Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7 .（单元写作精练）英语人教版九年级全一册

Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. （在校时光） 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：在校时光 本单元话题是“在校时光”（School days）,这个单元是九年级最后一个单元，也是初中英语学习的最后一个单元。本单元设计目的是复习巩固初中阶段学习的一些重要语法项目，同时让学生回顾总结初中三年美好时光。 素材积累 开头语 1. I have a moving story to tell you.我有一个感人的故事要告诉你。 2. How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is coming to the end.时间过得真快！我丰富多彩的初中生活即将结束。 3.I can’t forget the happy time that I’ve spent here.我忘不了在这里度过的快乐时光。 4.At the beginning of a new life, I’m going to make myself better.在新生活的开始，我要让自己变得更好。 5.The one person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs. Li, my English teacher. 初中时我永远不会忘记的一个人是我的英语老师李老师。 6.I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is ...我很高兴能在这里发表演讲。我的主题是...... 7.Our middle school life will soon come to an end.我们的中学生活很快就要结束了。 8.I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.我很高兴告诉你我的学校生活。 9.I want to say“thank you”to my English teacher.我想对我的英语老师说“谢谢”。 10.I'm going to graduate from junior high school.我要初中毕业了。 11.I know you're interested in how I feel about those three years of school year.我知道你很关心我对这三年学年的感受。 12.I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.我很高兴告诉你我的学校生活。 13.I have become a 15-year-oldmidle school student. During the past few years, I have gained a lot. 我已经是一名15岁的中学生了。在过去的几年里，我收获颇丰。 14.How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.时间过得真快！令人难以置信的是，我要从我心爱的学校毕业了。有很多事情要记住。 15.I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you have helped me a lot in the past three years. 我写信向你表示衷心的感谢，因为你在过去三年里帮助了我很多。 中间语 1.I have become a 15-year-old middle school student.我已经是一名15岁的中学生了。 2.During the past few years, I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like ... 在过去的几年里，我收获了很多，我不想成为一个像…那样充满遗憾的人...... 3.First, my ... teacher is patient with me. She helps me to study ...better.首先，我的...老师对我很有耐心。她帮助我学习...更好。 4.Firstly, developing good study habits is of great importance.首先，养成良好的学习习惯非常重要。 5.Secondly, I should make friends with people around myself.其次，我应该和身边的人交朋友。 6.Second, my classmates help me a lot.第二，同学们帮了我很多。 7.At the beginning of a new life, I’m going to make myself better.在新生活的开始，我要让自己变得更好。 8.I've made quite a few friends by joining the club.我加入俱乐部交了不少朋友。 9.I've also met some problems over the three years.这三年我也遇到了一些问题。 10.She is kind and friendly. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. She helps me a lot with my English. 她善良友好。她不仅是我们的老师，也是我们的朋友。她在英语方面帮了我很多。 11.I became her student a year ago.一年前我成了她的学生。 12.With her help. I made great progress.在她的帮助下。我取得了很大的进步。 13.Whenever I'm in great need, my Chinese teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school.每当我需要帮助的时候，我的语文老师总是来找我，所以她是初中时帮助我最多的人。 14.We should be thankful to our parents. Because they gave us life and brought us up. 我们应该感谢我们的父母。因为他们给了我们生命，养育了我们。 15.So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. They take care of me without any complaint. 首先，我要感谢我亲爱的父母。他们毫无怨言地照顾我。 结束语 1. I’ll be an honest man forever.我将永远做一个诚实的人。 2. I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.我相信，如果我们互相理解和帮助，我们的学校会变得更好。 3.Thank you for your time!感谢您抽出时间！ 4.I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.我希望你永远快乐健康。 5.All in all, as long as I work hard at anything, I will make myself better.总的来说，只要我在任何事情上努力，我就会让自己变得更好。 6. Wish you great success in the future!祝你今后事业成功！ 7. In a word, my life in junior middle school was colorful and unforgettable.总之，我初中的生活丰富多彩，令人难忘。 8.All in all, I enjoy my school life because it's colorful and meaningful.总的来说，我喜欢我的学校生活，因为它丰富多彩，意义重大。 9.I think I am lucky to have so much love and care.我觉得我很幸运，有这么多的爱和关怀。 10.How about your school life? Write to me soon.你的学校生活怎么样？请尽快给我写信。 11.I will never forget these happy days together.我永远不会忘记这些快乐的日子。 12.I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.我将来会做得很好，这样他们就会为我感到骄傲。 13.I will never forget this lively and interesting class.我永远不会忘记这堂生动有趣的课。 14.From... ,I know that no matter what the result is, everyone should try his best.从......开始，我知道无论结果如何，每个人都应该尽力。 15.I feel lucky to be your student. Thank you again. Wish you good luck.能成为你的学生，我感到很幸运。再次感谢您。祝你好运。 真题示例： （2023·辽宁抚顺·中考真题）初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。 要求： （1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 （3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, ____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. 【答案】 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of that first school day, I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school. Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及标题已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受； 第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as well as也，又，和 ②fit in适应 ③feel at home感觉自在 [高分句型] ①I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句） ③Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness.（现在分词短语作状语） 1．初中生活即将过去，在过去的三年里总有那么一个人或一件事情让你难以忘记，请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语文章。 1. 难以忘怀的是我的英语老师李老师。2. 刚进初中第一节英语课，老师叫我自我介绍，但我性格害羞，胆子小，英语成绩差，沉默不语。3. 李老师与我聊天，告诉我要学好英语一定要多练习。4. 英语成绩提高了，还拿到英语演讲比赛的奖次。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The one person from my junior high school days who I will never forget is Mrs. Li, my English teacher. When I started my first English class in Grade 7, Mrs. Li asked us to introduce ourselves. When it was my turn, I was so shy and nervous that I kept silent for a long time. She just asked me to sit down. After class, she told me that she believed I could make it if I practiced more. I was touched and decided to make an effort. As a result, I made much progress in English and I even won an English speech contest the next year! I will always be thankful to Mrs. Li for her advice and support. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据所给的材料，写一篇英语文章记叙在过去的三年里让你难以忘记的一个人或一件事情。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先提出英语老师李老师是我难以忘怀的；其次具体介绍原因；最后介绍结果。 第三步：书写结语。表达自己的感激之情。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb. to do sth.请某人做某事。 ②kept silent保持沉默   ③make an effort做出努力 ④made much progress取得了很大进展 ⑤be thankful to感激 [高分句型] ①The one person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs. Li, my English teacher.（that引导的定语从句） ②When it was my turn, I was so shy and nervous that I kept silent for a long time.（so…that…如此……以至于……） ③After class, she told me that she believed I could make it if I practice more.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2．在初一学习生活接近尾声之际，你对过去的一学年有哪些回顾和总结呢？请你结合下面的思维导图，从中选取一到两个方面，以 “My wonderful life in Grade 7” 为题，写一篇短文投稿给学校英语校刊，介绍自己的七年级生活并分享收获和感想。 注意事项： 1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁； 2. 词数在100字左右。（开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数） My wonderful life in Grade 7 Time flies! This school year is coming to an end. I’d like to share something about my wonderful life in Grade 7. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My wonderful life in Grade 7 Time flies! This school year is coming to an end. I’d like to share something about my wonderful life in Grade 7.     I joined the English club. There, we watched English movies and had debates. It improved my English and let me make friends. Also, I had a great friend, Lily. We studied together and supported each other.     Grade 7 was amazing. It taught me the power of friendship and the joy of learning. I’ll carry these memories forward. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明七年级学习生活即将结束，来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，分享七年级学习生活的精彩经历； 第三步，总结七年级生活，抒发感悟与收获。 [亮点词汇] ①joined the English club加入了英语俱乐部 ②watched English movies观看英语电影 ③the power of friendship友谊的力量 [高分句型] ①It improved my English and let me make friends.（不带to的不定式短语作宾语补足语） ②It taught me the power of friendship and the joy of learning.（名词短语作宾语） 3．在成长的道路上，总有一些人给予我们温暖与帮助，成为照亮人生的光。为此，某校校刊英语专栏以“The Person I Want to Thank Most”为题面向学生进行征文。请用英语写一篇短文向专栏投稿。 提示：1. 谁是你最想感谢的人； 2. 他/她是怎样帮助你的； 3. 你的感受。 注意：1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 词数80左右。 The Person I Want to Thank Most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Person I Want to Thank Most The person I’m most grateful for is my English teacher, Ms. Li. When I struggled with pronunciation last year, she patiently tutored me after class and encouraged me to practice daily through fun tongue twisters. Her creative teaching methods turned my weakness into confidence. What touches me most is how she believed in me when I doubted myself. Now I can fluently recite English poems! Her kindness and dedication have inspired me to help others too. Ms. Li isn’t just a teacher—she’s the light that brightened my learning journey. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明最想感谢的人； 第二步：介绍这个人帮助自己的过程； 第三步：赞美这个帮助过自己的人。 [亮点词汇] ①encouraged me to practice鼓励我练习 ②turned my weakness into confidence把我的弱点变成自信 ③believed in me相信我 [高分句型] ①When I struggled with pronunciation last year, she patiently tutored me after class and encouraged me to practice daily through fun tongue twisters. (When引导的时间状语从句) ②What touches me most is how she believed in me when I doubted myself. (What引导的主语从句) 4．三年的初中生活即将结束，坐在考场中的你，一定思绪万千。三年来，你在学习、生活等方面取得了很大的进步，这些成绩的背后有老师的谆谆教诲、家长的次次鼓励，还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请将题目“Thank you, my________”补充完整，再以此为题写一篇英语短文，向一个人表达感谢。文中应包括该人物的外貌、性格、爱好等基本信息，以及他/她为何使你难忘、让你感激。 要求： （1）80词左右。 （2）文中不得出现与考生相关的姓名、校名等信息。 Thank you, my ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Thank you, my English teacher I should say “thank you” to my English teacher. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but strict with us. He never lets us pretend to know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help. He is the best teacher in my mind. I will remember him forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明感谢的对象； 第二步，细节介绍对方的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处。 [亮点词汇] ①be strict with对……严格 ②pretend to do sth假装做某事 [高分句型] ①He never lets us pretend to know what we don’t know. (what引导的宾语从句) ②He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.（宾语从句，动名词作主语） 5．假设你是一所国际学校的学生，你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容要点： 1. 回顾：美丽的校园，……； 2. 感谢：老师，……； 3. 你的祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不得出现真实的个人信息。 参考词汇：interesting（adj. 有趣的）, thank（v. 感谢）, helpful（adj. 有帮助的）, solve（v. 解决） Dear teachers and classmates, It’s my pleasure to have such a chance to make a speech at this special moment. ______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening. 【答案】 Dear teachers and classmates, It’s my pleasure to have such a chance to make a speech at this special moment. First, we should look back. Our school is beautiful with green trees and colorful flowers. We had interesting classes and unforgettable activities here. I’ll never forget the time when we studied together and played happily. Second, we must express our thanks. I’m deeply thankful to our teachers who helped us solve problems. Also, I want to thank my classmates for their support. Because of you, my school life became more wonderful. Lastly, I’d like to share my wishes. I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future. Let’s stay in touch and make our world better! That’s all. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：严格遵循题干要求，包含三个核心要点（校园回忆、感谢师友、未来祝愿），并添加合理细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，回顾校园环境、学习生活和集体活动； 第二步，分层感谢老师和同学； 第三步，提出对同学实现梦想的期望，呼吁保持联系； [亮点词汇] ①look back回顾 ②solve problems解决问题 ③stay in touch 保持联系 [高分句型] I’m deeply thankful to our teachers who helped us solve problems.（定语从句） 6．学校就像一幅承载着同学们青春记忆的画卷，它不仅是知识的殿堂与学生成长的舞台，更因为有了情感的浸润而变得格外珍贵。初中三年的生活即将结束，同学们也即将告别你曾经挥洒汗水、收获知识和友谊的校园，值此之际，请你以“What I Want to Say to My School”为题，结合下面图示信息，并根据写作要求，用英语写一篇文章。 要求： 1. 文中须包含图中提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 What I Want to Say to My School How time flies! I have been in this school for almost three years. There are so many sweet memories and so many words that I want to say to my dear school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: What I Want to Say to My School How time flies! I have been in this school for almost three years. There are so many sweet memories and so many words that I want to say to my dear school. Firstly, I want to say thanks to all my teachers. They help me learn math, English and other subjects carefully. My classmates and friends are also nice. We study together and play sports after class. I’m really thankful to them. Secondly, I like many places in my school, like the school garden, the playground, especially the classroom. I like sitting at my desk, listening to teachers and discussing questions with classmates. If I can make a change to my school, I hope we can have a bigger playground, where we can have more space to play soccer and many other sports. Anyway, I really thank my school for giving me a happy and meaningful school life. I’ll remember every day here! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达感恩的对象； 第二步，介绍自己在校园里喜欢的地方以及对学校改变的建议； 第三步，总结校园生活的意义，呼应开头。 [亮点词汇] ① want to do 想要做 ② be thankful to 对……感激 ③ make a change 做出改变 [高分句型] If I can make a change to my school, I hope we can have a bigger playground, where we can have more space to play soccer and many other sports.（条件状语从句+宾语从句+定语从句） 7．在毕业季来临之际，你校开展了“I want to say thanks to...”的征文活动，请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，向出现在你初中生活中的一位重要的人表达感谢。 我想感谢…… 要感谢的人：…… 详细介绍 1.他/她的个性； 2.我和他/她的故事； 3. …… 情感流露 1.想对他/她说的话； 2. …… 写作要求：1.意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确； 2.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 As my junior high school life is coming to an end, I want to express my sincere gratitude (谢意) to_______ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As my junior high school life is coming to an end, I want to express my sincere gratitude to my English teacher, Ms. Wang. She is a patient and kind person who always encourages us to keep trying. Last term, I failed an English exam and felt upset. Ms. Wang noticed this and spent extra time helping me after class. She taught me useful learning methods and said, “Mistakes are chances to improve.” With her help, my English improved a lot. Dear Ms. Wang, thank you for your guidance and trust. You’ve taught me not only knowledge but also the importance of never giving up. I’ll always remember your words and keep working hard. You are the best teacher in my heart! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明要感谢的人是英语老师王老师； 第二步，具体介绍她的个性以及与她之间的故事； 第三步，表达想对她说的话。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ②With one’s help 在某人的帮助下 ③the importance of... ……的重要性 [高分句型] ①She is a patient and kind person who always encourages us to keep trying.（who引导的定语从句） ②You’ve taught me not only knowledge but also the importance of never giving up.（not only…but also的并列结构） 8．假如你是李华，马上要毕业了，请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语文章寄给校刊，讲述你的惜别之情。 内容提示： How do you like your school? Who impresses you most? How do you feel about the coming separation? Something more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How time flies! Looking back the past three years, ______________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How time flies! Looking back the past three years, I have changed and learned a lot. At the first day at school, I was really shy and nervous to talk to others while now I’m confident and I have made so many friends, because I study in such a great school. The teachers are knowledgeable and patient, and the classmates are friendly and active. I used to study hard at math, but I still got poor grades. This year, however, with the help of Mr. Lee, my math teacher, my math has improved a lot. He always has a special way to make his classes lively and interesting. He is so handsome that he impresses me most. By the way, there are also many special events such as the sports meeting in Grade 8, the singing competition in Grade 7 at school. All of our classmates pulled together and got good places. These unforgettable memories make up my bitter and sweet school life and I am really thankful to all my teachers and classmates. I don’t want to say goodbye because I believe we will meet once a year to celebrate the time we have spent together. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，总结这三年自己的学校情况； 第二步，介绍让自己印象最深刻的人和事； 第三步，讲述自己的惜别之情。 [亮点词汇] ①talk to sb和某人谈话 ②with the help of在某人的帮助下 ③by the way顺便一提 ④such as例如 ⑤be thankful to…感激…… [高分句型] ①He is so handsome that he impresses me most.（结果状语从句） ②I don’t want to say goodbye because I believe we will meet once a year to celebrate the time we have spent together.（原因状语从句） 9．初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活，回顾其中的许多点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。假如你是李磊，请你给你的某一位教师写封信，和他（她）说说感激的心里话。 注意：书写规范；语句连贯；表达准确；80词左右。 提示词：work hard，be strict with，interesting，get along well with，encourage，brave，make much progress，… Dear my teacher, Leaving you-lovely junior school life,I have so many words from my heart to say. _____________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you again for what you’ve done for us! All the best to you! Yours, Li Lei. 【答案】 Dear my teacher, Leaving you-lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say. I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago. You always work hard and treat us well. You are strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively. During my school life, we can get along well with each other. When I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave. Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much. Thank you again for what you’ve done for us! All the best to you! Yours, Li Lei. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题； 第二步，通过具体事例，体现老师对学生在学习和生活上的关怀，进一步说明老师的帮助对自己和同学们的重要意义； 第三步，再次表达对老师的感激之情并送上祝福。   [亮点词汇] ①work hard 努力工作 ②be strict with对……严格要求 ③take care of照顾 [高分句型] ①I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago. （宾语从句） ②It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively. （because引导原因状语从句） 10．初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，静坐考场的你，一定会思绪万千。三年来，你在学习、生活等方面取得了很大的进步，这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励，现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you, my...”为题写一篇英文短文。 要求如下： 1.包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等； 2.词数80左右，语句流畅、完整。 3.文中不能透露个人真实信息。 Thank you, my________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Thank you, my English teacher Miss Li, my English teacher, has short curly hair and always wears a warm smile. She is patient and creative. Her hobby is reading, and she often shares interesting stories with us. What I will never forget is how she helped me three months ago. When I failed an exam, she stayed after class to explain the mistakes and encouraged me to keep trying. Thanks to her, my English improved a lot. Though I’ll graduate soon, I’ll always remember her kindness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍要感谢的人； 第二步，根据题干的要点，描述人物的外貌、性格、爱好和难忘之处； 第三步，发表感想并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①share…with和……分享 ②encourage sb to do鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①When I failed an exam, she stayed after class to explain the mistakes and encouraged me to keep trying.（时间状语从句） ②Though I’ll graduate soon, I’ll always remember her kindness.（让步状语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 19 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7. （在校时光） 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题：在校时光 本单元话题是“在校时光”（School days）,这个单元是九年级最后一个单元，也是初中英语学习的最后一个单元。本单元设计目的是复习巩固初中阶段学习的一些重要语法项目，同时让学生回顾总结初中三年美好时光。 素材积累 开头语 1. I have a moving story to tell you.我有一个感人的故事要告诉你。 2. How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is coming to the end.时间过得真快！我丰富多彩的初中生活即将结束。 3.I can’t forget the happy time that I’ve spent here.我忘不了在这里度过的快乐时光。 4.At the beginning of a new life, I’m going to make myself better.在新生活的开始，我要让自己变得更好。 5.The one person from my junior high school days that I will never forget is Mrs. Li, my English teacher. 初中时我永远不会忘记的一个人是我的英语老师李老师。 6.I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is ...我很高兴能在这里发表演讲。我的主题是...... 7.Our middle school life will soon come to an end.我们的中学生活很快就要结束了。 8.I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.我很高兴告诉你我的学校生活。 9.I want to say“thank you”to my English teacher.我想对我的英语老师说“谢谢”。 10.I'm going to graduate from junior high school.我要初中毕业了。 11.I know you're interested in how I feel about those three years of school year.我知道你很关心我对这三年学年的感受。 12.I'm very happy to tell you about my school life.我很高兴告诉你我的学校生活。 13.I have become a 15-year-oldmidle school student. During the past few years, I have gained a lot. 我已经是一名15岁的中学生了。在过去的几年里，我收获颇丰。 14.How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.时间过得真快！令人难以置信的是，我要从我心爱的学校毕业了。有很多事情要记住。 15.I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you have helped me a lot in the past three years. 我写信向你表示衷心的感谢，因为你在过去三年里帮助了我很多。 中间语 1.I have become a 15-year-old middle school student.我已经是一名15岁的中学生了。 2.During the past few years, I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like ... 在过去的几年里，我收获了很多，我不想成为一个像…那样充满遗憾的人...... 3.First, my ... teacher is patient with me. She helps me to study ...better.首先，我的...老师对我很有耐心。她帮助我学习...更好。 4.Firstly, developing good study habits is of great importance.首先，养成良好的学习习惯非常重要。 5.Secondly, I should make friends with people around myself.其次，我应该和身边的人交朋友。 6.Second, my classmates help me a lot.第二，同学们帮了我很多。 7.At the beginning of a new life, I’m going to make myself better.在新生活的开始，我要让自己变得更好。 8.I've made quite a few friends by joining the club.我加入俱乐部交了不少朋友。 9.I've also met some problems over the three years.这三年我也遇到了一些问题。 10.She is kind and friendly. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. She helps me a lot with my English. 她善良友好。她不仅是我们的老师，也是我们的朋友。她在英语方面帮了我很多。 11.I became her student a year ago.一年前我成了她的学生。 12.With her help. I made great progress.在她的帮助下。我取得了很大的进步。 13.Whenever I'm in great need, my Chinese teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high school.每当我需要帮助的时候，我的语文老师总是来找我，所以她是初中时帮助我最多的人。 14.We should be thankful to our parents. Because they gave us life and brought us up. 我们应该感谢我们的父母。因为他们给了我们生命，养育了我们。 15.So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. They take care of me without any complaint. 首先，我要感谢我亲爱的父母。他们毫无怨言地照顾我。 结束语 1. I’ll be an honest man forever.我将永远做一个诚实的人。 2. I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.我相信，如果我们互相理解和帮助，我们的学校会变得更好。 3.Thank you for your time!感谢您抽出时间！ 4.I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.我希望你永远快乐健康。 5.All in all, as long as I work hard at anything, I will make myself better.总的来说，只要我在任何事情上努力，我就会让自己变得更好。 6. Wish you great success in the future!祝你今后事业成功！ 7. In a word, my life in junior middle school was colorful and unforgettable.总之，我初中的生活丰富多彩，令人难忘。 8.All in all, I enjoy my school life because it's colorful and meaningful.总的来说，我喜欢我的学校生活，因为它丰富多彩，意义重大。 9.I think I am lucky to have so much love and care.我觉得我很幸运，有这么多的爱和关怀。 10.How about your school life? Write to me soon.你的学校生活怎么样？请尽快给我写信。 11.I will never forget these happy days together.我永远不会忘记这些快乐的日子。 12.I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.我将来会做得很好，这样他们就会为我感到骄傲。 13.I will never forget this lively and interesting class.我永远不会忘记这堂生动有趣的课。 14.From... ,I know that no matter what the result is, everyone should try his best.从......开始，我知道无论结果如何，每个人都应该尽力。 15.I feel lucky to be your student. Thank you again. Wish you good luck.能成为你的学生，我感到很幸运。再次感谢您。祝你好运。 真题示例： （2023·辽宁抚顺·中考真题）初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。 要求： （1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 （3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, ____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. ③Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness.（现在分词短语作状语） 1．初中生活即将过去，在过去的三年里总有那么一个人或一件事情让你难以忘记，请你根据下面的提示写一篇英语文章。 1. 难以忘怀的是我的英语老师李老师。2. 刚进初中第一节英语课，老师叫我自我介绍，但我性格害羞，胆子小，英语成绩差，沉默不语。3. 李老师与我聊天，告诉我要学好英语一定要多练习。4. 英语成绩提高了，还拿到英语演讲比赛的奖次。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．在初一学习生活接近尾声之际，你对过去的一学年有哪些回顾和总结呢？请你结合下面的思维导图，从中选取一到两个方面，以 “My wonderful life in Grade 7” 为题，写一篇短文投稿给学校英语校刊，介绍自己的七年级生活并分享收获和感想。 注意事项： 1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，书写整洁； 2. 词数在100字左右。（开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数） My wonderful life in Grade 7 Time flies! This school year is coming to an end. I’d like to share something about my wonderful life in Grade 7. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．在成长的道路上，总有一些人给予我们温暖与帮助，成为照亮人生的光。为此，某校校刊英语专栏以“The Person I Want to Thank Most”为题面向学生进行征文。请用英语写一篇短文向专栏投稿。 提示：1. 谁是你最想感谢的人； 2. 他/她是怎样帮助你的； 3. 你的感受。 注意：1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 4. 词数80左右。 The Person I Want to Thank Most ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．三年的初中生活即将结束，坐在考场中的你，一定思绪万千。三年来，你在学习、生活等方面取得了很大的进步，这些成绩的背后有老师的谆谆教诲、家长的次次鼓励，还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请将题目“Thank you, my________”补充完整，再以此为题写一篇英语短文，向一个人表达感谢。文中应包括该人物的外貌、性格、爱好等基本信息，以及他/她为何使你难忘、让你感激。 要求： （1）80词左右。 （2）文中不得出现与考生相关的姓名、校名等信息。 Thank you, my ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是一所国际学校的学生，你将代表你校毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容要点： 1. 回顾：美丽的校园，……； 2. 感谢：老师，……； 3. 你的祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不得出现真实的个人信息。 参考词汇：interesting（adj. 有趣的）, thank（v. 感谢）, helpful（adj. 有帮助的）, solve（v. 解决） Dear teachers and classmates, It’s my pleasure to have such a chance to make a speech at this special moment. ______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening. 6．学校就像一幅承载着同学们青春记忆的画卷，它不仅是知识的殿堂与学生成长的舞台，更因为有了情感的浸润而变得格外珍贵。初中三年的生活即将结束，同学们也即将告别你曾经挥洒汗水、收获知识和友谊的校园，值此之际，请你以“What I Want to Say to My School”为题，结合下面图示信息，并根据写作要求，用英语写一篇文章。 要求： 1. 文中须包含图中提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 What I Want to Say to My School How time flies! I have been in this school for almost three years. There are so many sweet memories and so many words that I want to say to my dear school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．在毕业季来临之际，你校开展了“I want to say thanks to...”的征文活动，请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文，向出现在你初中生活中的一位重要的人表达感谢。 我想感谢…… 要感谢的人：…… 详细介绍 1.他/她的个性； 2.我和他/她的故事； 3. …… 情感流露 1.想对他/她说的话； 2. …… 写作要求：1.意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确； 2.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 As my junior high school life is coming to an end, I want to express my sincere gratitude (谢意) to_______ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，马上要毕业了，请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语文章寄给校刊，讲述你的惜别之情。 内容提示： How do you like your school? Who impresses you most? How do you feel about the coming separation? Something more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 How time flies! Looking back the past three years, ______________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活，回顾其中的许多点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。假如你是李磊，请你给你的某一位教师写封信，和他（她）说说感激的心里话。 注意：书写规范；语句连贯；表达准确；80词左右。 提示词：work hard，be strict with，interesting，get along well with，encourage，brave，make much progress，… Dear my teacher, Leaving you-lovely junior school life,I have so many words from my heart to say. _____________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you again for what you’ve done for us! All the best to you! Yours, Li Lei. 10．初中三年的学习生活让人难忘，毕业之际，静坐考场的你，一定会思绪万千。三年来，你在学习、生活等方面取得了很大的进步，这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励，现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you, my...”为题写一篇英文短文。 要求如下： 1.包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等； 2.词数80左右，语句流畅、完整。 3.文中不能透露个人真实信息。 Thank you, my________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 19 / 19 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $