Unit 6 写作园地 概要写作——鼓舞人心的人或者事情-【金版教程】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第二册创新导学案课件PPT（北师大版）

WELCOME UNIT UNIT 6　THE ADMIRABLE 写作园地　概要写作——鼓舞人心的人或者事情 本单元的写作话题是概要写作：鼓舞人心的人或者事情。属于记叙文。记叙文主要是记叙所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有：故事、日记、新闻报道、游记等。记叙文通常要写清楚五要素，即where, when, what, who, how, 给读者呈现一个内容完整、细节清晰的故事。事情通常按照时间顺序进行叙述，让读者易于把握各部分内容之间的内在关联，我们必须抓住记叙文的写作特点或思路，从而更好地理解文章主题，概括出比较中肯的中心大意。 (1)Tao Yuanming is the most famous and the admirable recluse in Chinese history. 陶渊明是中国历史上最有名也是最值得钦佩的隐士。 (2)Some of the admirable wartime journalists lost their lives in order to inform people of the true situation. 有些优秀的战地记者为了让人们知道真实的情况而牺牲了。 (3)He said that China's reform and opening－up and modernization drive have scored admirable achievements and China is playing an increasingly important role in international affairs. 他说，中国的改革开放和现代化建设取得了令人钦佩的成就，中国在国际事务中发挥着日益重要的作用。 (4)Lei Feng spirit can be modern and relevant, says Yang Haibin; he believes that lending a helping hand for no reward is an early form of volunteering. 杨海滨认为，雷锋精神具备与时俱进的特点且意义重大，这种无私助人的行为是志愿者行为的早期形式。 (5)Chinese women's volleyball team once achieved great honor in the last century, their spirit of never giving up inspired so many people. 中国女排曾在上个世纪取得了极大的荣誉，她们永不放弃的精神激励了很多人。 (6)Naomi James became the first woman to sail alone around the world via Cape Horn. 内奥米·詹姆斯成为第一位独自经合恩角进行环球航行的女士。 (7)She was a very strong, impressive character and one of the most inspiring people I've ever met. 她性格坚强，令人钦佩，是我见过的最能鼓舞人心的人之一。 (8)When everyone admires his achievement, I know he has made great effort that is beyond our image to reach this success. 当每个人都钦佩他的成就时，我知道他成功的背后付出了我们无法想象的努力。 (9)The Chinese scientist Tu Youyou is honoured with the Nobel Prize in Medicine for her contribution in treating Malaria. 中国科学家屠呦呦荣获诺贝尔医学奖以表彰其在治疗疟疾方面所做出的贡献。 (10)It is inspiring to learn of some of the work being done by these young people, who bring creativity and innovation to the challenges they face. 令人鼓舞的是，我了解到这些年轻人以创造力和创新精神应对挑战。 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60个词左右的内容概要。 One morning, little William was taking the bus to school. As usual, the students were doing all sorts of things on the school bus, like chatting with friends, listening to music, or just staring out of the window. Meanwhile, William was watching news reports on his phone. It was about 10 minutes before he would get off when he heard a loud noise. Some students in the front were screaming, and Willam, surprised, looked up to see what was happening. He found that the bus driver was no longer in his seat. He had passed out and fallen onto the bus steps. The students were scared and didn't know what to do. William, however, had received bus safety training in Grade 5 and had learned how to use the bus's two－way radio in an emergency. Now, in the face of danger, he quickly jumped out of his seat, grabbed the radio, and reported that the driver needed immediate help. The radios on other buses allowed the bus driver's workmates to hear William report the emergency. Soon, another bus driver and an ambulance arrived to help. When they got there, the bus driver was awake, sitting up but unable to speak. They sent the driver to hospital. After the incident, William and everyone else on the bus went to school as usual. William used what he had learned to help a sick bus driver get quick medical treatment. His brave actions attracted a lot of attention. People in his hometown now call the 11－year－old a hero. A local TV station even interviewed him, although he didn't want to be the focus of the public. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ [精彩范文] Little William was taking the bus to school one morning when the driver suddenly became sick and fainted. (要点1) Nobody knew what to do except William, who had once received bus safety training. (要点2) He used what he had learned to call for help and had the driver taken to hospital in time. (要点3) William became famous for his brave actions, though he didn't expect the attention. (要点4) 11 [亮点呈现] (1)Little William was taking the bus to school one morning when the driver suddenly became sick and fainted. 使用when引导的时间状语从句，使得句式更简洁。 (2)Nobody knew what to do except William，who had once received bus safety training. 疑问词后接动词不定式，who引导非限制性定语从句。 (3)He used what he had learned to call for help and had the driver taken to hospital in time. what引导的宾语从句。 本篇范文全面概述了原文的要点。清楚地讲述了Little William坐车上学时，司机突然昏倒以及Little William冷静地处理这件事的全过程。层次清晰，语言流畅，过渡自然。用词精炼，概括性强。使用高级句型提升了本文的档次。 12 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60个词左右的内容概要。 Next month, about 30，000 runners will take to the streets of Boston, Massachusetts for one of the world's oldest and most famous races, the Boston Marathon. Nearly half the competitors in the 26.2－mile race will be women. But for most of the race's 119－year history, only men were officially allowed to compete. A woman named Roberta “Bobbi” Gibb helped change that in 1966, when she snuck into the marathon and finished ahead of most of the men. “Word went out around the world that a woman had done the impossible，” says Gibb. “It changed the way men thought about women.” 13 Gibb saw her first Boston Marathon in 1964, while running through her neighborhood. She was inspired to run the race herself. For nearly two years, Gibb trained to build the energy and strength she'd need to finish. But when she sent in an application for the 1966 race, it was rejected. At the time, the longest official races for women were only 1.5 miles. Many people didn't think women were physically capable of running longer distances. Running a marathon was also seen as “unladylike” . But the 23－year－old Gibb refused to let go of her dream. She came up with a plan to run the race anyway. On April 19, she showed up at the marathon wearing her brother's shorts and a baggy hooded sweatshirt to disguise that she was a woman. Gibb hid in the bushes near the starting line. When the race began, she jumped into the pack. Shortly into the race, Gibb took off her sweatshirt. To her surprise, the crowd cheered when they realized she was a woman. Gibb finished the race in 3 hours and 21 minutes—faster than two thirds of the male runners. Gibb opened the door for future female long－distance runners. In the years that followed, she and other women ran in the Boston Marathon, even though the rules still prohibited women from running in the race. Finally, in 1972, the marathon was officially opened to women. “It was bold of me to say, ‘I'm going to take on society and all its false beliefs，’” says Gibb. “It shows you what one person can do.” ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍ 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Boston (波士顿)马拉松的历史，并描写了历史人物Roberta “Bobbi” Gibb (罗伯塔“博比”吉布)争取参加马拉松比赛的过程。 17 [精彩范文] The text is mainly about a woman who ran the famous Boston Marathon for the first time many years ago. (要点1) Women were forbidden to take part in the Boston Marathon at first, because women were considered physically incapable of running a marathon. (要点2) Though Roberta Gibb practiced for the race, her application was refused. In 1966 when Gibb managed to enter the race, she finished faster than most of the men. (要点3) In 1972, women were officially allowed to participate in the race. (要点4) 18 R $