Unit 6 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇历险类记叙文-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书word（外研版）

Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇历险类记叙文 ………………………………………………………………………………………◎ It's been a week since the other astronauts left Mars and went back to Earth，accidentally leaving me here alone.I was caught in a dust storm and lost contact with them. After resuming communication with the base five days later，I was informed that it will be eight months before a rescue mission arrives from Earth.Fortunately，I have shelter，because the landing capsule protects me from the deadly radiation outside.The capsule is powered by a small nuclear plant.It might have just enough electricity for eight months，if nothing goes wrong.What's more，my spacesuit keeps me safe from exposure to the Martian surface for up to several hours at a time.Water and oxygen were my biggest worries at first，but I've discovered an underground ice deposit nearby.I can reach the ice with our survey tools.That's lucky，because I can drink the water from the ice and also use it to produce oxygen when I run low. Now I am worried about food.There is only enough for one person for four months—four months short of what I need.Part of our mission was to experiment with growing plants in the Martian soil，so I have seeds of various kinds.I must work out how to farm on Mars.If I can solve that challenge，and if the electricity supply holds，I can survive until I am rescued.There's still hope！ ◎……………………………………………………………………………………… 学语言 文章第一句使用accidentally，强调了作者的毫无准备，为整篇文章的情节发展奠定了基础；第三段使用worried，must，hope等词汇，生动地描述了作者担忧而又满怀希望的心情。 写作手法上，采用了先抑后扬的写作手法，先说明困境的严重性，然后用Fortunately，but，lucky等词说明目前作者所能做到的努力，反映了作者在困难面前积极克服困难，努力摆脱困境的坚韧和乐观的精神。 知结构 本文是叙事类记叙文。开头概括介绍事件发生的时间、地点、人物等，从而简单地引入主题；主体部分讲述作者面临的各种困难及解决办法，具体说明事件过程，描述相关细节；最后描述了作者战胜困难的信心，总结自己的看法或感受。 [情境任务写作] 假定你是李华，你市在前几天发生了一次严重的火灾，请你用英语向你的朋友描述这次突发灾难的经历。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 2．二仿语言规范美观 (1)我很遗憾地告诉你，昨天我们市的一座山上发生了一场可怕的火灾。 I'm so sorry to tell you that a terrible fire broke out in a mountain in our city yesterday. (2)幸运的是，消防队员们立即赶到那里，勇敢地去灭火。 Luckily，the firefighters hurried there at once and fought against it bravely． (3)火势非常大。大火持续了5个小时。 The fire was very big.The big fire lasted five hours． (4)一半的森林被大火烧毁了。 Half of the forest was destroyed by the fire． 学生用书第159页 (5)更糟糕的是，有两个人受了重伤。 What's worse，two persons were badly injured． (6)这次可怕的事故给我们上了一课。 The terrible accident has taught us a lesson． (7)应该采取有效措施防止火灾。 Useful measures should be taken to prevent fires． (8)应教育公众预防的重要性，以减少损害。 The public should be taught the importance of prevention to reduce the damage． 3．三仿句式高级表达 (9)用so...that...句型升级句(3)。 The fire was so big that it lasted five hours. (10)用含有同位语从句的句子合并句(6)和句(7)。 The terrible accident has taught us a lesson that useful measures should be taken to prevent fires. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 [参考范文] I'm so sorry to tell you that a terrible fire broke out in a mountain in our city yesterday. Luckily，the firefighters hurried there at once and fought against it bravely，but the fire was so big that it lasted five hours.The electricity was cut off.To our sorrow，half of the forest was destroyed by the fire.What's worse，two persons were badly injured. The terrible accident has taught us a lesson that useful measures should be taken to prevent forest fires.Besides，the public should be taught the importance of prevention to reduce the damage. [精彩素材积累] 首段： 1．This has been the worst adventure in the past decade/ten years. 这是过去十年来最糟糕的一次冒险经历。 2．It is reported that the heavy rainfall caused rivers to break their banks，washing away bridges. 据报道，暴雨导致河流决堤，冲毁桥梁。 主体： 1．The rescue work is going on/still under way. 救援工作正/仍在进行中。 2．It was estimated that the economic losses were more than 9.7 billion yuan. 据估计，经济损失超过97亿元。 结尾： 1．Nowhere can we go and survive except where we are now. 除了我们现在所居住之处，我们无处可去，无处生存。 2．I have to remind myself to be calm and optimistic at every moment. 我必须提醒自己要时刻保持冷静、乐观。 [学以致用] 你在生活中有什么历险经历吗？请结合自己的生活实际情况，写一篇历险短文。写作要点如下： 1．事件发生的时间和地点； 2．事件发生的过程； 3．你的感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [参考范文] One day，I was trapped in the lift as I was about to go to school.The lift just came to a stop suddenly shortly after I got into it.I was alone in the lift and felt a bit frightened and worried at first，but I managed to make myself calm down.First，I tried to cry for help，but no one seemed to be able to hear me from outside.I looked around and found there was an emergency bell on the wall.I immediately rang the bell for help.Soon two guards came up and opened the door for me and let me out.Next time，stay calm in the face of danger，and soon you can find a way to protect yourself. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $