UNIT 3 Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一篇有关-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书word(译林版)
Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一篇有关中国学生中近视的文章
[文体感知]
本文要求讨论中国学生的近视问题,这是一篇议论文,文章应从现象、原因和解决措施等方面展开,其中近视的原因以及问题的解决方式作为文章的主体部分。
[写作素材]
1.Short-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.
近视是我国年轻一代中的一个严重问题。
2.As we all know,almost eight out of ten high school students are near-sighted.
众所周知的是,几乎十个中学生中就有八个是近视眼。
3.It's amazing that the situation is going from bad to worse.
令人惊讶的是,这种情况每况愈下。
4.It is time that we took the problem seriously.
现在该是我们认真面对这个问题的时候了。
5.We students should not watch TV or read in bad light.
我们学生不应该在不好的光线下看电视或阅读。
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6.The Ministry of Education can do its part by changing out curricula in order to lighten our heavy workload and reducing the number of tests and exams.
教育部可以改变我们课程以减轻我们繁重的课业,并减少我们的考试次数。
[典题示例]
研究表明,中国学生近视的人越来越多,请根据以下要点写一篇文章:
1.引起近视的原因;
2.应采取的措施。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节;以使行文连贯。
第一步 学会审题谋篇
写作类型 | 议论文 |
人称时态 | 第三人称为主;一般现在时 |
写作要点 | 1.分析现状; 2.引起近视的原因; 3.应采取的措施。 |
第二步 保基础分——会写基本句
1.最近的一项调查显示,近视在中国学生中呈上升趋势。
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A recent survey has revealed that short-sightedness is on the rise among Chinese students.
2.我们实际使用眼睛的方式似乎起着决定性的作用。
How we actually use our eyes seems to play a key role.
3.在室内待太久也是有害的。
It is also harmful to spend too much time indoors.
4.因为我们的眼睛需要自然的阳光来保持健康。
As our eyes need natural sunlight to be healthy.
5.如果我们从一开始就采取措施防止自己近视,我们就能改善这种情况。
We can improve the situation if we take measures to stop ourselves becoming short-sighted in the first place.
6.我们学习的时候应该定期休息一下,到外面走走,让我们的眼睛有机会见到一些阳光。
We should take regular breaks from our study and go outside to give our eyes a chance to get some sunlight.
7.我们不应该坐得离电脑、智能手机或电视屏幕太近。
We should avoid sitting too close to a computer,smartphone or television screen.
第三步 创设亮点——试写高级句
8.用as引导原因状语从句合并句3和句4。
It is also harmful to spend too much time indoors,as our eyes need natural sunlight to be healthy.
9.用被动句改写句5。
The situation could be improved if we take measures to stop ourselves becoming short-sighted in the first place.
第四步 衔接成篇得高分
[参考范文]
A recent survey has revealed that short-sightedness is on the rise among Chinese students.The problem has already affected a large number of students.
In fact,how we actually use our eyes seems to play a key role.Reading in poor light can harm our eyesight.It is also harmful to spend too much time indoors,as our eyes need natural sunlight to be healthy.
Luckily,the situation could be improved if we take measures to stop ourselves becoming short-sighted in the first place.We should take regular breaks from our study and go outside to give
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our eyes a chance to get some sunlight.In addition,we should avoid sitting too close to a computer,smartphone or television screen.
课时精练(十一) Section Ⅲ Integrated skills
——写一篇有关中国学生中近视的文章)
(时间:60分钟 满分:55分)
(本栏目内容,在学生用书中以独立形式分册装订!)
Ⅰ.完形填空(每小题1分,共15分)
Eric and LeAnne Stadler of Ohio began fostering (代养) babies in 2014.They have helped 1 many little poor ones over the years. 2 ,when they received a phone call from Child Protective Services in 2017,they were still 3 by a 2-month-old homeless boy's tragic situation.
The 4 soul,whose name is Easton,had been in the hospital for 11 days.He was diagnosed (诊断) with non-organic failure to grow up healthily,a term that is given by 5 when they don't know exactly why small children aren't doing well.When Eric and LeAnne 6 at the hospital to take him home,he was so weak that the Stadlers were 7 to hold him.LeAnne 8 ,“I had never seen anything like him.His skin,showed all the little veins that ran through his body.He had no fat on his little bones...” Doctors told Eric and LeAnne to take Easton home and 9 him with love and food.Yet even with the best care in the world,they feared he might not 10 .Luckily,with round-the-clock feedings and lots of hugs,Easton 11 began to show signs of improvement.He put some weight on his small frame (体形) and became 12 .
Eric and LeAnne loved Easton as he always 13 to be loved.Despite all the 14 ,Easton is now a happy child.It takes a special family for 15 to occur,like what the Stadlers have done with Easton!
语篇解读 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了Stadlers夫妇收养了身体虚弱的两个月大的婴儿Easton,在悉心照顾下,孩子慢慢有了好转迹象,强壮起来的故事。
1.A.search for B.care for
C.guide D.entertain
B [根据“Eric and LeAnne Stadler of Ohio began fostering babies in 2014.”可知,Eric and LeAnne从2014年起一直在关心、照顾贫穷的孩子。故选B项。]
2.A.Therefore B.Actually
C.However D.Unfortunately
C [根据前文描述Eric and LeAnne一直照顾孩子及后文描述“by a 2-month-old homeless
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