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Section Ⅴ　Writing——写一篇描写今昔对比的文章 ………………………………………………………………………………………◎ Where Does SUPERMAN Get Changed These Days? I was watching a superhero film the other day and a thought occurred to me：where does Superman get changed these days？In the comics and earlier films，Clark Kent would pop into a phone box to change into his Superman costume.But these days，phone boxes are hard to find.The main reason for this is simply that we don't need them anymore.Almost everyone these days carries a mobile phone with 学生用书第75页 them.It is certainly more convenient to take out a mobile and make a call at the touch of a button than to press a series of long numbers on a telephone.And anyone who happens to leave their mobile phone at home will still have no use for a phone box.Why？Because they are unlikely to remember the number they want to call — that's something that our mobile phones do for us these days.And even if we could remember a number and needed to call it urgently，it would still be more convenient to borrow a mobile phone from someone else than walk around looking for a phone box.So，the phone box is becoming a thing of the past.Poor Clark Kent will have to find somewhere else to change！ ◎……………………………………………………………………………………… 学语言 写作手法上，第一句作者开门见山，提出疑问，第二句告诉读者答案，第三句使用But引出本文话题。最后两句作者表达率直，重点突出。 语言上，a thought occurred to me作者使用无灵主语；第二句中作者使用高级词汇pop into，形象地描绘了超人到电话亭换装的场景，表达了超人拯救他人生命和世界的急切心情；文章最后一句中作者使用形容词Poor，在使人感到一丝悲戚的同时又引人发笑，实现了幽默的效果。 知结构 本单元是关于发展变化的文章，主要描述已发生的变化和将来可能发生的变化，可以分为三部分：开头：导入主题；主体：剖析原因；结尾：得出结论。 [情境任务写作] 假定你是某中学的学生李华，最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你们学校，听说你们学校现在变化很大，希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出。 三年前 一座教学楼，一个操场，学生1 000人 现在 1.校园扩建：新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，教学楼内有音乐室、计算机教学室等； 2．学生人数：增加到了2 000人； 3．体育设施配备齐全。 参考词汇：体育设施sports facilities Dear Joy， I was pleased to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about the changes in our school. Yours， Li Hua [仿写程序步骤] 1．一仿结构布局合理 2．二仿语言规范美观 (1)众所周知，我们学校已经发生了巨大的变化。 We all know that great changes have taken place in our school. (2)它不再是三年前的样子了。 It is no longer what it used to be three years ago. (3)那时候仅有一座教学楼和一个操场。 There was only one teaching building and a playground at that time. (4)其中之一是一座新教学楼。在这座新教学楼中，有音乐室和计算机教学室。 One of them is a new teaching building.There are rooms for music and computer teaching in the new teaching building. 学生用书第76页 (5)另一个是图书馆，里面有各种各样的图书、报纸和杂志。 The other is the library，where there are all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines． (6)我们学校体育设施配备齐全。 Our school is well equipped with sports facilities. (7)我相信我们学校会变得越来越好，我希望你再次参观我们学校。 I believe our school will become better and better，and I hope you will visit our school again. 3．三仿句式高级表达 (8)用as引导的非限制性定语从句改写句(1) As is known，great changes have taken place in our school. (9)用when引导的非限制性定语从句合并句(2)和句(3) It is no longer what it used to be three years ago，when there was only one teaching building and a playground. (10)用in which引导的定语从句升级句(4) One of them is a new teaching building，in which there are rooms for music and computer teaching. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 Dear Joy， I was pleased to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about the changes in our school. Yours， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Joy， I was pleased to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about the changes in our school. As is known，great changes have taken place in our school.It is no longer what it used to be three years ago，when there was only one teaching building and a playground.Now two new buildings have been built and are in use.One of them is a new teaching building，in which there are rooms for music and computer teaching.The other is the library，where there are all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines.Besides，our school is well equipped with sports facilities.The number of students has also grown from 1，000 to 2，000. I believe our school will become better and better，and I hope you will visit our school again. Yours， Li Hua [精彩素材积累] 首段： 1．Dramatic changes have already taken place in our school over the past ten years. 我们的学校在过去十年里发生了翻天覆地的变化。 2．With the development of science and technology，smart homes are coming to us. 随着科技的发展，智能家居正向我们走来。 3．Nowadays，more and more people prefer to send text messages rather than send letters. 如今，越来越多的人喜欢发短信而不是写信。 主体： 1．The reason why the quality of our lives is improving is that the Internet is growing rapidly. 我们的生活质量在提高的原因是互联网在迅速发展。 2．In the past，people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. 过去，人们主要通过写信或使用公用电话保持联系。 3．With these changes，people's pace of life has been quickened and people's work has been made more efficient. 这些变化加快了人们的生活节奏，提高了人们的工作效率。 结尾： 1．We are all enjoying the convenience of online shopping，which makes us proud of the prosperous age. 我们都在享受网上购物的便利，这让我们为繁荣的时代感到自豪。 2．Compared with the traditional courses，online courses can be studied in a more flexible way. 与传统课程相比，在线课程可以以更灵活的方式学习。 3．Thanks to the development of science and technology，our life is more colourful and more interesting. 由于科学技术的发展，我们的生活更加丰富多彩、更有乐趣。 学生用书第77页 [学以致用] 假定你是李华，春节回家过年的时候发现离开了五年的家乡变化很大。请你给朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，告诉她这里的变化。 要点：1.建起许多高楼，城市更加漂亮了； 2．私家车拥有量增加，人们生活水平提高了； 3．与人联系更加方便了。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右。 2．请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇： 立交桥 overpass; 私家车 private car Dear Linda， Yours， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Linda， I really think that my hometown has changed a lot in the past five years. First，more high buildings have appeared，which are modern and beautiful.Second，many overpasses have been set up，so it is very convenient for people to travel.Third，many families have had private cars.The people's life here has become rich and colorful.And now it is much easier for me to keep in touch with you than before. I hope you can come and I'll show you around. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $