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专题05书信写作2大常考话题
话题归纳·内容导航
话题1学校生活
话题2语言学习
话题通关·靶向提分
话题1学校生活
Passage 1
假如你是李华,你校将举行主题为“The Power of Communication”的英语演讲比赛,请你结合自己的
经历写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容需包括:
1.交流沟通的重要性:
2.你的经历。
注意:1.词数100词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I'm Li Hua.
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校社团活动开展情况。请你回信,内容包括:
1社团活动开展情况:
2.社团活动的意义;
3你最喜欢的社团活动及原因。
注意:1)词数100左右,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
2)文中不得透露个人信息。
Dear Peter,
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Passage 3
假如你是高一新生李华,你的英国笔友Tom发邮件询问你的近况,请回邮件,内容包括:
1.简述近况;
2.遇到的挑战:
3.寻求建议。
注意:
1.词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school life
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
最近,你校为号召同学们热爱运动,每天坚持锻炼,将举办以“The Importance of Doing Sports''为主
题的英语演讲比赛,请写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1锻炼身体的重要性;
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2.具体的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Passage 5
假如你是高一新生李华,你好友Pter给你发了一封邮件,询问你暑假是如何度过,并对你即将进入
的高中生活很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点给他写封回信:
1.假期生活的简要描述:
2.高中新学校给你的第一印象:
3.你对新的学习生活的打算或希望。
要求:
1.文章必须包括以上所有内容并撰写合理的结尾。语句通顺,层次清晰,意思连贯:
2.不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息:
3.120词左右。
Dear Peter,
How is everything recently?
Best wishes!
Yours,
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Passage 6
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter发邮件祝贺你步入高中,并对你刚刚开始的高中生活非常感兴,请你
回复邮件告诉他你步入高中的感受,内容包括:
1.感谢他的祝福:
2.分享高中的见闻与你的感受:
3表达对未来的期望。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter.
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 7
假设你是李华,高中生活已一月有余,请给你的英国笔友Richard写一封邮件。内容如下:
1.介绍你的高中生活:
2.描述英语学习的近况:
3.寻求英语学习的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯:
3.结尾已写好,不计入词数。
Dear Richard.
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Best wishes.Write back soon.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
Passage 8
假定你是李华,校学生会主席,你校下周将组织学生会成员前往市博物馆参观,请发电子邮件给交换
生Tom一起前往,内容如下:
1.时间地点及交通方式:
2.活动内容:
3.活动意义。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
话题2语言学习
Passage 1
1.假如你是李华,你收到你的朋友小天的来信。小天因为对英语学习提不起兴趣而感到很苦恼,想向你
请教一些有效的或者有创意的学习英语的好方法。请你根据以下要求写一封回信,要点如下:
1.安慰对方:
2.给出至少两个方法及理由:
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3.表达祝愿。
要求:1.100字左右;2.可适当增添细节,以使得全文连贯。
Dear Xiaotian,
Yours,
LiHua
Passage 2
假定你是李津,你的英国笔友Chs最近来中国某中学交换学习,他来信告诉你他不知道如何学好中
文,请你给他回一封信,内容包括以下要点:
写信的目的:
具体建议:多用中文交流,提高口语和听力水平,大量阅读,增加词汇量,写中文日记,学以致用:
表达个人期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Jin
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Passage 3
你校英语报就“How to Learn English'”这一话题征稿,你对此话题很感兴趣,打算投稿分享你学习英语
的经历。内容包括:
1.你在学英语方面遇到的困难:
2.你是如何克服困难的:
3你的感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Learn English
Passage 4
假设你是李华,进入高中以来,随着高中英语学习难度加大,你感到了更多的压力。请你给外教Mr
Jackson写封信,向他询问解决办法。内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由:
2.征求建议:
3.表达感谢。
注意:
1.写作词数在80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 5
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jo发邮件询问你步入高中后在英语学习方面遇到的挑战,请你回复邮件告
诉他你在英语学习时遇到的困难,内容包括:
1.你面临的主要挑战:
2.你的应对方法:
3.你的反思和感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3.不得出现真实的人名或地名。
Passage 6
假定你是李华,某中学生杂志英语习作专栏正在开展主题为“Why should we learn English?”的征文活动。请
你根据所给要点写一篇征文稿。
1.提高学习语言的能力:
2.有助于了解异国文化:
3能够结识更多的朋友。
注意:1.词数100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 1
假如你是李华,你校将举行主题为“The Power of Communication”的英语演讲比赛,请你结合自己的经历写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容需包括:
1. 交流沟通的重要性;
2. 你的经历。
注意:1. 词数100词左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’m Li Hua.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’m Li Hua. Today I’m honored to deliver a speech here entitled “The Power of Communication”.
As is often the case, communication is truly crucial in our life. It bridges gaps between people, helps resolve conflicts, promotes understanding and forges strong and lasting relationships.
Now let me share with your my own experience. I once had a misunderstanding with my best friend. We stopped talking to each other. But later, I took the initiative and had an open conversation with her. Through communication, we realized our mistakes and cleared up the misunderstanding. Now, our friendship is even stronger than before.
The power of communication is enormous. Let’s learn the art of communication, enhance our relationships and create a more harmonious world.
Thank you for your attention!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的演讲稿。要求考生写一篇主题为“The Power of Communication”的英语演讲稿参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛。
【解析】1.词汇积累
做演讲:deliver a speech→ make a speech
重要的:crucial→ significant
解决:resolve→ solve/deal with
提高:enhance→ improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Today I’m honored to deliver a speech here entitled “The Power of Communication”.
拓展句:Today I’m honored to deliver a speech here which is entitled “The Power of Communication”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is often the case, communication is truly crucial in our life.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Let’s learn the art of communication, enhance our relationships and create a more harmonious world.(运用了祈使句型)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校社团活动开展情况。请你回信,内容包括:
1.社团活动开展情况;
2.社团活动的意义;
3.你最喜欢的社团活动及原因。
注意:1)词数100左右,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2)文中不得透露个人信息。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m really glad to receive your letter. There are a wide variety of clubs here, including the music club, the art club, the sports club, the reading club and the science club.
The club activities are of remarkable significance. They not only enrich our school life and relieve the stress from our studies but also provide us with opportunities to develop our interests and talents. Moreover, they help us make more friends who have the same hobbies as us.
My favorite club activity is the art club. I love it because I can express my creativity and imagination through painting and drawing. It gives me a chance to relax and enjoy myself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信 。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封信介绍学校社团活动的开展情况。
【解析】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ happy/delighted
各种各样的:a variety of→ various
重要性:significance→ importance
此外:moreover→ what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There are a wide variety of clubs here, including the music club, the art club, the sports club, the reading club and the science club.
拓展句:There are a wide variety of clubs here, which include the music club, the art club, the sports club, the reading club and the science club.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, they help us make more friends who have the same hobbies as us.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I love it because I can express my creativity and imagination through painting and drawing.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 3
假如你是高一新生李华,你的英国笔友Tom发邮件询问你的近况,请回邮件,内容包括:
1. 简述近况;
2. 遇到的挑战;
3. 寻求建议。
注意:
1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you something about my new school life.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you something about my new school life. I love my school very much, which is big and beautiful. What’s more, all the teachers and students are friendly and enthusiastic.
However, I find it a little hard to get used to the senior school life. The subjects we are learning are obviously more difficult, especially English. Besides, with endless homework to do, I almost have no time for exercise and other activities. I feel greatly stressed. I wonder if you have ever had such trouble. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Tom写封邮件,告诉自己的近况和遇到的挑战,并寻求建议。
【解析】1.词汇积累
此外:what’s more→ in addition
热心的:enthusiastic→ zealous
习惯于:get used to→ be accustomed to
建议:advice→ suggestion
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, with endless homework to do, I almost have no time for exercise and other activities.
拓展句:Besides, because I have endless homework to do, I almost have no time for exercise and other activities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I love my school very much, which is big and beautiful.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I wonder if you have ever had such trouble.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)
Passage 4
最近,你校为号召同学们热爱运动,每天坚持锻炼,将举办以“The Importance of Doing Sports”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1.锻炼身体的重要性;
2.具体的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
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【答案】
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I am honored to stand here to deliver a speech themed “The Importance of Doing Sports”. It’s of vital importance for us to do exercise.
To begin with, taking regular exercise is beneficial to our health, which strengthens our bodies and will. In addition, doing sports can help us make more friends. Furthermore, when we are tired, exercise enables us to refresh ourselves and feel relaxed. Therefore, it is a good idea for us to go to school on foot or by bike. Meanwhile, we are supposed to make good use of PE lessons to do some sports, such as running and playing basketball.
Let’s start now and actively participate in doing sports.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校将举办的以“The Importance of Doing Sports”为主题的英语演讲比赛写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【解析】1.词汇积累
发表演讲:deliver a speech→make a speech
对……有益:be beneficial to→do good to
此外:in addition→what’s more
因此:therefore→as a result
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am honored to stand here to deliver a speech themed “The Importance of Doing Sports”.
拓展句:I am honored to stand here to deliver a speech whose theme is “The Importance of Doing Sports”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, taking regular exercise is beneficial to our health, which strengthens our bodies and will.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Furthermore, when we are tired, exercise enables us to refresh ourselves and feel relaxed.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 5
假如你是高一新生李华,你好友 Peter 给你发了一封邮件,询问你暑假是如何度过,并对你即将进入的高中生活很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点给他写封回信:
1. 假期生活的简要描述;
2. 高中新学校给你的第一印象;
3. 你对新的学习生活的打算或希望。
要求:
1. 文章必须包括以上所有内容并撰写合理的结尾。语句通顺,层次清晰,意思连贯;
2. 不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息;
3. 120词左右。
Dear Peter,
How is everything recently?
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How is everything recently?
I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life. As for me, everything is a new start.
During the holiday, I made an attempt to do a part-time job, which was really good to my future life. At the same time, I didn’t forget to take regular exercise and go over my lessons to prepare for my new school life. I spent a meaningful holiday.
When it comes to my senior high school, the first impression of it is unforgettable. The campus is big and beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers, providing us with a good environment. Besides, all the teachers are friendly and I firmly believe we’ll make great progress with them teaching us. I really love my new school. I hope my life of senior high school will be always interesting. And from now on, I will study hard to go to college. I believe my dream will come true.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友 Peter写封回信,描述自己的假期生活和对新的高中学习生活的打算或希望。
【解析】1.词汇积累
感激的:grateful→thankful
努力:attempt→effort
当谈到:when it comes to→speaking of
此外:besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At the same time, I didn’t forget to take regular exercise and go over my lessons to prepare for my new school life.
拓展句:At the same time, I didn’t forget to take regular exercise and go over my lessons so that I could prepare myself for my new school life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During the holiday, I made an attempt to do a part-time job, which was really good to my future life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The campus is big and beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers, providing us with a good environment.(运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 6
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter发邮件祝贺你步入高中,并对你刚刚开始的高中生活非常感兴,请你回复邮件告诉他你步入高中的感受,内容包括:
1.感谢他的祝福;
2.分享高中的见闻与你的感受;
3.表达对未来的期望。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your congratulations on my admission to high school. Learning that you are curious about my brand new life, I am writing to share what attracts me most with you.
To my amazement, not only do we have a robot club where we can cooperate with other students to design our own robots, but also the friendliness and patience of the teachers are beyond my expectation. Besides, I find it inspiring to communicate with my classmates because they are such ambitious teenagers with rich knowledge of the world and a positive attitude towards the future.
With so wonderful a learning environment, I have confidence that I will develop into an adult both mentally and academically.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友 Peter写封邮件,告诉他步入高中以后的感受。
【解析】1. 词汇积累
惊讶:amazement→surprise
另外:besides→in addition
丰富的:rich→abundant
发展为,成长为:develop→grow
2. 句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Besides, I find it inspiring to communicate with my classmates because they are such ambitious teenagers with rich knowledge of the world and a positive attitude towards the future.
拓展句:Besides, I find it inspiring to communicate with my classmates, who are not only ambitious teenagers but also equipped with rich knowledge of the world and a positive attitude towards the future.
【点睛】[高分句型1]To my amazement, not only do we have a robot club where we can cooperate with other students to design our own robots, but also the friendliness and patience of the teachers are beyond my expectation.(not only开头的倒装句以及where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Learning that you are curious about my brand new life, I am writing to share what attracts me most with you.(that,what引导的宾语从句)
Passage 7
假设你是李华,高中生活已一月有余,请给你的英国笔友Richard写一封邮件。内容如下:
1. 介绍你的高中生活;
2. 描述英语学习的近况;
3. 寻求英语学习的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 结尾已写好,不计入词数。
Dear Richard,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes. Write back soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Richard,
How’s everything going? I am writing to update you on my progress in senior high. Attending classes for over a month, I come to get used to my new teachers’ teaching and new classmates’ company.
However, the English study in high school is different from what I expected. My classmates can always do better in the reading comprehension which our English teacher also thinks important. Despite the pressure, I am determined to do my best. So could you please offer me some suggestions on how to improve my English reading? (90 words)
Best wishes. Write back soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求李华给他的英国笔友Richard写信,介绍高中生活、英语学习情况,并寻求建议。
【解析】1.词汇积累
习惯:get used to → get accustomed to
不同于:be different from → differ from
预料:expect → anticipate
重要的:important → significant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Attending classes for over a month, I come to get used to my new teachers’ teaching and new classmates’ company.
拓展句:After I have attended classes for over a month, I come to get used to my new teachers’ teaching and new classmates’ company.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Attending classes for over a month, I come to get used to my new teachers’ teaching and new classmates’ company..(运用了现在分词Attending作状语)
【高分句型2】However, the English study in high school is different from what I expected.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
Passage 8
假定你是李华,校学生会主席,你校下周将组织学生会成员前往市博物馆参观,请发电子邮件给交换生Tom一起前往,内容如下:
1. 时间地点及交通方式;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is it going? I am Li Hua, Chairman of Student Union. I am writing to express my sincere invitation.
Here is some good news. We are going to pay a visit to the city museum next week. We are going to set off at 9:00 a.m. on July 5 by bus and return at 5:00 p.m. on foot. At the event, we will admire the exhibition works. What’s more, we will take pictures and learn a lot about the history and culture of our city. I believe that the event will enrich our school life and broaden our horizon.
It will be our great honour to have you here. I am sure that you will have a good memory. If you have any questions, please contact me any time.
I am looking forward to your early reply. With all my best wishes!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给给交换生Tom发一封电子邮件,告知他下周学生会成员前往市博物馆参观,告知他一起前往,邮件的内容包括参观的时间、地点及交通方式和活动的内容和意义。
【解析】1.词汇积累
诚挚的:sincere →genuine
出发:set off→start off
此外:what’s more →besides
荣幸:honour →privilege
2.句式拓展
宾语从句变同位语从句
原句:I believe that the event will enrich our school life and broaden our horizon.
拓展句:I hold the belief that the event will enrich our school life and broaden our horizon.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, we will take pictures and learn a lot about the history and culture of our city.(运用了and连接两个并列谓语)
【高分句型2】It will be our great honour to have you here.(运用了it作形式主语,不定式作真正主语)
话题2 语言学习
Passage 1
1.假如你是李华,你收到你的朋友小天的来信。小天因为对英语学习提不起兴趣而感到很苦恼,想向你请教一些有效的或者有创意的学习英语的好方法。请你根据以下要求写一封回信,要点如下:
1. 安慰对方;
2. 给出至少两个方法及理由;
3. 表达祝愿。
要求:1. 100字左右;2. 可适当增添细节,以使得全文连贯。
Dear Xiaotian,
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】
Dear Xiaotian,
I’m sorry to hear that you are not interested in learning English and feel quite upset. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. My suggestions are as follows.
First of all, you should watch English movies and TV series. It can not only improve your listening skills, but also help you understand cultural differences. Besides, read English novels, ranging from children’s books to classics before the class and after the class every day. Only in this way can you get more chances to expose yourself to English, which will help you learn more vocabulary in heart and improve your interest in English.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you and you can improve your English.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友小天写一封回信,就他对英语学习提不起兴趣而感到很苦恼进行安慰,并给他提供一些有效的或者有创意的学习英语的好方法。
【解析】1.词汇积累
应该:should → be supposed to
此外:besides → what’s more
从……到……不等:range from...to... → vary from...to...
机会:chance → opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:First of all, you should watch English movies and TV series. It can not only improve your listening skills, but also help you understand cultural differences.
拓展句:First of all, you should watch English movies and TV series, which can not only improve your listening skills, but also help you understand cultural differences.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can not only improve your listening skills, but also help you understand cultural differences.(运用了“not only…but also…”连接的并列的谓语)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can you get more chances to expose yourself to English, which will help you learn more vocabulary in heart.(运用了“only+状语”位于句首引出的部分倒装句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
假定你是李津,你的英国笔友Chris最近来中国某中学交换学习,他来信告诉你他不知道如何学好中文,请你给他回一封信,内容包括以下要点:
写信的目的;
具体建议:多用中文交流,提高口语和听力水平,大量阅读,增加词汇量,写中文日记,学以致用;
表达个人期待。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Learning that you have no idea how to study Chinese well in China as an exchange student here, I am writing to share my suggestions with you.
It is important for you to talk with your classmates in Chinese as much as possible. It is an effective way to improve your oral Chinese and listening ability. Besides, spending much time reading Chinese newspapers and magazines will be helpful, which can enlarge your vocabulary. In addition, I strongly recommend you keep a Chinese diary every day. Only by putting what you have learned into use can your Chinese be improved.
Hopefully, you can find my advice useful. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom写信,告知他如何学好中文。内容包括:写信的目的;具体建议;个人期待。
【解析】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→ advice
此外:besides → what’s more
有益处的:helpful→ beneficial
增加:enlarge→ increase
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:It is important for you to talk with your classmates in Chinese as much as possible. It is an effective way to improve your oral Chinese and listening ability.
拓展句:Talking with your classmates in Chinese as much as possible is important, which is an effective way to improve your oral Chinese and listening ability.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, spending much time reading Chinese newspapers and magazines will be helpful, which can enlarge your vocabulary. (运用了动名词作主语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Only by putting what you have learned into use can your Chinese improved.(运用了only+介词短语引导的倒装句)
Passage 3
你校英语报就“How to Learn English”这一话题征稿,你对此话题很感兴趣,打算投稿分享你学习英语的经历。内容包括:
1.你在学英语方面遇到的困难;
2.你是如何克服困难的;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How to Learn English
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【答案】
How to Learn English
When it comes to English learning, I’d like to share my own experiences to offer some advice on how to learn English well in senior high school.
When studying English at Senior high, I had difficulty in memorizing words and understanding grammar. I decided to face my problems and dealt with them bravely. First, I wrote the unfamiliar words on cards so that I could read them every day. In addition, I made the most of every opportunity to practice using grammar rules in real life situations. Reading English newspapers and magazines also helped me, which is beneficial to my English learning. Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” I made great progress step by step.
This experience made me realize that it is the creativity and complexity that makes English unique, interesting and enjoyable to learn.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇投稿,要求考生给学校英语报投稿,分享自己学习英语的经历,包括遇到的困难、克服困难的方法以及自己的感受。
【解析】1. 词汇积累
提供建议:offer some advice→give some suggestions
面对:face→confront
利用:make the most of→take full advantage of
有益的:be beneficial to→be of benefit to
2. 句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I had difficulty in memorizing words and understanding grammar.
拓展句:I encountered challenges that not only hindered my ability to retain new vocabulary but also my comprehension of complex grammar rules.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Reading English newspapers and magazines also helped me, which is beneficial to my English learning.(使用了动名词短语作定语、关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句,先行词为前面一整句话表示的内容)
【高分句型2】This experience made me realize that it is the creativity and complexity that makes English unique, interesting and enjoyable to learn.(使用宾语从句、强调句)
Passage 4
假设你是李华,进入高中以来,随着高中英语学习难度加大,你感到了更多的压力。请你给外教Mr Jackson写封信,向他询问解决办法。内容包括:
1. 阐明写信事由;
2. 征求建议;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数在 80 词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Mr Jackson,
How is it going? Since I entered high school, I’ve found that leaning English is more difficult. Stressed and worried, I am writing to seek for your help.
As the reading materials have expanded, I am constantly struggling, having trouble understanding long and complex passages quickly. What makes the things worse is that I often get confused by new vocabulary and different sentence structures. Hard as I try, I still find it hard to improve, which even makes me sleepless.
Therefore, what should I do to improve my English study? I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr Jackson写封信,向他询问学习高中英语压力大的解决办法。
【解析】1.词汇积累
复杂的:complex→complicated
压力大:stressed→under great pressure
建议:advice→suggestion
感激:grateful→thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Stressed and worried, I am writing to seek for your help.
拓展句:I’m so stressed and worried that I am writing to seek for your help.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the reading materials have expanded, I am constantly struggling, having trouble understanding long and complex passages quickly. (运用了as引导状语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] What makes the things worse is that I often get confused by new vocabulary and different sentence structures. (运用了what引导主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友John发邮件询问你步入高中后在英语学习方面遇到的挑战,请你回复邮件告诉他你在英语学习时遇到的困难,内容包括:
1. 你面临的主要挑战;
2. 你的应对方法;
3. 你的反思和感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名或地名。
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【答案】
Dear John,
How’s everything going? I’m writing this letter to share the challenges I have met in learning English and the solutions to deal with them with you.
Since I entered the senior high school, I have come across many challenges in learning, especially in English learning. I struggled a lot in writing English compositions and remembering English words was also a big headache for me. I failed my test and felt rather upset. But I decided to face up to the difficulties rather than run away.
First of all, I turned to my English teacher for help, who advised me to remember words in sentences. My classmates suggested making word cards so that I could read the words whenever and wherever I could. Luckily, I made great progress step by step. As for English writing, my English teacher recommended that I should read more books in English and spare no effort to write as many English articles as possible. Just as the old saying goes, practice makes perfect. I made advances day by day. Now, I still think English learning a bit challenging, but I do like learning English.
The experience made me more confident in English. I was so proud of myself since I met the challenges bravely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于告知信。要求考生给美国笔友John回封邮件,告诉他自己在英语学习时遇到的困难、应对方法和反思及感想。
【解析】1. 词汇积累:
解决、应对:deal with→tackle
偶遇:come across→encounter
记住:remember→memorize
幸运地:luckily→fortunately
取得进步:make progress→make advances
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换:
原句:My classmates suggested making word cards so that I could read the words whenever and wherever I could.
拓展句:My classmates suggested making word cards to read the words whenever and wherever I could.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I turned to my English teacher for help, who advised me to remember words in sentences.(运用了以关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】As for English writing, my English teacher recommended that I should read more books in English and spare no effort to write as many English articles as possible.(运用了以连接词that引导的宾语从句和虚拟语气。)
Passage 6
假定你是李华,某中学生杂志英语习作专栏正在开展主题为“Why should we learn English?”的征文活动。请你根据所给要点写一篇征文稿。
1.提高学习语言的能力;
2.有助于了解异国文化;
3.能够结识更多的朋友。
注意:1.词数100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
English is an international language so it is necessary and good for us to learn English.
First, learning English can help us improve our ability to learn languages . We learn new words and grammar, which makes it possible for us to learn new languages well in the future. Second, learning English opens the door to another culture. At the same time, we will be able to gain a better understanding about the culture of other countries. Last but not the least, learning English allows us to make a lot of new friends by communicating with them in English face to face or on the Internet.
In a word, learning English means a lot. We should work hard and try to have a good command of it.
【导语】这是一篇应用文,要求写一篇征文稿。
【解析】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,假定你是李华,某中学生杂志英语习作专栏正在开展主题为“Why should we learn English?”的征文活动。请你根据所给要点写一篇征文稿。
1.提高学习语言的能力;
2.有助于了解异国文化;
3.能够结识更多的朋友。
第二,人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,说明学习英语的重要性和必要性。第二段,1.提高学习语言的能力;2.有助于了解异国文化;3.能够结识更多的朋友。第三段,表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: improve our ability to learn languages,gain a better understanding about,communicate with ,have a good command of it.
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句 We learn new words and grammar, which makes it possible for us to learn new languages well in the future.
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First,Second,At the same time
Last but not the least.
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: which引导的非限制性定语从句 We learn new words and grammar, which makes it possible for us to learn new languages well in the future.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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