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命学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 专题12书面表达 话题归纳·内容导航 话题1 发明与创造 话题2 科技的利与弊 话题3 调查与数据 话题通关·靶向提分 话题1：发明与创造 Passage1（2024-2025·深圳罗湖翠园中学) 今年国庆期间，深圳举办的万架无人机灯光秀惊艳了海内外观众。假设你校英文校报正通过征稿形式 招聘一位记者，请你以应聘者身份写一份英文稿介绍这次盛大活动。 要点提示： 主题 天空之城 时间 10月1一7号，每晚8点，持续15分钟左右 上万架无人机飞向天空，在空中慢慢变成不同图案，点亮了整片天空；观众们兴 现场情景 奋的欢呼起来.… 个人感受并提出希望 感受：1、…2、… 注意： 1.词数为80左右（开头己给出，不计入总词数）： 2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇： drone无人机 theme主题 pattern图案 high technological level i高科技水平innovation创新 During this National Day holiday,a series of magnificent drone light shows were held in the theme parks of Shenzhen. 1/17 命学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage2(2024-2025·广州执信中学) 假如你是李华，在最近学校的科技节中，你展示了一款你自己设计的智能书包。一位来我校交流的英 国学生对你的设计非常感兴趣，请你用英文向他介绍一下这款书包。需包含以下内容： 1.你所设计的智能书包和普通书包的区别，如下表 普通书包 智能书包 重量 约1000克 500克 尺寸 约50cm高，30cm宽，20cm深 可以改变大小 2.智能书包的特点 1)配有GPS系统(system),家长可以通过手机查看书包位置； 2)需要使用指纹(fingerprint)打开书包： 3)(请你补充1一2点)。 【写作要求】1.内容完整，并适当进行拓展； 2.语言正确，连贯性好： 3.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Intelligent schoolbag My intelligent schoolbag is different from a common schoolbag. 2/17 函学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 I hope you will like my design. Passage3(2023-2024·深圳实验学校初中部) 假设你是李华，你的学校举办了一个“未来发明家"的征文比赛，你的发明是一种能够帮助学生学习的 工具，你的征文获得了一等奖。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英文获奖感言，包含以下内容： 1.发明的东西及外观；2.该项发明的功能；3.参加比赛的收获。 Hello everyone, I'm Li Hua.I'm really happy that I have won the first prize in the essay competition. Passage4（2024-2025·广州越秀区第二中学) 现在正是A!发展迅猛的时代，学校机器人设计社的同学们制造了一个机器人Smat,你作为这项创 造的主要成员，正在向同学们介绍这个新作品，并邀请同学们一起来制造更多的机器人，字数不少于80字。 主要内容如下： 1.机器人Smat,高1米，白色。 2.机器人很环保；使用太阳能来代替电池。 3.功能：具有很强的计算能力，比我们快得多；和人类一样聪明，能够使主人远离危险；（请你补充1-2 点) 提示：主人owner环保environmentally friendly Dear friends Welcome to our Robot Club.I am glad to introduce our invention-Smart. 3/17 函学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Thank you for listening! Passage5（2024-2025·深圳桂园中学) 我校第一届创客节于上周落幕，八年级的李华同学在本次创客节中发明了一个A!机器人并获得了一 等奖的好成绩。假如你是校英语报的记者，请根据以下提示写一篇新闻稿，介绍李华的作品，要点如下： 外观 有两条长手臂，脸是一块屏幕，和学生一样高 1.会做家务 功能 2. 教学生学英语 3...(自行补充) 1.一鼓励学生使用新科技 意义 2..(自行补充) 要求： 1.不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）： 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名： 3.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4.卷面整洁、书写规范。 参考词汇：screen屏幕n.function功能n.technology科技n. Last week,Li Hua from the 8th grade invented an Al robot and won the first prize at the Invention Festival. 4/17 命学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage6(2024-2025·广州八十九中学) 假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍 你的发明，内容包括表格中的信息。 “飞行单车” 外观 两个轮子；两只翅膀 用途 行驶于地面和空中；可拍照；能对话 特点 速度快；使用太阳能；环保. 需改进的地方 1~2点（并给出理由) 注意： (1)参考词汇：太阳能solar power (2)词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数），可适当发挥。 (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention There are many different kinds of inventions in the world.Now,let me tell you something about one of my inventions 5/17 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Passage7(2024-2025·广州真光中学) 科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假设你是李华，最近你和你的同学在班里 做了一项关于“我们的发明”的设想，请你根据以下表格的内容，写一篇英语短文，向真光教育集团的同学们 介绍你们的发明设想。 1.外观和普通雨伞一样； smart umbrella(智能雨伞) 2.如果你喜欢，它可以改变颜色； 3.能报告天气和播放音乐。 1.圆形，底部有三个轮子； robot cleaner(扫地机器人) 2.可用手机控制； 3.能在房间里自己清洁地板。 新发明的意义 ……(请补充) 注意： 1.参考词汇：功能function,在底部at the bottom; 2.词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.不得透露班级、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Our inventions 6/17 命学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Science and technology have changed people's life and many new inventions bring us a lot of convenience.So my classmates and I have a game of designing our inventions. 话题2：科技的利与弊 Passage8（2024-2025·广州荔湾区第一中学) 你的父母最近给你买了一部智能手机(smartphone),同学们都对它很感兴趣。请根据表格内容用英 语向你的同学介绍一下你的智能手机及你的使用情况。 内容如下： 大小、重量 屏幕6.8英寸，重量220克，比手提电脑轻得多 1.就像一台电脑， 可以做很多事情； 功能 2 (请你补充) 1.玩手机游戏过多，睡眠不足； 问题 2.…(请你补充) 使用建议 .…(请补充2点建议) 7/17 命学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 要求： (1)词数：80词左右： (2)短文须包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥，使短文连贯，通顺： (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My smart phone My parents bought me a new smart phone recently.I love it very much. Passage9（2024-2025·深圳实验学校中学部) 假设你是李华。你的好朋友王磊上周给你写了一封信，信中他表述了对于人工智能A!(artificial intelligence)即将代替人类的担忧。请根据写作要点写一封回信。 要点： 1.建议王磊不要对此过分担忧，因为人工智能还无法完全代替人类： 2.人工智能的优点： (1)从事危险工作，保证人类安全： (2)给我们的生活带来方便，让人们有时间去做一些感兴趣的事情： 8/17 命学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 (3)至少补充一点： 3.你对人工智能的看法。 提示：文章中人工智能可直接用Al表示。 要求：1.表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯； 2.覆盖所有要点信息，并适当发挥： 3.80词以上。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Lei, I'm glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss Al with you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage10（2024-2025·深圳福田区侨香中学) 假如你是李华，你准备参加学校组织的主题为“中学生如何合理地使用电子设备”的演讲比赛，请你帮 李华写一份演讲稿。 要点 具体内容 9/17 命学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 生活中常见的电子设备 手机，笔记本电脑..… ①查阅信息，帮助我们更好地学习 中学生使用电子设备的主要用途 ②.（自行补充一点） ①控制使用时间，长时间看屏幕对眼睛和大脑有害 使用电子设备需要注意的事项 ②上网时要小心，不要把个人信息告诉陌生人 ③..（自行补充一点） 呼吁同学们正确合理地使用电子设备 要求： 1.词数为80一100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.内容应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：electronic devices电子设备laptop笔记本电脑 Dear teachers and students. I'm Li Hua from Grade 8.I'm glad to be here to give my speech.There are many electronic devices like That's all!Thank you! 10/17 专题12 书面表达 话题1 发明与创造 话题2 科技的利与弊 话题3 调查与数据 话题1：发明与创造 Passage 1（2024-2025·深圳罗湖翠园中学） 今年国庆期间，深圳举办的万架无人机灯光秀惊艳了海内外观众。假设你校英文校报正通过征稿形式招聘一位记者，请你以应聘者身份写一份英文稿介绍这次盛大活动。 要点提示： 主题 天空之城 时间 10月1—7号，每晚8点，持续15分钟左右 现场情景 上万架无人机飞向天空，在空中慢慢变成不同图案，点亮了整片天空；观众们兴奋的欢呼起来…… 个人感受并提出希望 感受：1、……  2、…… 注意： 1.词数为80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）： 2.要点齐全，可适当增加细节； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇： drone无人机     theme主题       pattern图案         high technological level高科技水平       innovation创新 During this National Day holiday, a series of magnificent drone light shows were held in the theme parks of Shenzhen. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 During this National Day holiday, a series of magnificent drone light shows were held in the theme parks of Shenzhen. This is the unique way in which people in Shenzhen celebrate this festival. From October 1st to 7th, the shows with the theme of “City in the Sky” started at 8 p.m. and lasted for around 15 minutes. Every night, crowd of people with their families flooded into the parks to enjoy the wonderful shows. As it was getting dark, tens of thousands of drones took to the sky, gradually changed into different patterns and lit up the whole sky. People looked up to the sky and couldn’t help cheering and screaming with excitement. What a visual feast it is! The event is so remarkable that people from every corner of the world were continuously posting their highly praise on the Internet. As a witness of this grand event, I was really shocked by the extremely high technological level and innovation ability of our country. It made me realize how fortunate I am to be a part of this amazing country and I’m looking forward to more events like that in the future. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍无人机灯光秀举办的时间、地点等信息； 第二步，介绍主题和现场的情景； 第三步，表达个人感受，并突出希望。 [亮点词汇] ①a series of 一系列 ②tens of thousands of成千上万的 ③light up点亮 ④look forward to期盼 [高分句型] ①This is the unique way in which people in Shenzhen celebrate this festival.（定语从句） ②What a visual feast it is! （感叹句） ③The event is so remarkable that people from every corner of the world were continuously posting their highly praise on the Internet.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） Passage 2（2024-2025·广州执信中学） 假如你是李华，在最近学校的科技节中，你展示了一款你自己设计的智能书包。一位来我校交流的英国学生对你的设计非常感兴趣，请你用英文向他介绍一下这款书包。需包含以下内容： 1. 你所设计的智能书包和普通书包的区别，如下表 普通书包 智能书包 重量 约1000克 500克 尺寸 约50 cm高，30 cm宽，20 cm深 可以改变大小 2. 智能书包的特点 1）配有GPS系统（system），家长可以通过手机查看书包位置； 2）需要使用指纹（fingerprint）打开书包； 3）（请你补充1—2点）。 【写作要求】1. 内容完整，并适当进行拓展； 2. 语言正确，连贯性好； 3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Intelligent schoolbag My intelligent schoolbag is different from a common schoolbag. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like my design. 【范文】 Intelligent schoolbag My intelligent schoolbag is different from a common schoolbag. A common schoolbag weighs 1kg but my intelligent schoolbag is only 500g. A common schoolbag is 50cm tall, 30cm wide and 20cm deep. But my intelligent schoolbag can change its size. My intelligent schoolbag is equipped with GPS system so that parents can check the location of the backpack through a mobile phone. What’s more, you need your fingerprint to open the schoolbag. So no one can use it except you. There are two buttons on it. When you press the red button, it is used as a schoolbag. When you press the green one, it is used as a tent. That’s interesting, isn’t it? I hope you will like my design. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己设计的智能书包，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你所设计的智能书包和普通书包的区别； 第二步，介绍智能书包的特点。 [亮点词汇] ①be equipped with配备有 ②so that以便 ③be used as被用作 [高分句型] ①My intelligent schoolbag is equipped with GPS system so that parents can check the location of the backpack through a mobile phone. (so that引导的目的状语从句) ②When you press the red button, it is used as a schoolbag. (when引导的时间状语从句) Passage 3（2023-2024·深圳实验学校初中部） 假设你是李华，你的学校举办了一个“未来发明家”的征文比赛，你的发明是一种能够帮助学生学习的工具，你的征文获得了一等奖。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英文获奖感言，包含以下内容： 1.发明的东西及外观； 2.该项发明的功能；  3.参加比赛的收获。 Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. I’m really happy that I have won the first prize in the essay competition. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Passage 4（2024-2025·广州越秀区第二中学） 现在正是AI发展迅猛的时代，学校机器人设计社的同学们制造了一个机器人Smart，你作为这项创造的主要成员，正在向同学们介绍这个新作品，并邀请同学们一起来制造更多的机器人，字数不少于80字。 主要内容如下： 1. 机器人Smart，高1米，白色。 2. 机器人很环保；使用太阳能来代替电池。 3. 功能：具有很强的计算能力，比我们快得多；和人类一样聪明，能够使主人远离危险；……(请你补充1-2点) 提示：主人owner   环保 environmentally friendly Dear friends, Welcome to our Robot Club. I am glad to introduce our invention—Smart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【范文】 Dear friends,     Welcome to our Robot Club. I am glad to introduce our invention—Smart. It’s 1 meter tall and white. Smart is environmentally friendly, using solar energy instead of batteries. It has strong computing power, much faster than us, and is as smart as humans to keep owners away from danger. Additionally, it can have simple conversations with people, telling stories and jokes to bring joy. It can also help with daily chores like cleaning and remind owners of important schedules. Let’s make more robots together!     Thank you for listening! 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，可适当补充细节，突出机器人的实用价值。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇问候并点明主题，向听众表示欢迎，介绍自己的身份； 第二步，详细描述机器人的外观特征； 第三步，依次介绍机器人的核心优势； 第四步，补充机器人的实用功能； 第五步，发出号召，呼吁大家一起研发更多机器人。 [亮点词汇] ①environmentally friendly环保的 ②solar energy太阳能 ③computing power计算能力 [高分句型] ①It’s 1 meter tall and white.（用“and”连接两个形容词） ②Let’s make more robots together! （祈使句发出号召） Passage 5（2024-2025·深圳桂园中学） 我校第一届创客节于上周落幕，八年级的李华同学在本次创客节中发明了一个AI机器人并获得了一等奖的好成绩。假如你是校英语报的记者，请根据以下提示写一篇新闻稿，介绍李华的作品，要点如下： 外观 有两条长手臂，脸是一块屏幕，和学生一样高 功能 1. 会做家务 2. 教学生学英语 3. ……(自行补充) 意义 1. 一鼓励学生使用新科技 2. ……(自行补充) 要求： 1. 不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 卷面整洁、书写规范。 参考词汇: screen 屏幕 n.   function 功能 n.  technology 科技 n. Last week, Li Hua from the 8th grade invented an AI robot and won the first prize at the Invention Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Last week, Li Hua from the 8th grade invented an AI robot and won the first prize at the Invention Festival. Li Hua’s invention is an AI robot. In terms of appearance, it has two long arms. Its face is a screen, and it is as tall as a student. When it comes to functions, this robot is truly amazing. Firstly, it can do housework such as cleaning the floor, washing dishes, which can greatly relieve the burden on family members. Secondly, it is an excellent English teacher for students. It can teach students English grammar, pronunciation and vocabulary through interesting interactive games. Moreover, it can also act as a study companion. It can answer various questions about different subjects like mathematics, science and history, helping students with their homework and self-study. The invention of this robot has great significance. On one hand, it encourages students to use new technologies. On the other hand, it shows that students have unlimited creativity. We look forward to seeing more creative inventions from our students in the future. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：根据题干所给材料详细地介绍李华发明的AI机器人，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点出活动的时间和李华取得了好成绩； 第二步，详细地介绍AI机器人的外观、功能； 第三步，介绍AI机器人的作用。 [亮点词汇] ①In terms of就……而言 ②When it comes to当提到…… ③act as扮演 ④On one hand...On the other hand一方面……另一方面 [高分句型] Firstly, it can do housework such as cleaning the floor, washing dishes, which can greatly relieve the burden on family members. (定语从句) Passage 6（2024-2025·广州八十九中学） 假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括表格中的信息。 “飞行单车” 外观 两个轮子；两只翅膀 用途 行驶于地面和空中；可拍照；能对话…… 特点 速度快；使用太阳能；环保…… 需改进的地方 1~2点（并给出理由） 注意： (1)参考词汇：太阳能solar power (2)词数80左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)，可适当发挥。 (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention There are many different kinds of inventions in the world. Now, let me tell you something about one of my inventions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My invention There are many different kinds of inventions in the world. Now, let me tell you something about one of my inventions. My invention is called the “Flying Bike”. It has two wheels and two wings, so it looks like a bird. You can ride it on the ground like a normal bike, and it can also fly in the sky. It can even take pictures and talk with you! My bike is very fast. Best of all, it uses solar power, so it’s very good for the environment. However, it still has some problems. First, its wings are too big, so it’s sometimes hard to park. Second, when it’s cloudy, it doesn’t have enough power to fly for a long time. I hope I can make it smaller and find a better way to store energy. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍自己的发明； 第三步，点出需改进的地方，并给出理由。 [亮点词汇] ①looks like看起来像 ②for a long time长时间 [高分句型] ①Second, when it’s cloudy, it doesn’t have enough power to fly for a long time.（时间状语从句） ②I hope I can make it smaller and find a better way to store energy.（宾语从句） Passage 7（2024-2025·广州真光中学） 科学技术日新月异，新发明给人们的生活带来了很多便利。假设你是李华，最近你和你的同学在班里做了一项关于“我们的发明”的设想，请你根据以下表格的内容，写一篇英语短文，向真光教育集团的同学们介绍你们的发明设想。 smart umbrella (智能雨伞) 1.外观和普通雨伞一样； 2.如果你喜欢，它可以改变颜色； 3.能报告天气和播放音乐。 robot cleaner (扫地机器人) 1.圆形，底部有三个轮子； 2.可用手机控制； 3.能在房间里自己清洁地板。 新发明的意义 ……(请补充) 注意： 1.参考词汇：功能function，在底部at the bottom； 2.词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.不得透露班级、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 Our inventions Science and technology have changed people’s life and many new inventions bring us a lot of convenience. So my classmates and I have a game of designing our inventions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Our inventions Science and technology have changed people’s life and many new inventions bring us a lot of convenience. So my classmates and I have a game of designing our inventions. We designed a smart umbrella. It looks like an ordinary umbrella. If you like, it can change color. It can also report the weather and play music. We also designed a robot cleaner. It is round and has three wheels at the bottom. It can be controlled by a mobile phone and it can clean the floor in the room by itself. These inventions will make our life more convenient and interesting. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍科技的发展情况，即活动背景； 第二步，具体介绍发明的事物； 第三步，总结发明的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①look like看起来像 ②at the bottom在底部 ③clean the floor清洁地板 [高分句型] ①If you like, it can change color. （条件状语从句） ②It can be controlled by a mobile phone and it can clean the floor in the room by itself. （and连接并列句） 话题2：科技的利与弊 Passage 8（2024-2025·广州荔湾区第一中学） 你的父母最近给你买了一部智能手机 (smartphone)，同学们都对它很感兴趣。请根据表格内容用英语向你的同学介绍一下你的智能手机及你的使用情况。 内容如下： 大小、重量 屏幕6.8英寸，重量220克，比手提电脑轻得多 功能 1. 就像一台电脑，可以做很多事情； 2. …… (请你补充) 问题 1. 玩手机游戏过多，睡眠不足； 2. ……(请你补充) 使用建议 …… (请补充2点建议) 要求： (1) 词数：80词左右； (2) 短文须包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥，使短文连贯，通顺； (3) 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My smart phone My parents bought me a new smart phone recently. I love it very much. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My smart phone My parents bought me a new smart phone recently. I love it very much. It’s a big phone with a 6.8-inch screen, but it only weighs 220g, much lighter than a laptop. It’s like a small computer. I can do lots of things with it. I can surf the internet, download apps, take photos and videos, listen to music and watch movies. It’s so cool!     However, there are also some problems. I sometimes play games on my phone too much and don’t get enough sleep. What’s worse, I spend too much time on social media, which makes me feel stressed sometimes. I have some suggestions for myself. First, I should set a time limit for using the phone every day. Second, I should spend more time doing outdoor activities, which will make me healthier. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍手机的大小、重量和功能； 第二步，描述手机带来的问题并给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①much lighter轻得多 ②surf the internet上网 ③get enough sleep得到足够的睡眠 ④stressed紧张的，有压力的 ⑤limit限制 [高分句型] ①However, there are also some problems.（there be句型） ②What’s worse, I spend too much time on social media, which makes me feel stressed sometimes.（which引导的定语从句） Passage 9（2024-2025·深圳实验学校中学部） 假设你是李华。你的好朋友王磊上周给你写了一封信，信中他表述了对于人工智能AI (artificial intelligence) 即将代替人类的担忧。请根据写作要点写一封回信。 要点： 1. 建议王磊不要对此过分担忧，因为人工智能还无法完全代替人类； 2. 人工智能的优点： (1) 从事危险工作， 保证人类安全； (2) 给我们的生活带来方便， 让人们有时间去做一些感兴趣的事情； (3) 至少补充一点； 3. 你对人工智能的看法。 提示：文章中人工智能可直接用AI 表示。 要求：1. 表达清楚、语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 覆盖所有要点信息，并适当发挥； 3. 80词以上。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Lei, I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】 Dear Wang Lei, I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages. The followings are my points. First of all, AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can use AI to help them as well. As a result, people can free themselves from over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. Al plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China. That’s why the government is paying more attention to it. In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。提出“人工智能无法完全代替人类”的观点； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“人工智能的优点”入手，重点人工智能的作用； ③第三步，书写结语。表达对人工智能的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①take the place of 代替 ②first of all 首先 ③be interested in 对……感兴趣 ④play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色 ⑤pay attention to 注意 ⑥in one’s opinion 在某人看来 ⑦instead of 代替，而不是 [高分句型] ①If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can use AI to help them as well.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②That’s why the government is paying more attention to it.（why引导的表语从句） Passage 10（2024-2025·深圳福田区侨香中学） 假如你是李华，你准备参加学校组织的主题为“中学生如何合理地使用电子设备”的演讲比赛，请你帮李华写一份演讲稿。 要点 具体内容 生活中常见的电子设备 手机，笔记本电脑…… 中学生使用电子设备的主要用途 ①查阅信息，帮助我们更好地学习 ②……(自行补充一点) 使用电子设备需要注意的事项 ①控制使用时间，长时间看屏幕对眼睛和大脑有害 ②上网时要小心，不要把个人信息告诉陌生人 ③……(自行补充一点) 呼吁同学们正确合理地使用电子设备 要求： 1.词数为80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.内容应包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：electronic devices电子设备   laptop笔记本电脑 Dear teachers and students. I’m Li Hua from Grade 8. I’m glad to be here to give my speech. There are many electronic devices like ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank you! 【范文】 Dear teachers and students, I’m Li Hua from Grade 8. I’m glad to be here to give my speech .There are many electronic devices like smartphones, tablets, and laptops in our daily lives. As middle school students, we may find them helpful in many ways. For example, electronic devices allow us to get useful information at our fingertips. They help us gain more knowledge and learn better. Also, they play important roles in our social lives, we can stay in touch with friends and family anytime, anywhere. But with great power comes great responsibility. We must pay attention to using the electronic devices properly. First, it’s important to control the time we spend on electronic devices. Spending too much time looking at screens can be bad for our eyes and our brains. So, make sure to take breaks and give your eyes a rest. Second, we need to be careful of what we are doing online and never give personal information to strangers. What’s more, it’s important to keep our devices safe. Make sure to set a strong password for our phone or laptop. By following these tips, we can use our electronic devices in a safe and proper way. Let’s all be smart tech users! That’s all! Thank you. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍生活中常见的电子设备及用途； 第二步，描述使用电子设备需要注意的事项； 第三步，呼吁同学们正确合理地使用电子设备。 [亮点词汇] ①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ②stay in touch with和……保持联系 ③make sure确保 [高分句型] ①First, it’s important to control the time we spend on electronic devices.(it作形式主语) ②Spending too much time looking at screens can be bad for our eyes and our brains.(动名词作主语) Passage 11（2024-2025·深圳麒麟中学） 近期，深圳华为公司推出了一款三折叠手机，配上魔性台词：“怎么叠，都有面”，让这款手机迅速火出了圈。智能手机在给我们带来便利的同时，也造成了一些问题。请根据表格的内容，以“How to use smart phones properly”为题写一篇作文。 优点 1.就像一台电脑，可以做很多事情， 例如：听音乐和发送电子邮件。 2.与家人朋友聊天。 3. ……(请你补充至少 1 个优点) 缺点 1.玩手机游戏过多，不愿意学习。 2.长期使用手机导致健康问题。 3.……(请你补充至少 1 个缺点) 建议 1.控制使用手机的时间。 2.……(请你补充至少 1 条建议) 要求： 1. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内)； 2. 作文必须包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥，使短文连贯； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 How to use smart phones properly? Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smart phone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 How to use smart phones properly? Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smart phone. Smart phones have many advantages. Just like a computer, we can do a great deal of things on them, such as listening to music and sending e-mails. Also, we can chat with our family and friends. Moreover, we can use it to learn knowledge, like watching educational videos or reading e-books. However, smart phones also bring some problems. Too much time on mobile games makes people unwilling to study. Long-term use can lead to health problems, such as poor eyesight. Besides, some people rely too much on smart phones and lack face-to-face communication skills. To use smart phones properly, we should control the time of using them. In addition, we should not use smart phones when we are studying or working. And we can take part in more outdoor activities instead of always looking at our phones. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题； 第二步，具体阐述使用智能手机的优点和缺点； 第三步，提出针对使用手机自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②chat with sb和某人交谈 ③lead to导致 ④In addition另外 ⑤take part in参加 [高分句型] In addition, we should not use smart phones when we are studying or working. (when引导的时间状语从句) 话题3：调查与数据 Passage 12（2024-2025·深圳高级中学集团） 假如你叫李华，是某校学生会主席，你组织了一次全校性的问卷调查，以了解近几年青少年阅读习惯的不同。请你根据下面图表所提供的信息，用英语写一封信寄给《21世纪中学生英语报》，内容涵盖以下几点： 1. 客观地介绍调查结果； 2. 描述不同阅读形式的好处； 3. 基于上述阅读习惯，给青少年提出合适的阅读建议。 注意： (1) 词数80~100，开头已写好，不计入总词数； (2) 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 可触碰的： touchable (tangible)； 场合： situation (occasion) Paper-based Reading E-book Reading Audio Reading Pate (占比) 40% 35% 25% Advantages (好处) 1. 提供了一种真实，可触摸的体验； 2. …… 1. 更易于携带； 2. …… 1. 使用场合最多； 2. …… Suggestions 1. 了解阅读的重要性；2. …… A Letter about Teenagers’ Reading Habits Dear editor, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the student union of a certain school. Recently, I organized a school-wide questionnaire survey to_________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】 A Letter about Teenagers’ Reading Habits Dear editor, I am Li Hua, the chairman of the student union of a certain school. Recently, I organized a school-wide questionnaire survey to understand the changes in teenagers’ reading habits in recent years. The results are as follows. Among the surveyed students, 40% prefer paper-based reading. 35% choose e-book reading. And 25% select audio reading. Each reading form has its own advantages. Paper-based books offer a traditional way to make us completely involved in knowledge. E-books are easier for carrying. Audio books can be used in the most places, such as during the way to school or while doing chores.   Here are some suggestions for teenagers. Firstly, recognize the importance of reading as it broadens horizons and enriches the mind. Secondly, choose the reading form that suits different situations to make reading more enjoyable. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍青少年阅读习惯的问卷调查； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，客观地介绍调查结果并描述不同阅读形式的好处； 第三步，给青少年提出合适的阅读建议，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①offer…to给……提供 ②such as例如 [高分句型] ①Here are some suggestions for teenagers.（倒装句） ②Secondly, choose the reading form that suits different situations to make reading more enjoyable.（定语从句） Passage 13（2024-2025·深圳宝安中学） 发明改变了世界，改变了人们的生活。因为各种各样的发明，我们的生活变得越来越舒适与便捷。假设你是李华，最近你和同学在校园里做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查，请你写一篇英语短文，报告此次调查的结果，并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的发明是什么及其原因，短文需包括以下要点： 发明 电脑 手机 小汽车 空调 比例 45% 32% 13 % 10% 原因 可以做很多重要的事情 与朋友们聊天 随时随地出行 使温度适宜 你的想法 请补充1—2点 要求： 1.约80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺，流畅，准确； 3.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favorite invention” in our school, and here is the result. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 There are many inventions in history and some of them have greatly changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favorite invention” in our school, and here is the result. 45% of the students like computers best because they can do many important things. 32% of the students choose mobile phones. They think they can chat with friends anywhere and anytime. 13% of the students like cars as they can go out conveniently. And 10% of the students prefer air-conditioners which can make the temperature suitable. As for me, my favorite invention is the Internet. First, it provides a large amount of information for us to learn knowledge. Second, it makes communication around the world much easier. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍调查结果； 第二步，介绍你的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①chat with和……聊天 ②conveniently便利地 ③provides提供 [高分句型] And 10% of the students prefer air-conditioners which can make the temperature suitable.（定语从句） Passage 14（2024-2025·深圳华附集团） 随着社会的进步，手机使用越来越广泛。最近，你班就使用智能手机的情况展开了一次调查（全班50人），调查结果如下图。请你结合调查数据，以“Smartphone, Tool or Toy?”为题，写一篇发言稿在班会课上进行汇报。 内容：1. 描述调查内容，可适当增加细节； 2. 你对使用手机的看法（至少两条）； 3. 合理使用手机的建议（至少两条）。 要求：1.80 词左右（给出部分不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺连贯，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：刷抖音 brush Tiktok 看短视频 watch short videos 影响 influence Dear classmates, Today, I’d like to talk about an important topic: “Smartphone, Tool or Toy?” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks a lot for your listening! 【范文】 Dear classmates, Today, I’d like to talk about an important topic: “Smartphone, Tool or Toy?” Recently, our class conducted a survey on the use of smartphones. Here is the result. 28 students use smartphones to play games and 10 students use smartphones to watch short videos. Only 12 students use smartphones to search for information and study. Using smartphones has both advantages and disadvantages. On the positive side, smartphones can be very helpful for learning. They provide easy access to a vast amount of information and educational resources. However, there are also some drawbacks. Excessive use of smartphones can waste a lot of time and money. Moreover, it can lead to addiction and distract students from their studies. In my opinion, students should use smartphones wisely. They should set a time limit for non-educational activities and focus more on using smartphones as a tool for learning.     Thanks a lot for your listening! 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态主要以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，介绍智能手机使用调查结果； 第三步，介绍对使用智能手机的看法； 第四步，分享自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①search for information查信息 ②drawbacks缺点 ③excessive use过度使用 ④in my opinion我的观点 [高分句型] ①They should set a time limit for non-educational activities and focus more on using smartphones as a tool for learning. (并列结构) Passage 15（2024-2025·广州天河区骏景中学） 随着互联网的普及，网上购物（online-shopping）日益成为一种重要的购物形式。为了解“网上购物”到底是利大于弊还是弊大于利，假设你班同学在上周五就“网上购物”这个话题开了一场辩论会。请根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，介绍辩论结果并提出你个人的观点和理由。 赞成（58%） 反对（42%） 1. 容易操作； 1. 买的东西有时候不实用； 2. 随时随地可以购买； 2. 不能享受与朋友逛街之乐； 个人观点：1.你是赞成还是反对？2. 你的理由（1.…… 2.……） 注意： 1. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； 2. 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In order to know whether online-shopping is good or not, we held a debate in our class last Friday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 In order to know whether online-shopping is good or not, we held a debate in our class last Friday. 58% of the students support online-shopping. They think it’s easy to operate and they can shop anytime and anywhere. However, 42% of the students are against it. They believe that the things bought online are sometimes not practical and they can’t enjoy the pleasure of shopping with friends. As for me, I’m in favor of online-shopping. Firstly, it saves a lot of time, especially for busy people. Secondly, there are a wide variety of goods online, allowing us to choose from more options. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：议论文（介绍辩论结果+发表个人观点）； ②时态：一般现在时为主，涉及过去事件（辩论会）用一般过去时； ③提示：先交代辩论结果，再表达个人态度和理由，结尾呼应主题。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题，说明辩论会的目的和背景。 第二步：介绍辩论结果（赞成与反对的比例和理由）。 第三步：表达个人观点，阐述理由（不少于两点）。 第四步：总结，点明态度和意义。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to 为了 ②as for 至于 ③in favor of 赞成 ④a lot of 许多 [高分句型] ①In order to know whether online-shopping is good or not, we held a debate in our class last Friday.（动词不定式表目的） ②They think it’s easy to operate and they can shop anytime and anywhere.（and连接并列句） ③They believe that the things bought online are sometimes not practical.（宾语从句） ④Secondly, there are a wide variety of goods online, allowing us to choose from more options.（现在分词作结果状语。） Passage 16（2024-2025·广东省实验中学琶洲分校） 发明改变了世界，改变了人们的生活。你们学校做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查。请你就以下表格写一篇英语短文，报告此次调查的全部结果，并谈谈你心目中最喜爱的一项发明是什么及其原因，短文需包括以下要点： The result of “What’s your favourite invention” and reasons Your idea Your favourite invention and reason(s). 要求： (1) 100词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； (2) 可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺，流畅，准确； (3) 不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。     Inventions changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favourite invention” in our school, and here is the result. 30% of the students _________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Inventions changed the world. Recently, we did a survey on “What’s your favourite invention” in our school, and here is the result. 30% of the students’ favourite invention is smart phones because they can use them to chat with friends. 25% of the students’ favourite invention is the computer because they can use it to do many important jobs. 20% of the students’ favourite invention is the car because it makes their life convenient. 15% of the students’ favourite invention is the air conditioner because it can keep the air cool. 10% of the students choose other inventions. My favourite invention is the Internet. Because of it, the world becomes smaller and smaller. We can keep abreast of the latest events around the world anytime and anywhere. 【解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：描述学校关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查报告的结果，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明学校做了一项关于“我最喜爱的发明”的调查，引出下文； 第二步，描述调查报告的结果，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第三步，谈谈自己心目中最喜爱的一项发明是什么及其原因，注意细节充分，三观正确。 [亮点词汇] ①chat with…和……聊天 ②because of 因为，由于 ③keep abreast of及时了解 [高分句型] ①30% of the students’ favourite invention is smart phones because they can use them to chat with friends.（原因状语从句） ② Because of it, the world becomes smaller and smaller.（使用比较级） 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $