Unit 4 Section Ⅴ (2) Reading for Writing（课件PPT）-【步步高】2024-2025学年高二英语选择性必修第二册学习笔记（人教版）

该高中英语课件围绕“跨国旅行”主题，聚焦阅读细节理解、文章结构分析及旅行邮件写作，通过细节题（如蒙特利尔语言、人物信息）、文章架构梳理（多伦多-蒙特利尔-哈利法克斯行程）搭建阅读支架，过渡到长句结构（如As引导时间状语从句、who引导定语从句）分析，最终落实到写作技法（邮件开头、主体、结尾表达），形成从输入到输出的学习脉络。 其亮点在于分层递进的教学设计，通过“整体理解-长句分析-写作指导”提升学生语言能力（如掌握同位语、see+宾补等结构）和思维品质（如文章结构逻辑梳理、句式转换）。实例包括分步演练中用非限制性定语从句改写句子、强调句型运用，帮助学生系统掌握写作技巧。学生能强化语言运用能力，教师可借助具体例句和步骤提高教学效率。

Section Ⅴ Using Language (2)—Reading for Writing Journey across a vast land Unit 4 Part 1　课文整体理解 Part 2　长句难句分析 Part 3　写作技法指导 整体理解 课文 3 Activity 1　Read for details[细节把握] 1.What languages do people speak in Montreal? A.English and Chinese. B.French and English. C.English and German. D.French and German. √ 2.What can we know about Lin Fei? A.She is Li Daiyu’s old schoolmate. B.She moved to Canada last year. C.She knew downtown Chinatown well. D.She cooked a delicious meal for them. √ 3.How long did the two girls stay in Montreal? A.For half a day. B.For three days. C.For one day. D.For a week. √ 4.What is Jean-Philippe’s opinion about his city—Montreal? A.It is a city that is well worth visiting. B.It is the wealthiest city in Canada. C.It consists of many people coming from China. D.It is greatly influenced by English culture. √ 5.What’s the main idea of the whole passage? A.The two girls liked Toronto better than Montreal. B.The two girls met a young man. C.The two girls preferred Montreal to Toronto. D.The two girls travelled in Toronto and Montreal. √ Activity 2　Read for structures[文章架构] Toronto Seeing the true north via rail Paras.1-4 Li Daiyu and Liu Qian’s experience in _________ Paras.5-9 Their experience in __________ Para.10 Their time spent on the train towards ________ Montreal Halifax Activity 3　Read for language features[增分靓句] 1.Find the sentences used to describe the environment. (找出描写环境的句子) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Standing in the distance，they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls，which is on the south side of the lake.Water from the lakes flows into the Niagara River and over the falls on its way to the sea. 2.Find the sentences used to describe Montreal.(找出描写蒙特利尔的句子) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Overall，Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds. Most of us speak both English and French，and the city has unique Quebec culture and traditions.There are fantastic restaurants and clubs around，too. 返 回 难句分析 长句 12 1.As they walked north from the harbour area，Li Daiyu said，“Lin Fei，one of my mother’s old (schoolmate)，lives here.I should phone her and see if she’s available for dinner.” (P44 Para.2) 结构分析：此句是 句，As引导的是 从句，if引导的是 从句。 汉语翻译：_____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Ⅰ.补句子　析结构 schoolmates 离开港口区后，她们向北行走。李黛予说：“我妈妈的老同学林菲就住在这里。我得给她打个电话，看看她是否有空一起吃晚饭。” 主从复合 时间状语 宾语 2.The cousins (chat) with Lin Fei，who had moved to Canada many years earlier. (P44 Para.3) 结构分析：此句是 句，who引导的是 从句，修饰先行词Lin Fei。 汉语翻译：_____________________________________________________ chatted 林菲多年前就来到加拿大生活。表姐妹俩与她畅聊了一番。 主从复合 非限制性定语 3.We have a few more in the Greater Toronto Area，so you can guess that there (be) a lot of Chinese people in Canada! (P44 Para.4) 结构分析：此句是 句，so连接两个并列分句。that引导的是_____从句。 汉语翻译：_____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ are 大多伦多地区还有几个唐人街，你们可以猜到加拿大有很多中国人！ 并列复合 宾语 4.Most of us speak English and French，and the city has unique Quebec culture and traditions. (P44 Para.9) 结构分析：此句是and连接的 句。 汉语翻译：_____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ both 我们大多数人既说英语，也说法语。这座城市拥有独特的魁北克文化和传统。 并列 Ⅱ.研典句　学用法 1　 同位语 After Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto，the largest and wealthiest city in Canada，they only had a few hours to kill before they had to proceed to the next leg of their trip to Montreal，so they went on a tour of the city. (P44 Para.1) 李黛予和表妹抵达加拿大最大、最富有的城市多伦多之后，仅有几个小时的时间可以消磨，然后就得继续前往旅程的下一站蒙特利尔，于是两人就在市区逛了逛。 结构分析：此句是并列复合句，After引导的是时间状语从句，the largest and wealthiest city in Canada在句中作同位语，对Toronto作进一步的解释和说明，before引导的是时间状语从句。 同位语的具体用法如下： • 名词、代词、数词作同位语； • 不定式、动名词、分词、介词短语作同位语； • 从句作同位语。同位语从句通常跟在某些抽象名词(fact，plan，view， idea，belief，opinion，possibility，thought，aim，doubt等)后，用 来说明所修饰词的内容。 (1)(应用文写作之申请信)我是李华，一名来自育才中学的学生，我写信申请成为一名接待来访的外国学生的志愿者。我有与外国人打交道的丰富经验这一事实让我在众多应征者中脱颖而出。因为我曾担任过导游，领着外国游客参观北京，毫无疑问我可以成为一名合格的志愿者。 I am Li Hua， and I am writing to apply to be a volunteer to receive the visiting foreign students.The fact ________________________________________________ makes me stand out among numerous candidates.Because I once served as a guide—___________________________________，there is no doubt ___________ ____________________. a student from Yucai Middle School that I have rich experience in dealing with foreigners showing foreign tourists around Beijing that I can be a qualified volunteer (2)我有个好消息要告诉你，我已被选为即将到来的全运会的志愿者了。 I have good news to tell you in the coming National Games. (3)我们坚信游客会了解更多的中国传统文化，享受中国传统文化的美。 We hold the firm belief __________________________________________ _______________________________________. that I have been chosen to be a volunteer that visitors will know more about traditional Chinese culture and enjoy the beauty of it 2　 see＋宾语＋宾语补足语 Standing in the distance，they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls，which is on the south side of the lake. (P44 Para.1) 站在远处，她们看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布升腾而起的水雾，惊叹不已。 结构分析：此句是复合句，Standing in the distance是动词-ing形式作状语，see misty clouds rising为“see＋宾语＋宾语补足语”结构，宾语补足语既可以是不带to的动词不定式，也可以是现在分词和过去分词，which引导的是非限制性定语从句。 结构 含义 例句 see sb/sth do 看到动作的全过程 I saw him enter the bank.我看见他进了银行。 see sb/sth doing 看到动作正在进行 I saw him playing in the park.我看见他正在公园里玩。 see sb/sth done 看到某人/某物被…… I saw him knocked down by a car.我看见他被一辆小汽车撞倒了。 点津：除see外，hear，notice，observe，watch，feel等感官类动词也有类似用法。不带to的不定式作宾语补足语时，如变成被动句，需加上to；现在分词和过去分词作宾语补足语时，如变成被动句，则不需要变化。 (1)(2022·浙江1月，读后续写)我一看到他无助地躺在病床上，就意识到我不得不独自完成我们的课题了。最终，当他听说我们的课题被高度评价时，满意的笑容浮现在他的脸庞。我也感到快乐在我心间流淌。 The moment I ，I realized that I had to complete our project alone.Finally，when he ________________________ ___________，a smile of satisfaction emerged on his face.I also ________ _____________________________. saw him lying helplessly in bed heard our project highly thought of felt happiness flowing in my heart (2)我看见我朋友双手掩面，止不住地哭泣。 I saw my friend ，crying uncontrollably. (3)I heard him sing a beautiful popular song in the classroom. →________________________________________________________(被动语态) (4)We noticed her hiding behind the curtain like a frightened bird. →________________________________________________________(被动语态) 返 回 burying her/his face in her/his hands He was heard to sing a beautiful popular song in the classroom. She was noticed hiding behind the curtain like a frightened bird. 技法指导 写作 26 本单元的写作目标是写一封关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次出行、游览、参观等的记录。 1.邮件开头常用语 I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you. 我想和你分享最精彩的一次经历。 I’m glad to share an unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.我很高兴和你分享去年暑假我的一次难忘的旅行经历。 Knowing that you want to know...，I’m writing to tell you that... 知道你想了解……，所以我写邮件告诉你…… 常用表达 I’m extremely delighted to receive your email.And I would like to write an email to tell you that...很高兴收到你的电子邮件，我想写封邮件告诉你…… I went on a seven-day trip to...last winter vacation，which is really an unforgettable memory.去年寒假我去……旅行了七天，这真是一段难忘的记忆。 2.邮件主体常用语： On...，we flew to...，from where we went to...by bus. 在……，我们飞往……，从那里我们乘坐公交车去…… What impressed me most during the trip/journey is that... 旅行中最让我印象深刻的是…… We paid a visit to...我们参观了…… The place lies in/is located in...这个地方坐落于…… The place is well-known for...这个地方以……而闻名。 I enjoyed a pleasant trip to...with my parents this National Day holiday. 今年国庆节假期我和父母享受了一次愉快的……之旅。 ...is a beautiful garden city，with clean streets and various buildings. ……是一座漂亮的花园城市，有着干净的街道和各种各样的建筑。 We visited the covered stadium，which is home of several famous basketball teams. 我们参观了室内体育场，那里是几支著名篮球队的驻地。 The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away. 风景如此美丽，真让游客们惊叹。 It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world. 它已经成为世界上最受欢迎的景点之一。 3.邮件结尾常用语 We were all exhausted，but our trip to...was really unforgettable. 我们都很累，但是我们去……的旅行真的让人难忘。 I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. 我期待着你方便时给我回复。 I do hope you will have fun in...我真的希望你能在……玩得开心。 Not only did the trip entertain me，but it also broadened my horizons. 这次旅行不仅使我快乐而且开阔了我的视野。 Exhausted as we were，it was worth it.尽管我们很累，但这是值得的。 In a word，it’s quite relaxing and romantic to travel there and I love this experience very much. 总之，去那里旅行既让人放松又浪漫，我非常喜欢这次经历。 I sincerely invite you to travel to...with me next time. 我真诚地邀请你下次和我一起去……旅行。 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信询问你去四川参观乐山大佛的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括： 1.旅游过程； 2.你的感受。 注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：大佛the Giant Stone Buddha 分步演练 第一步　审题谋篇 第二步　遣词造句 [核心词汇]　(含本单元词汇) 1.使十分惊讶 _________ 2.字面上；真正地 ________ 3.巨大的；非常严重的 _________ 4.顶峰；山峰 ______ 5.令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的 _________ 6.景色 ________ astonish literally massive peak awesome scenery 7.令人惊叹 _____________________ 8.在黄昏 ________ 9.令人愉快的；友好的 __________ 10.一定会 ____________ take sb’s breath away at dusk pleasant be bound to [连词成句]　(含本单元句型) 1.七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方。 On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province. Leshan . 2.我们吃惊地发现大佛真的很大。 _______________________________ the Buddha is literally massive. 3.当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多么渺小。 __________________________________ and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small. is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha We were astonished to find that When I looked up at the large head 4.第二天，直到登上了峨眉山山顶，我们才领略到了山上壮丽的风景。 The next day，we didn’t appreciate the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain Mount Emei. 5.在黄昏时刻，我们返程。 _______________________________________________________________ 6.我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。 _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ 7.如果再给我一次机会，我一定会再来游览乐山。 _______________________________________________________________ until we climbed to the peak of At dusk，we made our way back. We were all exhausted，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant. If I am given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again. 第三步　句式升级 1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha. Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small. 3.把句4改成强调句型。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.用done作状语改写句7。 _______________________________________________________________ Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again. The next day，it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain. 第四步　组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80个词左右的英语短文。 参考范文　 Dear Tom， I’m glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. _______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.We were astonished to find the Buddha is literally massive.Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.The next day， _______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time. Yours， Li Hua it was not until we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei that we appreciated the awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain.At dusk，we made our way back.We were all exhausted，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again. 返 回 本课结束 $