UNIT 6 Section Ⅴ Writing Workshop(课件PPT)-【步步高】2024-2025学年高二英语选择性必修第二册学习笔记(北师大版)
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摘要:
该高中英语课件聚焦影评写作,通过《美女与野兽》影评阅读导入,从细节把握(如电影改编来源、人物性格分析)到文章架构梳理(影评四部分排序),再到语言特征积累(either...or...等连接词),搭建“输入理解-结构分析-语言储备”的学习支架,衔接阅读输入与写作输出。
其亮点在于以核心素养为导向,通过细节题(如作者态度判断)和语言积累活动提升语言能力,架构排序(C→A→D→B)培养思维品质中的逻辑分析能力,分步演练(《哪吒》影评从审题到范文)提供可操作策略,增强学习能力。学生能系统掌握影评写作,教师可直接用于课堂实操,提升教学效率。
内容正文:
Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
THE MEDIA
UNIT 6
Part 1 课文整体理解
Part 2 写作技法指导
整体理解
课文
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Activity 1 Read for details [细节把握]
Read the film review on P62 and choose the best answer.
1.What can we know about the film “Beauty and the Beast”?
A.It is based on a true story.
B.Chaplin directed the film.
C.It is adapted from a fairy tale.
D.It implies that appearance is important.
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2.Who are the main characters in the film?
A.Felicie and Adelaide.
B.Beauty and the Beast.
C.Beauty’s father and Beauty.
D.Beauty’s two sisters and the Beast.
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3.What can we know about Beauty from paragraph 2?
A.She is brave and kind.
B.She is honest and gentle.
C.She is lovely and outgoing.
D.She is adventurous and clever.
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4.What’s the author’s attitude towards the film?
A.Critical. B.Subjective.
C.Positive. D.Ambiguous.
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Activity 2 Read for structures [文章架构]
1.A film review includes the following parts.Read the film review on P62 again and put them in the right order.
A.Brief summary of the plot
B.Comments and recommendations
C.Basic information about the film
D.Attractive scenes and/or drawbacks
答案 C→A→D→B
2.According to the film review on P62,we can learn when we write a film review we can use the following outline.
第一部分 电影简介
第二部分 电影情节及特点
第三部分 观后感受
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Activity 3 Read for language features [增分靓句]
这篇影评运用了一些用来描述两种选择的连接词,如:either...or...;neither...nor...。请在这篇影评中找出使用这些结构的句子,并积累起来。
答案 1.The owner of the castle is an abnormal creature,half-man,half-beast,who tells the trader—either one of his daughters replaces him as a prisoner in the castle,or he will die.
2.Although it has neither cute characters nor wonderful songs in this version,it speaks to people of all ages.
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技法指导
写作
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本单元的写作任务是写一篇影评。影评是对电影的情节构思、演员表现、摄影技巧、蕴含的道理及影片的时代意义等进行分析和评论。影评可分为三部分:
1.整体介绍:可给出所评论电影的基本信息,如电影名、电影类型、导演和主演等;
2.正文部分:从背景、情节、演技、音乐、特效及主题等方面进行评论;
3.结尾:给出自己或观众对该电影的评价,也可向读者推荐该电影作品。
一、首段常用句式
1.Of all my favorite movies,I recommend...
在所有我最喜爱的影片中,我推荐……
2.It is believed that the film...would be the most wonderful...in recent years.
大家都认为……是近年来最精彩的……电影。
常用表达
二、中段常用句式
1.For one thing,based on...,...is directed by...
一方面,根据……改编的电影……是由……导演。
2.For another,the film represents true love,...in a unique way.
另一方面,电影用一种独特的方式展示了真正的爱与……
3.As for me,the most impressive scene is that...
对我来说,最令我印象深刻的一幕是……
三、尾段常用句式
1.I’m sure that...will leave you a deep impression and I’m also looking forward to discussing it with you.
我确信……会给你留下深刻印象,我也期待和你共同讨论。
2.The film is well worth seeing,as it carries the main idea that...这部电影非常值得一看,因为它传达了……的中心思想。
3.What I have to admit is that this movie does wonders,such as its advanced digital video effect.
我不得不承认的是,这部电影创造了奇迹,比如它先进的数字视频效果。
请根据下列提示写一篇关于动画片《哪吒》的影评。
1.电影取材;2.故事梗概;3.观影感受。
分步演练
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇电影评论。写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇电影评论;
2.主体时态:应以一般现在时为主;
3.主体人称:以第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段:简单介绍电影的背景及相关情况(导演、演员、受欢迎情况等);
第二段:叙述电影的主要情节;
第三段:谈谈你对电影的评价和电影带来的启示。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇(含本单元词汇)
1.经典的 _______
2.改编版 ___________
3.技术上的 _________
4.自由 _______
5.根本的 ____________
6.吸引 _______
classic
adaptation
technical
liberty
fundamental
attract
连词成句
1.很明显导演对剧情进行了大的改动。
the director has greatly changed the plot.
2.人们过去常常认为哪吒屈服于自己的命运。
People Ne Zha gives in to his fate.
3.哪吒经历了一系列的挫折。
Ne Zha a series of setbacks.
It is obvious that
used to think
has gone through
4.他在电影中的那句有名的台词吸引并抓住了观众的注意。
His famous line in the film and the attention of the
audience.
5.影片使用了一些特效,目的是把他塑造成一个英雄。
The film uses some special effects creating him
as a hero.
6.这是我看过的最好的动画片之一。
This is one of the best cartoons .
attracts
holds
with the purpose of
that I have ever seen
第三步 句式升级
1.用because连接句1和句2。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用although连接句3和句4。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is obvious that the director has greatly changed the plot because people used to think Ne Zha gives in to his fate.
Although Ne Zha has gone through a series of setbacks,his famous line in the film attracts and holds the attention of the audience.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
The new cartoon Ne Zha is based loosely on the novel Feng Shen Yan Yi.Directed by Yang Yu,it has become a hit.
It is obvious that the director has greatly changed the plot because people used to think Ne Zha gives in to his fate.However,in the new cartoon,he fights against his dark destiny for liberty.Although Ne Zha has gone through a series of setbacks,his famous line in the film attracts and holds the attention of the audience.That is “My fate is in my hand,not in the deity’s.” The film uses some special effects with the purpose of creating him as a hero.
To be honest,this is one of the best cartoons I have ever seen and I recommend it to you.
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本课结束
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