Unit 2 Looking into the future Using Language 写作课：观点看法类议论文教学设计-2025-2026学年高二英语人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册

该高中英语教学设计聚焦观点议论文写作，围绕科技变化主题，引导学生掌握观点表达与文章结构。课堂从分析观点文章逻辑入手，通过“What-How-Demonstrate”环节，以基本框架、常用词块及语句为学习支架，衔接从理论认知到实践应用的脉络，帮助学生构建写作思路。 特色在于结构化写作支架与任务驱动结合，通过微信利弊示范、克隆讨论练习、网购作业等真实任务，培养学生语言能力（如“on the one hand...on the other hand...”等词块运用）和思维品质（利弊对比的逻辑层次）。采用“输入-内化-输出”教学模式，学生提升逻辑表达与批判思维，教师获得清晰教学流程与丰富资源，高效落实写作教学目标。

Teaching Plan for Writing：An opinion essay about changes caused by technology （Unit 2 Looking into the Future） Learning objectives · To express ideas of the changes that could be caused by advances in technology; · To learn to write an essay on your point of view. Teaching Procedures Step 1. What 一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查学生的英文基础，还考查学生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。 Step 2. How [基本框架] 1．首段：提出观点或有争议的观点(一般提出两个相对的观点然后客观地对其进行评析)。 2. 中段：展开论述，可用主题句来点明论点，并对论点进行比较和对比、分析和评论。 3. 尾段：对所论述观点进行客观、合理的评论，提出自己的看法、建议；或者也可以将不同观点相互融合，选其可取之处，形成自己独到的观点。 注意事项： 1．观点鲜明。 2．层次要分明，过渡要自然。 3．通常采用一般现在时。 4．语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。 [常用词块] 1．an increasing number of people越来越多的人 2．in reaction to the phenomenon针对这一现象 3．begin to realize...开始意识到…… 4．arouse public concern nationwide引起了全国公众的关注 5．along with the development of...随着……的发展 6．it goes without saying不言而喻 7．as far as I am concerned就我而言 8．one of the important disadvantages最重要的缺点之一 9．to make matters worse更糟糕的是 10．last but not least最后但同样重要的是 11．become more and more serious变得越来越严重 12．on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面…… 13．give people more pleasure给人带来更多的快乐 14．the above mentioned reasons上述原因 15．through above analyses通过以上分析 [常用语句] ★精彩开头 1．There is a widespread concern over the issue that...But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. 有一个广泛引起关注的问题……。但众所周知有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。 2．Nowadays many people prefer..., because it has a significant role in our daily life. 现如今很多人更喜欢……，因为它在我们生活中扮演了一个重要的角色。 3．Nowadays, there are more and more students becoming short­sighted. 现在，越来越多的学生近视了。 ★正文佳句 1．People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.然而在这个话题上人们的观点各不相同。 2. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows.总的来说，优点如下。 3. But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent. 但凡事都有利有弊。消极的一面也是很明显的。 4. We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. 我们应该采取一系列的措施来解决这个处境。 ★余味结尾 1．Only in this way can we solve this problem. 只有用这种办法，我们才能解决这个问题。 2．It's high time that we did something to improve our environment. 该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了。 3. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us. 因此，我相信一个崭新的未来正在等待着我们。 Step 3. Demonstrate 假如你是李华,学校论坛英文版想邀请你写一篇介绍微信(WeChat)利弊的文章,刊登在论坛上。要点如下: 1.微信的益处; 2.微信的弊端; 3.你的看法。 注意:1.词数80左右: 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 一、审题定调 1.确定体裁:本次写作是篇短文,内容为微信的利弊。 2.确定人称:由于是介绍微信,所以要以第三人称为主。 3.确定时态:由于对微信进行客观介绍,所以以一般现在时为主。 二、谋篇布局 本文分为三个段落。 第一段:说明微信受欢迎,但要客观看待微信; 第二段:益处——微信拉近了人们之间的距离;可以找到倾诉心事的朋友。 弊端——有虚假信息,容易让人上当受骗。 第三段: 自己的观点——合理利用微信。 三、常用语块 四、遣词造句 Possible version: More and more people are beginning to use Wechat and some have even become addicted to it. However, WeChat is a dobule-edged sword, which has both advantages and disadvantages. To be frank, WeChat really shortens the distance between people. No matter where we are, we can easily get in touch with our friends. Besides, we can find friends to whom we can tell our secrets. However, it also has disadvantages. First, some information offered on WeChat is false and it may result in people being cheated. Second, some people spend too much time on WeChat, greatly influencing their normal life. From my personal perspective, WeChat is indeed convenient but we should use it properly. Step 4. Drill 假如你是李华，你班同学最近参加了某报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：要不要克隆人类。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社编辑投稿，客观地介绍讨论情况。 大约35%的同学支持克隆 1.克隆人很有趣，可以使人复生 2.给人带来更多的快乐 3.可以克隆一些著名科学家，为人类做更多的事情 大约65%的同学不支持克隆 1.克隆人会引发道德问题 2.每个人是不同的，被克隆的人只不过是复制品 3.克隆人会不时地被坏人所利用 你的观点 现在很难说克隆人类是对还是不对 Recently we have had a discussion on whether we should clone humans. Possible version: Recently we have had a discussion on whether we should clone humans. 35 percent of the students think cloning humans is interesting and can bring people back to life.It can make the world more interesting and give people more pleasure.Besides, we can clone some famous scientists so that they can do more things for us humans. 65 percent of the students hold the view that it is a moral question to clone humans.Each of us differs while a cloned person is merely a copy.From time to time, cloned people may be taken advantage of by some evil persons. In my opinion, whether cloning humans is right or not is difficult to say right now.Perhaps we will just have to wait and see. Step 5.Assignment 现在,网上购物正在被越来越多的消费者所接受。但是,由网上购物引发的问题也引起了人们的高度关注。请根据以下内容,写一篇英语短文,分析网上购物的利与弊,并简述自己的观点。 网上购物 利 弊 你的观点 ·方便快捷 ·价格便宜 ·产品种类多 ·质量无法保证 ·容易上当受骗 …… Reflection: Possible version: With the spread of the Internet, more and more people prefer going shopping online. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. 　　We can buy things on the Internet without leaving our houses. Shopping online can save a lot of time for us. What’s more, there are many different kinds of goods for us to choose from, which may be cheaper than those in real shops. 　　However, shopping online also causes us some problems. Since we can see only pictures of goods on the Internet, we are not sure about their quality. Besides, there are lots of fake advertisements on the Internet, making customers easily cheated. 　　In my opinion, we should be careful while enjoying the convenience of shopping online. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 more and more people 越来越多的人 become addicted to 对……上瘾 shorten the distance between people 缩短了人们之间的距离 no matter where 无论在哪里 tell our secrets 告知我们的秘密 result in 导致 spend too much time on 在……上花费太多时间 as far as I am concerned 就我而言 use it properly 合理利用 普通表达 高级表达 ◆We can easily get in touch with our friends. ◆We can find friends to share our secrets. ◆Some information which offered on WeChat is false and people may be cheated. ◆Some people spend too much time on WeChat which greatly influences their normal life. ◆In my opinion,WeChat is convenient but we should use it properly. ◆No matter where we are we can easily get in touch with our friends. ◆We can find friends to whom we can tell our secrets. ◆Some information offered on WeChat is false and it may result in people being cheated. ◆Some people spend too much time on WeChat,greatly influencing their normal life. ◆As far as I am concerned,WeChat is convenient but we should use it properly. $