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专题10 书面表达8篇(期中专项训练)六年级英语上学期
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01 知识清单
02【题型一】命题作文 03【题型二】看图作文 04【题型三】应用文
知识清单
命题作文
常考的英语命题作文可归纳为写人、写物、写景、写事四个方面:
(1)写 “人” 的作文,可以从人物的籍贯、五官、衣着、喜好、性格特点等方面加以描述。
(2)写 “物” 的作文,同学们平时要多观察身边的一草一木,注意它们的颜色、形状、大小、习性等细节。
(3)写 “景” 的作文命题也是多种多样的。比如描写季节、你所生活的城市、学校等等。写景时,我们要按时间或空间的顺序来写。当然也可以根据内容的不同加以评价或陈述你喜欢的原因。
(4)写 “事” 时,要注意条理性,一般按时间、地点、人物、事件来记叙。运用时态要准确。
看图作文
写好看图作文的几个步骤:
(1)仔细观察每幅图片;
(2)把握每幅图的要点和图画间的内在联系,用最简单的词句概括每幅图的内容;
(3)补充每幅图的细节,如:时间、地点等;
(4)运用恰当的连接词或过渡词,连接成文。
应用文
应用文包括:通知、书信、日记、便条、启事、贺卡等。写应用文要注意:
(1)应用文的写作格式。应用文的格式是约定俗成的,不能独创一格。
(2)应用文的内容要力求简明扼要。应用文一定要把意思表达清楚。
(3)语言方面要求文字准确无误,通顺朴实。
【题型一】命题作文
(一)
同学们, 用你们手中的笔来描述一下祖国的首都北京, 介绍一下北京的景点、人口及地理位置, 并欢迎你们的朋友到北京来游玩。
提示:the Great Wall, Tian' anmen Square(天安门广场), Bird's Nest(鸟巢), capital(首都), Welcome to. . . (欢迎到……来。)
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同学们,你们集邮吗?你还有哪些爱好,请你以My hobby 为题把它写下来,与同学们分享。
My hobby
My hobby is _____________. __________________________________________________
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春节对我们来说是一个非常重要的节日,请你写一篇小短文向外国朋友介绍一下春节。
内容要点:(1) When is it?
(2) What do Chinese people do/ eat say…at the Spring Festival?
(3) What did you do at the Spring Festival last year?
(4) What are you going to do at the Spring Festival this year?
(5) What do you think of the Spring Festival?
要求:1. 短文要包括以上全部内容;
2. 条理清晰,语意连贯,书写规范;
3. 以语篇形式呈现,不少于6句话;
4. 不要出现真实的人名或校名。
The Spring Festival
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【题型二】看图作文
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下图是Peter的村庄,请用There is/are…的句型帮助Peter介绍一下他的村庄。
要求:1.语句通顺,符合图意;2.不少于5句话。
Hello! I'm Peter. This is my village.________________________________________
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英语课上,同学们正在谈论各自的网友。请你根据表格信息,以My e-friend为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:1.短文要包含表格中所有信息,可适当添加内容;2.语句通顺,时态正确,大小写和标点符号规范;3.不少于60词,所给提示不计入总词数。
Name
Tomas
Country
Age
Languages
English &Chinese
Hobbies
Dream
Summer holiday plans
My e-friend
Tomas is my e-friend.________________________________________________________
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【题型三】应用文
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阅读一:
Dear friends,
I am a teacher. I teach art in a university. I’m also a Chinese fan(中国粉丝). I love China very much. I’m looking for a pen pal. Do you want to be my pen pal? I live in Sydney. I often walk to work. That’s good exercise. I have many hobbies. I like doing sports, listening to music and acting. I join the acting club in my university. That’s fun. I like eating Chinese food. Dumplings and the Hot Pot are my favorite. They are delicious. Can you teach me to cook Chinese food?
I’m interested in Chinese traditional art(中国传统艺术) such as Peking Opera, acrobatics(杂技) and paper-cut(剪纸). Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history(有悠久的历史). I am learning Peking Opera(京剧) now. But I can speak only a little Chinese. Can you teach me Chinese? I want to read all the Peking Opera scripts. If you want to be my pen pal, please email me at 336699@qq.com or write to me on We-chat(微信).
Yours,
Linda
阅读二:
Career Day
Name: A
From: Henan, China
Way to work: by car
Hobby: writing, reading
Job: astronaut(宇航员)
Her story: She is a soldier(军人). She can fly very well. She is kind and hard-working. She likes flying in the blue sky. She loves China. She wanted to be an astronaut in the future.
Now, her dream comes true. She is the first Chinese woman in space. She is called the Flying Goddess of the moon(飞天嫦娥).
Name: B
From: Guangdong, China
Way to work: by bike
Hobby: doing sports, running
Job: sportsman, teacher
His story: In 2007, he became a professional(专业的) sportsman. He does exercise everyday. He also has a healthy life. He breaks many records(打破记录) in the races around the world. He won lots of medals(奖牌) for China. In 2022, he won the 20201CCTV “Touching the Heart of China” Prize. (“感动中国十大人物”)
Name: C
From: Australia
Way to work: on foot
Hobby: doing sports, listening to music, acting
Job: art teacher
Her Story: She wants to have a pen pal in China, so she can learn to cook Chinese food and speak Chinese.
刘洋以航天的方式弘扬中国文化,苏炳添以体育精神弘扬中国文化,身为小学生的我们可以怎么做?从身边小事做起,帮助别人也是弘扬传统文化的一种方式,假如你是Quanquan,想要和Linda成为笔友帮助她学习汉语,请结合阅读一和阅读二,介绍自己,给她写一封回信,至少60词。
Dear Linda,
I want to be your pen pal. I can help you learn Chinese.
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Yours,
Quanquan
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给你在美国的笔友Mike写一封信,内容包括:1. 欢迎他到中国来。2. 建议他去长城并简单介绍长城。要求:条理清晰,语言通顺。40词左右。
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Simon希望与你成为笔友。你给他写一封信介绍一下你自己。
内容:
Name: Ningning
Age: 12/13 Address: Shenyang, China
Other information: hobby (for example reading, singing, playing…)
Dear Simon,
My name is ________________________________________________________________
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参考范文
(一)
范文:
Beijing is the capital of China. It is in the north of China. We can visit the Great Wall, Tian' anmen Square, the Bird's Nest and so on.
The Great Wall is more than twenty thousand kilometres long. Beijing has got about twenty million people. It is big. Welcome to Beijing!
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目要求写祖国的首都北京。然后再阐述北京的景点、人口及地理位置, 并欢迎你们的朋友到北京来游玩。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:capital首都,the Great Wall 长城,Tian' anmen Square天安门广场,the Bird's Nest鸟巢, kilometres千米
参考句型:Beijing is…;We can…;…more than…
(二)
范文:
My hobby
My hobby is reading books. I have got many books. These are storybooks. I love stories very much. These are books about famous persons. These are books about Chinese history. These are English books. These are picture books. I read books every day. I love reading books.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求以My hobby 为题介绍一下自己的爱好,注意描述时要用第一人称,且文章为一般现在时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:hobby爱好;read books读书 ;story books故事书;English books英语书;picture books图画书;
参考句型:My hobby is…;These are…;I love…
(三)
范文:
The Spring Festival is usually in January or February. It is an important festival in China. At the Spring Festival, people eat dumplings. The children wear new clothes. They get red packets from their parents and relatives. In the evening, they light firecrackers. People say "Happy New Year" to each other. Last year, we visited our friends in Chengdu. I'm going to travel to a beautiful place this Spring Festival.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求根据内容要点,写一篇小短文介绍一下春节。然后再阐述春节是什么时候,人们在春节做什么、吃什么、说什么,去年春节做了什么,今天春节打算做什么,认为春节怎么样。注意文章时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:usually通常,January一月,February二月,important重要的,dumpling饺子,packet红包,relative亲戚,light firecrackers放鞭炮
参考句型:The Spring Festival is …; It is …;At the Spring Festival …;In the evening, they …;Last year, we ...;
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范文:
Hello! I'm Peter. This is my village. It's beautiful. There is a river in front of the village. The water is clean. Near the village, there are some mountains. There is a big tree beside my house. Under the tree, there is a cat. I love my village.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目要求用There is/are…的句型帮助Peter介绍一下他的村庄。然后再阐述村庄的前后或附近都有什么以及他对村庄的情感。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:village村庄, in front of, near在…附近, beside在….旁边
参考句型:This is…;There is …;There are…
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范文:
My e-friend
Tomas is my e-friend. He is from Canada. He is fourteen years old. He can speak English and Chinese. So he can send me e-mails in Chinese. I can send him e-mails in English. He likes reading books. He likes playing football. And he is good at it. He is going to Australia for his summer holiday. He will go there by plane. He wants to be an astronaut in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目是根据表格信息,以My e-friend为题,写一篇介绍网友的英语短文,从个人信息、爱好、暑假计划、梦想等方面介绍。人称是第三人称,时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。要求:短文要包含表格中所有信息,可适当添加内容;语句通顺,时态正确,大小写和标点符号规范;不少于60词,所给提示不计入总词数。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型:
参考词汇:Canada加拿大,fourteen十四,English英语,Chinese汉语,reading books阅读,playing football踢足球,by plane坐飞机,Australia澳大利亚,astronaut宇航员
参考句型:He is…;He can…;He likes…;He is going to…;He will…
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范文:
Dear Linda,
I want to be your pen pal. I can help you learn Chinese. I’m Quanquan. I live in Shandong, China. I am studying at Xinhua Primary School. I also go to school on foot. I want to be an astronaut like Liu Yang. So I must study hard and do more exercise. I like singing, cooking and playing football. I often cook Chinese food after school. My favourite food is jiaozi. I can teach you to cook Chinese food. Can I be your pen pal? Please tell me.
Yours,
Quanquan
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求结合阅读一和阅读二,以小学生Quanquan的身份给Linda写一封回信,可以写一写来自哪里、上学方式、兴趣爱好、能力等。注意文章时态是一般现在时,并满足词数的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考词汇:Xinhua Primary School新华小学,astronaut宇航员,study hard努力学习,do more exercise多做运动,singing唱歌,cooking烹饪,playing football踢足球,Chinese food中餐
参考句型:I’m…;I live in…;I also go to school…;I want to be…;So I must…;I like…; I often…;I can…
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范文:
Dear Mike,
How are you? I’m in China. Welcome to China. There are many famous buildings in China. The Great Wall is in China. We can climb the Great Wall in Beijing. It’s a very old place. It’s more than two thousand years old. And it’s very long. It’s more than forty thousand li long. That is twenty thousand kilometres. We can’t walk all of the Great Wall. It’s too long. But we can climb some of it. Do you want to come?
Write to me soon.
Your friend, Daming
【详解】1. 题干解读:要求给迈克写一封信。首先要先欢迎他来中国。介绍中国的一些著名景点。文中讲述了长城的悠久历史和其长度。然后再建议去长城参观一下。最后写自己对于他到来的心情。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型:
参考词汇:welcome to欢迎来到,famous buildings著名的建筑,Great Wall长城,more than超过
参考句型:There are many…;We can…;It’s more than…
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范文:
Dear Simon,
My name is Ningning. I am 12 years old. I live in Shenyang, China. I am learning English. I can speak some English. I like reading books. I often read books about the US. I want to know more about the US. I can sing English songs. I like playing football. I play football with my friend every weekend. Please write to me. We can be pen friends.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目要求给西蒙写一封信。阐述姓名,年龄,地址,爱好。注意文章为一般现在时态。
2. 参考词汇与句型:
参考单词:learn学习,speak说,English英语,read books看书,the US美国,play football踢足球,weekend周末,pen friend笔友
参考句型:I am…years old.; I am…;I can…; I like…;I often…;
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