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2022年全国高考2卷英语作文素材二=衡水体训练
【真题
第四部分写作(共两节、满分40分
第一节(满分15分》
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Ta收ad
Tak"的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做-次访谈。内容包
1节目介绍:
2访谈的时间和话题。
(解题思路(分段落,列提纲
第一段:作用开篇。要求开门见山,点名主题,篇幅:2:3行:2句
自我介绍,表明写作目的,即邀请外教接受访谈。
t am ti Hua,in charge of "Tatk and Tatk',an English program from the
Campus.Broadcasting.Station,As your student as welt.I witl be very
honored if you can accept my invitation to do an interview.
第一段作用文章主体内容。要求·层次分明,逻辑清晰,要点齐全。
1节目介绍;2:访谈的时间和话题。
"Tatk and Tatk"is a face-to-face interview about some hot topics in and
out of campus.Besides its practical content,ranging from history events.
to the latest foot-balt games,the the interviewees,who are invited to.
attend this program,also contribute a tot to its high reputation.
Broadcast every day,:"Tatk and Tatk"contains a targe amount of
information from domestic affairs to the international politicat situation,
from history events to the latest footbatl games:And the most important.
character is its fast pace:Because of this.fast pace,.news.programs can..
contain much information in a short time.
第三段:结尾段,作用:收尾,点题,补充其他细节等。要求·概括,
I'd like to interview something about your impression on China,about..
how you comment your life here and your advice on how to improve arat
English.If it is convenient for you,the date is set at 7.p.m.next Monday.
By the way,we've prepared a secret gift for you and ptease calt me at
anytime if you have any question.fhank you in advance.
【解题思路(列好提纲后三审
1:检查时态、语态、单词拼写、标点符号是否有错误。
2句子的时态,主谓,代词要做到一致:
句子谓语要完整:
习惯用法,:固定搭配要正确
冠词,形容词,副词及连词要得当;
有没有合适的被动语态:
有没有双谓语或者没有谓语的情况等。
根据内容要点改写句子合并句子用非谓语动词改写句子用高级替
【参考范文1
Dear Caroline,
t am:Li Hua,in charge of "Tatk and Tatk',an English program from the.
Campus.Broadcasting Station.As your student as welt.Iwitl be very
honored if you can accept my invitation to do an interview..
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"Tatk and fatk"is a face-to-face interview about some hot topics in and...
out of campus.Besides its practical content,ranging from history events.
to the latest foot-balt games,thethe interviewees,who are invited to
attend this program,also contribute a tot to its high reputation,such as..
our principal and our mayor as wetl Broadcast every day,"Tatk and
Talk"contains a targe amount of information with a fast pace,because.of
which,news programs.can contain much information in a:short time:..
I'd like to interview something about your impression on this Winter
Otympics in China and your advice on how to improve oral Engtish.If it is
convenient for you,the date is set at 7p.m.next Monday.By the way,
weve prepared a secret gift for you and please call me at anytime if you..
have any question.Thank you in advance.(180)
Yours sincerety,
ti Hua
(参考范文2
Dear Caroline,
t am Li Hua,head of "Tatk and Tatk",an Engtish program from the
Campus.Broadcasting Station and t am wiring to invite you as an
interviewee about Engtish study,
would like to introduce this program to you.Aiming to promote the
distance between teachers and students,.it has enjoyed popularity in.
campus,owing to its casuat and easy style.Every interviewed teacher
will tatk freety to:share anything interesting with us,Through this.
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interview,a better retationship is buitt up and we gain a tot.
If it is convenient for you next Monday.t expect to have a wonderful tatk..
with you from5 p.m.to 6 p.m.The topic is proper ways to better our
English learning.We would be grateful for your presence and get your
appropriate instruction before long.(132)
Yours.sincerely,
ti Hua
真题
第二节:读后续写(满分25分
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇号
It was the day of the big cross-country run,Students from seven different
primary schoots in and around the smalt town were warming up and
walking the route ()through thick.evergreen forest.
t tooked around and finally spotted David,who was standing by himself.
off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old,His usuat big
toothy smite was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he
wasn't with the other chitdren,He hesitated and then said he had decided
not to run.
What was wrong?He had worked so hard for this event!
t quickly searched the crowd for the:schoot's coach and asked him what..:
had happened."Iwas afraid that kids from other schoots would laugh at
him,"he explained uncomfortabty."Igave him the choice to run or not,
and let him decide:
tbit:back my frustration:懊恼:I:knew the coach meant welt-he thought:
he was doing the right thing.After making sure that David coutd run if he
wanted,I turned to find him coming towards me,his small body rocking
from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running.
tike other chitdren,but at schoot his classmates thought of him as a
regular kid.He atways participated to the best of his abitity in whatever.
they were doing.That was why none of the children thought it unusuat
that David had decided to join the cross-country team,It just took him
longer-that's all.David had not missed a single practice,and although he
always finished his run tong after the other chitdren,he did always finish.
As a speciat education teacher at the school I was familiar with the
chattenges David faced and proud of his strong determination,
注意
1续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(解题思路(分层次,列提纲】
1.理清文脉之后,迅速看下续写所给的首句。
我们坐在一起坐下,但大卫不看我。
这句话包含了哪些信息?
人物:我和David,
地点篱笆附近,周围森林密布。
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大卫的动作体现的心理:躲避我的目光,刻意的回避,表明心理纠结要
2第二段首句
我看着大卫和其他选手一起上起跑线。
这句话包含了哪些信息?
人物我和D0vid,:还有比赛的其他选手
地点起跑线
大卫为什么会重新参加比赛,刚才发生的事情需要我们进行合理的推测,
继续推理,:寻找一个最合理的情节和最惊艳的主旨。在不断反转申彰显
思路1:第一段侧重点在说服,重拾信心上进行刻画。主角是Davd。:
第一段侧重在于描写比赛场面。David
勇敢冲过重点,得到大家的认可。
思路2:第一段不变。
第=段侧重点不变,但是Dvid
最终倒下,没能跑到终点。但是倒下后并没有放弃比赛,而是一瘸一拐
故事发生在比赛前丑分钟,:David
的信心动摇想退赛。我们续写的就是比赛前几分钟和Dad一
参加比赛的故事,时间线不要拉的太长。
【参考范文习
We sat down next to each:other,but David wouldn't look at me..His eyes.
deliberately avoided mine,and his:smile also disappeared on the face,
with his limbs shaking as weak as leaves."It".s not the reat you,David"1.
broke the silence.walked to his front,holding.his shoulders and
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continued,Listen,David,you have prepared so much for this running,if.:
you want to quit,I will be for you."David burst into tears.Suddenly,a
group of kids emerged around us.The came up to David,and embraced.
him and shouted "Cheerup.David,you can do it !"David stopped crying.
and his face lit up by their encouragement.Turing around,he gave me a.
smite and watked to the starting tine where other kids were ready to
start (124)
t watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
Start!Atl the kids disappeared swiftly like lightening into the forest,
leaving David staggering and struggting his steps forward,But his body..
was uncontrollabte,soon his heets were bleeding,because his shoes were
worn out.After a long time,David was stilt 100 meters away from the
finishing tine..The path was lined with the coach and other kids in tears,.
who were informed of the poor body condition of David.No one taughed.
at him,but cheered up and clapped for him.David was touched and he
was stepping forward when he was tripped by a.big rock.".He is
bleeding!"cried the other kids."David!David!David!"the voice became.
louder and touder until David dragged his teg surpassing the terminal He
did it,with his betief and encouragement and tove from everyone present.
It was a miracle.His usuat big toothy smite would not be absent forever...
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