UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing-【金版新学案】2025-2026学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（人教版）

UNIT 3　FOOD AND CULTURE 主题语境：人与社会——文化习俗 Section Ⅴ　Writing Writing 1——写一篇关于健康饮食的文章 　　健康饮食类作文，最常见的写作体裁是说明文。它要求根据所列出的要点，就饮食问题阐明自己的看法。有时，还需要提出一些具体的关于健康饮食的建议。 满分微讲坛——范式素材感悟·有章可循 一、课文范式推荐 二、话题素材积累 (一)夺人眼球开头句 1．Healthy eating habits are very important for our health.健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康很重要。 2．We should develop healthy eating habits. 我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯。 (二)亮点出彩篇中句 1．Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. 良好的健康使我们能够享受我们的生活，实现我们在职业生涯中所希望的。 2．There is no denying that exercising regularly and keeping a balanced diet are of great benefit to our health. 没有人能够否认这一事实：经常锻炼和保持均衡的饮食对我们的健康非常有益。 3．We should also eat less meat every day and we had better drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night. 我们每天还应该少吃肉，最好早上或晚上喝一杯牛奶。 4．Besides，we should focus on a balanced diet，which ensures us the necessary nutrition. 此外，我们应该注意饮食均衡，这能保证我们必要的营养。 5．We need to eat breakfast，lunch as well as dinner every day.我们每天需要吃早餐、午餐和晚餐。 (三)韵味无穷结尾句 1．As far as I am concerned，nothing is more important than health. 在我看来，没有什么比健康更重要的了。 2．In a word，we should have a balanced diet. 总之，我们应该有一个均衡的饮食。 满分练到位——妙笔成篇训练·立竿见影 (2025·长春高二检测) 　　假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校正在开展“健康饮食”的活动，请你代表学校用英语写一封倡议书。内容包括： 1．健康饮食的重要性； 2．如何健康饮食； 3．发出倡议。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 写作思维流程 一、合理布局，精心谋篇 二、遣词造句，规范得体 1．目前，由于人们生活水平的提高，许多人吃高脂肪食物。高脂肪食物会导致肥胖和各种疾病。 At present，due to the improvement of people's living standards，many people eat high-fat foods，___________________________________． 2．鉴于这种现象，现在是我们改善饮食习惯的时候了。 In view of this phenomenon，___________________________________． 3．要实现健康饮食，我们必须首先认识到均衡饮食的重要性。 _____________________，we must first realize the importance of a balanced diet. leading to obesity and different diseases it is time for us to improve our diet habits To achieve a healthy diet 4．这些食物不仅富含人体所需的丰富维生素，而且还含有多种矿物质。 These foods ______________________________________________________ _________________________________． 5．不要吃得过多，合理安排一日三餐的食物量。 Don't overeat，and reasonably _________________________ for three meals a day. 6．我希望你能养成健康的饮食习惯，这对你的未来生活和学业会有很大益处。 I hope you can have a healthy eating habit，____________________________ _________________． 　　　　　 not only provide rich vitamins which are needed by the human body，but also contain many minerals arrange the amount of food which is more beneficial to your future life and study 三、恰当衔接，自然过渡 用firstly，secondly，thirdly等过渡词汇，把如何健康饮食连接成段。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Firstly，to achieve a healthy diet，we must first realize the importance of a balanced diet.Secondly，try to eat more vegetables and fruit.These foods not only provide rich vitamins which are needed by the human body，but also contain many minerals.Thirdly，don't overeat，and reasonably arrange the amount of food for three meals a day. 四、认真誊写，赏心悦目 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ At present，due to the improvement of people's living standards，many people eat high-fat foods，leading to obesity and different diseases.In view of this phenomenon，it is time for us to improve our diet habits. Firstly，to achieve a healthy diet，we must first realize the importance of a balanced diet.Secondly，try to eat more vegetables and fruit.These foods not only provide rich vitamins which are needed by the human body，but also contain many minerals.Thirdly，don't overeat，and reasonably arrange the amount of food for three meals a day. I hope you can have a healthy eating habit，which is more beneficial to your future life and study. Writing 2——语料积累 读后续写 教材语料积累 词 汇 情感 描写 ①bold adj.　　　　　　 大胆自信的；敢于冒险的 ②modest adj. 些许的；谦虚的；朴素的 ③temper n. 脾气；火气 ④ideal adj. 完美的；理想的；想象的 n．理想；完美 的人(或事物) ⑤regardless of 不管；不顾 动作 描写 ①chew vi.& vt.　　　　 咀嚼；嚼碎；咬住 ②stuff vt. 填满；把……塞进 ③consume vt. 吃；喝；饮；消耗 ④trick vt. 欺骗 美 句 1．He was in a good temper and smiled all day.(心情描写) 2．Catherine walked directly toward Landy，regardless of what they said.(动作描写) 3．Tired，hungry，and not knowing a word of Chinese，we had no idea how to order，so the chef just began filling our table with the best food we had ever eaten.(心情描写) 4．At a minimum，the kinds of food local people consume tell us what they grow in their region，what kinds of lives they lead，and what they like and do not like.(排比) 续写语料运用 请从以上语料中选择合适的词汇，完成以下语段，然后核对答案并背诵该语段。 　　①___________________________________ in his mind.He often ②______________________ ___________________.Besides，he had ③______ _______．He had burned all his classmates up. Later，when criticized by his head teacher severely，the boy ④________________，lowered his head and shed tears of shame.From then on，the boy ⑤_______________． 　　一个大胆的男孩满脑子充满了各种各样的鬼把戏。他经常骗他的同学做各种各样的事情。另外，他脾气暴躁。他的所有同学都被他气炸了。后来，当他被班主任严厉批评的时候，这个男孩咬着嘴唇，低着头，流下了羞愧的泪水。从那时起，男孩变得谦逊了。 A bold boy was stuffed with various tricks tricked his classmates into doing various things a hot temper chewed on his lip became modest Writing 3——读后续写 三步成文 写作任务 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　Agatha was in the library，reading the Girl Detective series，when she noticed something strange.Her best friends，Timmy and Florence，were talking to each other in whispers while keeping a good，safe distance from her! When she waved at them，they looked away. Things only got stranger in art class.①Timmy and Florence went to sit at a different table from Agatha busy painting and glanced at her when they thought she wasn't looking. Now，Agatha considered herself to be something of a detective.After all，she had read many detective stories for children and even had an old broken magnifying glass(放大镜) abandoned by her father.When the rest of the class went out for lunch，she slipped to Timmy and Florence's table and examined it carefully with the magnifying glass. There was paint，and red and pink construction paper.What could they be doing? This was definitely a mystery that needed solving! After lunch Timmy and Florence chatted to her as if nothing was going on，but they kept smiling at her in a slightly strange way.Of course，Agatha could have asked them what they were up to，and they might have told her—but she wouldn't have a chance to become a detective! On the way home from school，Florence and her mum happened to walk ahead of Agatha and her mum.Agatha saw them go into the bookshop.Strange，again. Florence didn't read much—no matter how many detective stories Agatha recommended to her！The next day at school，Agatha kept an eye on her friends and tried to work out their mystery，but they seemed determined to keep things secret.She asked them if they would like to play with her after school，but they said they couldn't because they were busy.Even more mysterious... 　　②When Agatha's mum came to pick her up after school，she was so lost in the unsolved mystery that she hardly noticed her busy father was coming along，which was unusual.When they arrived home，her father said she could go into the living room. 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 　　Opening the door of the living room，Agatha heard voices shout from darkness，“SURPRISE！”________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　After eating the cake，Agatha got down to the business of opening her birthday presents.__________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作思路 读后续写三步曲 第一步：读语篇及所给首句 1．字词表达 (1)detective n．侦探 (2)abandon v．丢弃 (3)slip v．悄悄溜进 (4)definitely adv.肯定 (5)needed solving(＝needed to be solved)需要被解决 (6)up to 做(事情) (7)keep an eye on 监视，密切观察 2．语言结构 ①busy painting为形容词短语作定语，修饰Agatha；when引导状语从句；she wasn't looking是thought的宾语从句。 译文　__________________________________________________________ ______________________________ ②When引导时间状语从句；so...that引导结果状语从句；her busy father was coming along是动词noticed的宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句，which指“很忙的爸爸也来了”这件事情。 译文　__________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 蒂米和弗洛伦斯走到另一张桌子旁，坐在忙着画画的阿加莎旁边，趁她不注意时瞥了她一眼。 当阿加莎的妈妈放学来接她的时候，她完全沉浸在这个未解之谜中，几乎没有注意到她忙碌的爸爸也来了，这是很不寻常的。 3．内容脉络 (1)喜欢读侦探小说的Agatha发现朋友们在图书馆行为反常。 (2)接下来在美术课上、在书店都感觉朋友们有些异常。她决心探个究竟。 (3)平常很忙的爸爸也和妈妈一起接放学的Agatha，也很不正常。 4．所给首句 Opening the door of the living room，Agatha heard voices shout from darkness，“SURPRISE！” 译文　____________________________________________________ After eating the cake，Agatha got down to the business of opening her birthday presents. 译文　____________________________________ 打开客厅的门，阿加莎听到黑暗中有人喊道：“惊喜！” 吃完蛋糕后，阿加莎开始打开生日礼物。 第二步：巧妙构思续写情节 1．预测续写走向 朋友和父母的反常行为是为了给Agatha一个生日惊喜。 2．安排续写要素 (1)主要人物：Agatha；次要人物：friends，parents。 (2)时间：放学后。 地点：Agatha家中。 (3)事件发展(Agatha看到朋友的反常行为想弄清楚原因)——高潮(朋友和家人给Agatha庆祝生日)——结局(Agatha收到朋友和父母的生日礼物)。 3．设计续写要点 (1)要点一：承接首段首句 根据首段首句中Agatha heard voices shout from darkness，“SURPRISE！”，应描述灯亮后，朋友和父母的表情以及家里的情景。 (2)要点二：情节继续推进 描写房间内生日装饰，以及父母和朋友的祝福等。 (3)要点三：铺垫第二段首句 根据第二段首句After eating the cake，应描写吃蛋糕和吃蛋糕前的场景。 (4)要点四：承接第二段首句 根据第二段首句opening her birthday presents，应描写打开的第一个礼物和祝福。 (5)要点五：情节发展变化 描写其他礼物和祝福。 (6)要点六：主题总结升华 描写Agatha的动作、感受等。 第三步：妙笔生花续写成文 1．基本表达 (1)首段首句：Opening the door of the living room，Agatha heard voices shout from darkness，“SURPRISE！” (要点1：承接首句，描写打开灯后看到朋友和家人都在。) When she entered the darkened living room，the lights came on．Her best friends Timmy and Florence were there，grinning! (要点2：推进情节，增加描写房间生日布置和爸爸妈妈的祝福。) A cake with candles and a pile of presents were on the table. Mum and Dad followed her into the living room and lit the candles，saying：“Happy Birthday，dear.” (要点3：铺垫第二段首句，描写吃蛋糕。) Agatha was so distracted by the mystery to be solved that she forgot her birthday! Then she blew the candles，made a wish and enjoyed the cake with her friends and parents. (2)第二段首句：After eating the cake，Agatha got down to the business of opening her birthday presents. (要点4：承接第二段首句，描写礼物。) The first gift was the big red and pink birthday card with “HAPPY BIRTHDAY” written on it in Timmy and Florence's childish handwriting. (要点5：故事结局，描写大家的祝福和Agatha的反应。) “We hope you like the card we made for you！” said Timmy，and Florence added，“We also bought the latest Sherlock Holmes Detective series for you！” Agatha hugged her friends to thank them for their surprising gifts. Mum and Dad handed her a brand-new magnifying glass in place of the old broken one. (要点6：主题总结升华) Agatha might not have solved the mystery，but it was still a wonderful birthday party! 2．提升表达 (1)词汇升级替换：to thank them for因……感谢某人 → in appreciation of (2)丰富句式结构：用介词短语前置构成的完全倒装句改写要点2的黑体部分。 3．打磨美文 上述基本表达要点齐全，但句式结构较为单一，描写用词平淡，请结合提升表达的内容对上文黑体内容润色升级，并适当添加过渡词或修饰词。 　　Opening the door of the living room，Agatha heard voices shout from darkness，“SURPRISE！”________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　When she entered the darkened living room，the lights came on suddenly.Her best friends Timmy and Florence were there，grinning! On the table were a cake with candles and a pile of presents.Mum and Dad followed her into the living room and lit the candles，saying：“Happy Birthday，dear.”Agatha was so distracted by the mystery to be solved that she forgot her birthday！Then she blew the candles，made a wish and enjoyed the cake with her friends and parents. 　　After eating the cake，Agatha got down to the business of opening her birthday presents.__________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　　　　　　　The first gift was the big red and pink birthday card with “HAPPY BIRTHDAY” written on it in Timmy and Florence's childish handwriting.“We hope you like the card we made for you！” said Timmy，and Florence added，“We also bought the latest Sherlock Holmes Detective series for you！” Agatha hugged her friends in appreciation of their surprising gifts.Mum and Dad handed her a brand-new magnifying glass in place of the old broken one.Agatha might not have solved the mystery，but it was still a wonderful birthday party! 谢 谢 观 看 UNIT 3　FOOD AND CULTURE 返回 $