专题01 紧急救援（讲义） - 高中英语读后续写微情境万能模板

专题01 紧急救援写作指导 识 1. 动作描写（短促有力，多用连动/分词结构） • 核心句型： ①Sb. sprang up/leapt forward, grabbed sth. and dashed towards... ②With sth. clutched in hand, Sb. dashed over, knelt down and set about doing... ③Racing against time, Sb. pulled ... with all one’s strength. • 仿写： 1 Lily ___________, _________the first-aid kit and ________________the boy lying motionless on the sidewalk. 2 With a rope __________________, Tom _____________, _____________ and _________ tying the rope around his waist. ③ Racing against time, the firefighter _______open the twisted car door ______________________. • 翻译： 句型① Sb. sprang up/leapt forward, grabbed sth. and dashed towards...（某人猛地站起/冲上前，抓起某物，朝……冲去） 1. 中文翻译：听到孩子的尖叫声，玛丽猛地站起身，抓起外套，朝公园冲去。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 中文翻译：警报响起时，保安冲上前，抓起衣服，朝紧急出口跑去。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 中文翻译：看到着火的房子，汤姆猛地站起来，抓起灭火器，朝大楼冲去。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型② With sth. clutched in hand, Sb. dashed over, knelt down and set about doing...（手里紧攥着某物，某人冲过去，跪倒在地，开始做……） 4. 中文翻译：露西手里紧攥着急救包，冲过去跪倒在地，开始为徒步旅行者处理伤口。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 5. 中文翻译：杰克手里紧攥着绳子，冲过去跪倒在地，开始把它系在树干上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 6. 中文翻译：苏珊手里紧攥着毯子，冲过去跪倒在地，开始给孩子盖上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型③ Racing against time, Sb. pulled ... with all one’s strength.（争分夺秒，某人用尽全身力气拉……） 7. 中文翻译：争分夺秒，救援人员用尽全身力气把被困矿工从洞穴里拉了出来。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 8. 中文翻译：争分夺秒，莉莉用尽全身力气把溺水的小狗从冰冷的河里拉了上来。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 中文翻译：争分夺秒，消防员们用尽全身力气把受伤的司机从变形的汽车里拉了出来。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 心理描写（聚焦紧张、担忧、坚定，用介词短语/从句补充） • 核心句型： ① Sb.’s eyes widened with horror/alarm as... ② Sb. fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on... ③ A surge of relief washed over Sb. when... • 仿写： ① Maria’s eyes ____________________ as the child slipped off the balcony. ② Jack __________________________, ________________________stopping the bleeding with clean bandages. ③ _______________________________ the rescuers when they heard the trapped girl’s weak cry for help. • 翻译： 句型① Sb.’s eyes widened with horror/alarm as...：当看到……，某人惊恐/惊慌地睁大双眼。 1. 中文翻译：当看到他脚下的地面开始塌陷，徒步旅行者惊恐地睁大双眼。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 中文翻译：当看到一个孩子在水中剧烈挣扎，救生员惊慌地睁大双眼。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 中文翻译：当看到火焰突然冲破了紧闭的房门，消防员惊恐地睁大双眼。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型② Sb. fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on...：某人克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在……上 4. 中文翻译：医生克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在止住伤者的严重出血上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 5. 中文翻译：救援人员克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在引导迷路的登山者安全走下湿滑的悬崖上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 6. 中文翻译：志愿者克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在对失去意识的伤者实施心肺复苏术上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型③ A surge of relief washed over Sb. when...：当……时，某人心中涌起一阵释然。 7. 中文翻译：当救援人员最终将被困矿工救出时，心中涌起一阵释然。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 8. 中文翻译：当救护车及时赶到救治她的婴儿时，这位母亲心中涌起一阵释然。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 中文翻译：当女孩被安全抬上直升机时，他心中涌起一阵释然。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 1. 火中救人 莉莉猛地站起身，抓起灭火器冲向着火的卧室。她紧握着灭火器，快步冲过去跪下，开始扑灭床边的火焰。争分夺秒间，她用尽全力拖拽着失去意识的男孩。看到天花板开始开裂，她惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将他拖向安全地带。当两人最终逃出燃烧的建筑物时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。 2. 水中救人 马克猛地站起身，抓起绳子冲向河流。他紧握着绳子，快步冲过去跪下，开始把绳子系在一棵树上。争分夺秒间，河水裹挟着两人向下游冲去，他用尽全力拖拽着溺水的少年。看到男孩的挣扎越来越微弱，马克惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但他强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将他拉向岸边。当男孩在地面上喘过气来时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上马克的心头。 3. 车祸救人 马克猛地站起身，从车里抓起急救包，冲向车辆。他紧握着急救包，快步冲过去跪下，开始检查受伤的司机。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽着被困的女子，引擎处已冒出缕缕青烟。看到一丝火苗闪烁，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地解开她的安全带。当他成功将司机拖到路边时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 4. 地震救人 当地面剧烈摇晃时，马克猛地站起身，抓起手电筒冲向着倒塌的教室。他紧握着电筒，快步冲过去跪下，开始清理破碎的桌椅。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽着瑟瑟发抖的学生。又一次余震袭来，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将她拖向安全的区域。当两人安然无恙时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 5. 突发疾病 艾丽斯猛地站起身，抓起急救包冲向老人。她紧握着急救包，快步跑过去跪下，开始实施心肺复苏术。争分夺秒间，她用尽全力按压老人的胸膛。看到老人短暂停止呼吸，她惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地投入救援。当老人咳嗽一声并恢复意识时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。 6. 迷路救援 卢卡斯猛地站起身，抓起手电筒冲进森林。他紧握着电筒，快步跑过去跪下，开始呼喊那个迷路女孩的名字。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拨开灌木丛。随着夜色渐浓，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地跟着脚印前行。当他发现那个瑟瑟发抖的孩子在树后时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上心头。 7. 虎口脱险 杰克猛地站起身，抓起棍子冲向小径。他紧握着棍子，快步冲过去跪下，开始用棍子抵住熊的爪子。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽被困的朋友。看到熊愤怒地咆哮，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将朋友拖向安全地带。当两人最终逃掉时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 8. 高空欲坠 看到孩子在阳台栏杆上，汤姆猛地站起身，抓起毯子冲向着那栋楼。他紧握着毯子，快步跑过去跪下，开始和路人一起把毯子铺展开来。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力将毯子拉紧。看着孩子失去平衡，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地指挥大家抓住毯子。当孩子安全着落时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题01 紧急救援写作指导 识 1. 动作描写（短促有力，多用连动/分词结构） • 核心句型： ①Sb. sprang up/leapt forward, grabbed sth. and dashed towards... ②With sth. clutched in hand, Sb. dashed over, knelt down and set about doing... ③Racing against time, Sb. pulled ... with all one’s strength. • 仿写： 1 Lily ___________, _________the first-aid kit and ________________the boy lying motionless on the sidewalk. 2 With a rope __________________, Tom _____________, _____________ and _________ tying the rope around his waist. ③ Racing against time, the firefighter _______open the twisted car door ______________________. 答案： ①Lily sprang up, grabbed the first-aid kit and dashed towards the boy lying motionless on the sidewalk. ②With a rope clutched in hand, Tom dashed over, knelt down and set about tying the rope around his waist. ③Racing against time, the firefighter pulled open the twisted car door with all his strength. • 翻译： 句型① Sb. sprang up/leapt forward, grabbed sth. and dashed towards...（某人猛地站起/冲上前，抓起某物，朝……冲去） 1. 中文翻译：听到孩子的尖叫声，玛丽猛地站起身，抓起外套，朝公园冲去。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 中文翻译：警报响起时，保安冲上前，抓起衣服，朝紧急出口跑去。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 中文翻译：看到着火的房子，汤姆猛地站起来，抓起灭火器，朝大楼冲去。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型② With sth. clutched in hand, Sb. dashed over, knelt down and set about doing...（手里紧攥着某物，某人冲过去，跪倒在地，开始做……） 4. 中文翻译：露西手里紧攥着急救包，冲过去跪倒在地，开始为徒步旅行者处理伤口。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 5. 中文翻译：杰克手里紧攥着绳子，冲过去跪倒在地，开始把它系在树干上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 6. 中文翻译：苏珊手里紧攥着毯子，冲过去跪倒在地，开始给孩子盖上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型③ Racing against time, Sb. pulled ... with all one’s strength.（争分夺秒，某人用尽全身力气拉……） 7. 中文翻译：争分夺秒，救援人员用尽全身力气把被困矿工从洞穴里拉了出来。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 8. 中文翻译：争分夺秒，莉莉用尽全身力气把溺水的小狗从冰冷的河里拉了上来。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 中文翻译：争分夺秒，消防员们用尽全身力气把受伤的司机从变形的汽车里拉了出来。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 答案： 1.Hearing the child’s scream, Mary sprang up, grabbed her coat and dashed towards the park. 2.When the alarm rang, the security guard leapt forward, grabbed his clothes and dashed towards the emergency exit. 3.Spotting the burning house, Tom sprang up, grabbed a fire extinguisher and dashed towards the building. 4.With a first-aid kit clutched in hand, Lucy dashed over, knelt down and set about dealing with the hiker’s wound. 5.With the rope clutched in hand, Jack dashed over, knelt down and set about tying it to the tree trunk. 6.With a blanket clutched in hand, Susan dashed over, knelt down and set about covering the child. 7.Racing against time, the rescuers pulled the trapped miner out of the cave with all their strength. 8.Racing against time, Lily pulled the drowning dog out of the icy river with all her strength. 9.Racing against time, the firefighters pulled the injured driver out of the twisted car with all their strength. 2. 心理描写（聚焦紧张、担忧、坚定，用介词短语/从句补充） • 核心句型： ① Sb.’s eyes widened with horror/alarm as... ② Sb. fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on... ③ A surge of relief washed over Sb. when... • 仿写： ① Maria’s eyes ____________________ as the child slipped off the balcony. ② Jack __________________________, ________________________stopping the bleeding with clean bandages. ③ _______________________________ the rescuers when they heard the trapped girl’s weak cry for help. 答案： ① Maria’s eyes widened with horror as the child slipped off the balcony. ② Jack fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on stopping the bleeding with clean bandages. ③ A surge of relief washed over the rescuers when they heard the trapped girl’s weak cry for help. • 翻译： 句型① Sb.’s eyes widened with horror/alarm as...：当看到……，某人惊恐/惊慌地睁大双眼。 1. 中文翻译：当看到他脚下的地面开始塌陷，徒步旅行者惊恐地睁大双眼。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 中文翻译：当看到一个孩子在水中剧烈挣扎，救生员惊慌地睁大双眼。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 中文翻译：当看到火焰突然冲破了紧闭的房门，消防员惊恐地睁大双眼。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型② Sb. fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on...：某人克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在……上 4. 中文翻译：医生克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在止住伤者的严重出血上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 5. 中文翻译：救援人员克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在引导迷路的登山者安全走下湿滑的悬崖上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 6. 中文翻译：志愿者克制住恐慌的冲动，将全部注意力集中在对失去意识的伤者实施心肺复苏术上。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 句型③ A surge of relief washed over Sb. when...：当……时，某人心中涌起一阵释然。 7. 中文翻译：当救援人员最终将被困矿工救出时，心中涌起一阵释然。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 8. 中文翻译：当救护车及时赶到救治她的婴儿时，这位母亲心中涌起一阵释然。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 中文翻译：当女孩被安全抬上直升机时，他心中涌起一阵释然。 英文：____________________________________________________________________________ 答案： 1. The hiker’s eyes widened with horror as the ground beneath him began to collapse. 2. The lifeguard’s eyes widened with alarm as she spotted a child struggling violently in the water. 3. The firefighter’s eyes widened with horror as flames suddenly burst through the closed door. 4. The doctor fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on stopping the victim’s severe bleeding. 5. The rescuer fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on guiding the lost climber down the slippery cliff safely. 6. The volunteer fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on performing CPR on the unconscious victim. 7. A surge of relief washed over the rescuers when they finally rescued the trapped miner. 8. A surge of relief washed over the mother when the ambulance arrived just in time to treat her baby. 9. A surge of relief washed over the him when the girl was lifted onto the helicopter safely. 1. 火中救人 莉莉猛地站起身，抓起灭火器冲向着火的卧室。她紧握着灭火器，快步冲过去跪下，开始扑灭床边的火焰。争分夺秒间，她用尽全力拖拽着失去意识的男孩。看到天花板开始开裂，她惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将他拖向安全地带。当两人最终逃出燃烧的建筑物时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。 答案： Lily sprang up, grabbed the fire extinguisher and dashed towards the burning bedroom. With the extinguisher clutched in hand, she dashed over, knelt down and set about putting out the flames near the bed. Racing against time, she pulled the unconscious boy with all her strength. Her eyes widened with horror as the ceiling started to crack, but she fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on dragging him to safety. A surge of relief washed over her when they finally escaped the burning building. 2. 水中救人 马克猛地站起身，抓起绳子冲向河流。他紧握着绳子，快步冲过去跪下，开始把绳子系在一棵树上。争分夺秒间，河水裹挟着两人向下游冲去，他用尽全力拖拽着溺水的少年。看到男孩的挣扎越来越微弱，马克惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但他强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将他拉向岸边。当男孩在地面上喘过气来时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上马克的心头。 答案： Mark sprang up, grabbed the rope and dashed towards the river. With the rope clutched in hand, he dashed over, knelt down and set about tying it to a tree. Racing against time, he pulled the drowning teenager with all his strength as the current dragged them downstream. His eyes widened with alarm as the boy’s struggles grew weaker, but he fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on pulling him to the bank. A surge of relief washed over Mark when the boy gasped for air on the ground. 3. 车祸救人 马克猛地站起身，从车里抓起急救包，冲向车辆。他紧握着急救包，快步冲过去跪下，开始检查受伤的司机。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽着被困的女子，引擎处已冒出缕缕青烟。看到一丝火苗闪烁，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地解开她的安全带。当他成功将司机拖到路边时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 答案： Mark sprang up, grabbed the first-aid kit from his car and dashed towards the vehicle. With the kit clutched in hand, he dashed over, knelt down and set about checking the injured driver. Racing against time, he pulled the trapped woman with all his strength as smoke emerged from the engine. His eyes widened with alarm as a small flame flickered, but he fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on freeing her seatbelt. A surge of relief washed over him when he succeeded in dragging the driver to the roadside. 4. 地震救人 当地面剧烈摇晃时，马克猛地站起身，抓起手电筒冲向着倒塌的教室。他紧握着电筒，快步冲过去跪下，开始清理破碎的桌椅。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽着瑟瑟发抖的学生。又一次余震袭来，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将她拖向安全的区域。当两人安然无恙时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 答案： When the ground shook violently, Mark sprang up, grabbed the flashlight and dashed towards the collapsed classroom. With the light clutched in hand, he dashed over, knelt down and set about clearing the broken desks. Racing against time, he pulled the trembling student with all his strength. His eyes widened with alarm as another aftershock hit, but he fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on dragging her to the safe area. A surge of relief washed over him when they were safe. 5. 突发疾病 艾丽斯猛地站起身，抓起急救包冲向老人。她紧握着急救包，快步跑过去跪下，开始实施心肺复苏术。争分夺秒间，她用尽全力按压老人的胸膛。看到老人短暂停止呼吸，她惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地投入救援。当老人咳嗽一声并恢复意识时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。 答案： Alice sprang up, grabbed the first-aid bag and dashed towards the elderly man. With the bag clutched in hand, she dashed over, knelt down and set about performing CPR. Racing against time, she pressed his chest with all her strength. Her eyes widened with alarm as he stopped breathing briefly, but she fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on the rescue. A surge of relief washed over her when the man coughed and regained consciousness. 6. 迷路救援 卢卡斯猛地站起身，抓起手电筒冲进森林。他紧握着电筒，快步跑过去跪下，开始呼喊那个迷路女孩的名字。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拨开灌木丛。随着夜色渐浓，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地跟着脚印前行。当他发现那个瑟瑟发抖的孩子在树后时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上心头。 答案： Lucas sprang up, grabbed the flashlight and dashed towards the forest. With the light clutched in hand, he dashed over, knelt down and set about calling the lost girl’s name. Racing against time, he pulled aside bushes with all his strength. His eyes widened with alarm as darkness closed in, but he fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on following the footprints. A surge of relief washed over him when he spotted the shivering child behind a tree. 7. 虎口脱险 杰克猛地站起身，抓起棍子冲向小径。他紧握着棍子，快步冲过去跪下，开始用棍子抵住熊的爪子。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力拖拽被困的朋友。看到熊愤怒地咆哮，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地将朋友拖向安全地带。当两人最终逃掉时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 答案： Jake sprang up, grabbed his stick and dashed towards the path. With the stick clutched in hand, he dashed over, knelt down and set about putting it against the bear’s paws. Racing against time, he pulled his trapped friend with all his strength. His eyes widened with horror as the bear roared angrily, but he fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on dragging his friend to safety. A surge of relief washed over him when they finally escaped. 8. 高空欲坠 看到孩子在阳台栏杆上，汤姆猛地站起身，抓起毯子冲向着那栋楼。他紧握着毯子，快步跑过去跪下，开始和路人一起把毯子铺展开来。争分夺秒间，他用尽全力将毯子拉紧。看着孩子失去平衡，他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛，但强压下恐慌的冲动，全神贯注地指挥大家抓住毯子。当孩子安全着落时，一阵如释重负的感觉涌上他的心头。 答案： Seeing the child on the balcony railing, Tom sprang up, grabbed the blanket and dashed towards the building. With the blanket clutched in hand, he dashed over, knelt down and set about spreading it wide with the help of passers-by. Racing against time, he pulled the blanket with all his strength. His eyes widened with alarm as the child lost balance, but he fought back the urge to panic, focusing all attention on guiding everyone to hold the blanket. A surge of relief washed over him when the child landed safely. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $