内容正文:
Write a letter of advice
Unit 1
Reading for Writing
By: 「Grace 是高中老师」
人教版高中英语必修一
Contents
lead-in
01
More expressions
03
Practice
04
Read and learn
02
feeling lonely without friends
generation gap with my parents
hard to follow the lessons
missing my family
What kinds of problems have you met during your teenage life?
Lead-in
Susan Luo has written a letter of advice to one of you!
Worried friend is worried that his friend, Chen Lei plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
He should talk to his friend about his behavior and encourage his friend to try new hobbies. They can discuss the problem together.
Read for information
1.What is Worried Friend’s problem?
2.What suggestions does Susan Luo give?
Date
Greeting
Body
Signature
Close
Read for structure
What are necessary parts of a letter?
写作目的+理解安慰
具体建议
阐述理由
重申建议
美好祝愿
Read for structure
How is body part organized?
spend time/money (doing sth)
花时间/金钱(做某事)
be attracted to(prep.) sth
被某物吸引
focus on (doing) sth=concentrate on (doing) sth 专注于某事
Read for language points
become addicted to sth
变得对某事上瘾
encourage sb to do sth
鼓励某人做某事
Read for sentence patterns
you wrote that...=I learn that... from your letter我从...得知你....
I recommend that you (should) do sth我建议你...
补充:recommend doing sth
It(形式主语)is+adj.+for sb to do sth某人做某事是很...的
make it(形式宾语)+adj+to do sth 使得做某事很...
why not do sth=why don’t you do sth 为什么不...呢?
(常用于提议)
write down your problems and your name on a note
give it to the teacher and get others’ notes
write down your advice for the problem on the note
share your advice with others
vote for
「the best adviser」
I Am the Adviser
Activity
我是大顾问
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花时间/金钱(做某事)
被某物吸引
变得对某事上瘾
专注于某事
鼓励某人做某事
Quiz
spend time/money (doing sth)
be attracted to(prep.) sth
become addicted to sth
focus/concentrate on (doing) sth
encourage sb to do sth
Practice
Work in groups. Choose one of the three situations and discuss his/ her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
Name Suggestions Reasons
Eric
Xu Ting
Ming Ho
1. Greeting问候
2. Body Part正文
(1) 写信目的(+安抚情绪)
(2) 建议+理由
(3) 希望采纳建议+表示谢意+盼望回复
3.Closing Remarks结束语
建议信结构 Structure
More expressions
I have learned that you have some trouble in.. after reading your letter and I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
看完你的信之后,我已了解到你在……有困难,因此我写信给你提一些建议。
I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. My advice is as follows.
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
You have asked me for my advice concerning/about/on how to learn Chinese , and I will try to give you some tips here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
第一部分:说明写信目的
More expressions
It's highly recommended that ...
我极力推荐...(从句谓语用should +动词原形)
It might be a good idea to do sth.
做某事会是个好主意。
In my opinion, it would be a wise choice if you...
依我看,...会是一个明智的选择。
You'd better spare some time to exercise regularly, which will definitely help you release stress and build up your body.
(用非限制性定语从句说明建议理由,建议和理由合为一个复杂句)
你最好抽出一些时间定期锻炼,这肯定会帮助你释放压力,强健你的身体。
第二部分:提出建议
(写详细,一般3条左右)
More expressions
I sincerely hope these suggestions will be helpful/of use to you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚希望这些建议会对你有用。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into consideration. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
我相信你会考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。
第三部分:希望采纳建议,表示谢意,盼望回复
Draft your letter according to the outline.
Exchange drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner's draft.
✔ Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in a good order?
✔ Does the writer give reasons for the advice?
✔ Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?
✔ Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?
✔ Is the handwriting easy to read?
Homework
Revise your letter and polish your passage with the skills we have learnt this class.
Happy Writing!
Grab a pencil after class
and...
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