Unit 3-Unit 4 写作训练2025-2026学年沪教牛津版英语九年级上册

该初中英语学习任务单聚焦九年级上册Unit 3“家庭生活”和Unit 4“问题与建议”的写作训练，以词汇短语积累为基础，通过佳句仿写（如there be句型、be expected to do sth等）搭建句型运用支架，进而过渡到书面表达的审题会意、谋篇布局与扩充成文，形成从基础到综合应用的递进式写作能力培养脉络。 资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，词汇短语与佳句仿写夯实语言基础，审题与谋篇环节引导学生分析写作要点、组织内容，提升逻辑思维。书面表达任务贴近学生生活，习题分步骤指导并附详细解析，助力学生主动运用学习策略，有效提升写作综合能力，体现学习能力的培养导向。

沪教版九年级上册Unit 3 写作训练 一、其他：本大题共2小题，共5分。 1.写作素材积累 (1) 词汇短语 第1页，共1页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 (1)n.交流；交际           (2)adv.单独地；分别地           (3)年长的亲戚           (4)出生时           (5)v. 要求；指望           (6)adj. 个人的           (7)v.安排           (8)v. 介意           (9)n.同意；应允           (10)照顾；照料           (11)阻止某人做某事           (12)组织活动           (13)遵守规则           (14) n.关系；联系           (15)v.认为；觉得           (16)n.责任           (17)adj.高兴；满意           (18)adv.在一起           (19)v.认为           (20)对满意           (21)对忠诚           (22)孤独感           (2) 佳句仿写 (1)Well, there are four of us: my mum, my dad, my brother Leo and me. （教材 P35）→使用“there be”句型介绍家庭成员 仿写：我家有七口人。              (2)No,I'm not expected to do the housework.（教材P35）→使用"be(not)expected to do sth."短语介绍家务分担情况 仿写：我被要求洗碗。              (3)I have no interest in things like fashionable clothes.（教材 P35）→使用“某人 + has/have no interest in sth.”句式介绍家庭活动 仿写：我的祖父母对外出就餐没有兴趣。              (4)All parents are invited to come and see The Wrong Trousers, our English—language play.（教材 P38）→使用“某人 + be invited to do sth.”句式介绍家庭活动 仿写：妈妈被邀请在家庭派对上跳舞。              (5)You're not allowed to watch TV when you're eating dinner.（教材 P46）→使用“某人+be(not)allowed to do sth.”句式介绍家庭规则 仿写：我不被允许熬夜太晚。                (6)Yes, I suppose they set some rules for me.（教材 P35）→使用“I suppose...”句式表达对家庭的感受仿写：我认为家是世界上最温暖的地方。              (7) I love all my family very much. We have a close relationship, and we always support each other.（教材 P35）→直接使用该句子表达对家庭成员的爱与支持 二、书面表达：本大题共4小题，共30分。 2.假如你是李明,下周你的班级将开展主题为“家庭生活”的班会。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇短文,和同学们分享自己的家庭生活。 Family members My mum, dad and me. Housework ... Family activities Watch movies together... Family rules Don't play computer games on weekdays ... Feelings ... 注意:(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;(2)词数80词左右;(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 (1) 审题会意本习作属于          ,要求写一篇关于          的英语短文。该习作包含至少          个要点,使用          人称,主要时态为          。写作时最好分为          个自然段描述。 (2) 谋篇布局(试着根据括号内的提示,写出作文中要用到的句子) ​​​​​​​(1)            (2)           ​​​​​​​ (3)           ​​​​​​​ (4)           ​​​​​​​ (5)           ​​​​​​​ (3) 扩充成文                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ​​​​​​​ 3.假如你是李华,你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛,主题是“My family life”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文,介绍你的家庭生活。 注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;(2)词数80词左右(文章的标题已给出,不计入词数);(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 My family life                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           答案和解析 1.【答案】【小题1】 (8) (9) communication (10) separately (11) older relatives (12) at birth (13) expect (14) personal (15) set (16) mind (17) agreement (18) look after (19) stop sb. from sth. (20) organize activities (21) obey the rules (22) relationship (23) consider (24) responsibility (25) pleased (26) together (27) suppose (28) happy with... faithful to... sense of loneliness 【小题2】 1. There are seven people in my family. 2. I am expected to wash the dishes. 3. My grandparents have no interest in going out for dinner. 4. Mum was invited to dance at the family party. 5. I'm not allowed to stay up too late. 6. I suppose family is the warmest place in the world. 2.【答案】【小题1】说明文  介绍家庭生活 5/五 第一 一般现在时 3/三 【小题2】 1. I suppose I'm lucky to have such a nice family.There are three people in my family: my mum, my dad and me. 2. Everyone in my family is expected to do some housework. 3. Sometimes, we are invited to have dinner with our neighbours. 4. I'm not allowed to play computer games on weekdays. 【小题3】 My family is a small but happy one. There are three people in my family: my mum, my dad and me. Everyone in my family is expected to do some housework. My mum is responsible for cooking. My dad does cleaning. And I wash the dishes. We all have an interest in movies. So we watch movies at home together every weekend. Sometimes, we are invited to have dinner with our neighbours. My parents set some rules for me. I'm not allowed to play computer games on weekdays. What's more, I must go to bed early because they believe teenagers should have enough sleep. I suppose I'm lucky to have such a nice family. I love my family deeply. 3.【答案】My family life I feel that my family is very happy. I love my family because it gives me a lot of warmth. There are five people in my family: my parents, my grandparents and me. My mum loves to sing, and every weekend she fills our home with beautiful tunes. My dad enjoys telling stories and helping us solve problems with his wisdom and experience. My favourite family activity is climbing mountains. It's healthy for us, and we also have fun doing sports on the mountains. Sometimes I feel sad or confused. But when I communicate with my family, they always give me good advice. Their support makes me feel strong, even when I'm facing difficulties. I am very proud of my family, and I hope we will continue to be happy and warm together. 沪教版九年级上册Unit 4 写作训练 一、任务型阅读-多任务混合：本大题共2小题，共10分。 1.写作素材积累 词汇短语 第1页，共1页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 (1)adj.很坏的;讨厌的           (2)adj.窘迫的;尴尬的           (3)v.不及格           (4)寻求建议           (5)减肥           (6)节食           (7)取笑某人           (8)嘲笑;讥笑           (9)为……担忧           (10)与某人无关           (11)让某人受不了           (12)搞得一塌糊涂           (13)有做某事的习惯           (14)格格不入           (15)说某人的坏话           (16)与……吵架           (17)v.提议;建议           (18)v.理解           (19)adj.正确的           (20)确保           (21)关心           (22)停止做某事           (23)报警           (24)学到重要的一课           (25)下定决心           (26)注意;关注           (27)在这种情况下           (2) 佳句仿写 (1)It was awful of them to laugh at her, and I regret not saying anything.(教材P51) →使用“it is/was +adj.+of sb.to do sth.”句型表达对某人行为的看法 →使用“regret(not) doing sth.”短语表达因(没) 做某事而后悔 仿写:他昨天对老师大喊大叫是不礼貌的。                仿写:我后悔和父母吵架。              (3) (2)I feel ashamed of myself.(教材P51)一使用“feel ashamed of...”短语表达某人感到羞愧的心情 仿写:他为自己房间里的杂乱感到羞愧。              (4) (3)I have a problem with a classmate, and I need your advice.(教材P59)使用“I have a problem with...,and I need your advice.”句式说明自己的烦恼和诉求 仿写:我和我最好的朋友之间出了问题,我需要你的建议。              (4)I believe you've learnt an important lesson -you'll regret it if you don't do the right thing at the right moment.(教材P61)直接使用该句子鼓励对方在正确的时间做正确的事 (5)If you stop paying attention to your friends, they'll stop laughing at you.(教材P61)使用“If you stop paying attention to..., 某人/某事+will...”句式建议某人不要关注令自己烦恼的负面内容 仿写: 如果你不再关注别人的看法, 你会感到更轻松。              二、书面表达：本大题共4小题，共30分。 2.假如你是李辉,这学期你想加入学校乐队,但是你的父母表示反对。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示给Aunt Alice的电台写一封信,谈一谈你遇到的问题,并向她寻求帮助。 注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;(2)词数80词左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。 (1) 审题会意本习作属于          ,要求写一篇关于          的信件。该习作包含至少          个要点,使用          人称,主要时态为          。写作时最好分为          个自然段描述。 (2) 谋篇布局(试着根据括号内的提示,写出作文中要用到的句子) (1)           (2)           (3)           (4)           (5)           (3) 扩充成文 Dear Aunt Alice, I am Li Hui, a student of Grade 9.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours, Li Hui 3.假如你是李华,你校英语杂志社的“Just Ask”栏目刚收到了Claire的电子邮件,她在邮件中讲述了自己的烦恼,并向大家寻求帮助。请你认真阅读这封电子邮件,给她一些建议。 From: Claire                                                                                  To:Just Ask Subject: Asking for advice Dear friends, I feel terrible and I really need your advice. The problem is that I'm not interested in clothes. I don't know what's in fashion and I don't like going shopping for clothes. Some of my friends laugh at me. What do you think I should do? Claire, 13 注意:(1)可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;(2)词数80词左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。 Dear Claire, I understand how you feel. Once I was also in the similar situation. It's not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Best regards Li Hua 答案和解析 1.【答案】【小题1】 (5) (6) awful (7) embarrassed (8) fail (9) ask for advice (10) lose weight (11) be on a diet (12) make jokes about sb (13) laugh at (14) be worried about (15) none of one's business (16) drive sb. mad (17) make a mess (18) have a habit of doing sth (19) out of place (20) say bad things about sb (21) have a fight with sb (22) suggest (23) understand (24) right (25) make sure (26) care about (27) stop doing sth (28) call the police (29) learn an important lesson (30) make up one's own mind (31) pay attention to (32) in this situation 【小题2】 1. It was impolite of him to shout at his teacher 2. I regret having a fight with my parents 3. He feels ashamed of the mess in his room. 4. I have a problem with my best friend, and I need your advice 5. If you stop paying attention to others' opinions,you'll feel easier 2.【答案】【小题1】 应用文 向他人倾诉烦恼并求助 3/三 第一和第三 一般过去时和一般现在时 3/三 【小题2】 1. I have a problem with my parents, and I need your advice  2. They were worried about my studies 3. It's annoying of them to control every part of my life 4. I don't want to have a fight with my parents 5. What should I do in this situation? 【小题3】 Dear Aunt Alice, I am Li Hui, a student of Grade. I decided to join the school band this term. But I have a problem with my parents, and I need your advice. When my parents heard about my decision, they were worried about my studies and disagreed. Although I promised to work hard and keep my grades up, they wouldn't listen to me. I know they care about me, but it's annoying of them to control every part of my life. I don't want to have a fight with my parents. I won't give up my hobby, either. What should I do in this situation? How can I change their minds? Looking forward to your advice. Yours, Li Hui 3.【答案】Dear Claire, I understand how you feel. Once I was also in the similar situation. It's not easy for us to get through teenage years smoothly. Here are my opinions. Firstly, there is no need to pay much attention to your clothes as long as they're tidy. Fashion can mean a lot, not just about clothes. For example, if you can speak beautiful English or volunteer to help others, you are in fashion. Next, a true friend should be someone who really understands you. You can have a talk with your friends and tell them your feelings. Believe they will change. Most of all, just be yourself. Don't care too much about what others say. Keep active, do what you are good at and improve yourself to be a better person. Best regards Li Hua $