Day, a modern alternative to the traditional family－centered Thanksgiving Day gathering, has been gaining popularity since the early 2000s, officially making its way into Urban Dictionary in 2009. The new holiday offers flexibility and creativity. __4__ Inviting friends often reduces the stress and performative nature of traditional holidays, creating an environment free from the risk of family disagreements. Traveling for Thanksgiving Day can be exhausting, inconvenient, and expensive. __5__ You can celebrate locally or plan your travels for a less hectic (繁忙的), non－peak time. Most importantly, Friendsgiving Day allows us to express gratitude for the people who truly enrich our lives—the ones who are kind, accepting, and supportive in our day－to－day lives. Sometimes, that's not family by blood but by choice. So, skip the pressure of a fine feast, grab some board games, order some pizza, and create your own version of holiday joy. A．Thus, a new holiday, Friendsgiving Day, came into being. B．However, Friendsgiving Day provides a flexible alternative. C．It's a good way to celebrate Thanksgiving Day with our beloved ones. D．For the people who dislike the holiday traditions, those can be disturbing. E．They have a strong feeling to express their gratitude to their friends or family members. F．It allows for new traditions, flexible time, unique divisions of labor and creative decorations. G．Also, they come at a high cost to our wallets as well as our physical and mental well－being. 篇章导读：本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了Friendsgiving Day (朋友感恩节)的诞生及其意义。 1．答案：D 解析：根据前文“As the season of ... we are doing.”可知，许多人难以放下压力，暂停手头的事。根据后文“They think the holidays ... chain of fake－celebrations”可知，他们认为节日像是一连串虚假的庆祝活动。D项(对于那些不喜欢节日传统的人来说，这些可能会令人不安。)承前启后，且选项中的“the people who dislike the holiday traditions”为后文They指代的内容。故选D。 2．答案：G 解析：根据前文对节日“虚假庆祝、被迫感恩、为社交媒体摆拍”等负面描述可知，G项(此外，它们对我们的钱包和身心健康都代价高昂。)承接前文，继续阐述一些人不喜欢传统节日的原因。故选G。 3．答案：A 解析：第二段主要讲述传统感恩节的弊端，后文转而介绍新节日Friendsgiving Day。A项(因此，一个新的节日，朋友感恩节，应运而生。)承前启后，表明因传统感恩节存在问题，所以朋友感恩节诞生了。故选A。 4．答案：F 解析：根据前文“The new holiday offers flexibility and creativity.”可知，这个新的节日提供了灵活性和创造性。后文“Inviting friends often reduces ... family disagreements.”主要说明朋友感恩节的优点。F项(它允许新的传统、灵活的时间、独特的劳动分工和创造性的装饰。)具体解释“灵活性和创造性”，是对前文的补充说明。故选F。 5．答案：B 解析：前文指出传统感恩节旅行的弊端，后文介绍朋友感恩节庆祝活动的优点。B项(然而，朋友感恩节提供了一个灵活的选择。)用However转折，衔接前文的问题与后文的解决方案。故选B。 Ⅲ　应用文写作 假如你是李华，你想邀请在中国留学的英国好友 Peter 到家里过春节，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括： 1．介绍中国春节(如：节日时间、风俗习惯、庆祝方式等)； 2．真诚邀请，期待来访。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：春节晚会 the Spring Festival Gala；农历 lunar Dear Peter， 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours， Li Hua [精彩范文] Dear Peter， Knowing that you are interested in the Spring Festival, I'm writing with great delight to introduce it and extend an invitation to you. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for the Chinese people and it is a time when all family members get together. The Spring Festival falls on the 1st day of the 1st lunar month. On that day we often eat our traditional dumplings, which are very delicious. Besides, people usually decorate the doors and windows with red couplets and hang red lanterns, because red means good luck. Perhaps you will enjoy the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks with us if you come. In addition, children can get lucky money from their parents and grandparents. I'd like to invite you to join us for the Spring Festival. Looking forward to your coming. Yours， Li Hua 　单元写作 单元写作——写信发表观点 本单元的写作项目属于应用文中的“写信发表观点”。通过写信的方式就某个话题或者社会现象等发表自己的看法或者见解。在首段要先引出话题，点明个人观点；中间段叙述时，分条阐述理由，其中包括给出数据、例证、反证或评论；最后在结尾要对观点进行总结。 　　Nowadays there exists a common phenomenon. ________ (主要议题). But at the same time, people seem to have less enthusiasm for ________ (现象)． In my opinion, ________ (主要观点). Firstly, ________ (论据一). Besides, ________ (论据二). However, we should make great efforts to ________ (解决办法)． In conclusion, ____________________________ (总结观点). ※开头常用句式 1．Recently ... had a heated discussion about whether ... or not. 近来，关于是否……，……进行了热烈的讨论。 2．Having read your article concerning ... I am writing to express my opinion about ... 读过你的关于……的文章后，我想写信表明我对……的观点。 3．People hold different opinions about ... 人们对……持有不同的观点。 ※主体段落常用句式 1．I am in favor of/support ... 我同意/支持…… 2．I am against/disagree ... 我反对/不同意…… 3．In my opinion/In my view/Personally/As far as I am concerned ... 在我看来/就我而言…… 4．I would suggest you ... 我建议你们…… 5．To begin with, ... What's more, ... I'm of the opinion that ... 首先，……另外，……我认为…… 6．Only in this way can we ... 只有这样，我们才能…… ※结尾常用句式 1．To sum up/To conclude/In conclusion ... 总的来说…… 2．All the above considered, I believe that ... 综上所述，我相信…… 3．I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details. 我愿意进一步讨论此事的细节。 假定你是李华。某英语杂志正在征稿讨论“中学生是否应该带手机进校园”。请你给杂志编辑写一封邮件。内容包括： 1．你校学生使用手机的情况； 2．你的看法或建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 [精彩范文] Dear editor， At my school, there is a growing concern over smartphone use. Our school makes it clear that we cannot use smartphones at school. Otherwise, we will be punished. However, many of us try to use them in secret. I don't think it is right to forbid smartphones at school. Firstly, they can keep us up－to－date with current events, which is very important for our study. Secondly, they can help us to exchange ideas with like－minded people. Last but not the least, they make it easier for us students to access online resources, enhancing our understanding of subjects. In short, I think smartphones should not be forbidden as long as they are used wisely. Yours， Li Hua 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day, an elderly postman knocked on the door of a house and asked if there was anyone to take the letter. As soon as he said this, a little girl's voice echoed (回响) from inside, but even after 5 minutes no one came out. “Can anyone help you take the letter? I have to go to many more places，” the postman said again. “Uncle, if you are in a hurry, please put the letter under the door. It will take me more time，” the girl replied. “No, it is a registered letter. Someone's signature is needed，” the postman yelled. Another 10 minutes passed, and there was no response. The postman got a bit cross about the delay, and he was about to shout when the door opened. He was shocked to see in front of him was a little girl with no legs. Speechless, he gave the letter quietly, took her signature and left. That day, he got her name, Sally. Sally often lived alone. Her mother died at an early age and her father used to work far away. A maid (女仆) was invited to stay with her in the morning and evening except the day. In a month or two, mails were delivered regularly, and their interaction and attachment grew. Sally noticed that the postman used to come barefoot. The rainy season came. One day when the postman left her home, his footprints were left on wet soil. Sally struggled out with a paper and put it on print and took down the picture of his feet. She asked her maid to get shoes of that size and kept them in a box. Diwali (排灯节) was around the corner. During Diwali, the postman used to deliver mails and got Diwali gifts from the people who got mails. But when he thought about Sally, he started thinking that he shouldn't meet the girl empty­handed during the festival. After much thought he bought some chocolate for the little girl. The next day, he went to the little girl's house and knocked. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 　　When Sally opened the door, the old postman handed her a bag of chocolates. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Arriving home, the postman opened the box. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 •5R解读故事 1.Read for characters (人物) an elderly postman, Sally 2.Read for conflict/problems (冲突/问题) An elderly postman knew a disabled girl Sally when he delivered letters. As their interaction__and__attachment grew, Sally noticed the postman come barefoot,__so she prepared shoes for him. On Diwali, the postman bought some__chocolate for Sally. 3.Read for plot (情节) 4.Read for emotional changes (情感变化) An elderly postman knocked__on the door of a house, but even after 5 minutes no one came out to take the letter, which made him angry. Another 10 minutes passed, and he was shocked to see a little girl with no legs. 5.Read for theme (主题) The friendship between the little girl and the elderly postman. •4步确定框架 Step 1：先写最后一句(主题句) Warmth__ran__through__his__body__and__tears__welled__up__in__his__eyes,__murmuring,__“You__saw__me__barefoot__and__gave__me__shoes__but__how__will__I__be__able__to__give__you__feet？” Step 2：再写衔接句(第一段的最后一句) The__old__postman__accepted__the__box__and__lovingly__put__his__hand__on__the__girl's__head__as__if__blessing__her. Step 3：根据所给段首语句写角色的情感 第一段： Holding the chocolate tightly, Sally laughed, her eyes glistening with excitement. 第二段： At the sight of it, he froze with shock,__as if rooted on the ground. Step 4：补全续写每段的中间内容 第一段： “Happy Diwali，” said the old postman with a__big__smile spreading across his wrinkled face. Holding the chocolate tightly, Sally laughed, her eyes glistening__with__excitement. Then she asked the postman to wait a minute. After 30 minutes, she returned with a big box and handed it to the postman, saying, “Uncle, this is a gift for you.” 第二段： Inside lay a pair of shoes, with a__note__attached__to__one__of__them,__reading “Uncle, this is a gift from my side to you on Diwali. Thanks for your hard work. You deserve it.” At the sight of it, he froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。一位邮递员在送信时认识并了解了残疾小女孩Sally (莎莉)。在排灯节，邮递员送给Sally一袋子巧克力，Sally会有什么反应呢？收到回礼的邮递员是什么感觉？ [精彩范文] When Sally opened the door, the old postman handed her a bag of chocolates.“Happy Diwali，” said the old postman with a big smile spreading across his wrinkled face. Holding the chocolate tightly, Sally laughed, her eyes glistening with excitement. Then she asked the postman to wait a minute. After 30 minutes, she returned with a big box and handed it to the postman, saying, “Uncle, this is a gift for you.” The old postman accepted the box and lovingly put his hand on the girl's head as if blessing her. Arriving home, the postman opened the box. Inside lay a pair of shoes, with a note attached to one of them, reading “Uncle, this is a gift from my side to you on Diwali. Thanks for your hard work. You deserve it.” At the sight of it, he froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. Warmth ran through his body and tears welled up in his eyes, murmuring, “You saw me barefoot and gave me shoes but how will I be able to give you feet？” 情节逻辑(范文和自己想的有何不同) 语言表达(原文和范文中有哪些表达更地道更准确) 1. 2. 3. 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $