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2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 期中总复习 Modules 1-6 写作满分必背范文15篇（押题预测） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．书面表达 生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何 处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。 1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物； 2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过； 3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍； 4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes开阔眼界 要求： 1. 字数80-100个； 2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数； 3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。 When I have trouble with my best friend There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 2．假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友 Tom发来电子邮件，他最近转入一个寄宿 (boarding school) 学校，很担心与同学和室友相处问题，请你给他回一封电子邮件提出你的建议。 1. 高兴收悉邮件 2. 友善与人相处 3. 遵守寝室规则 4. …… 注意： 1. 词数 80—100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I am glad to hear that _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hui 3．我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动，在10月11日重阳节这天，你校组织志愿者去天津敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇日记。 活动时间 10月11日 活动地点 天津敬老院 (Tianjin Nursing Home) 参加人员 学校志愿者 (volunteer) 活动形式 1.送去鲜花和水果 2.帮助打扫卫生 3.陪老人聊天 (chat with sb) 、唱歌、跳舞 4.送去美好祝愿 …… 活动感想 关爱老人、尊重老人 要求： 1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数80~100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：老人 the elderly people; 尊重 respect; 重阳节 Double Ninth Festival Oct.11, 2024     Fine On Double Ninth Festival our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope more people can join us. 4．法国作家雨果曾说“进步，才是人应该有的现象”。回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。请结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。 要求：    1.选取至少两个方面； 2.结合自身亲身经历谈一谈过去与现在的不同； 3.如何取得这些进步的； 4.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80。 注意：便文中不得出现真实人名、校名地名及其他相关信息。 参考词汇：used to do/be... , try one’s best to do…,make progress in( doing....) I have made progress ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是李华，英语课上，老师就“The life skill I want to learn”这个话题让你们展开讨论。请结合以下图示信息，写一篇短文，在课堂上分享。 注意：     1. 词数：100词左右； 2. 内容涵盖所有要点，合理拓展； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The life skill I want to learn To live more healthily and happily, every teenager should learn some necessary life skills. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李辉，下图是你校对100名学生进行问卷调查的结果。请你根据图示信息和要求，以“How do the students solve their problems?”为题，写一篇英语短文，并在下周的英语主题班会上发言。 要求： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3.80~100词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How do the students solve their problems? Our school has asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How do the students solve their problems?     Our school has asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results. 9． 我的英雄是塞梅尔维斯。他是十九世纪住在匈牙利的一名医生。他在一家产科医院工作。 当时，因为医院很脏，新妈妈们经常发烧生病，甚至死亡。塞梅尔维斯对此非常不满，所以他仔细检查了医院的做法，试图找到一种方法来阻止新妈妈们生病。最终，他想出了一个简单的防止发烧的方法——他让同事们洗手。塞梅尔维斯的方法非常有效，挽救了医院里许多年轻母亲的生命。 今天，塞梅尔维斯被人们铭记为“母亲的救世主”。 参考词汇：塞梅尔维斯 Semmelweis  匈牙利 Hungary  产科医院 a hospital for mothers with new babies  同事们 colleagues  有效的 effective  救世主 saviour 写作要求：内容须完整，可适当发挥，字数80—100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是一名中学生李辉，作为九年级的学生，你即将离开学校。回首往事，你是否清晰地记得七年级的第一节课，那是一个充满兴奋和期待的新开始。现在，当离别之际，那些回忆更加珍贵，请回忆开学的第一课。 第一节课是哪位老师的课？对老师进行评价； 第一节课你学到了什么？有什么经历？ 第一节课对你有什么影响？ 注意：词数80-100；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My First Class in Grade Seven As a middle school student named Li Hui, I am going to graduate from Grade Nine. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike正在准备一场重要的考试，他感到非常焦虑并向你求助。请你根据以下要点提示写一封英文电子邮件给他，帮助他缓解考前的焦虑情绪。 要点： 1.相信自己； 2.充分复习； 3.适当休息； 4.其他（1～2点） 注意： 1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.词数80~100，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：焦虑 anxiety；精力充沛的energetic Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are so worried about your coming exam… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 12．假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony转入另一个城市的一所初中。他在与新同学相处的过程中遇到困难，请你给他写一封邮件，根据以下提示，给他提出建议。 （1）主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈； （2）课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法； （3）关心他人，帮助有困难的同学； （4）参加班级活动和学校社团； （5）保持冷静，有问题及时沟通； （6）你希望…… 参考词汇：小组讨论group work    表达express 要求：（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 13．节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假设你是李华，根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇日记，记述你和英国朋友Jack在端午节的所见所闻。 (1) 上午，你们在海河边观看龙舟赛。 (2) 30多支龙舟队、近500名选手参赛。 (3) 选手们奋力划船，观众们加油助威。 (4) 下午，你们学习包粽子 (Zongzi)。 (5) 能吃到自己包的粽子，Jack很开心。 (6) 你向Jack讲述了端午节的历史。 (7) Jack表示…… 参考词汇：the Haihe River 海河 race 比赛 row 划 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Monday, Sunny My friend Jack is interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结东五一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。 (1)5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。 (2)早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。 (3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。 (4)第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。 (5)我的旅游感受…… 参考词汇:京津城际铁路Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway 王府井大街Wangfujing Street 故宫the Palace Museum 北京烤鸭Peking Roast Duck 要求： (1)词数:80～100个。 (2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Trip to Beijing During the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________ 10 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新课程英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 期中总复习 Modules 1-6 写作满分必背范文15篇（押题预测） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．书面表达 生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何 处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。 1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物； 2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过； 3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍； 4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes开阔眼界 要求： 1. 字数80-100个； 2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数； 3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。 When I have trouble with my best friend There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 【答案】When I have trouble with my best friend There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure. So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends. 【分析】本文是一篇材料作文。 【详解】根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何 处理此类问题呢？”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分： 第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。 第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。 根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。 这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。 1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物； 2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过； 3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍； 4. 接下来你打算…… 第三部分：总结全文——好友之间应该互相理解。 2．假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友 Tom发来电子邮件，他最近转入一个寄宿 (boarding school) 学校，很担心与同学和室友相处问题，请你给他回一封电子邮件提出你的建议。 1. 高兴收悉邮件 2. 友善与人相处 3. 遵守寝室规则 4. …… 注意： 1. 词数 80—100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I am glad to hear that _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I am glad to hear that you’ve started a new journey at your boarding school. It’s a great opportunity to make new friends and learn from different cultures. To get along well with your classmates and roommates, I suggest you be friendly and open-minded. A smile or a simple “hello” can break the ice. Remember to listen and show interest in others’ stories. It’s also important to respect and follow the dormitory rules to create a harmonious living environment. Being considerate about noise and sharing space will help you avoid conflicts. In short, I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己很高兴知道对方在寄宿学校开始了新的旅程； 第二步，具体给出一些和同学室友相处的建议； 第三步，最后表达总结（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ① get along well with和……友好相处 ② create a harmonious living environment营造和谐的生活环境 ③ avoid conflicts避免冲突 [高分句型] ①To get along well with your classmates and roommates, I suggest you be friendly and open-minded.（动词不定式表目的） ②It’s also important to respect and follow the dormitory rules to create a harmonious living environment.（动词不定式作主语） 3．我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动，在10月11日重阳节这天，你校组织志愿者去天津敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇日记。 活动时间 10月11日 活动地点 天津敬老院 (Tianjin Nursing Home) 参加人员 学校志愿者 (volunteer) 活动形式 1.送去鲜花和水果 2.帮助打扫卫生 3.陪老人聊天 (chat with sb) 、唱歌、跳舞 4.送去美好祝愿 …… 活动感想 关爱老人、尊重老人 要求： 1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3.词数80~100，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：老人 the elderly people; 尊重 respect; 重阳节 Double Ninth Festival Oct.11, 2024     Fine On Double Ninth Festival our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope more people can join us. 【答案】例文 Oct.11, 2024  Fine    On Double Ninth Festival our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. As soon as we arrived, we were warmly welcomed. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people. We helped clean the windows and swept the floor. We sang and danced, bringing joy to everyone. Following that, we chatted with them and offered our best wishes. The elderly were very happy, and when it was time to leave, they expressed deep gratitude. This activity taught us the importance of caring for and respecting the elderly. I hope more people can join us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题； 第二步，具体阐述去敬老院开展的活动； 第三步，书写结语，表达活动感想。 [亮点词汇] ①As soon as一……就…… ②chat with聊天 ③express deep gratitude表示深深的谢意 ④the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] The elderly were very happy, and when it was time to leave, they expressed deep gratitude. (when引导的时间状语从句) 4．法国作家雨果曾说“进步，才是人应该有的现象”。回首三年的初中时光，你在学习和生活中一定取得了不少的进步，比如学科知识、生活技能、人际交往、体育锻炼、良好习惯等方面。请结合自身的亲身经历谈一谈自己的进步。 要求：    1.选取至少两个方面； 2.结合自身亲身经历谈一谈过去与现在的不同； 3.如何取得这些进步的； 4.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80。 注意：便文中不得出现真实人名、校名地名及其他相关信息。 参考词汇：used to do/be... , try one’s best to do…,make progress in( doing....) I have made progress ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I have made progress I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. As a result, I made few friends and often felt lonely. Finally, I made up my mind to be active and outgoing. At first, it was difficult for me to join in after-school activities. Luckily, with the help of my friends, I managed to express my thoughts and helped others with their problems in my spare time. Now, I’m not a shy girl any more. I have made much progress. I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing. The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it. This made me very sad and stressed. However, I didn’t give up. I kept on remembering new words , listening to English songs, reading English articles and writing English diaries whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and also I became more and more confident. What great progress I have made! 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，要结合题目所给信息，谈一谈自己的进步。 2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段讲述了作者性格内向，几乎没有朋友，后来经过自己的努力和朋友的帮助，不再害羞，在人际交往方面取得了很大进步；第二段讲述了作者起初不擅长英语，后来经过自己的努力，改变了自己的学习习惯，在英语学习方面取得了很大进步，自己也变得很自信；第三段感叹自己取得了如此大的进步；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。 3.高分亮点： 短语：used to be；in front of；be afraid of doing sth.；as a result；make up one’s mind；help sb with sth.；give up；keep on doing sth.。 句型：At first, it was difficult for me to join in after-school activities. it’s adj. for sb. to do sth.，it作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正主语；I used to be a shy girl who was afraid of speaking in front of the people. who引导的限制性定语从句。 5．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，题目是“我心目中的英雄”。请根据以下要点提示，介绍你心目中的英雄——“时代楷模”，“七一勋章”获得者张桂梅。 (1)张桂梅1957年出生于黑龙江省。 (2)17岁时和姐姐搬到云南，26岁时成为一名教师。 (3)1996年在丈夫去世后，她来到华坪县教书，发现很多女孩辍学在家。 (4)2008年筹建了华坪女子高级中学，现已帮助约2,000名山区女孩考上大学。 (5)你认为…… 要求： (1)词数：80~100。 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：县 county    辍学 drop out of school    山区 mountain areas       华坪女子高级中学 Huaping Girls’ High School My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimel. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【答案】例文 My hero It’s my honor to speak here. Today I’m going to talk about my hero—Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang Province in 1957. At the age of 17, she moved to Yunnan with her sister, and became a teacher at the age of 26. After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school. In 2008, she founded Huaping Girls’ High School. Since then, she has helped about 2,000 girls from mountain areas to enter college. I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文章开头已给出； 第二步，介绍张桂梅的出生信息、职业生涯和成就； 第三步，最后表达表达出对她的敬佩。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of在……岁时 ②pass away过世 ③dedicated to致力于 [高分句型] ①After her husband passed away in 1996, she went to teach in Huaping County, where she noticed many girls dropping out of school.（时间状语从句；定语从句） ②I believe she is a true role model, dedicated to education and changing lives.（宾语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是李华，英语课上，老师就“The life skill I want to learn”这个话题让你们展开讨论。请结合以下图示信息，写一篇短文，在课堂上分享。 注意：     1. 词数：100词左右； 2. 内容涵盖所有要点，合理拓展； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The life skill I want to learn To live more healthily and happily, every teenager should learn some necessary life skills. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The life skill I want to learn To live more healthily and happily, every teenager should learn some necessary life skills. The skill that I want to learn is gardening, because it allows me to be close to nature and learn about plants. When I watch the plants grow, I’ll learn to be patient and responsible. It’s also a good way to help cut down on stress and make me relaxed. In order to learn gardening, I will start by planting easy-to-grown vegetables like tomatoes and lettuce. I will read gardening books and watch teaching videos online. My grandparents, who are experienced gardeners, will teach me how to take care of plants. We will get the ground ready, put in the plants, water them often and clear out wild grass. If I make every effort to learn the skill well, I believe it will surely make my daily life more colorful. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明自己想要学习的生活技能； 第二步，具体描述自己要如何去做； 第三步，最后作总结。 [亮点词汇] ① allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 ② in order to为了 ③ take care of照顾 ④ make every effort to尽一切努力 [高分句型] ①The skill that I want to learn is gardening, because it allows me to be close to nature and learn about plants. （原因状语从句） ②If I make every effort to learn the skill well, I believe it will surely make my daily life more colorful.（条件状语从句） 7．假如你叫李华，你在房间写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。 (1)你利用手机搜索英语单词。 (2)妈妈进来后发现你在用手机，认为你在刷短视频，很生气。 (3)你向妈妈做了解释。 (4)妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间…… (5)你认为…… 参考词汇：搜索 search for    刷短视频 browse short-form videos    许可 permission 要求： (1)词数：80~100个。 (2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Last Saturday evening, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last Saturday evening, I was doing my homework in my room. I used my phone to search for some English words. When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry. I explained to her what I was doing. She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well. I think she is right and I will follow her advice in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。点明事情发生的时间。（开头已给出） 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示的要点，结合参考词汇，描述事情发生的经过。 第三步，书写结语。表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在做某事 ② come in 进来 ③ get angry 生气 ④ in the future 将来 [高分句型] ① When my mother came in and saw me using the phone, she thought I was browsing short-form videos and got very angry.（when引导时间状语从句） ② She then told me that I should ask for permission before using the phone and control the time well.（that引导宾语从句） 8．假如你是李辉，下图是你校对100名学生进行问卷调查的结果。请你根据图示信息和要求，以“How do the students solve their problems?”为题，写一篇英语短文，并在下周的英语主题班会上发言。 要求： 1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3.80~100词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 How do the students solve their problems? Our school has asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How do the students solve their problems?     Our school has asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results.      52% of the students talk to their friends when they have problems. 22% of them ask their teachers or parents for help while 17% prefer to solve problems by themselves. And the rest choose other ways to work out their problems, like searching online.      For me, asking parents for help is the best way to solve problems. I used to be too shy to make friends when I was in Grade 7. So I felt lonely. At last, I decided to turn to my parents. They advised me to join some clubs and taught me how to get on well with my classmates. From the experience, I know that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. As a result, it can be solved more easily. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：描述学校对100名学生进行问卷调查的结果，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明学校进行了“学生如何解决问题”的调查，引出下文； 第二步，描述调查结果，注意细节充分； 第三步，描述自己的想法和事例，注意三观正确，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助 ②used to  过去常常 ③the best way to… 做某事最好的方式 [高分句型] ①22% of them ask their teachers or parents for help while 17% prefer to solve problems by themselves.（比较状语从句） ②I used to be too shy to make friends when I was in Grade 7.（时间状语从句） 9． 我的英雄是塞梅尔维斯。他是十九世纪住在匈牙利的一名医生。他在一家产科医院工作。 当时，因为医院很脏，新妈妈们经常发烧生病，甚至死亡。塞梅尔维斯对此非常不满，所以他仔细检查了医院的做法，试图找到一种方法来阻止新妈妈们生病。最终，他想出了一个简单的防止发烧的方法——他让同事们洗手。塞梅尔维斯的方法非常有效，挽救了医院里许多年轻母亲的生命。 今天，塞梅尔维斯被人们铭记为“母亲的救世主”。 参考词汇：塞梅尔维斯 Semmelweis  匈牙利 Hungary  产科医院 a hospital for mothers with new babies  同事们 colleagues  有效的 effective  救世主 saviour 写作要求：内容须完整，可适当发挥，字数80—100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： My hero is Semmelweis. He was a doctor living in Hungary in the nineteenth century. He worked in a hospital for mothers with new babies. At that time, because hospitals were very dirty places, new mothers often fell sick with fever, and even died. Semmelweis was very unhappy about this, so he examined practices in his hospital carefully to try to find a way to stop the mothers from getting sick. Eventually, he figured out a simple way to stop fever—he told his colleagues to wash their hands. Semmelweis’s method was very effective and saved the lives of many young mothers at his hospital. Today, Semmelweis is remembered as “the saviour of mothers”. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去式态”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，阐述你心目中的英雄是塞梅尔维斯，并且介绍他的个人情况； 第二步，展开阐述，描述十九世纪当时的医院的情况，并且详细描述塞梅尔维斯的事迹，可以适当发挥。 第三步，书写结语，升华主题，展示对英雄塞梅尔维斯崇敬之情。 [亮点词汇] ①try to do sth.尽力去做 ②stop from doing sth.禁止做某事 ③tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人去做某事 [高分句型] ①At that time, because hospitals were very dirty places, new mothers often fell sick with fever, and even died.（原因状语从句) ②Semmelweis was very unhappy about this, so he examined practices in his hospital carefully to try to find a way to stop the mothers from getting sick.（结果状语从句） 10．假如你是一名中学生李辉，作为九年级的学生，你即将离开学校。回首往事，你是否清晰地记得七年级的第一节课，那是一个充满兴奋和期待的新开始。现在，当离别之际，那些回忆更加珍贵，请回忆开学的第一课。 第一节课是哪位老师的课？对老师进行评价； 第一节课你学到了什么？有什么经历？ 第一节课对你有什么影响？ 注意：词数80-100；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My First Class in Grade Seven As a middle school student named Li Hui, I am going to graduate from Grade Nine. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My First Class in Grade Seven As a middle school student named Li Hui, I am going to graduate from Grade Nine. Looking back, I still remember the first class in Grade Seven clearly. It was our English teacher, Miss Wang’s class. She was very kind and patient. She introduced herself and made the class lively with interesting games. I learned some basic English words and greetings. I was a little nervous at first but gradually became active. That first class made me more confident and interested in learning English. It was like a key opening the door to a new world of knowledge. It also let me know that middle school life would be full of fun and challenges. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明写作主旨； 第二步，具体介绍第一节课的老师是谁、学到了什么； 第三步，谈谈第一节课对自己的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①at first首先 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③be full of充满 [高分句型] It also let me know that middle school life would be full of fun and challenges. (宾语从句) 能力综合实践5篇 11．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike正在准备一场重要的考试，他感到非常焦虑并向你求助。请你根据以下要点提示写一封英文电子邮件给他，帮助他缓解考前的焦虑情绪。 要点： 1.相信自己； 2.充分复习； 3.适当休息； 4.其他（1～2点） 注意： 1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.词数80~100，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：焦虑 anxiety；精力充沛的energetic Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are so worried about your coming exam… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are so worried about your coming exam. But I don’t think it’s difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following suggestions. First of all, believe in yourself. I’m sure you can do well in the exam if you study hard. Secondly, it’s a good habit to study hard every day and a proper review plan may help a lot for the coming exam. Last but not least, plenty of sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform better in the exam. Therefore, during the period of exam, it is not wise to stay up too late. If you can not fall asleep before an exam, try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep. I hope you can find your best state. Good luck to your coming exam! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给他一些建议，帮助他缓解考前的焦虑情绪，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细给出自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①believe in相信 ②enable sb. to do sth.使某人能够做某事 ③stay up late熬夜到很晚 [高分句型] ①But I don’t think it’s difficult to get out of such exam anxiety if you can take the following suggestions. (宾语从句，条件状语从句) ②If you can not fall asleep before an exam, try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed, which may help you to have a sound sleep. (定语从句) 12．假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony转入另一个城市的一所初中。他在与新同学相处的过程中遇到困难，请你给他写一封邮件，根据以下提示，给他提出建议。 （1）主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈； （2）课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法； （3）关心他人，帮助有困难的同学； （4）参加班级活动和学校社团； （5）保持冷静，有问题及时沟通； （6）你希望…… 参考词汇：小组讨论group work    表达express 要求：（1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tony, I have learned about your problems. I think you should try to be friendly to your new classmates, like saying hello to them when you arrive at school every morning and talking with them at break. In class, you can take an active part in the group work about your lessons and be brave to express your ideas. Besides, you can let your classmates know about your hobbies and advantages by joining in different kinds of school club activities, sports meetings as well as singing competitions. At last, stay calm and communicate on time if there are any problems. I’m sure you will be included in their circle of your new classmates soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给笔友一些建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示内容详细给出自己的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①take an active part in积极参加 ②know about了解 ③different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] I think you should try to be friendly to your new classmates, like saying hello to them when you arrive at school every morning and talking with them at break. (宾语从句，时间状语从句) 13．节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。 (1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书； (2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作； (3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助； (4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察； (5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息； (6)我认为…… 参考词汇：challenge 挑战 写作要求： (1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 (2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 (3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。 (4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Zhang Jian is a policeman. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Zhang Jian is a policeman. He is 50 years old and he likes reading very much. We all respect him because he has dedicated over half of his life to serving and protecting others as a police officer.     For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays. Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman. On one occasion, he had to work for 20 hours without break.       I think that Officer Zhang Jian is a shining example in our everyday lives. His actions remind us of the importance of serving others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：介绍一位我们身边的榜样，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍张健的职业，年龄，爱好，引出下文； 第二步，具体描述张健警官在假日的生活和工作，注意遵照所给提示，细节充分，三观正确； 第三步，表达自己对于张健警官的感情，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①dedicate 奉献 ②on one occasion 有一次 ③remind…of… 让某人想起某事 [高分句型] ①For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays.（原因状语从句） ②Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman.（让步状语从句） 14．假设你是李华，根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇日记，记述你和英国朋友Jack在端午节的所见所闻。 (1) 上午，你们在海河边观看龙舟赛。 (2) 30多支龙舟队、近500名选手参赛。 (3) 选手们奋力划船，观众们加油助威。 (4) 下午，你们学习包粽子 (Zongzi)。 (5) 能吃到自己包的粽子，Jack很开心。 (6) 你向Jack讲述了端午节的历史。 (7) Jack表示…… 参考词汇：the Haihe River 海河 race 比赛 row 划 要求： (1) 词数：80~100个。 (2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Monday, Sunny My friend Jack is interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Monday, Sunny My friend Jack is interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. In the morning, we went to the Haihe River to watch the dragon boat race. There were more than 30 dragon boat teams and nearly 500 participants competing. The rowers paddled with all their strength while the audience cheered them on enthusiastically. In the afternoon, we learned how to make Zongzi. Jack was very happy to eat the Zongzi he made himself. I also told Jack about the history of the Dragon Boat Festival. Jack expressed his admiration for the rich cultural heritage of China and said he would love to experience more Chinese festivals in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇日记； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据提示要点，描述与Jack在端午节的活动和感受，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍上午观看龙舟赛的情况，包括参赛队伍和观众的反应； 第二步，描述下午学习包粽子的经历和Jack的感受； 第三步，向Jack介绍端午节的历史以及Jack对中国文化的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①enthusiastically热情地 ②cheer sb on为某人加油 ③be happy to do sth高兴做某事 [高分句型] ①There were more than 30 dragon boat teams and nearly 500 participants competing. (there be句型) ②Jack was very happy to eat the Zongzi he made himself. (定语从句) 15．假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结东五一小长假的旅游回到学校。请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。 (1)5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。 (2)早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。 (3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。 (4)第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。 (5)我的旅游感受…… 参考词汇:京津城际铁路Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway 王府井大街Wangfujing Street 故宫the Palace Museum 北京烤鸭Peking Roast Duck 要求： (1)词数:80～100个。 (2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 A Trip to Beijing During the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________ 【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing. First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum. On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious. During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it. 【详解】以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。 记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。在发表你的看法的时候，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。 【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。 We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum. .等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。 2 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $