内容正文:
Writing
学案16
学案16
Writing
学可任务
记
[学习目标]学会写邀请信和读后续写中的“头部”动作描写。
[学习重点和难点]Writing skills
[学习策略指导]借助多媒体引导学生自主学习,合作探究。
教学环节设计
5.It will begin at 2 p.m.and last two hours,
Step1单元写作
during which 15 contestants will deliver their
speeches.
—写一封邀请信
它将于下午两点钟开始,持续两个小时,在此·
文体指导
期间将会有十五位参赛者发表演讲。
邀请信是人们在日常生活、社会生活和外事
6.There is also a party for both the teachers and
活动中经常使用的一种应用文体。此类文章要求
students in the afternoon.
简短、热情,给受邀者以真诚、亲切的感觉。我们
下午还有一个为老师和学生准备的聚会。
在写邀请信时,通常把写信目的、活动的时间、地
7.Since you are so eager to improve your
点、内容以及其他相关事项向对方作详细的说明,
English,it will prove to be a great chance.
然后表达期待对方接受邀请之情。写作中多用到
既然你如此渴望提高英语水平,这将会是一个
一般现在时和一般将来时。
很好的机会。
(一)基本框架
8.Ten students will give their speeches on "Man
1.开头:简要介绍。首先介绍作者的写信目的。
and Nature”.
2.主体:文章的主体。具体介绍邀请对方做什么。
十名学生将做“人与自然”的演讲。
3.结尾:表达期盼和祝愿。
9.The details of the activity are as follows.
(二)常用表达
活动细节如下。
1.I am writing to invite you to join the table
10.Hope to meet you at the training camp this
tennis team in our school.
summer.
我写信邀请你加入我们学校的乒乓球队。
希望今年夏天能在训练营见到你。
2.I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the
11.If you are interested,please sign up on our
nearby nursing home next Saturday for the
school website before September 10.
Double Ninth Festival.
如果你感兴趣,请在9月10日前在我们学校
我想邀请你下周六和我们一起去附近的敬老院
网站上报名。
过重阳节。
3.Knowing that you are interested in Chinese
12.We would be very grateful if you could
culture,I'm writing to invite you to see Peking
manage to come and we're looking forward
Opera at the City Theater with us next week.
to your early reply.
得知你对中国文化感兴趣,我写信邀请你下周
如果您能来,我们将非常感激,并期待您的早
和我们一起去城市剧院看京剧。
日回复。
4.Knowing that you are fond of classical music,I
13.I will have the great honor if you can come.
think it is a good chance for you.
如果您能来我将倍感荣幸。
知道你喜欢古典音乐,我认为对你来说这是一
14.If you are interested in it,please don't hesitate
个好机会。
to contact me.
5911
外研版英语选择性必修第一册
如果你对此感兴趣,请不要犹豫随时和我
5.如果您能用吉他弹首歌就太好了。
联系。
if you could play a
笔
典例详析
song on your guitar.
假定你是李华,你们班的外教Mr Brown将
6.我们期待您的到来,并希望到时候您能玩得
于下周回美国,你和同学们打算为他举办一场派
开心。
对,感谢他对大家的辅导和帮助。请你用英语给
and hoping that
Mr Brown写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加派对,内
you will have a good time then.
容包括:
[句式升级]
1.派对的时间和地点;
1.用动词-ing形式作状语改写句1
2.活动的内容;
3.表达愿望。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.用非限制性定语从句改写句4
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Brown,
[连句成篇](注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
Dear Mr Brown,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[审题构思]
1.明确体裁:本文为邀请信;
2.确定时态:本文的主体时态为一般将来时;
3.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第二人称;
4.确定内容:
①说明写信目的;
②具体介绍这次派对的情况;
Yours sincerely,
③表达愿望。
Li Hua
[遣词造句]
1.听说您下周要回美国,我们决定为您举办一场
Step2读后续写
派对。
动作描写“头部”动作
We hear that you're going back to America
词块积累
next week,so we decide to
l.scratch one's head挠头;苦思冥想;绞尽脑汁
2.我们将举办派对以感谢您在过去一年中对我们
2.hold one's head high
的指导和帮助。
高昂着头;昂首挺胸;抬起头来
We will hold the party
3.hang one's head in shame羞愧地低下头
during the past year.
4.nod one's head in agreement点头表示同意
3.派对于这个星期六下午6点在我们教学楼101
5.shake one's head in disbelief摇头表示不相信
教室开始。
6.have one's head in a book埋头读书
in Room 101 of
7.be banging one's head against a brick wall
our teaching building.
用头撞墙;徒劳无益;枉费心机
4.派对上将会有很多新颖的表演,您可以在派对
8.fall head first头朝下摔倒
上欣赏民间故事、歌曲和舞蹈。
at
佳句积累
the party,and you can enjoy folk tales,songs
1.She nodded her head in agreement.
and dances.
她点头表示同意。
1160
Writing
学案16
2.He managed to hold his head high and ignore
phone."He stared at it for some minutes.Then,
听
what people were saying.
he said slowly,pausing on every word,"I want to
他勉力昂首挺胸,不理会人家的闲言碎语。
take the cell phone.Mary could not believe her
笔
3.The boy fell head first down the stairs.
ears.She only stared at her brother,"You can't!
那男孩头朝下摔下了楼梯。
What if the owner comes back to look for it?"
4.The girls hung their heads in shame.
After making the decision,Keith quickly got
女孩子们羞愧地低下了头。
the cell phone and put it in his schoolbag.Then,
5.Whenever we see the girl she always has her
he took Mary's hand and led her out of the cafe
head in a book.
quickly.
无论何时我们看到这个女孩,她都在埋头
Once back home,Keith locked his room door
读书。
with trembling(颤抖的)hands..Inside his room,
6.Hearing what I said,he shook his head in
he took out the piece of beauty.Oh,he liked it so
disbelief.
much.He had his own cell phone.Soon,he was
听到我说的话,他摇头表示不相信。
polishing it happily.But Mary told him,"Keith,
7.Though he was in a bad mood,he dropped his
you cannot keep the cell phone.What will you
head to hide it and managed a smile.
tell our father about this?He will ask you how
尽管他心情不好,但是他低下头来掩饰,勉强笑
you got the cell phone.”Keith said quickly,“I
了一下。
will say a friend lent it to me..”Mary said,“Now
续写练笔
you are lying too.Oh dear!When has Keith
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头
turned so dishonest?”
语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Then,Mary saw a house phone number on
One afternoon after school,Mary and her
the cover of the cell phone."This is the girl's
brother,Keith,were eating at a cafe near their
phone number.Why don't we just call this
home.That afternoon,they had to share their
number?We will talk to her and ask her to come
table with another person.That person was a
and take back her cell phone,she was trying to
young lady in her twenties.After eating,she went
talk some sense into him.
to the restroom.Without realizing,she had left
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
her cell phone on the table.Five minutes later,
2.请按如下格式作答。
she came out and walked out of the cafe without
That night,Keith turned over in bed from
looking back.
time to time.
Mary saw the cell phone on the table.She
quickly told Keith,"Keith,the girl left behind her
cell phone."Keith looked at the cell phone.It
took his breath away.It was one of the latest
Mary was very happy to hear that.
models on the market.Keith had always wanted a
cell phone.But his parents had told him,"You
don't need one.You can always use the house
课后反思
6111Step 2
Mary was very happy to hear that.Back home,they phoned
练一练
the owner's house phone.A girl answered the phone.Keith
l.①whatever②however
③wherever
④whoever makes
asked,"Are you the owner of the cell phone?I'm Keith.I have
the most beautiful kite
your cell phone.Can you come and get it?"The girl replied
2.①are②did
"Yes!"excitedly,expressing her gratitude repeatedly.Ten
学案16 Writing
minutes later,she was at the same cafe to meet Keith.Handing
back the cell phone to her and seeing her smile happily,Keith
教学环节设计
realized that honesty was indeed the best policy.
Step 1
典例详析
Unit 5 Revealing nature
遣词造句
1.hold a party for you
学案l7 Starting out&Understanding ideas
2.in appreciation of your guidance and help
教学环节设计
3.It starts at 6 p.m.this Saturday
Step 1
4.A great many innovative performances will be put on
练一练
5.It would be great
l.①out②up③for④dating
6.We are looking forward to your arrival
2.①from②at③distant
句式升级
3.①answered②answering③for④to⑤in
1.Hearing that you're going back to America next week,we
4.①in②beyond③without
decide to hold a party for you.
5.①crowded②in/into③Crowds
2.A great many innovative performances will be put on at the
6.①to②yourself
party,where you can enjoy folk tales,songs and dances.
7.①Suspected②suspicious③n.犯罪嫌疑人
连句成篇
4suspected his neighbour of stealing
[参考范文]
8.①existence②on③There
Dear Mr Brown,
Step 2
Hearing that you're going back to America next week,we
练一练
decide to hold a party for you.I'm writing to invite you to take
l.①covered
part in it.
2 which/that was conducted in Australia in 2012
We will hold the party in appreciation of your guidance and
2.Das I might do in China
help during the past year.It starts at 6 p.m.this Saturday in
2As I was busy preparing for my final exam
Room 101 of our teaching building.A great many innovative
③With time going on
performances will be put on at the party,where you can enjoy
folk tales,songs and dances.In addition,it would be great if you
学案18 Using language
could play a song on your guitar.
教学环节设计
We are looking forward to your arrival and hoping that you
Step 1
will have a good time then.
练一练
Yours sincerely,
l.①in②It③It is characteristic of him;It is typical of him;
Li Hua
It is like him
Step 2
2.①to blame
②on;for③Blamed for the failure of
续写练笔
the performance
[参考范文]
3.①to answer②on③decline your kind invitation
That night,Keith turned over in bed from time to time.He
Step 2
had difficulty sleeping,uncertain about what he should do.Of
练一练
course,he liked the new cell phone.However,he was feeling
①to answer②to earn;to lose③was hard to understand
sorry for the owner.When he thought how sad the young lady
Step 3
would be at the loss of her cell phone,he was full of guilt and
即时训练1
shame.The next morning,after a long and restless night,he was
①had left②stayed③had written④travel(I)ed
determined to return the cell phone to the owner.After school,
⑤had known⑥had expected⑦had hoped
he told Mary,“I am going to phone the owner..”
⑧had finished