7.专题七 书面表达（专题突破）-【中考专项新突破】2025年广州中考英语复习

专题七书面表达 子考情分析 一、题型分析。 年份 话题 内容 2024 校园生活 描述一次难忘的学校旅行，包括时间、地点、活动内容和感悟 2023 健康 根据所给信息（时间、地点等），介绍活动安排，包括活动内容、目的 2022 绿色图书馆 介绍绿色图书馆，包括外观、材料、用途 2021 云课程 记录一节特别的云体育课，包括授课者、上课内容、收获和感受 2020 人际交往 介绍送过的一份珍贵礼物，包括对象、原因等 二、试题评析。 分析广州卷近5年中考真题可知，书面表达主要考查学生综合运用英语的实践能力，要求学生根 据题目写一篇80词左右的英语短文，一般会给出开头。 广州中考的书面表达所选的材料与学生的学习和生活息息相关，或与时事热点有关。从命题形式 来看，大部分以表格和思维导图的形式，为学生提供了相应的写作要点。从写作体裁来看，写作体裁 主要以邮件和短文为主。虽然限定了写作的主要内容及体裁，但在语言和信息的组织方面也让学生有 了更多的自主权。 三、备考建议。 广州中考写作的命题形式基本为半开放性题型，涉及的话题均在课本出现过，实用性强。2025年 备考建议学生在写作上坚持以主题写作为主，写作题材的训练要与实际生活接轨，在注重培养审题能 力的同时，也要善于积累常用的好词好句。 子解题技巧 一、整体审题，确定框架。 1.审题切意：认真审题，了解写作的相关信息点，明确写作要点并确定人称和时态。 2.整体构思：写作前先构思短文的框架，确定中心思想。 3.理清脉络：根据写作内容把信息点按照相应的逻辑顺序进行合并或拆分。 二、头脑风暴，遣词造句。 1.组织语言：多用熟悉的英语词汇，以最有把握的词句为主，确保写齐要点。 2.补充细节：行文过程中可适当补充细节，丰富文章内容。注意详略得当，不要偏题。 3.拓展提升：英语表达形式多样，多用课文经典句型，适当选用高级词汇、长难句，丰富写作内容。 三、谋篇布局，连句成篇。 1.善用连词：承上启下，在句子间加上适当的连词，使文章结构紧凑、行文流畅。 2.合理分段：按照逻辑，合理分段，确保条理清晰、逻辑通顺、段落分明。 3.检查订正：检查信息点是否完整，注意时态和词汇是否有误。 子号作基本功专练 基本句型（一）主语+不及物动词(S+V) l.科学技术正在快速发展。(develop)(8BU8) 2.地球的温度正在上升。(increase)(9BU3) 3.爱丽丝会游泳。(can) 4.大卫每天早上起得很早。(early) 5.你应该努力工作。（work hard) 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY111专题突破 6.那天我们谈论了历史。(talk about) 7.在过去的十年里，我的家乡已经发生了巨大的变化。(take place) 8.几年前我住在广州。(afew) 9.约翰上个月出国了。（go abroad) l0.时间过得真快啊！(pass) 基本句型（二）主语+系动词+表语(S+V+P) 1.上海是世界上最大的城市之一。(one of)(7AU6) 2.集邮真的很有教育意义。(educational)(7AU8) 3.我们的教育交流是很棒的。(fantastic)(8AU5) 4.她看起来友好。(1ook)(8BU2) 5.为此我感到很遗憾。(sory)(8BU5) 6.这个问题似乎很难解决。(seem)（(9AU1) 7.我们是努力学习的学生。(hard-working) 8.我们的目标就是实现我们的梦想。(aim) 9.天气正变得越来越热。(get) 10.这位老人在他80多岁时成为一名著名的作家。（famous) 基本句型（三）主语+及物动词+宾语(S+V+O) l.伟大的发明改变世界。(change)(8AU4) 2.你应该读英语书和杂志。(read)(8AU8) 3.我们组织了一个绘画比赛。(organize)(8BU1) 4.它们将使每个人满意。(satisfy)(8BU8) 5.我们的很多习惯造成污染。(cause)(9BU3) 6.他们成功地完成了计划。(successfully) 7.你们必须在两周内把这些书归还给图书馆。(in two weeks) 8.我期盼收到你的来信。(look forward to) 9.我们每天都练习讲英语。(practise) lo.她总是帮助我。(help) 基本句型（四）主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语(S+V+O+O) 1.音乐能给他们带来愉悦和安宁。(bring)(8BU1) 2.妈妈给了她一些建议。(advice)(8BU1) 3.它给了我一个学习新单词的机会。(chance)(8AU8) 4.他给了学生们一些建议。(suggestion)(8AU8) 5.我的妈妈在我生日的时候给了我一份特殊的礼物。(special) 6.我给妈妈买了一条漂亮的连衣裙。(buy) 7.我的外婆每晚都会给我讲一个有趣又有意义的故事。(meaningful) 8.我们应该给老年人让座。(the old) 9.玛丽去年教我们英语。(teach) 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY112专题突破 l0.机器人给我们带来了许多便利。(convenience) 基本句型（五）主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语(S+V+O+C) 1.他使课堂非常有趣。(make)(8AU2) 2.我们的数学老师用很多游戏来帮助我们学习。(us)(8AU2) 3.它们帮助人们过上更好的生活。(help)(8AU4) 4.它们允许人们彼此随时随地保持联系。(aow)(8AU4) 5.这帮助他们表达他们的情感。(express)(8BUI) 6.我们的数学老师总是鼓励我们努力学习。(encourage) 7.说实话，我们都认为他很友好。(consider) 8.我们会让我们的学校变得越来越好。(better and better) 9.这部电影让我们了解了中国的历史。(learn about) l0.我发现学英语很有趣。(find) 子真题演练 2024年广州中考真题 你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的 内容提示写一篇短文。 When did you go there? Where did you go? Who did you go with? An unforgettable school trip What did you do there? How did you feel? What did you learn? 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 An unforgettable school trip 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY113专题突破 2023年广州中考真题 你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme)为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交 换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。 Theme Healthy You and Me Time 8:30a.m.-11:30a.m. Place Sports Center Activities Purpose 注意：1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计人词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Sam, Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Yours, Li Hua 2022年广州中考真题 你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维 导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你设计(design)的绿色图书馆。 My Green School Library What does it look like? What makes it green? What can we do there? -colour 一materials(材料) -shape 一energy(能源) 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY114专题突破 子备考演练 训练一 你校开展了“阳光互助小组(The Sunshine Support Team)”活动。下周，你们将迎来英国的教育交 换学生参观学习，你将作为代表发言。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍这 项活动，并邀请他们参加。 What can you do there? What activities are there What do you think of the team? in the team? The Sunshine Support Team How do you help each other? How do you feel? What do you learn? 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear all, Welcome to our school!I am here to introduce the Sunshine Support Team. 训练二 漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如 你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一篇演讲稿，分 享你的看法。 life health value time family friends trust and help. get on well with... 注意：l.参考词汇：珍惜(value); 2.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 3.词数80左右（演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计人词数）； 4.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Good morning,everyone!I am Li Hua.Life is colourful.There are many important things we should value in our daily lives. Thanks for your listening. 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY115专题突破 训练三(2024四川成都中考改编) 你校英语报以“Be a Good Team Member'”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下图示写一篇短文投稿。 Be a Good Team Member Importance >Good ideas Better ideas Ways Ending 注意：1.可在所给内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Be a Good Team Member There is an old saying in China,"When people are united,they are strong." 训练四(2024甘肃临夏中考改编) 阅读使人快乐，让人成长。为了鼓励同学们多读书，你校英语社团向同学们发出“爱读书、读好 书、善读书”的倡议。请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的阅读收获。 Kind ofbooks: science books Reading can broaden our novels horizons(开阔眼界)： history books increase our knowledge … Reading plans: five days a week one hour a day 注意：1.可在所给内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY116专题突破 Books are our best friends. Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now. 训练五 毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My Dream Job”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下思维导图的内容提 示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的理想工作。 My Dream Job What is your dream job? What will you do for it? Where will you work? position(职位) -study -reasons -plans 注意：1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Dream Job We all have dream jobs. 训练六 你是李华，你校将要举办岭南文化节(Lingnan Cultural Festival),你美国的笔友Mike想了解本次 活动。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。 Theme Lingnan Cultural Festival Time Next Saturday Morning Place On the school playground Activities Hope 注意：1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Mike, How are you?I'm glad to tell you something about the Lingnan Cultural Festival. Hope you'll enjoy the festival. Yours, Li Hua 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY117专题突破 训练七(2024广东广州白云中考一模改编) 你校校报将举行主题为“An Unforgettable Experience'”的英文征文比赛。请根据以下思维导图的内 容提示写一篇短文参赛。 Where did you go? What happened during it? When did it happen? An Unforgettable Experience Who did you stay with? What did you learn from it? What did you do? 注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 An Unforgettable Experience I'm happy to share my experience with you. 训练八(2024山东济宁中考改编) 你校英文报编辑想了解最受学生欢迎的英语社团活动。假如你是英语课代表李华，请结合下图你 班的调查结果，给编辑写一篇报告。内容须包括： 1.调查结果的描述及简单评价； 2.你本人最喜欢的社团活动（从调查结果中任选其一）及理由陈述。 19% ☐Story telling 31% ☐English drama(戏剧) ☑English songs 围Fun dubbing(配音) 注意：1.可在所给内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear editor, Yesterday we did a survey in our class about the most popular activities by the school English club. Yours, Li Hua 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY118专题突破10.wrote down 11.are;strict with 12.kept/keeps in touch with 13.laughed at 14.came up with 15.staying up late 被动语态 1.was accepted 2.were attracted 3.was chosen 4.can be seen 5.were made 6.have been invented 7.must be watered 8.should be cut down 9.is/was used 10.can be washed 11.were written 12.was set up 13.was laughed at 14.will be offered 15.can be seen 感叹句 1.What a successful 2.How healthy 3.What useful/helpful advice/suggestions 4.What an unforgettable memory 5.How exciting 6.How proud 7.What colourful 8.What clean 9.What a wonderful 10.What a funny 真题演练 2024广州 51.will be held 52.so;that 53.how they could 54.give up 55.What a meaningful 2023广州 51.Have;heard 52.not only;but also 53.What a wonderful 54.how I can draw/paint 55.will be shown 2022广州 51.take part in 52.whether/if she could do 53.had trouble/difficulty/problems in making 54.was launched 55.How happy 备考演练 (一) 1.will be held 2.not only;but also 3.whether/if you are interested 4.can't wait to attend 5.What a valuable experience （二) 1.how to get to 2.take photos/pictures 3.What cute/lovely pandas 4.are not allowed 5.It's;important;to protect (三) 1.can be used 2.is dying to learn/know 3. why people like/liked 4.spent;learning 5.How proud (四) 1.will be set/built up 2.sit around 3.when they should help others 4.are busy with 5.How kind (五) 1.had trouble/difficulty/problems remembering 2.was asked 3.took;to remember 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY 4.how to remember 5.How friendly (六) 1.Have;heard 2.getting ready for 3.will be invited 4.What an exciting 5.why they like making (七) 1.heard from 2.how to spend 3.were given to 4.How helpful 5.If;takes;will spend (八) 1.was interested in 2.How interesting it is 3.how well I played 4.In order to 5.was helped (九) 1.neither;nor 2.will be attracted 3.cheer;up 4.where you can taste 5.What a wonderful/great (十) 1.took part in 2.was interested in 3.how;developed 4.was praised 5.What an educational 专题七书面表达 写作基本功专练 基本句型（一） 1.Science and technology are developing very quickly. 2.The Earth's temperature is increasing. 3.Alice can swim. 4.David gets up early every day. 5.You should work hard. 6.We talked about history that day.That day we talked about history. 7.Great changes have taken place in my home town in the past ten years. 8.I lived in Guangzhou a few years ago. 9.John went abroad last month. 10.How fast the time passes! 基本句型（二） 1.Shanghai is one of the largest cities in the world. 2.Collecting stamps is really educational 3.Our educational exchange is fantastic. 4.She looks friendly. 5.I feel really sorry about it. 6. This problem seems difficult to solve. 7.We are hard-working students. 8.Our aim is to make our dreams come true.Our aim is to realize our dreams. 9.The weather is getting hotter and hotter. 10.The old man became a famous writer in his 80s/eighties 基本句型（三） 1.Great inventions change the world. 2.You should read English books and magazines. 3.We organized a painting competition. 4.They will satisfy everyone. 44参考答案详解详析 5.Many of our habits cause pollution. 6.They successfully completed the plan. 7.You must return these books to the library in two weeks. 8.I look forward to receiving your letter/hearing from you. 9.We practise speaking English every day. 10.She always helps me. 基本句型（四） 1.Music can bring them joy and peace. 2.Mum gave her some advice. 3.It gave me a chance to learn new words 4.He gave students some suggestions. 5.My mother gave me a special gift on my birthday. 6.I bought my mother a beautiful dress. 7.My grandmother tells me a funny and meaningful story every night. 8.We should give the old our seats. 9.Mary taught us English last year. 10.Robots brought us a lot of convenience. 基本句型（五） 1.He makes the class very interesting. 2.Our Maths teacher uses a lot of games to help us learn. 3.They help people live a better life. 4.They allow people to keep in touch with each other anytime,anywhere. 5.This helps them express their feelings. 6.Our Maths teacher always encourages us to study hard. 7.To be honest,we all consider him very friendly. 8.We will make our school become better and better. 9.This movie let us learn about Chinese history. 10.I find it interesting to learn English. 真题演练 2024年广州中考真题 An unforgettable school trip Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday.I went there with all the students and teachers of Grade 9 together. We got together at 8:00 a.m.at the school gate and left for the museum by bus.We listened to a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there.After that,we took a visit around the museum.Many modern inventions were shown.They were about industry,education and life.What impressed me most was the experience of using them,which gave me a better understanding of modern technologies.We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by a robot.How amazing! This trip was really interesting and meaningful,and it made me become more interested in science.I knew I should study hard to make our country even better. 2023年广州中考真题 Dear Sam, Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.Let me introduce something about the activity to you. 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY4 The theme of the activity is "Healthy You and Me",and it will be held from 8:30 a.m.to 11:30 a.m.next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There will be many interesting activities.First,there will be a sports history show.It will be held in our school hall.Besides,"Healthy You and Me"speech will be on, too.There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes,such as football,basketball,tennis and so on.If you want to take part in the activity,please let us know before this Friday. The main purpose of the activity is to increase students' interest in sports,and encourage students to take exercise actively.I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 2022年广州中考真题 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library.It is green. Green means health and environmental protection.It is built from renewable resources.And it is round.Round,also called circle,means something that is perfect and natural. When you sit inside,you will feel very warm.I want to use the waste paper and solar panels to build the green library. All its energy comes from the Sun.You can enjoy reading all kinds of books in it.You can also listen to music in it.If you are tired,you can also take a short break inside.I believe it's a good place for you to spend your free time here. 备考演练 训练一 Dear all, Welcome to our school!I am here to introduce the Sunshine Support Team. The Sunshine Support Team is popular.I think it's useful.We can choose our group members and take part in different activities.We usually make plans to study each month.Besides,we discuss in groups once a week so that we can help each other to solve difficult problems. I learn a lot from other group members.This activity not only helps improve our study,but also gives us a chance to communicate with our friends.It is a wonderful way to learn from each other.Come and join us!I am sure that you will have fun. 训练二 Good morning,everyone!I am Li Hua.Life is colourful.There are many important things we should value in our daily lives. First,we should value our lives.We are supposed to stay away from dangerous things like fire.We should pay attention to our safety.Second,we should value our health. We need to do much exercise to keep healthy.We should also get enough sleep so that we can do everything well. Third,we had better spend more time communicating with our 参考答案详解详析 family.For friends,it is important for us to get on well with them.Finally,we should value the time and make good plans for our study.Don't waste time on useless things. Thanks for your listening. 训练三 Be a Good Team Member There is an old saying in China,"When people are united,they are strong.It tells people the importance of teamwork.By discussing problems with members of the team,we can come up with better ideas.But how can you be a good team member?Here are some tips for you. First,communicate more with each other.There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates.We should listen to other people and express ourselves bravely.Second,work together on projects.When everybody works together,things will go better.Finally, team members should help each other. All in all,teamwork plays an important role in our daily lives.Let's try our best to build a wonderful future. 训练四 Books are our best friends.Reading books can increase our knowledge and make us wiser.It can also broaden our horizons and we can improve ourselves by reading. We should read different kinds of books,such as science books,novels,history books and so on.It's important for us to have a proper reading plan.We can read five days a week and one hour a day.Keeping a good reading habit helps us manage our time and have a better understanding of books. Reading in a quiet and comfortable place is also important. Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now. 训练五 My Dream Job We all have dream jobs.As for me,I dream of being a scientist.I have always been interested in science.I want to invent new products to improve people's lives and I also hope to discover the secrets of the world. To be a scientist,I need to take action right now.First, I'm going to study science really hard.Second,I plan to do scientific research.And most importantly,I'll read as many books as possible.If I become a scientist,I will live in Beijing.I can communicate with more experts there.I believe my dream will come true if I work hard. 训练六 Dear Mike, How are you?I'm glad to tell you something about the Lingnan Cultural Festival. Our school will hold the Lingnan Cultural Festival next Saturday morning on our school playground.Then all teachers and students will take part in it.The festival includes three activities.First,everyone will eat different kinds of delicious food from Lingnan.Second,there will be a painting competition among students.And the student who wins first prize will get a gift.Finally,my Chinese teacher will write a 阅盟学堂XTPZK GZYY poem to celebrate the festival. I want to invite you to enjoy these activities and experience them happily. Hope you'll enjoy the festival. Yours, Li Hua 训练七 An Unforgettable Experience I'm happy to share my experience with you.Last summer,during a school trip to the Great Wall,I had an unforgettable experience. We were hiking along the wall when a sudden storm hit. The strong wind and the rain made it difficult to see. Luckily,we managed to find our way back.It was scary,but our teachers and classmates supported each other.Though we got wet,we were happy. From this experience,I learnt the importance of teamwork.Facing challenges together,we could get over them.This experience encouraged me to face difficulties with courage and confidence. 训练八 Dear editor, Yesterday we did a survey in our class about the most popular activities by the school English club. According to the survey,story telling is the most popular activity,with 31%of the students choosing it.English songs come next,preferred by 26%of the students.Fun dubbing is also quite popular,attracting 24%of the students.English drama,however,is the least popular,with only 19%of the students showing interest. Personally,I enjoy fun dubbing the most.It is not only interesting,but also helps to improve my spoken English. Moreover,it allows me to learn more about different cultures through different movies.This activity raises my interest in English and makes learning more enjoyable. Yours, Li Hua 语篇组合训练 语篇组合基础练一 1-5 CDCBB 6-10 DCADC 11-15 CAACB 16-20 DDCAC 21-25 BDBDA 26.hard 27.pollution 28.Water 29.stop 30.less 31.took an unforgettable trip 32.what to expect 33.were told 34.provided us with 35.How important 语篇组合基础练二 1-5 DBADA 6-10 CDBED 11-12 CA 语篇组合基础练三 1-5 BACCB 6-10 ABCAD 11-15 ABDCA 参考答案详解详析