内容正文:
2021年全国高考1卷英语作文素材二=衡水体训练
第-节满分15分】
你校英文报ouh正在庆祝创刊士周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括
1:读报的经历:2.喜爱的栏日;3,期望和祝福。
答案
Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded,.In my memory,it is Youth.
that accompanies me through my whole high:schoot.:
When feeting depressed,l:often choose to enjoy the novet part which
includes a lot of imaginative stories.These stories can relieve my stress.
and broaden my horizon.Besides,I even submitted my own fiction to
Youth Refused as l was,I stilt received some great encouragement,.which
gives me confidence.
t do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising..
future.
解析
分析本文是:
篇应用文,向校刊o表达自己的经历,并送土自己的祝福。
详解1词汇积累
建立:found之establish
沿丧的.:upset.=depressed
得到:receive=obtain
赏析:enjoy→appreciate
2句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:These stories can retieve my stress and broaden:my horizon,
拓展句Not:only can these storics retieve:my stress,but atso they can.
broaden my horizon.
f点睛1高分句型1 then feeting depressed:,toften chose to enjoy the
novet part which inctudes a lot of imaginative stories:
运用了wich引导的限制性定语从句
f高分句型21 Refused asIwas,1 stitt received some great encouragement,
which gives me confidence to be a writer.
运用了s引导的让步状语从句还运用了wch引导的非限制性定语从句
第=节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇影
A.MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filted with excitement as they thought of the surprise they
were ptanning for Mother's Day.How pteased and proud Mother would be
when they brought her breakfast in bed,They planned to make French..
toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.
There was nothing to it..Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at tast,The alarm rang at 6.a.m.The pair went down.
the stairs quietty to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.
They put some rice into a pot of water and teft it to boil while they made.
the French toast..Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.
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Jenna found the bread and put two stices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff
turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything..
was going smoothty until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too
hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt..
piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she
turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the tid starting to
shake.The next minute,the porridge boited over and put out the fire.
tenna panicked.Thankfutly,.Jeff stayed catm and turned off the gas
quickly.But the stove was a mess.now..Jenna totd.Jeff to clean it up so..
they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge:But Jeff's hand
touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put
his hand in cold water,Then she caught the smett of burning.Oh:dear!
The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as welt
注意·1:续写词数应为150左右。
2,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins tooked around them in disappointment their father
appeared,
The:twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
答案
As the twins tooked around them in disappointment,their father
appeared.Father's appearing was tike a:savior to the two chitdren.Under
the guidance of their father,they took positive actions and started all
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over again
They made the bread and then went on cooking.porridge:Father hetped..
then adjust the fire,which was the key to success,It was alt right this
time:Deticious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When
their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she.
was very surprised.It was not onty the gift,but the tove of the children for
her that moved her very much.The two chitdren coutd finish cooking.a.
breakfast,which she didn't expect..The children said toudly,"Happy
Mother's Day!"Mother hugged them tightty and kissed them again and..
again
解析
分析本文以母亲节为线索展开:讲述子双胞胎a和e为了献给母亲
自己动手
做起饭餐来,:但是不幸的是,他们连连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获亻
亲,妈妈非常感动的故事。
洋解引1段落续写:-
①由第
段首句内容当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。“可知,身
亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。:
②由第一段首内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼土,叫醒了他们的母亲。
”可
孩子们的礼物早餐,非常感动。
2续写线索帮助指导积极一献礼一感动
3词汇激活
行为类
①帮助:hetp/assist
②指导,guide/conduct
③:献礼.presant a gift/,give a gif中
情绪类
①积极positive /positively/takle positive actions
②:感动:noved/touched
点睛
f高分句型1h:Fathar hetped them adjust the fire,which:was the key to
succe5s.which导的非限制性定语从句
f高分句型:It was not only the brealfast,but.the love of the children for
her that:moved her very much:f使用not
only but falso)句型及强调句型
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