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考前押题10 写作满分必背范文15篇
(三大主题,期中专项训练)
一、人与自我 1
二、人与社会 13
三、人与自然 22
一、人与自我
1.(24-25九上·上海闵行区·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “I solved a problem.”(以“我解决了一个问题”为题,根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格。)
在日常生活中,我们经常会碰到各种问题或挑战。请结合你的个人经历,说说你遇到的问题或挑战,以及你是怎么成功解决的?你的感受或收获是什么?
注意:1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、学校名等相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄本卷语篇不得分。
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2.(24-25九上·上海建平实验中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
学校为了建设书香校园,计划在教学楼道内布置一些“读书角(Reading Zone)”,并招募一些管理员。假设你是该校学生李明, 请给负责的张老师写一封自荐信,简单介绍自己,说明自己能胜任的理由,提出可以工作的时间段并讲述自己将如何管理。
注意:
1.信中不得出现姓名、学校等个人信息,否则不予评分;
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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3.(24-25九上·上海黄浦区·期中)为了丰富学生课后生活,放松心情,你们学校组织学生到上海世博文化公园 (Shanghai Expo Culture Park) 秋游。请根据下表所提供的信息,写一则日记,并发表你的感想。
内容提示:
时间
10月30日,星期三,天气晴朗
地点
Shanghai Expo Culture Park
抵达方式
乘旅游巴士
出发时间
7: 30 a. m.
到达时间
9: 00 a. m.
活动内容
上午:爬双子山 (Twin Hills),登高望远;
午饭:在星光草坪 (Starlight Lawn) 上野餐;
下午:参观上海温室花园 (Shanghai Greenhouse), 看奇花异木。
返回时间
4: 30 p. m.
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的要点,可适当发挥。
(2)词数(开头已给出,不计入总词数,注意日记格式并补充完整)。
October 30th ________ ________
In order to make our after-school life colorful and relax our minds, we went for an autumn outing to Shanghai Expo Culture Park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(24-25九上·上海杨浦区·期中)In 60—100 words, write an email according to the given situation and prompts. (根据所给情景和提示,写一篇60—100字的邮件,标点符号不占格。)
You visited an English friend, Peter’s house at the weekend and you think you left a bag there. Write an email to Peter. In your email, you should:
◆ explain what has happened
◆ describe the bag and what’s inside it
◆ say what you would like Peter to do
◆ think of a subject (主题) for your email.
(注意:文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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5.(24-25九上·上海建平西校·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学初三学生李明,你校初三年级计划举办一次主题为“我的初中生活”的展览,邀请每一位初三学生选择一件最能体现你初中生活的物品参展,并为此展品配上文字说明供参观者阅读。写一段展品介绍,内容须包括:(1)对该物品的简要介绍;
(2)你选择该物品参展的理由。
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(24-25九上·上海西南模范中学·期中)6.Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
你的学校近期拟开展一次校园艺术节活动 (School Art Festival),本次活动旨在发挥同学们的艺术特长,营造良好的校园艺术氛围。目前学校德育处正就活动方案征求意见。
假如你是初三学生毕华,请阅读以下活动方案,给德育处王老师写一封信。
信件必须包括以下内容:
1. 你是否会报名参加校园艺术节活动,并简述理由;
2. 针对活动方案中的1-2项内容,提出修改建议。
校园艺术节活动方案
活动主题
“艺术让校园生活更美好”
(Art makes school life better)
活动时间
5月6日至5月8日 下午3:30-4:30
活动地点
学校艺术教室 (Art Room)
活动对象
6至8年级学生
活动形式
艺术讲座、学生作品展示
(Art lectures &Students’ works display)
(注意:1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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7.(24-25九上·上海宝山区·期中)请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文
Your name is Tony. A friend of yours, Jack will study at home during the winter holiday and has asked you to recommend a learning tool. 你是Tony,你的一位朋友Jack打算寒假期间在家自学,所以想请你推荐一个学习工具。
Write a letter to Jack. In your letter:
√ say what the learning tool is (give it an interesting name) 说说这个学习工具是什么 (给它起个有趣的名字)
√ describe the learning tool and its uses 描述这个学习工具以及它的用途
√ tell the reason why you recommend it 说一说你推荐它的原因
Remember: the learning tool can be a reference book, a website, a program, an app, or whatever you use to help you with your study.
(注意:学习工具可以是一本参考书,一个网站,一个程序,一个应用或其他任何可以帮助你学习的东西。)
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8.(24-25九上·上海进才实验中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
阳光博物馆打算举办“2040时间胶囊(2040 Time Capsule)”主题活动,现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2040年打开,让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你(李华)写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长(Mr. Li),信的内容应包括:你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”?它有什么功能和特点?你为何选择这件物品?
以下物品供参考:
(1)一把扫帚(a broom)(2)一张纸币(a banknote)(3)一支中性笔(a gel pen)
(4)一辆共享单车(a shared bicycle)(5)一段沪剧 (a clip of Shanghai Opera)
(6)一副近视眼镜(a pair of glasses for short-sightedness)
(7)一个U盘(a flash disc)(8)一份印刷的报纸(a printed newspaper)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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二、人与社会
9.(23-24九上·上海奉贤区七校·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以”复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
期中检测即将来临,同学们都在认真复习准备,有些同学认为复习时间紧张,可以减少一部分体育活动时间,有些同学认为没有必要。请你谈谈你的看法。
注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
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(24-25九上·上海位育中学·期中)10.Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你和你的家人刚搬到了上海郊区的一个城镇,你打算给你的朋友 Jane 寄一张小镇风景的明信片。
About Greenland Town
Location
About 15 km south of the Shanghai City
Transport
Metro(Underground. Line 9)
Bus 87, 91, 92
Area
2 square kilometers
In your postcard to your friend, you should
● introduce the town briefly
● explain why you have moved
● say what you like and dislike about living there.
注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分
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11.(24-25九上·上海奉贤区·期中)某英文报纸发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论,呼吁大家关注同学之间的和谐关系,友好相处,建设和谐校园。假如你是李华,请你就这一主题发表自己的看法,包括你觉得为什么要与同学友好相处以及如何与同学建立和谐关系的方法,写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格。
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12.(24-25九上·上海浦东新区·期中)假设你是李华,在即将举行的中学生国际文化节交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统文化,请选择以下其中一个内容,用英语写一篇发言稿。词数不少于60,标点符号不占格。
A)介绍一个中国传统节日 a traditional Chinese festival(包括时间、习俗活动、意义)
B)介绍一种中国传统技艺 a traditional Chinese skill(包括名称、内容、意义)等。
注意:1.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
2.使用本试卷中语篇内容不得分。
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13.(24-25九上·上海崇明区·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
在学习和生活中,我们会碰到许多做决定的情况,例如“运动会上选择哪个项目”,“拓展课上选择什么科目”,“家里是否养一只宠物狗”等等,请以“A Decision I Made”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,描述你曾经做过的一个决定,以及从中获得的体验、成长与收获。
注意:
1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
A Decision I Made
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14.(24-25九上·上海浦东新区民办欣竹中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
阳光博物馆打算举办“2035时间胶囊(2035 Time Capsule.)”主题活动,现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2035年打开,让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长(Mr.Li)。
信的内容应包括:你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”? 它有什么功能和特点?你为何选择这件物品?
以下物品供参考:
① 一把扫帚(a broom) ② 一张纸币(a banknote)
③ 一支中性笔(a gel pen) ④ 一个U盘(a flash drive)
⑤ 一辆共享单车(a shared bicycle) ⑥ 一段沪剧(a clip of Shanghai Opera)
⑦ 一副近视眼镜(a pair of glasses for short-sightedness)
注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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三、人与自然
(24-25九上·上海市西中学·期中)15.随着校园里出现的流浪猫(stray cat) 越来越多,有同学提议要在学校建立一个“流浪猫小屋(stray cat hut)”,为这些小动物提供安全的进食、休息的场所。你是否同意这样的建议呢?请写一篇不少于60个词的短文,发表你的看法。
写作要求:
1)阐明你是否同意这个建议;
2)从“流浪猫”和“学生”这两个角度陈述理由;
3)写作内容中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
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考前押题10 写作满分必背范文15篇
(三大主题,期中专项训练)
一、人与自我 1
二、人与社会 13
三、人与自然 22
一、人与自我
1.(24-25九上·上海闵行区·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “I solved a problem.”(以“我解决了一个问题”为题,根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格。)
在日常生活中,我们经常会碰到各种问题或挑战。请结合你的个人经历,说说你遇到的问题或挑战,以及你是怎么成功解决的?你的感受或收获是什么?
注意:1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、学校名等相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄本卷语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I solved a problem
Once, I was stuck on a math problem. It seemed so hard that I didn’t know where to start. I tried for hours but still couldn’t solve it. Then, I decided to ask my teacher for help. She explained it to me step by step and gave me some tips. With her help, I finally understood it and solved it by myself. I felt so happy and proud. This experience taught me that when I face difficulties, I should keep trying and ask for help if needed.
【来源】上海市闵行区2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:提示问题已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己遇到的问题;
第二步,介绍自己是如何成功解决的;
第三步,表达自己的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
① ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助
② step by step一步一步地
[高分句型]
① It seemed so hard that I didn’t know where to start.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
② This experience taught me that when I face difficulties, I should keep trying and ask for help if needed.(that引导的宾语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(24-25九上·上海建平实验中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
学校为了建设书香校园,计划在教学楼道内布置一些“读书角(Reading Zone)”,并招募一些管理员。假设你是该校学生李明, 请给负责的张老师写一封自荐信,简单介绍自己,说明自己能胜任的理由,提出可以工作的时间段并讲述自己将如何管理。
注意:
1.信中不得出现姓名、学校等个人信息,否则不予评分;
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am Li Ming, a student from our school. I am writing to apply for the position of Reading Zone administrator.
I have a strong passion for reading and organizing books. I am responsible and have experience in managing school events. I am available to work during lunch breaks and after school. I plan to keep the Reading Zone tidy and assist students in finding books.
I hope to contribute to our school’s reading culture. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Li Ming
【来源】上海市建平实验中学2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇自荐信;
②时态:时态是“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍自己,表明写作目的;
第二步,说明自己能胜任的理由,提出可以工作的时间段并讲述自己将如何管理;
第三步,表决心,并结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②have a strong passion for对……有强烈的热情
③contribute to为……做出贡献
[高分句型]
①Thank you for considering my application. (祈使句)
3.(24-25九上·上海黄浦区·期中)为了丰富学生课后生活,放松心情,你们学校组织学生到上海世博文化公园 (Shanghai Expo Culture Park) 秋游。请根据下表所提供的信息,写一则日记,并发表你的感想。
内容提示:
时间
10月30日,星期三,天气晴朗
地点
Shanghai Expo Culture Park
抵达方式
乘旅游巴士
出发时间
7: 30 a. m.
到达时间
9: 00 a. m.
活动内容
上午:爬双子山 (Twin Hills),登高望远;
午饭:在星光草坪 (Starlight Lawn) 上野餐;
下午:参观上海温室花园 (Shanghai Greenhouse), 看奇花异木。
返回时间
4: 30 p. m.
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的要点,可适当发挥。
(2)词数(开头已给出,不计入总词数,注意日记格式并补充完整)。
October 30th ________ ________
In order to make our after-school life colorful and relax our minds, we went for an autumn outing to Shanghai Expo Culture Park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】October 30th Wednesday Sunny
In order to make our after-school life colorful and relax our minds, we went for an autumn outing to Shanghai Expo Culture Park.
We set out by school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasant and every one of us was excited. After one and a half hours’ ride, we arrived there at 9:00 a. m. We began our programs as soon as we got off the bus. We climbed the Twin Hills happily. After that, we had a picnic on the Starlight Lawn. In the afternoon, we visited Shanghai Greenhouse. We saw lots of amazing flowers and trees. We enjoyed ourselves very much. Time passed by quickly and we had to leave. It was half past four when we returned safely.
I think this is a great activity. It can not only bring us closer to nature and relax our mood but also keep our bodies and minds healthy. I’ll never forget it.
【来源】上海市黄浦区2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇日记;
时态:一般过去时和一般现在时;
提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,为了丰富学生课后生活,放松心情,学校组织学生到上海世博文化公园 (Shanghai Expo Culture Park) 秋游;
第二步,具体介绍郊游的活动内容;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to 为了
②as soon as 一……就……
③not only …but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①We began our programs as soon as we got off the bus. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
②I think this is a great activity. (宾语从句)
4.(24-25九上·上海杨浦区·期中)In 60—100 words, write an email according to the given situation and prompts. (根据所给情景和提示,写一篇60—100字的邮件,标点符号不占格。)
You visited an English friend, Peter’s house at the weekend and you think you left a bag there. Write an email to Peter. In your email, you should:
◆ explain what has happened
◆ describe the bag and what’s inside it
◆ say what you would like Peter to do
◆ think of a subject (主题) for your email.
(注意:文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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【答案】 例文:
My Bag
Dear Peter,
I had a good time with you last weekend, but I left my bag at your home. The bag is black and white. It is a little small and very lovely. There are two keys and a bank card inside it. Maybe it was on the sofa where I was seated. The bag is important for me, which was my birthday gift bought by my sister. If you find it, please reply to me as soon as possible.
Thank you so much! Yours Sincerely,
Anna
【来源】上海市杨浦区2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏写作要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己把包落在他家里;
第二步,具体描述包的特征和包里面有什么东西;
第三步,希望对方帮忙和尽快回信,并表示感激。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②there be有
③be important for 对……是重要的
④as soon as possible 尽快
[高分句型]
①If you find it, please reply to me as soon as possible. (if引导条件状语从句)
②The bag is important for me, which was my birthday gift bought by my sister. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
5.(24-25九上·上海建平西校·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学初三学生李明,你校初三年级计划举办一次主题为“我的初中生活”的展览,邀请每一位初三学生选择一件最能体现你初中生活的物品参展,并为此展品配上文字说明供参观者阅读。写一段展品介绍,内容须包括:(1)对该物品的简要介绍;
(2)你选择该物品参展的理由。
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Qiming Middle School. The item I’d like to exhibit is a basketball. It’s a standard-size basketball, orange in color with black stripes. I’ve had it since I was in Grade 7.
I chose this basketball because it witnessed most of my junior high school life. Every afternoon after class, I would play basketball with my classmates on the school playground. We cheered for each other when someone scored, and encouraged each other when we faced difficulties in the game. The basketball not only helped me keep fit but also made me cherish the friendship with my classmates deeply. It’s a symbol of my colorful junior high school days.
【来源】上海 建平西校 2024-2025学年九年级上学期 期中考试英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:考生注意选择一件能体现初中生活的物品,介绍物品并说明选择理由,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先简要介绍自己展览的物品,可包括物品的外观和拥有时长;
第二步,具体阐述选择该物品的理由;
第三步,书写结束语,说明该物品对自己的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①exhibit 展览
②witness 见证
③cheer for 为……欢呼
④each other 彼此,互相
⑤not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑥cherish 珍惜
⑦a symbol of ……的象征
[高分句型]
①I chose this basketball because it witnessed most of my junior high school life. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②We cheered for each other when someone scored, and encouraged each other when we faced difficulties in the game. (when引导的时间状语从句)
(24-25九上·上海西南模范中学·期中)6.Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
你的学校近期拟开展一次校园艺术节活动 (School Art Festival),本次活动旨在发挥同学们的艺术特长,营造良好的校园艺术氛围。目前学校德育处正就活动方案征求意见。
假如你是初三学生毕华,请阅读以下活动方案,给德育处王老师写一封信。
信件必须包括以下内容:
1. 你是否会报名参加校园艺术节活动,并简述理由;
2. 针对活动方案中的1-2项内容,提出修改建议。
校园艺术节活动方案
活动主题
“艺术让校园生活更美好”
(Art makes school life better)
活动时间
5月6日至5月8日 下午3:30-4:30
活动地点
学校艺术教室 (Art Room)
活动对象
6至8年级学生
活动形式
艺术讲座、学生作品展示
(Art lectures &Students’ works display)
(注意:1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very happy to learn that our school will have an art festival. The theme of the festival is “Art makes school life better”. I want to take part in it because I can enjoy the beauty of art.
This activity will be held in the Art Room from May 6th to 8th. It will start at 3:30 pm and last for an hour. I think we should begin earlier so that we can have enough time to enjoy ourselves. Students from Grade 6 to 8 can take part in this activity. They can go to the art lectures and enjoy art works from students. I think we can also watch traditional plays and play interesting games.
I’m looking forward to it.
Yours sincerely,
Bi Hua
【来源】2024年上海市宝山区中考二模英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封书信;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,注意不要有遗漏,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。很高兴得知学校要开展校园艺术节;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。一是简述自己是否会参加并给出理由,二是针对活动方案提出建议;
第三步,书写结语。期待艺术节的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②last for持续
③enjoy oneself尽情享受
[高分句型]
①I want to take part in it because I can enjoy the beauty of art.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think we should begin earlier so that we can have enough time to enjoy ourselves.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
7.(24-25九上·上海宝山区·期中)请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文
Your name is Tony. A friend of yours, Jack will study at home during the winter holiday and has asked you to recommend a learning tool. 你是Tony,你的一位朋友Jack打算寒假期间在家自学,所以想请你推荐一个学习工具。
Write a letter to Jack. In your letter:
√ say what the learning tool is (give it an interesting name) 说说这个学习工具是什么 (给它起个有趣的名字)
√ describe the learning tool and its uses 描述这个学习工具以及它的用途
√ tell the reason why you recommend it 说一说你推荐它的原因
Remember: the learning tool can be a reference book, a website, a program, an app, or whatever you use to help you with your study.
(注意:学习工具可以是一本参考书,一个网站,一个程序,一个应用或其他任何可以帮助你学习的东西。)
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’ve learnt that you will study at home during the winter holiday. As for the learning tool, I want to recommend an American sitcom called Friends, which has been on for twenty-five years. It’s a story of six young people. They came to New York City to find love, success, adventure and fun. Each of the characters had a different personality. However, they were able to overlook their differences and became good friends.
You can watch the series on the Internet. Watching English TV series such as Friends is really helpful to your English study. You can write down the words and phrases you don’t understand. Translate them and then imitate the pronunciation. And, to make it more fun, think about the life lessons you can learn from the show. Through watching the show, you can not only learn about American culture but also improve your conversational English.
I sincerely hope you can achieve success and keep healthy from the bottom of my heart.
Yours,
Tony
【来源】上海市宝山区2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节,使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,以书信格式开头,向朋友推荐一个学习工具;
第二步,具体介绍这个学习工具的名称和内容,讲述工具的使用以及推荐的理由;
第三步,以书信格式结尾,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①overlook their differences忽略他们的差异
②is really helpful真的有帮助
③write down写下
④improve your conversational English提高你的英语会话能力
[高分句型]
①As for the learning tool, I want to recommend an American sitcom called Friends, which has been on for twenty-five years. (which引导定语从句)
②Through watching the show, you can not only learn about American culture but also improve your conversational English. (not only...but also...句式)
8.(24-25九上·上海进才实验中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
阳光博物馆打算举办“2040时间胶囊(2040 Time Capsule)”主题活动,现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2040年打开,让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你(李华)写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长(Mr. Li),信的内容应包括:你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”?它有什么功能和特点?你为何选择这件物品?
以下物品供参考:
(1)一把扫帚(a broom)(2)一张纸币(a banknote)(3)一支中性笔(a gel pen)
(4)一辆共享单车(a shared bicycle)(5)一段沪剧 (a clip of Shanghai Opera)
(6)一副近视眼镜(a pair of glasses for short-sightedness)
(7)一个U盘(a flash disc)(8)一份印刷的报纸(a printed newspaper)
(注意:短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I am excited about the “2040 Time Capsule” event at the Sunshine Museum. I would like to contribute a flash disc to the capsule. This small device can store vast amounts of digital data, including photos, videos, and documents. It represents the digital age we live in and shows how technology has become an integral part of our daily lives. By 2040, it will offer a glimpse into the technological advancements and digital culture of our time.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【来源】上海市进才实验中学2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:提示问题已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己打算放进“时间胶囊”的物品;
第二步,描述这件物品的功能和特点;
第三步,解释自己放这件物品的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① be excited about对……感到兴奋
② would like to do想要做某事
[高分句型]
It represents the digital age we live in and shows how technology has become an integral part of our daily lives.(定语从句;how引导的宾语从句)
二、人与社会
9.(23-24九上·上海奉贤区七校·期中)Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test”. (以”复习准备期间有没有必要减少体育活动时间”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
期中检测即将来临,同学们都在认真复习准备,有些同学认为复习时间紧张,可以减少一部分体育活动时间,有些同学认为没有必要。请你谈谈你的看法。
注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test?
Is it necessary to reduce sports time while preparing for the test? Different students have different ideas.
Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities. But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports. We shouldn’t reduce sports time. Playing sports can help us have a strong body and learn more knowledge and enter a better university in the future. So we must exercise more.
【来源】上海市奉贤区七校2022-2023学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文,属于议论文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,要写出自己的意见。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体引出“在准备考试的时候有必要减少运动时间吗”这个话题;
第二步,具体阐述不同人的意见以及自己的意见;
第三步,写出自己持有此意见的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① play sports做运动
② help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③ in the future在将来
[高分句型]
① Some students think that the mid-term test is coming, which can reduce part of the time for sports activities.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
② But I think it is very necessary for students to play sports.(省略that的宾语从句,不定式作主语的句子)
(24-25九上·上海位育中学·期中)10.Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
你和你的家人刚搬到了上海郊区的一个城镇,你打算给你的朋友 Jane 寄一张小镇风景的明信片。
About Greenland Town
Location
About 15 km south of the Shanghai City
Transport
Metro(Underground. Line 9)
Bus 87, 91, 92
Area
2 square kilometers
In your postcard to your friend, you should
● introduce the town briefly
● explain why you have moved
● say what you like and dislike about living there.
注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分
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【答案】例文
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I’m in a new town called Greenland Town now. It’s about 15 km south of the Shanghai City. It covers an area of 2 square kilometers. The traffic is convenient here. I can take Metro Line9 or take the No.87, 91, 92 bus.
I had an offer from a big company and it was a good opportunity for me, so I decided to move here. It’s near the company where I am working.
It’s a good place because the people here are friendly and helpful. And there are lots of historical places which are interesting. However, I don’t like the weather here. It often rains and it is wet everywhere.
【来源】2023年上海市黄浦区中考一模英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中解释为什么要搬到这里,注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,问候并简单介绍这个小镇;
第二步,解释搬到这个城镇的原因;
第三步,阐述对于该城镇喜欢和不喜欢的地方。
[亮点词汇]
①take Metro Line...坐地铁……号线
②decide to do决定做某事
③lots of许多,大量
[高分句型]
①It’s near the company where I am working.(where引导的定语从句)
②It’s a good place because the people here are friendly and helpful.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③And there are lots of historical places which are interesting.(There be句型;which引导的定语从句)
11.(24-25九上·上海奉贤区·期中)某英文报纸发起主题为“How to get on well with classmates”的讨论,呼吁大家关注同学之间的和谐关系,友好相处,建设和谐校园。假如你是李华,请你就这一主题发表自己的看法,包括你觉得为什么要与同学友好相处以及如何与同学建立和谐关系的方法,写一篇不少于60词的短文。标点符号不占格。
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【答案】例文
How to get on well with classmates
In my opinion, it’s very important for us to get on well with our classmates. It can give us a better studying environment and it can also help us to improve our social skills.
First we must be friendly to our classmates, try to help them when they are in trouble. Second, if we have different opinions, we should discuss and try to find out ways instead of quarreling. Third, we can take part in after-school activities together, it can help us understand each other better and improve the relationship.
In a word, getting on well with others make us study and live better.
【来源】上海市奉贤区2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,写作时应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你认为同学之间的关系怎么样;
第二步,介绍你怎样才能和别人相处得好;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① get on well with相处得很好
② try to do sth.尽力做某事
③ be in trouble陷入困境
④ find out找出
⑤ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① First we must be friendly to our classmates, try to help them when they are in trouble. (when引导的时间状语从句)
② Second, if we have different opinions, we should discuss and try to find out ways instead of quarreling. (if引导的条件状语从句)
12.(24-25九上·上海浦东新区·期中)假设你是李华,在即将举行的中学生国际文化节交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统文化,请选择以下其中一个内容,用英语写一篇发言稿。词数不少于60,标点符号不占格。
A)介绍一个中国传统节日 a traditional Chinese festival(包括时间、习俗活动、意义)
B)介绍一种中国传统技艺 a traditional Chinese skill(包括名称、内容、意义)等。
注意:1.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
2.使用本试卷中语篇内容不得分。
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【答案】例文
There are many traditional festivals in China. Now let me introduce one of them—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year. During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members faraway. At he same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them.
Does it sound interesting? Thank you for your listening.
【来源】上海市浦东新区2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏提示信息,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照方框提示的三个方面——节日时间、活动、节日寓意均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“感谢所有的人聆听”的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①symbol of ……的象征
②as well as也
③express wishes and hopes表达心愿
[高分句型]
① People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together.(宾语从句)
②When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. (When引导的时间状语从句)
13.(24-25九上·上海崇明区·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.(请根据所给情境,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
在学习和生活中,我们会碰到许多做决定的情况,例如“运动会上选择哪个项目”,“拓展课上选择什么科目”,“家里是否养一只宠物狗”等等,请以“A Decision I Made”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,描述你曾经做过的一个决定,以及从中获得的体验、成长与收获。
注意:
1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
A Decision I Made
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【答案】例文:
A Decision I Made
Last year, I decided to join the school’s basketball team.
At the beginning, I was hesitant because I wasn’t confident in my skills. However, I wanted to improve my fitness and make new friends. Joining the team turned out to be a great decision. I learned the importance of teamwork and discipline. My skills improved significantly, and I gained a sense of accomplishment.
This experience taught me that stepping out of my comfort zone can lead to personal growth and unexpected rewards.
【来源】上海市崇明区2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”或“现在完成时”;
③提示:描述自己做过的决定以及从中学到的东西,可适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍所做决定的时间和内容;
第二步,通过举例讲述自己曾经做过的一个决定,以及从中获得的体验、成长与收获。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth决定做某事
②at the beginning刚开始,一开始,起初
③turn out to be结果是
④a sense of accomplishment成就感
[高分句型]
①At the beginning, I was hesitant because I wasn’t confident in my skills. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Joining the team turned out to be a great decision.(动名词作主语)
③This experience taught me that stepping out of my comfort zone can lead to personal growth and unexpected rewards. (that引导的宾语从句)
14.(24-25九上·上海浦东新区民办欣竹中学·期中)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
阳光博物馆打算举办“2035时间胶囊(2035 Time Capsule.)”主题活动,现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2035年打开,让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长(Mr.Li)。
信的内容应包括:你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”? 它有什么功能和特点?你为何选择这件物品?
以下物品供参考:
① 一把扫帚(a broom) ② 一张纸币(a banknote)
③ 一支中性笔(a gel pen) ④ 一个U盘(a flash drive)
⑤ 一辆共享单车(a shared bicycle) ⑥ 一段沪剧(a clip of Shanghai Opera)
⑦ 一副近视眼镜(a pair of glasses for short-sightedness)
注意:1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】Dear Mr Li,
I’m Li Hua, a local student. I’m delighted to learn about your “2035 Time Capsule” project. I want to put a shared bicycle into a “Time Capsule”.
Shared bicycles have become a symbol of modern life. Our city streets are flooded with them. They are convenient to use. It only takes about thirty seconds to unlock one. The price is also affordable. As a result, these bikes are quite popular. Moreover, shared bicycles represent a shift in collective environmental awareness. When teenagers in 2035 see the bicycle, they’ll know the importance we placed on protecting the environment.
Thank you for considering my suggestion. I hope that the project will be a great success.
Yours
Li Hua
【来源】上海市浦东新区民办欣竹中学2024-2025学年九年级上学期期中英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封信件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己要把共享单车放入“时间胶囊”;
第二步,具体阐述共享单车的功能和特点及自己为何选择这件物品;
第三步,表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①a symbol of……的象征
②as a result结果
③be delighted to do很高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①When teenagers in 2035 see the bicycle, they’ll know the importance we placed on protecting the environment. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope that the project will be a great success. (that引导的宾语从句)
三、人与自然
(24-25九上·上海市西中学·期中)15.随着校园里出现的流浪猫(stray cat) 越来越多,有同学提议要在学校建立一个“流浪猫小屋(stray cat hut)”,为这些小动物提供安全的进食、休息的场所。你是否同意这样的建议呢?请写一篇不少于60个词的短文,发表你的看法。
写作要求:
1)阐明你是否同意这个建议;
2)从“流浪猫”和“学生”这两个角度陈述理由;
3)写作内容中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
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【答案】例文:
There are more and more stray cats in our school now. Some students advise to build a stray cat hut to provide food and restroom for them. In my opinion, I disagree with that.
Firstly, we had better send the stray cats to specific places, like animal shelters. Because they could be better taken care of in such places. Secondly, stray cats may carry some bacteria or germs, which may do harm to students’ health. Thirdly, some students are allergic to cat hair, a stray cat hut may attract more cats there, it probably causes healthy problem.
All in all, I don’t think it is a good idea.
【来源】2023年上海市杨浦区中考三模英语试题
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文,围绕“流浪猫”展开;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点提示已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当补充发挥,注意语句的通顺,使用正确的词汇和句型,使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍背景,表明自己的观点是同意抑或反对;
第二步,按照要点提示,从“流浪猫”和“学生”的角度展开理由,说明自己同意或者不同意的观点,如健康,环境,学习,爱心,品质等方面的理由展开;
第三步,结尾总结,强调自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more越来越多
②advise to do sth建议做某事
③be allergic to sth对某事过敏
④all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
① Secondly, stray cats may carry some bacteria or germs, which may do harm to students’ health.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Firstly, we had better send the stray cats to specific places, like animal shelters.(had better do sth表示“最好做某事”)
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