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第四部分写作共两节满分0分让:第一节满分15分
假定你是李华。你校英文报拟开辟“Stg”专栏,现就相关话题征求意见。
Topics to recommendl lfood safetyLlinformation safetyt fproperty
safetyttraffic safetyl-lphysicat safetyt tother
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dear editor,
..'mLi Hua,and I'm excited about the new:"Safety"column in our
schoot newspaper...
Here are two topics.frecommend:First,information safety is crucial
today,Many students use social media but tack awareness of ontine
risks,such as scams or privacy leaks.This topic can teach them how to..
protect personal data.Second,traffic safety matters greatly.Some
students ignore traffic rutes,risking accidents.Articles.on safe cycting or
pedestrian:habits coutd-save-tives,
These topics are practical and urgent.I hope they'tt be inctuded
Yours,ti Hua
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,:使之构成一篇影
...When lwas.21,1moved to Sydney,working as a waiterat a smatl
tocat restaurant..1wasn't sure what t wanted to do,and this uncertainty..
left me feeting lost.This big city was a soulless place and everyone was.
just out for themselves.The onty thing that truly gave me comfort was.
playing the flute笛子。My connection with the:flute began when t-
was.16.Determined to buy one,I worked at a supermarket earningjust
$2.35 an hour,When:t finalty bought it,it became my most vatued
possession.Every day I would come home and ptay it.The tunes helped..
me process.my emotions..One day.I was working at the restaurant
when someone asked me whatt was doing that night,Isaid,."I'm going to
be ptaying the flute at."and then I suddenty reatised that I hadn't
picked up my flute when I got off the train that day.fimmediatety and.
completely freaked out (7六神无主。Iraced to the train station to ask
if it had been handed in.It hadn't,butt gave them my number anyway in.
case it turned up.1 just thought,well it's gone stupidly,Ididnt even.
have my name written on the case.Ispent the following week in totat
guitt,feeling sorry for myself.Then,one day,I got a catl from someone
at CityRait saying they had my flute.I went into the tost property ptace.
at Centrat and there it was,among alt the lost bags and umbreltas.As1.
went to grab it,the guards there asked for my 1D.Itold them l had lost
my ID,and that it would take severat weeks to get a new one:And they.
said,well sorryyou've got to have your ID to get your flute back
注意·1:续写词数应为150左右;2
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请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。:Feeting quite desperate,t
said,"What if I play you a tune?"I finished my ptaying.
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Feeling quite desperate,Isaid,"What if I ptay you a tune?"The guards
exchanged glances but finally nodded.With trembling.hands,Ilifted the.:
flute to my lips and began to ptay a metody t had practiced counttess
times.The notes flowed efforttessly,fitting the room with a warmth that...
contrasted sharpty with the sterile tost and-found environment.As.1.
played,I noticed the guards.expressions soften.One even tapped his foot
stightly to the rhythm.The music seemed to bridge the gap between us,
transforming their initiat skepticism into reluctant smiles.
I finished my playing.To my retief,the otder guard chuckled and said,
"Wett that's proof enough for me.".He handed me the flute,adding,"Take
better care of it this time."Overwhelmed with gratitude I thanked them.
repeatedty.Walking out of the station,1 clutched the flute tightly,vowing
never to let caretessness separate us again,That night,as I played by my
apartment window,the city no tonger fett souttess.The music connected.
me to something targer=a reminder that kindness and passion coutd
thrive even in unexpected ptaces.From then on,Icarried my flute with.
renewed purpose,and Sydney gradualty became a city of possibilities.
rather than toneliness..
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解析1
情节合理:延续原文矛盾(无D取笛子),用音乐打动警卫自然解决冲
情感升华:通过音乐改变对城市的冷漠印象,紧扣前文”comfort"与"ost"怕
3.语言规范&使用"trembting hands'"."overwhetmed with
gratitude等高考常见表达,动作描写与心理描写结合;本
词数控制:两段共约150词,符合要求。
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