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高频话
话题三人物故事
@话题角度
教育故事、情感故事、人物经历、励志故事、
哲理故事
@短语积累
①dream of梦想;梦见②never give up永
不放弃③feel like感觉像④hear sb.doing
sth.听见某人正在做某事⑤communicate with
和…交流⑥learn from向…学习⑦pull
together齐心协力⑧be thankful to对…心
存感激⑨to one's surprise使某人惊讶的是
⑩be in agreement意见一致的;同意
⑧句型积累
【篇首句】
1.Everyone has unhappy experiences,and so do
I.每个人都有不愉快的经历,我也一样。
2.We did so many interesting things that we'll
never forget this unforgettable day.我们做了
很多有趣的事情,我们永远不会忘记这难忘的
一天。
3.During my process of growing up,I had lots
of special experiences.And here is the most
moving one.I'd like to share it with you..在我
的成长过程中,我有很多特别的经历。这是最
感人的一次。我想和你分享一下。
4.An experience that made me very happy
was..一次让我非常高兴的经历是…
【篇中句】
1.We have many similar hobbies so we often
enjoy our free time together.我们有很多相似
的爱好,所以我们经常一起共度空闲时光。
2.But something unhappy happened between us.
但是,我们之间发生了不愉快的事情。
3.Until then did I understand the meaning of...
直到那时,我才懂得…的意义。
英语·讲练册则
题写作》◆0◆小◆o◆◆o◆◆◆◆0o◆◆oo心
4.I accepted her help and tried my best to learn
English well..我接受了她的帮助并且尽自己的
最大努力学好英语。
5.My teacher encouraged me and gave me some
useful advice.我的老师鼓励我,给了我一些有
用的建议。
【篇尾句】
1.Although the unpleasant experience once
broke us apart,it brought my best friend and
me closer together again.尽管这次不愉快的
经历曾经让我们分开,但也让我最好的朋友
和我的关系更加亲近。
2.I was so thankful that I decided to help others
from then on.我非常感激,所以从那时起我决
定帮助别人。
3.If everyone can help each other,the world will
be full of love.如果每个人都能互相帮助,这
个世界就会充满爱。
4.I think the wonderful experience will always
be in my mind.我想这美好的经历将永远在我
的脑海中。
典型例题
(2024·安阳林州一模)生活中有很多不期
而遇的惊喜,可能是突如其来的一场雪,也可能
是不曾想到的一份礼物,或大或小的惊喜总会给
我们带来快乐或温暖。请以“A surprise I had”
为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点:
1.这个惊喜是什么;
2.它是何时发生的;
3.它给你带来怎样的感受。
要求:
1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2.词数100左右。
A surprise I had
②审题指导
1.文体:本文为材料作文,文体为记叙文;
2.人称:“我”有的惊喜,因此人称为第一人称;
3.时态:以一般过去时为主。
②谋篇布局
There are many unexpected surprises in life
引出主题
which make us happy and warm.
The surprise I can't forget was a note from my new classmate.
A surprise I had
具体介绍收到的惊喜
I shared my favorite book Harry Potter with my group members
...a girl said after the discussion,which surprised me totally.
From that day on,I got confidence and became active in my life.
表达自己的感受
经典范文
4.王红将老人带到马路对面并向他告别。
A surprise I had
5.你认为…
There are many unexpected surprises in life
参考词汇:盲人blind man
徘徊wander
which make us happy and warm.
要求:
The surprise I can't forget was a note from
1.词数80~100;
my new classmate.It was my second year in the
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
middle school.I was very shy.But one day in
3.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
class we had a group work to discuss our favorite
Dear Peter,
book.I shared my favorite book Harry Potter
It is two weeks since you wrote to me.I'm
with my group members.“Your voice is nice,”
writing to tell you a story about my classmate
a girl said after the discussion,which surprised
Wang Hong.
me totally.
Last Thursday,
I was afraid to speak in class before!From
that day on,I got confidence and became active
in my life.
@实战演练
(2024·天津中考)假如你是李华,请根据以
下提示,给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件,向
他讲述你班同学王红所做的一件好事,并谈谈
感受。
What do you think of the story?Waiting for your
1.上周四,王红在回家途中看到一位上了年纪的
reply!
盲人在街角徘徊。
Yours,
2.王红与老人交流后,主动帮他过马路。
Li Hua
3.路上的司机都停下车耐心等候。
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