UNIT 5 Section Ⅴ Writing　-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（人教版）

UNIT 5 WORKING THE LAND 主题语境：人与社会—科学研究之伟大成就 Section Ⅴ　Writing Writing 1——写一篇关于农业的议论文 　　议论文是一种常见的文体，主要用于表达作者对某一问题或主题的观点和看法。 [满分微讲坛——范式素材感悟·有章可循] 一、课文范式推荐 二、话题素材积累 第一段：提出论点，引入话题 1.Recently our class has had a debate about whether organic farming is good for us.Different students hold different opinions. 最近我们班就有机农业是否对我们有益展开了一场辩论。不同的学生有不同的看法。 2.There are different opinions among students as to organic farming. 对于有机农业，学生们有不同的看法。 3.Opinions about organic farming vary from person to person.Some people are in favour of it while others are against it. 关于有机农业的看法因人而异。一些人赞成，而另一些人反对。 第二段：列举正反方的观点及其理由 1.Some students are in favour of organic farming.Firstly，they think the vegetables of organic farming are grown without any chemical fertiliser. Besides，organic farming practices are designed to encourage soil and water conservation and reduce pollution.Last but not least，more and more people are demanding the most natural and nutritious choices for their family. 有些学生赞成有机农业。首先，他们认为有机农业的蔬菜种植没有使用任何化学肥料。此外，有机耕作方式旨在鼓励保持水土和减少污染。最后但同等重要的是，越来越多的人要求为他们的家庭选择最天然和最有营养的食物。 2.However，others are against it because it costs a great deal to develop organic farming. 然而，其他人则表示反对，因为发展有机农业要花费很多钱。 第三段：表明自己的观点 1.As the old saying goes，everything has two sides.It has both advantages and disadvantages. 正如老话说的那样，凡事都有两面性，既有优点，又有缺点。 2.As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that... 就我而言，从某种程度上讲，我同意后一观点。我认为…… 3.For my part，I think it reasonable to...Only in this way can you/we... 对我来说，我认为……是合理的。只有通过这种方式，你/我们才能…… [满分练到位——妙笔成篇训练·立竿见影] 　　假定你是李华，你班就化学农业和有机农业进行了讨论，请你写一篇文章阐述一下你的观点。内容包括： 　　1.有机农产品更健康，让人放心； 　　2.有机农耕对环境不造成破坏； 　　3.有机农耕让农民增加收入。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：pesticide residues农药残留 【写作思维流程】 一、合理布局，精心谋篇 二、遣词造句，规范得体 1.就我个人而言，有机农业优于化学农业。以下是一些原因。 _______________________________________________________________.Here are some reasons. 2.在有机农业中，农民被禁止在植物上喷洒化学农药，因此植物上没有农药残留。 In organic farming，_______________________________________________ _______，so there are no pesticide residues. As far as I’m concerned，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming farmers are forbidden to spray chemical pesticides on the plants 3.农民使用动物产生的天然废物，这将有利于改善土壤状况。 Farmers use natural waste from animals，______________________________ _______________________. 4.有机农业可以增加农民收入。 Organic farming can _________________________. 5.随着越来越多的人最关心自己的健康，他们在商店购物时倾向于购买有机水果和蔬菜，尽管这些产品的价格很高。 __________________________________________________，they tend to buy organic fruit and vegetables when they are shopping in stores，_________ ________________________________. which will be good for improving the condition of the soil increase the farmers’ income With more and more people caring most about their health the high prices of these products despite 三、恰当衔接，自然过渡 用firstly，secondly，thirdly等过渡词汇，把有机耕作的优势连接成段。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Firstly，in organic farming，farmers are forbidden to spray chemical pesticides on the plants，so there are no pesticide residues.Secondly，farmers use natural waste from animals，which will be good for improving the condition of the soil.Thirdly，organic farming can increase the farmers’ income. 四、认真誊写，赏心悦目 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 　　As far as I’m concerned，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming.Here are some reasons. 　　Firstly，in organic farming，farmers are forbidden to spray chemical pesticides on the plants，so there are no pesticide residues.Secondly，farmers use natural waste from animals，which will be good for improving the condition of the soil.Thirdly，organic farming can increase the farmers’ income.With more and more people caring most about their health，they tend to buy organic fruit and vegetables when they are shopping in stores，despite the high prices of these products. 　　All in all，I’m in favour of organic farming.I hope more and more farmers will turn to organic farming in the future. Writing 2——语料积累 读后续写 【教材语料积累】 词 汇 情感 描写 ①convince vt. 使相信；使确信；说服 ②convincing adj. 有说服力的；使人信服的 ③convinced adj. 确信的；坚信的 ④intense adj. 热切的；十分强烈的；激烈的 ⑤deep down 在内心深处；本质上；实际上 ⑥essential adj. 完全必要的；极其重要的 词 汇 动作 描写 ①tackle vt. 解决(难题)；应付(局面)；处理 ②boost vt. 使增长；使兴旺 n.增长；提高；激励 ③overcome vt. 克服；解决；战胜 ④alleviate vt. 减轻；缓解 ⑤devote vt. 把……献(给)；把……专用于；专心于 ⑥attain vt. (通常经过努力)获得；得到 美 句 1.Indeed，his slim but strong body was just like that of millions of Chinese farmers，to whom he had devoted his life.(外貌描写) 2.Yuan was convinced that the answer could be found in the creation of hybrid rice.(情感描写) 3.Long ago，he envisioned rice plants as tall as sorghum，with each ear of rice as big as a broom，and each grain of rice as huge as a peanut.(比喻修辞) 4.As a man of the soil，he cared little for celebrity or money.Instead，he made large donations to support agricultural research.(人物描写) 5.Even in his later years，Yuan Longping was still young at heart and full of vision，and everyone was always excited to see what he would dream up next.(人物描写) 【续写语料运用】 请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段，然后核对答案并背诵该语段。 　　Seeing my friend ①_________________________，I ②______ ______________________ I felt like an ant on a hot pan.I must do whatever I could to ③_______________________________________ ___________________________.I offered him some effective measures to ④____________________________________________. Finally，he ⑤_____________________________________________ __________________________ could he pass the exam.When I saw him come out of the haze，my heart was as sweet as honey. 　　看见我朋友悲痛欲绝，我内心深处是如此焦虑，以至于感觉就像热锅上的蚂蚁。我必须竭尽全力振奋他的精神，并说服他不要向暂时的失败屈服。我向他提供了一些有效的措施，以缓解他的悲伤并解决他的问题。最终，他相信只有致力于学习他才能通过考试。当我看到他走出阴霾，我的心感觉像蜜一样甜。 overcome with intense grief anxious deep down that was so boost his spirits and convince him not to yield to the temporary failure alleviate his sadness and tackle his problems was convinced that only if he devoted himself to/was devoted to his study Writing 3——读后续写 三步成文 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Hidden Treasure Old Man Donovan was a mean man who hated children.He threw rocks at them and even shot at them with a shotgun.At least that’s what we had heard. His small farm bordered our neighborhood ①where my younger sister，Leigh Ann，and I lived ②when we were growing up.His farm was long and narrow.It held two treasures.One was his beautiful fruit. 写作任务 There were many varieties of fruit：pears，apples，and lots more ③I just can’t think of.The fruit naturally drew the children to his land.It made them into thieves.But my sister and I didn’t dare to take his fruit because of the horrible rumors we had heard about Old Man Donovan. One summer day，we were playing in a nearby field.It was time to head back home.My sister and I were feeling very daring that day.There was a short cut to our house that went through the Donovan farm.We thought he wouldn’t be able to see us run across his property around the fruit trees.We were almost through the farm when we heard，“Hey，girls！” in a low voice.We stopped dead in our tracks！ There we were，face to face with Old Man Donovan.Our knees were shaking.We ④had visions of rocks pounding our bodies and hearts. “Come here，” he said，reaching up to one of his apple trees.Still shaking，we went over to him.He held out several ripe，juicy，red apples.“Take these home，” he commanded.We took the apples with surprised hearts and ran all the way home.Of course，Leigh Ann and I ate the apples. As time went on，we often went through Old Man Donovan’s farm，and he kept on giving us more delicious fruit.One day，we stopped by to see him when he was on his front door.We talked to him for hours.While he was talking，we realized that we had found the other hidden treasure：the sweet，kind heart hidden behind his voice.Soon，he was one of our favorite people to talk to.Unfortunately，his family never seemed to enjoy our company.They never smiled or welcomed us in. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 　　Every summer，we would visit Mr.Donovan and talk to him.__________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　The next winter，word got around that Old Man Donovan had died.____ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 读后续写三步曲 第一步：读语篇及所给首句 1.字词表达 (1)mean adj.吝啬的 (2)border v.紧邻 (3)horrible adj.可怕的 (4)rumor n.谣言 (5)head v.前行 (6)cut n.捷径 写作思路 (7)run across 偶然遇见(或看到) (8)dead in our tracks僵在原地 (9)pound v.猛击 (10)juicy adj.多汁的 (11)command v.命令；下令；指挥 (12)enjoy our company喜欢和我们在一起 (13)get around (信息、消息)传开 2.语言结构 ①where引导定语从句，修饰neighborhood。 【译文】 _____________________________________ ②when引导状语从句，修饰lived。 【译文】 ____________________ ③定语从句，省略了引导词that，修饰lots more 【译文】 __________________________ ④have sth doing结构，意为“感到……一直在……” 【译文】 ____________________________________ (临近)我和妹妹Leigh Ann生活的社区 在我们长大的过程中 以及很多我想不到的(水果) 感到石头一直在猛击我们的身体和心脏 3.内容脉络 (1)听说老人很吝啬，用石头砸偷果子的孩子。我们很害怕他。 (2)绕近道时在果园被碰到，但是老人给了我们水果吃。 (3)我们经常去见老人，但是他的家人似乎不喜欢我们的陪伴。 4.所给首句 Every summer，we would visit Mr.Donovan and talk to him. 【译文】 ________________________________________________ The next winter，word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. 【译文】 ______________________________________ 每年夏天，我们都会去拜访多诺万先生，和他聊天。 来年冬天，有消息说多诺万老人去世了。 第二步：巧妙构思续写情节 1.预测续写走向 我们和老人友谊加深。 2.安排续写要素 (1)主要人物：Old Man Donovan 次要人物：My sister and I；the old man’s family (2)时间： 首段：接下来连续几年；末段：后来某一年冬天 。 地点：首段：在果园以及老人家里；末段：在老人家里或医院。 (3)事件发展(我们起初害怕老人)——高潮(接触后不害怕而且成了朋友)——结局(老人去世我们道别) 3.设计续写要点 (1)要点一：承接首段首句 根据首段首句中Every summer，应描述接下来几年我们经常见面以及聊天内容和情景。 (2)要点二：情节继续推进 结合原文最后一句的铺垫They never smiled or welcomed us in，此处应描写老人的家人也对我们友好了，邀请我们去他家做客。 (3)要点三：铺垫第二段首句 根据第二段首句The next winter...had died，应描写我们有一年秋天去他家做客，老人得病的情况。以此照应下段首句。 (4)要点四：承接第二段首句 根据第二段首句Old Man Donovan had died，应描写我们听到消息的感受。 (5)要点五：情节发展变化 结合前文我们和老人的友谊，此处描写我们所做的事情。 (6)要点六：主题总结升华 描写我们的追忆。 第三步：妙笔生花续写成文 1.基本表达 (1)首段首句：Every summer，we would visit Mr.Donovan and talk to him. (要点1：承接首句，写聊天内容场景等) 我们跟他讲述我们在学校的经历，他把他的美味的水果给我们。 We told him about our experience at school and he kept giving out his tasty fruits to us. (要点2：推进情节，增加描写友谊加深，感动他家人。) 慢慢地，我们更像一家人而不是朋友了，他家人也慢慢地对我们报以微笑，并不时邀请我们去他家做客。 Gradually，we seemed to be more a family than good friends and his family eventually came to greet us with a warm smile and invited us to his home from time to time. (要点3：铺垫第二段首句，描写老人得病以及我们的反应。) 但是在秋天的一天，当我们去他家拜访时，我们被告知他病得很重。我们非常焦虑。第二天，我们直奔医院去看他。虽然他很虚弱，但他安慰我们说这没什么大不了的。 But one day in autumn，when we dropped by at his house，we were told that he was seriously ill.We were very anxious.The next day，we rushed straight to the hospital to see him.Although he was weak，he comforted us that it was nothing. (2)第二段首句：The next winter，word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. (要点4：承接第二段首句，描写我们听到消息的感受) 听到这个坏消息，我妹妹和我简直不敢相信，直到我们经过那个空荡荡的农场。我对他的去世深感难过。 When we heard the bad news，my sister and I just couldn’t believe it until we went by the empty farm.I felt very sad about his death. (要点5：故事结局，描写参加葬礼的情景) 在他的葬礼上，风刮得很猛，我们走近他的家人，给了他们一个大大的拥抱，“我对你们的损失表示哀悼”。 At his funeral，the wind blew hard.We approached his family and gave them a big hug，“I’m sorry for your loss.” (要点6：主题总结升华) 我意识到我们无法再去拜访他了，也无法坐在一起聊天或享受他种的美味水果了。然而，他给我们留下了一个隐藏的宝藏——他的善良的心，永远不会随着时间的流逝而消失。 I realized the days when we visited him were gone and we couldn’t sit together chatting with each other or enjoying the tasty fruit grown by him.However，he left us a hidden treasure—his kind heart，which shall never die away with the passage of time. 2.提升表达 (1)词汇升级替换：讲述 tell sb about → share sth with sb；得知 be told→be informed；非常very →extremely；不算什么it was nothing→it wasn’t a big deal；慢慢地gradually→as time went by (2)丰富句式结构：形容词前置的倒装句；which定语从句；非谓语动词作状语。 3.打磨美文 上述基本表达要点齐全，但描写用词平淡，请结合提升表达的内容对上文黑体内容润色升级，增加细节修辞描写，并适当添加过渡或修饰词。 　　Every summer，we would visit Mr.Donovan and talk to him.__________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ with him our colorful experience at school and he kept giving out his tasty fruits to us as usual.As time went by，we seemed to be more a family than good friends and his family eventually came to greet us with a warm smile，inviting us to his home from time to time.But one day in autumn，when dropping by at his house，we were informed that he was seriously ill.We were extremely anxious.The next day，we rushed straight to the hospital to see him.Weak as he was，he comforted us that it wasn’t a big deal. We shared 　　The next winter，word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hearing the bad news，my sister and I just couldn’t believe it until we went by the empty farm.I felt a lump in my throat，tears welling up in my eyes.At his funeral，the wind whistled through the trees，as if mourning for the death of Donovan.I realized gone were the days when we sat together chatting with each other or enjoying the tasty fruit grown by him.However，he left us a hidden treasure—his kind heart，which shall never die away with the passage of time. 谢 谢 观 看 UNIT 5 WORKING THE LAND 返回 $