Unit 4 写作课课件 2025-2026学年沪教牛津版（广州深圳沈阳通用）九年级英语上册

Unit 4 Problems and advice 写作课 Module 2 Ideas and viewpoints wps稻壳儿佳誉设计原创链接：http://chn.docer.com/works?userid=219874625 1 Writing We often face problems or difficult situations in daily life. We can ask our friends, parents or teachers for help or write to the advice page of newspapers or magazines. An email to Aunt Linda a d e c b David has written an email to Aunt Linda to ask for advice. What does his email include? Read the email and fill in the blanks with the letters of the correct labels from the box. A Write an email to Aunt Linda to ask for advice on one of the following problems or a problem of your own. Use the email on page 59 and the expressions below to help you. B Learn the expressions in exercise B. I have trouble doing... I have a problem of... I am worried about… I regret not doing/doing… It’ s awful of... I feel ashamed/embarrassed of... I feel sorry/nervous about doing... What drive sb mad is...(主语从句) Para1 提出问题 妙 用 过 渡 句 Here are my suggestions. The following are my suggestions. I’ll give you some good suggestions. Here I’ll share with you my suggestions. 引出建议 逻辑词： First… Second…Third First of all…What’s more/ In addition… Last but not least Para2 提出建议 ❤It’s a good idea to... ❤It’s important for you to... ❤You can/ can’t do… Do…/ Don’t do… You should/ shouldn’t do … You need/ don’t need to do… You’d better do…/ You’d better not do… ❤I think he is/we are supposed to…. ❤Why don’t you do…?/ Why not do…? ❤How/ What about doing…? In my opinion/ In my eyes, All in all, in a word, As far as I am concerned, I think/believe/ hope my suggestions will be helpful. It is adj for sb to do sth. Para3 总结 10 五步法： 五美 四连 三列 二构 一审 书面 表达 Step by step 1. 审 2. 构 3. 列 4. 连 5. 美 人称_____ 时态_____ 要点_____ 连字成句，连句成段 在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色。 把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节 列出要点 写作演练 写作演练 假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。 要求：给出至少3条建议并且说明理由，词数80左右。 Dear Li Hua， Is everything going well with you？ I have to share a room with my little brother， and he’s driving me mad！ He has a habit of playing the guitar when I’m studying， and he always takes my things without asking. I try to keep my room tidy， but he doesn’t. I love my brother， but sometimes he’s making me so angry！ What should I do？ Would you please give me some advice？ All the best， Mike 大册p42 [思路点拨] 1. 时态： 2. 人称： 3. 在写作时，第一步开篇点题说明自己会给出建议；第二步具体介绍自己的建议；第三步表达自己的希望和祝愿。 一般现在时 第二人称 [写作提纲] I’m glad to answer your question. I have the following suggestions for you. First of all，you can talk to your brother clearly so that next time he won’t play the guitar while you are studying. It is better to study together. In addition，ask your brother the reason he takes something from your place without telling you. Finally，if your brother makes a mess，you can ask your parents for help，and have your brother clean the room too. In a word，you should talk with your brother calmly and let him try to understand you. I hope my suggestions can help you. $