Module3Unit6Writing课件2025-2026学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

该初中英语课件聚焦“Healthy diet”主题，核心涵盖餐厅评论写作与健康饮食倡导书面表达。课堂通过头脑风暴激活兴趣，从评论结构解析、范文分析到写作实践，再过渡到健康饮食主题写作，构建“输入-分析-输出”学习支架，辅以“审列扩连”等写作步骤指导。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，以任务驱动学习，如通过问题链分析范文、结构化写作步骤提升表达逻辑，结合健康饮食理念渗透文化意识。实例包括餐厅评论范文赏析和健康主题提纲训练，助力学生掌握写作策略与价值观，为教师提供清晰教学路径与评价参考。

Unit 6 Healthy diet Writing Karida Learning aims Learn how to wirte a restaurant review Master some writing strategies Be able to apply writing strategies in writing Enhance the awareness of saving food and maintaining a balanced diet Brainstorm the question below. What can attract you to go to the same restaurant again? Brainstorming What can attract you to go to the same restaurant again? its food its service its environment … A restaurant review can help people to have a better choice. A restaurant review is about your experience of eating at a restaurant. You can find this kind of review on the Internet easily. How to write a restaurant review ☺ Title ☺ Opening ☺ Introduction ☺ Review of the food ☺ Review of the service ☺ Recommendation（推荐） Other possible points: Location, atmosphere（氛围）, price, cleanliness, parking（停车）, etc. A Doris has written a restaurant review. Read the review. P92 Read the review again and answer the questions. Which restaurant did Doris go to last Saturday night? The Country House. What kind of food does the restaurant serve? It serves traditional English food. How much did the food cost for each person? About 15 to 20 pounds each. What food attracted Doris most? The fish pie and fish and chips. What does Doris think of the waiters? They were polite but a little slow. What should people do if they want to go to this restaurant according to Doris? People should get there early and be prepared to spend a lot of time waiting for the food. B Write your own restaurant review. Use the example in A and the questions below to help you. Which restaurant did you eat at and when did you eat there? What food does the restaurant serve? What was good about the food and its service, and what was bad? Would you like to recommend this restaurant to others? P92 Great dinner in the Golden Hotel restaurant My family spent a wonderful evening in the Golden Hotel restaurant last Sunday. The Golden Hotel restaurant is famous in Beijing. It serves traditional Chinese food. I enjoyed this meal very much. First, although it was different from my favourite style food, it was delicious. Second, the food was displayed beautifully. We wanted to have a try as soon as we saw it. Third, the hostess was very nice and we received good service there. Everything was perfect except the price. It was a bit expensive. I would highly recommend the Golden Hotel restaurant for its delicious food and good service! One possible version Writing practice 书面表达(共1小题；满分15分) 假如你负责学校的宣传栏工作，近来你校出现学生不吃食堂，倾倒完好食物，并乱点外卖和吃垃圾食品导致生病等不良现象。请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文向同学们倡导“Save Food and Eat Healthily”的理念。 1. 不吃垃圾食品，少吃外卖; 2. 补充均衡膳食的2点建议； 3. 浪费可耻，说明珍惜粮食的重要性; 4. 呼吁大众节约粮食。 (注意：词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数) 参考词汇：take-away food 外卖 Brainstorming What steps do we need to take before writing? 1.审 人称： 时态： 得分要点： 第一、三人称 一般现在时 开头+4大要点+结尾 Beginning Body (正文) Ending 2.列 Make an outline to make sure what you want to say! 开篇点题，说明均衡膳食和节约粮食的重要性 介绍保持均衡膳食和节约粮食的建议： 1. stay away from junk food 2. consume in plenty of vegetables and fruit 3. don’t order too much take-away food 4. don’t waste any food 再次点题，呼吁人们要保持健康、节约粮食 3.扩 1.吃太多垃圾食品和外卖对我们身体有害。 It is harmful to our health to eat too much junk food and take-away food, because they include too much fat and oil. 2.养成良好的饮食习惯,多吃蔬菜、水果，多喝水。 Forming healthy eating habits is necessary. We should not only have more vegetables , fruit, but also drink more water. 3.当下许多人仍在挨饿，我们应该珍惜粮食。 There are still many people suffering from hunger now, which means we should cherish every single grian. (It’s adj. for sb. to do sth) （V-ing做主语 not only…but also） （There be; 从句） Form sentences with superior phrases/ pattern 句式表达Tips: 1.活用高级短语 2.活用多种句式、从句 3.活用连词 4.连 顺序：first of all; to begin with; moreover; what’s more; in addition;most importantly; last but not least... 逻辑：however; therefore; on one hand, on the other hand; not only, but also; to sum up; in conclusion... 列举：for example;for instance; such as... Use conjunction to make your article more logical. 审 列 扩 连 查 抄 开头 结尾 写作步骤小结 假如你负责学校的宣传栏工作，近来你校出现学生不吃食堂，倾倒完好食物，并乱点外卖和吃垃圾食品导致生病等不良现象。请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文向同学们倡导“Save Food and Eat Healthily”的理念。 1. 不吃垃圾食品，少吃外卖; 2. 补充均衡膳食的2点建议； 3. 浪费可耻，说明珍惜粮食的重要性; 4. 呼吁大众节约粮食。 (注意：词数90左右，已给出部分不计入总词数) 参考词汇：takeout food 外卖 While-writing 15mins 首句：Recently, many students have wasted food, eaten junk food and takeout food carelessly, which has led to their getting sick. Do you want to get high mark ??? 内容 6分 要点 适当发挥 5分 1分 准确性 6分 语法 ：人称、语态、时态等。 词汇：名词单复数、第三人称单数、拼写、字数等 机械性：大小写、标点等。 流畅性 3分 文章流畅，结构合理，有连接词及复合句。 中考评分标准 15’=6’+6’+3’ Show and correct ! Possible version Recently, many students have wasted food, eaten junk food and takeout food carelessly, which has led to their getting sick. Obviously（显而易见）, it’s time for us to save food and eat healthily. To begin with,it is harmful to our health to eat too much junk food and take-away food, because they include too much fat and oil.In addition, forming （培养）healthy eating habits is necessary. So to keep a balanced diet, we are supposed to have a different kinds of healthy food. For instance, we should not only consume in more vegetables , but also drink more water instead of soft drinks. At the same time, when we enjoy plenty of delicius food, we should also learn that there are still many people suffering from hunger now. To be honest, it’s a shame of those people who waste food. As students, we have responsibilty to save food. Now,let's work together to improve our eating habits and cherish every single grian. Thank you! $