Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇读后感-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版）

该高中英语课件聚焦读后感写作教学，以“小男孩与钉子”寓言为范文导入，系统讲解故事开篇语、描写句、写作手法及修辞，结合“概括阅读内容—引出个人体会—总结评述”的结构框架，搭建从语言分析到情境仿写再到学以致用的学习支架。 其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过孔雀寓言仿写任务，引导学生从单句模仿到运用定语从句、动词-ing形式合并句子，提升句式高级表达能力，同时借助“知结构”模块培养逻辑思维。采用“学范文—仿步骤—积素材”的学科特色教学法，学生能掌握读后感写作技巧，教师可直接利用结构化流程与素材库提升教学效率。

Unit 2　Improving yourself 主题语境：人与自我——提升自我 Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇读后感 学范文 模仿写作 There once was a little boy who had a bad temper.His father gave him a bag of nails and told him that every time he lost his temper，he must hammer a nail into the back of the fence. The first day，the boy hammered so many nails into the fence that his father had to give him a whole new bag.Over the next few weeks，as he learnt to control his anger，he hammered fewer and fewer nails into the fence each day.He had learnt that it was easier to hold his temper than to hammer nails into the fence.Finally，the day came when the boy didn't lose his temper all day，not even once.He told his father，who said that now the boy should pull out one nail for each day that he was able to hold his temper. 原文呈现 The days passed by and the boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone.The father took his son and led him to the fence.He said，“You've done well，son，but look at all the holes in the fence! That fence will never be the same.When you say something in anger，it leaves a hole in someone's heart，just like your nails have left holes in the fence.It doesn't matter how many times you say sorry.The hole is still there.” 学语言 本单元的写作任务是写一篇读后感。读后感中既要写“读”，又要写“感”，既要叙述，又要说理。表现手法上，可用夹叙夹议的写法。 “There once was a little boy...”是故事常用的开篇语，使读者产生身临其境的感觉。 “...the boy hammered so many nails into the fence that his father had to give him a whole new bag.”生动形象地描写出了小男孩暴躁的脾气。 写作手法上，作者使用时间状语The first day，Over the next few weeks和Finally，在旁观者的立场上比较客观地叙述了故事的进程。 修辞上，“...just like your nails have left holes in the fence.”使用明喻的修辞手法，使富有教育意义的主题或深刻的道理在故事中得到揭示。 名师圈点 知结构 读后感在结构上一般分为三部分：一般开头概括地提示“读”，概括阅读内容；并从中引出“感”，谈个人心得体会；结尾处回扣“读”，全文总结评述。 情境任务写作 A peacock (孔雀) was very unhappy with her ugly voice，so she spent most of her days complaining about it.“It is true that you cannot sing，” said the fox，“but look how beautiful you are！” “Oh，but what good is all this beauty，” cried the bird，“with such an unpleasant voice！” “Listen，” said the fox，“each one owns something good：you have such beauty; the nightingale (夜莺) has her songs; and the owl (猫头鹰) has his eyes.Even if you had a sweet voice，you would still complain about another thing.Why can't you just be happy about what you have already got？” 请从这则寓言中提炼出一个恰当的主题，写一篇读后感。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．不得直接引用原文中的句子。 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 2．二仿语言规范美观 (1)这则寓言是关于一只孔雀的。 ________________ a peacock. (2)孔雀忽视了她的美丽，抱怨她的声音太难听。 The peacock complains about her ugly voice _____________________． (3)一只狐狸建议她要满足于自己所拥有的(东西)。 A fox advises her to _______________________________． (4)我周围的很多人都犯了同样的错误，他们只关注自己得不到的东西。 Many people around me make the same mistake，who only _______________ _________． The fable is about ignoring her beauty be content with what she owns focus on what they cannot get (5)我认为我们青少年应该发现和充分利用我们的优势。 I think that we teenagers should find and ___________________________． (6)我们应该停止抱怨缺点。 We should _________________________________________． (7)事实上，没有人能在各方面都发展得很好，即使他/她是个人才。 In fact，nobody _____________________________ even if he/she is a talent. (8)我们应该保持积极的态度，珍惜我们所拥有的，而不是抱怨太多。 We should ___________________________________ instead of complaining too much. make good use of our advantages stop complaining about the shortcomings can develop very well in all aspects stay positive and value what we have 3．三仿句式高级表达 (9)用定语从句合并句(1)和句(2) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (10)用动词-ing形式短语作状语合并句(5)和句(6) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice ignoring her beauty. I think that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages，stopping complaining about the shortcomings. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice ignoring her beauty.But a fox advises her to be content with what she owns. Many people around me make the same mistake，who only focus on what they cannot get.I think that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages，stopping complaining about the shortcomings. In fact，nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent.So we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much. 精彩素材积累 首段： 1．There was a time when many people lived a hard life，with nothing to eat or wear. 曾经有一段时期人们过着艰苦的生活，缺吃少穿。 2．This story tells of a young man who overcame various difficulties and finally achieved success through his own efforts. 这个故事讲述了一个年轻人通过自己的努力，克服各种困难并最终取得 成功。 主体： 1．The little girl went through the forest，waded through the river，and found her own mother. 那个小女孩穿过森林，趟过小河，找到了自己的亲生母亲。 2．The crow thought that taking a bath every day would make him as white as a swan.It came to the river and kept bathing. 乌鸦以为天天洗澡就能够变得像天鹅一样雪白。它来到河边不停地洗澡。 结尾： 1．After reading the story，what impressed me most was that we should never give up easily. 读完这个故事后，最让我印象深刻的是我们不应该轻易放弃。 2．This story tells us that honesty，diligence，courage and kindness are the most important to us. 这个故事告诉我们，诚实、勤劳、勇气和善良对我们来说是最重要的。 3．It inspires us to be kind to others and live in harmony with people around us. 它激励我们善待他人，并与周围的人和谐相处。 学以致用 在一次英语课上，老师要求每人就自己喜欢的一句名人名言或者谚语用英语谈谈自己的体会。假如你喜欢的是：Where there is a will，there is a way.请你根据以下要点写一篇对这句话的理解短文。 要求：1.说出该名言的基本含义； 2．谈谈自己的感想。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Of the countless famous sayings，my favorite is “Where there is a will，there is a way.”，which means that anyone who has a strong mind can achieve his/her goal，however hard it might be. As is universally acknowledged，having a strong will is one of the most important factors contributing to success.For one thing，when you fail to do something，never lose heart.For another，only a man with an iron will can get through the difficulties and challenges. In my opinion，the better we understand it，and apply it to our study and work，the more we will benefit from it. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ $