UNIT 2 Section Ⅴ Writing-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书word（人教版）

本讲义聚焦高中英语议论文写作与读后续写核心知识点，系统梳理议论文“引语-正反观点-结论”结构及对应句式（如开头“Nowadays an increasing number of...”、结尾“As far as I’m concerned...”），并通过读后续写“语料积累-情节构思-成文润色”三步法，构建从基础表达至篇章创作的学习支架。 该资料以丰富句式模板（如议论文正反观点衔接词“however”“besides”）和情境化语料（情感动作词汇“resist”“persuade”、美句排比修辞）为特色，助力学生提升语言表达准确性与逻辑思维连贯性，体现语言能力与思维品质培养。课中辅助教师高效开展结构化写作教学，课后学生可借助模板与范文自主练习，弥补表达短板。

Section Ⅴ　Writing Writing 1——写有关未来科技发展利弊的议论文 　　观点类议论文是从正反两方面辩证地说明某个观点的议论文。此类文章的结构一般为：引语——正方观点——反方观点——结论。 [满分微讲坛——范式素材感悟·有章可循] 一、课文范式推荐 二、话题素材积累 开头句式 ①There is a widespread concern over the issue that robots will cause great threat to us. 关于这个问题有一个广泛的担忧：机器人将会对我们造成很大威胁。 ②It is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. 众所周知有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异。 ③Nowadays many people prefer this kind of high-tech，because it has a significant role in our daily life. 现如今很多人更喜欢这种高科技，因为它在我们的日常生活中扮演了一个重要的角色。 ④Nowadays，an increasingly number of students are becoming short-sighted. 现如今，越来越多的学生近视了。 ⑤New technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. 多年来新科技为各地的人们提供了许多好处。 正文句式 ①People，however，differ in their opinions on this matter. 然而在这个问题上人们的观点各不相同。 学生用书⬇第43页 ②Generally speaking，its advantages can be seen as follows.一般来说，它的优点如下。 ③But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent. 但凡事都有利有弊。消极的方面也是很明显的。 ④We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.我们应该采取一系列有效的措施来应对这个处境。 ⑤In the future，all electrical appliances at home are in the control of computers. 在未来，家里所有的电器都由电脑控制。 ⑥At work，robots will take over most jobs in the factories. 在工作方面，机器人将接管工厂的大部分工作。 结尾句式 ①As far as I’m concerned，a cashless society has more advantages over disadvantages. 就我而言，无现金社会利大于弊。 ②Only in this way can we solve this problem. 只有用这种办法，我们才能解决这个问题。 ③It’s about time that we should do something to improve our environment. 该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了。 ④Therefore，I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us. 因此，我相信一个崭新的未来正在等待着我们。 ⑤I always look on the positive side of the change and accept it rather than resist it. 我总会看到变化积极的一面并接受它，而不是抵制它。 [满分练到位——妙笔成篇训练·立竿见影] 　　假定你是李华，你班最近组织了一场辩论赛，主题是“cashless society”。请综合正反两方的观点，陈述自己的看法。 赞同理由 1.更方便　2.使生活更舒适 反对理由 1.隐私易泄露　2.花费易超支 你的观点 …… 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 【写作思维流程】 一、合理布局，精心谋篇 二、遣词造句，规范得体 1.电子支付近来正变得越来越受欢迎，这使我们进入了无现金社会。(分词作状语) E-Pay is becoming increasingly popular recently，making us get access to a cashless society. 2.人们就这一问题观点不一。 People differ in their opinions on this matter. 3.有些学生认为无现金(支付)很重要，因为人们的生活会更方便、更舒适。 Some students think it important to be cashless because people can have a more convenient and comfortable life. 4.其他人则有着截然不同的看法。他们表示，这种消费模式对个人隐私和财富构成威胁 Others think very differently.They said this kind of consumption pattern is a threat to one’s privacy and wealth. 5.我们容易花费超支，因此，无现金社会是不必要的。 It is easy for us to pay more than we can afford，so the cashless society is not a necessity. 6.在我看来，无现金社会的好处多于坏处。 As far as I’m concerned，a cashless society has more advantages over disadvantages. 学生用书⬇第44页 7.尽管有危险和不同的声音，但对其认可是值得的。(让步状语从句) Although there are risks and different voices，it is worthwhile saying yes to it. 三、恰当衔接，自然过渡 用however，besides等过渡词汇，将赞成和反对电子支付的观点连接成段。 　　Some students think it important to be cashless because people can have a more convenient and comfortable life.However，others think very differently.They said this kind of consumption pattern is a threat to one’s privacy and wealth.Besides， it is easy for us to pay more than we can afford，so the cashless society is not a necessity. 四、认真誊写，赏心悦目 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 Cashless Society，Yes or No 　　E-Pay is becoming increasingly popular recently，making us get access to a cashless society.People，however，differ in their opinions on this matter. 　　Some students think it important to be cashless because people can have a more convenient and comfortable life.However，others think very differently.They said this kind of consumption pattern is a threat to one’s privacy and wealth.Besides，it is easy for us to pay more than we can afford，so the cashless society is not a necessity. 　　As far as I’m concerned，a cashless society has more advantages over disadvantages.Although there are risks and different voices，it is worthwhile saying yes to it. Writing 2——语料积累 读后续写 【教材语料积累】 词 汇 情感 描写 ①distant adj. 遥远的；远处的；疏远的；心不在焉的 ②opposed adj. 反对的 ③potential adj. 可能的；潜在的n.潜力；可能性 ④relevant adj. 有关的；有意义的 动作 描写 ①cease vi.& vt. (使)停止；终止 ②switch vt. 转换；交换 vi.& vt.(使)改变；转变 n.开关；转换器；改变 ③leak vi.& vt. 漏；渗漏；透露n.漏洞；裂缝；透露 ④persuade vt. 劝说；说服 ⑤resist vi.& vt. 抵制；反抗；抵挡 ⑥command n. 指令；命令；控制vt.命令；控制 美 句 1.These smart homes will keep us secure，save us energy，and provide a more comfortable environment to live in.(排比修辞) 2.Today，we have to use switches for our lights，knobs for our appliances，and remote controls for our TVs and air conditioners.(排比修辞) 3.They can warn you early on if there is something abnormal or if you have a critical illness...(拟人) 4.Nevertheless，I will always look on the positive side of change and accept it rather than resist it.(结尾升华) 【续写语料运用】 请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段，然后核对答案并背诵该语段。 　　With ①her secret leaked，Jane ②couldn’t resist sobbing，with ③a distant look in her eyes.Lacking a sense of security，she ④ceased communicating with those around her.She didn’t know ⑤how to switch the embarrassment.She was thrown into the abyss of pain，burying herself in tears.Luckily，the monitor finally ⑥persuaded the leaker to apologize to Jane.Gradually，Jane’s gloom from within vanished into the air and a smile reappeared on her face. 　　简的秘密被泄露了，她忍不住啜泣，眼神茫然。由于缺乏安全感，她停止和周围的人交流。她不知道如何改变这种窘境。她陷入了痛苦的深渊，整日以泪洗面。幸运的是，班长最终说服泄密者向简道歉。逐渐地，简内心的阴霾消失了，她的脸上重新露出了笑容。 学生用书⬇第45页 Writing 3——读后续写 三步成文 ◎ Going Home 　　Three boys and three girls were going to the beach.When they boarded the bus，they were carrying sandwiches and wine，①dreaming of golden beaches.Suddenly，they noticed Vingo.He sat in front of them，②eyes fixed upon a photo，completely in silence. Deep into the night，the bus pulled into Howard Johnson’s，a service area，and everybody got off except Vingo.The young people began to wonder about him.When they came back，one of the girls sat beside him and introduced herself.“Want some wine？”she said.He smiled and took a swig from the bottom.He thanked her and became silent again. The next morning，they awoke outside another Howard Johnson’s，and this time Vingo went in.The girls insisted that he join them.He ordered black coffee and some cookies.When they returned，the girl sat with Vingo again.After a while，slowly and painfully，he began his story.He had been in prison for the past four years，and now he was going home. “Are you married？” “I don’t know.” “You don’t know？”she said. “Well，when I was in prison I wrote to my wife，”he said.“I told her that I was going to be away for a long time，and that if she couldn’t stand it，if the kids kept asking questions，and if it hurt her too much，she could just forget me.I’d understand.Get a new guy，I said.She’s a wonderful woman.I told her she didn’t have to write to me.And she didn’t.Not for three and a half years.” “And you are going home now，not knowing？” “Yeah.Well，last week，when I was sure the parole(假释)was coming through，I wrote to her again.We used to live in Brunswick，and there’s a big oak(橡树)tree ③just as you come into town.I told her that if she didn’t have a new man and if she’d take me back，she should put a yellow handkerchief on the tree，and I’d get off and come home.If she didn’t want me，forget it—no handkerchief and I’d go on through.” “Wow，”the girl exclaimed，“wow.” She told the others，and soon all of them were in it. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 　　Looking at the photo，the young people found a young woman and three children in it._____ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Vingo sat there amazed，staring at the oak tree.____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学生用书⬇第46页 ◎ 读后续写三步曲 第一步：读语篇及所给首句 1.字词表达 (1)pull into(车)慢慢驶入 (2)take a swig喝一大口 (3)stand it容忍 (4)take me back接我回来 2.语言结构 ①动词-ing形式短语作状语 【译文】 梦想着金黄色沙滩 ②独立主格结构作状语 【译文】 眼睛盯着一张照片，完全地陷入了沉默 ③as引导时间状语从句 【译文】 就在你们进入到镇上时 3.内容脉络 (1)三个男孩和三个女孩偶遇Vingo。 (2)听Vingo讲述他自己的故事。 (3)孩子们一起参与到Vingo回家之旅。 4.所给首句 Looking at the photo，the young people found a young woman and three children in it. 【译文】 看着照片，青年们发现照片里有一位年轻妇女和三个孩子。 Vingo sat there amazed，staring at the oak tree. 【译文】 Vingo惊奇地坐在那里，盯着那棵橡树。 第二步：巧妙构思续写情节 1.预测续写走向 Vingo梦想成真，被妻子接纳。 2.安排续写要素 (1)主要人物Vingo，次要人物young boys and girls (2)时间地点：首段发生在第二天返回的汽车上；末段发生在Vingo家附近。 (3)事件发展(孩子们参与进来)——高潮(在紧张心情中发现了橡树上的黄手绢)——结局(Vingo回家) 3.设计续写要点 (1)要点一：承接首段首句 根据首段首句中the photo，a young woman and three children可知，应描述大家看照片的反应。 (2)要点二：情节继续推进 描写此时大家和Vingo的紧张心情。 (3)要点三：铺垫第二段首句 根据第二段首句amazed，staring at the oak tree可知，应描写大家发现黄手绢的场面以及Vingo的反应。 (4)要点四：承接第二段首句 根据第二段首句可知，应描写Vingo看到的令他惊讶的情景。 (5)要点五：情节发展变化 大家为Vingo感到高兴，Vingo如愿以偿返家。 第三步：妙笔生花续写成文 1.基本表达 (1)首段首句：Looking at the photo，the young people found a young woman and three children in it. (要点1：承接首句，写大家关于照片人物的沟通交流) “多么可爱的女人和聪明的孩子啊，”几个年轻人说。“是啊，她是个聪明的女人，总能让我们的小房子温暖舒适，”Vingo说。 “What a lovely woman and cute kids，”some of the young man said.“Yeah，she is a smart woman and she can always make our small house warm and comfortable，”Vingo said. (要点2：推进情节，增加描写：大家的紧张心情。) 随着离不伦瑞克越来越近，Vingo感到非常紧张。所有的人都睁大了眼睛，等待着奇迹的出现。 With Brunswick coming near，Vingo felt very nervous.All the young people opened their eyes wide，waiting for a miracle. 学生用书⬇第47页 (要点3：铺垫第二段首句，描写看到期望中的情景，注意照应下段首句的Vingo sat there。) 突然，他们都从座位上跳了起来，尖叫着，只有Vingo例外。 Suddenly，they all jumped up from their seats，shouting except Vingo. (2)第二段首句：Vingo sat there amazed，staring at the oak tree. (要点4：承接第二段首句，描写所看到的橡树情景) 树上挂满了黄手绢，二三十条，也许有几百条。 It was covered with yellow handkerchiefs，twenty or thirty of them，maybe hundreds. (要点5：故事结局，描写大家为Vingo感到高兴，Vingo准备回家) 所有的年轻人都站了起来，离开了座位。当年轻人仍然兴奋不已时，Vingo慢慢地从座位上站起来，紧紧地抱着自己，向公共汽车的前部走去，准备回家。 All the young people were up out of their seats.As the young people were thrilled，Vingo slowly rose from his seat，holding himself tightly，and walked to the front of the bus to go home. 2.提升表达 (1)词汇升级替换：临近come near→draw near/approach；尖叫shout→scream；were→remained；走到walk to→make one’s way to；说say→murmur (2)丰富句式结构：用具体动作或者表情代替抽象描写；who引导的定语从句；非谓语动词结构；并列结构转换为主从结构。 3.打磨美文 上述基本表达要点齐全，但句式结构较为单一，描写用词平淡，请结合提升表达的内容对上文黑体内容润色升级，适当增加细节并添加过渡或修饰词。 　　Looking at the photo，the young people found a young woman and three children in it.“What a lovely woman and cute kids，”some of the young man said.“Yeah，she is a smart woman who can always make our small house warm and comfortable，”Vingo murmured.With Brunswick approaching，Vingo stopped staring at the photo，tightening his face，as if protecting himself against another disappointment.The young people took over window seats，waiting for the coming of the oak tree.Then Brunswick was ten miles，and then five. All the young people opened their eyes wide，waiting for a miracle.Suddenly，they all jumped up from their seats，screaming except Vingo. 　　Vingo sat there amazed，staring at the oak tree.It was covered with yellow handkerchiefs，twenty or thirty of them，maybe hundreds，flying in the wind.The oak tree stood like a banner of welcome. All the young people were up out of their seats，shouting，crying，doing small dances or shaking fists in triumph.As the young people remained thrilled，Vingo slowly rose from his seat，holding himself tightly，and made his way to the front of the bus to go home. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $