内容正文:
专题07 书面表达
主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(23-24九上·广西贵港市港南区·期中)
假设你们班在昨天的英语考试过后发现一张没有署名的试卷,这张试卷的得分很高,字迹工整,你们的英语老师想知道这是谁的卷子。请你根据以下内容提示,帮助你们的英语科代表分析这是谁的英语试卷,并把分析结果用英语写成一篇短文交给你们的英语老师。
提示:
李力
英语考试成绩一直都很好,但已经拿到了试卷;
吴海
书写很好,但害怕学习英语;
黄涛
英语成绩可以,但他昨天没来学校;
周梅
擅长英语,而且做事情总是很粗心。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
We had an English exam yesterday. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
We had an English exam yesterday. There is a paper without a name on it. The owner of the paper got a high score. And its handwriting is very tidy. Whose can it be?
Li Li always has good scores in English exams but he has already had his paper. So it can’t belong to him. It might be Wu Hai’s because his handwriting is tidy, but he is afraid of learning English. Huang Tao always has good scores in English exams, but he was absent from school yesterday, so he didn’t take part in the exam. Zhou Mei is good at English and she is always careless to do things. So it must belong to Zhou Mei.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意在表达“已经拿到了试卷”“他昨天没来学校”时不要用错时态,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。通过说明“发现一张没有署名的试卷”需要找到其主人,来引出对四位同学的描述;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“平时成绩、书写情况、是否在校、性格”等方面对四位同学展开描述;
第三步,书写结论。通过对四位同学的分析,得出“试卷属于周梅”的结论。
[亮点词汇]
①belong to属于
②be afraid of害怕
③be absent from school没来学校
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
It might be Wu Hai’s because his handwriting is tidy, but he is afraid of learning English.(because引导原因状语从句)
Passage 2
(25-26九上·广西南宁市青秀区新民中学·开学考)
健康是学业进步与愉快生活的基石。作为九年级学生,保持身心健康有助于我们更好地迎接毕业与升学的挑战。学校英语月刊拟开设“Health”专栏,现以“How to Keep a Healthy Life”为题征集短文,诚邀你从饮食、运动、心态三个方面,分享自己在日常生活中践行健康生活的做法,并提出你的倡议。
注意:
1.词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:diet (n. 饮食), regularly (adv. 有规律地), positive (adj. 乐观的)
How to Keep a Healthy Life
Keeping a healthy life is important for everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
How to Keep a Healthy Life
Keeping a healthy life is important for everyone! It helps us keep healthy both in body and mind. Here are my ways to live healthily.
First of all, it’s important for me to keep a balanced diet. I have vegetables, fruit and milk every day and I seldom eat fast food. Secondly, I do exercise regularly. I play basketball for about 40 minutes every day. It makes me strong and happy. Last but not least, I stay positive and keep smiling every day. When I feel stressed, I listen to music to relax myself.
Let’s live a healthy and happy life together!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为话题作文;
② 时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:根据题目要求,需从饮食、运动、心态三个方面展开,并提出倡议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接引入主题,说明健康生活的重要性;
第二步,阐述饮食、运动、心态的具体做法;
第三步,提出倡议,呼吁大家共同践行健康生活。
[亮点词汇]
① balanced diet 均衡饮食
② fast food 快餐
③ do exercise 做运动
④ stay positive 保持积极
[高分句型]
When I feel stressed, I listen to music to relax myself.(时间状语从句)
主题01 人与自我——意见/建议
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西南宁天桃实验学校·期中)
近年来,随着科技的发展,电子产品越来越多。科技进步使得我们的生活变得更加便捷,但也带来了许多思考。因为电子产品的广泛使用,学生们的汉字书写能力大大降低,令人担忧。假如你是校书法协会的会长李华,为了让同学们重视书写,请你写一封倡议书,内容包括:
书写现状
电子产品过度使用、书写能力下降;
你的建议
多动手做笔记、养成手写日记的习惯......;
你的呼吁
......
写作要求:
1. 倡议书开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数为80左右。参考词汇: electric products 电子产品;handwriting ability书写能力;calligraphy (n.)书法
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to pay attention to our handwriting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Calligraphy Association
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to pay attention to our handwriting. With the development of technology, more and more students like using electric products for taking notes and sending messages. Therefore, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problems, we should do as follows:
First, we should use less electric products when learning. We’d better take notes by hand more often. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must get into the habit of practising our handwriting in our daily life. Why not keep a diary on paper every night? What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails.
All in all, beautiful handwriting is of great benefits to us students. So let’s take action to practise our handwriting right now! I’m sure our efforts will pay off!
Calligraphy Association
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“表格内容”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍书写的现状;
第二步,具体阐述改变该现状的建议;
第三步,书写结语,呼吁大家提高自己的书法。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of...随着……的发展
②take notes做笔记
③get into the habit of...养成……的习惯
④what’s more还有
⑤instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①With the development of technology, more and more students like using electric products for taking notes and sending messages. (介宾结构位于句首,作状语)
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西南宁第十四中学·期中)
规则意识在心中,实际行动在身边。假设你校英语俱乐部正在举办名为“Follow and Grow”的英文演讲活动,倡导大家做一名新时代的文明守纪好少年。请你根据以下写作要点,写一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加活动。
写作要点:
1. 遵守规则的重要性;
2. 如何遵守规则 (文明礼仪,课堂习惯……);
3. 发出倡议。
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给信息,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不能出现题目以外的个人信息,否则一律不予评分。
注意:
1. 内容必须包含以上的所有信息;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:3. 文中不得透露个人信息:4. 词数80词左右 (短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Follow and Grow
Hello everyone! Today, I’m going to talk about our school rules. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Follow and Grow
Hello everyone! Today, I’m going to talk about our school rules. Following rules is crucial for maintaining order and ensuring safety. In our daily life, we should practice good manners, such as being polite and respectful to others. In class, we should listen attentively and complete our assignments on time. Let’s all commit to being responsible students and set a good example for others. Together, we can create a harmonious and disciplined environment.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,需涵盖所有要点并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引入主题,强调遵守规则的重要性;
第二步,根据题干给出的要点,具体阐述如何遵守规则,包括文明礼仪和课堂习惯;
第三步,发出倡议,号召大家共同努力。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②commit to致力于
[高分句型]
①Following rules is crucial for maintaining order and ensuring safety. (动名词短语作主语)
②Let’s all commit to being responsible students and set a good example for others. (祈使句)
Passage 3
(24-25九上·广西南宁天桃实验学校·月考)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Alice来信和你提到她的一些烦恼。请你根据邮件中提到的问题,给她回信,帮她排忧解难。
Alice’s problems
Suggestions
1. 在学习中遇到困难
1. 向老师和同学寻求帮助;……
2. 在新的班级感到孤单
2. 尝试交新的朋友;……
3. 总是感到疲倦
3. ……
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚,行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:
tired adj. 疲倦的;
have trouble (in) … 在……方面遇到困难;
ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助;
make friends 交朋友。
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to know that you are not happy these days. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to know that you are not happy these days. Now, let me give you some suggestions on how to deal with these problems.
First of all, if you have trouble in studying, ask your teachers and classmates for help. You are also supposed to be more confident and don’t always compare yourself with others. Second, when you feel lonely in the new class, why not try to make new friends there? You can keep in touch with your old friends by email as well. Third, you are always tired. I think you need more sleep and exercise. Remember to eat plenty of fruit and vegetables and stay away from fast food!
I hope my suggestions can give you a hand. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头文章已给出,接着引入话题;
第二步,针对学习、孤单和感到疲惫的问题,给出具体建议;
第三步,进行总结,希望自己的建议对Alice有用。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble in在……方面遇到困难
②ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①First of all, if you have trouble in studying, ask your teachers and classmates for help.(条件状语从句)
②Second, when you feel lonely in the new class, why not try to make new friends there?(时间状语从句)
Passage 4
(23-24九上·广西南宁第十八中学·期中)
Sandy的父母即将出差,第一次独自在家的她感到非常的焦虑,于是她写信给New Standard Magazine的专家 Diana寻求建议。请你根据以下写作要点,以Diana的身份用英语给她写一封回信。
要点提示:
1. 学会独立是很重要的;
2. 提出学习、家务、运动和居家安全的建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数为80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名以及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Sandy,
I’m glad that you can tell me your feeling. But I think learning to be independent is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Diana
【答案】例文:
Dear Sandy,
I’m glad that you can tell me your feeling. But I think learning to be independent is very important. Firstly, you can use this chance to learn more, such as reading books, doing your homework or learning something new online. Secondly, you can help with the housework. Cleaning, cooking or doing laundry can be a good way to keep busy. Don’t forget to exercise too. It will keep you healthy and help you reduce your anxiety. In terms of home safety, make sure all doors and windows are locked before you go to bed or leave the house. If you feel scared, you can call a friend or a relative. Remember, it’s normal to feel a bit nervous when you’re alone for the first time, but you’re stronger than you think.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Diana
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括强调学会独立很重要,从不同方面提出自己的建议,表达祝愿。
[写作步骤]
第一步,强调学会独立是很重要的;
第二步,具体阐述学习、家务、运动和居家安全的建议;
第三步,最后是表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① such as 例如
② in terms of 就……而言
③ make sure 确保
[高分句型]
① If you feel scared, you can call a friend or a relative.(if引导条件状语从句)
② Remember, it’s normal to feel a bit nervous when you’re alone for the first time, but you’re stronger than you think.(when引导时间状语从句,but表示转折的并列句)
Passage 5
(23-24九上·广西南宁广西大学附属中学·期中)
假如你是李华,你即将初中毕业,请你结合三年的初中生活,以“How to have a better school life”为题,写一篇演讲稿,对初一的新生提些建议。
内容:
1. 学习上:制定学习计划;上课认真听讲;……
2. 生活上:锻炼身体;和同学友好相处;……
3. 提出美好祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to have a better school life
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to tell you something about the school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文
How to have a better school life
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to tell you something about the school life.
To have a better school life, you should make a study plan and listen carefully in class. It’s also important to do exercises regularly to keep fit. Be friendly and get along well with your classmates. Don’t forget to join in school activities, which can help you develop various skills.
Lastly, I wish you all a wonderful and fruitful school life. Enjoy your time in school and make the most of it!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍在学习上的建议;
第二步,从生活上给出一些个人想法;
第三步,最后提出美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①make a study plan 制定学习计划
②do exercises regularly 定期锻炼
③make the most of 充分利用
[高分句型]
Don’t forget to join in school activities, which can help you develop various skills.(定语从句)
主题02 人与自我——个人经历和信息
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西南宁广西大学附属中学·期中)
学会独立生活是中学生的必备技能,假如你是李华,你校将要举办以“My experience at home alone”为题的英语演讲比赛,你将作为你们班的学生代表参加,请你结合以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
提示:1. 你何时独自在家;
2. 你独自在家的活动(锻炼身体、阅读、做家务);
3. 居家注意安全事项(至少两点);
4. 你的感悟。
要求:1. 80词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确;
3. 包含以上所给信息,适当拓展;
4. 文中不得出现文外的姓名,校名及地名等信息。
My experience at home alone
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to tell you something about my experience at home alone. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My experience at home alone I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to tell you something about my experience at home alone. Last summer, my parents went on a business trip, and I stayed home alone for a week. During this time, I exercised every morning, read books, and did housework. I learned to cook simple meals and keep the house tidy. It is important to ensure safety by locking doors and windows and not opening the door to strangers. This experience taught me independence and responsibility.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是演讲稿;
②时态:主要时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴能在这里告诉你一些我独自在家的经历。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——何时独自在家、居家活动、感悟等,均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“感谢你的聆听”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①stay home alone独自在家
②keep...tidy保持……整洁
③ensure safety确保安全
[高分句型]
①Last summer, my parents went on a business trip, and I stayed home alone for a week. (and表并列)
②It is important to ensure safety by locking doors and windows and not opening the door to strangers. (it作形式主语)
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西钦州共美学校·月考)
Daniel是你的同学,你们班的尖子生之一,他有很多适合当学生会主席的突出品质,你想推荐他成为学生会主席。请根据下列内容要点,用英语给吴老师写一封推荐信:
内容要点:
1. 自信,工作力求高标准,常能想出很多好点子:
2. 有爱心,……(举例);做事有条理。……(举例);
3. 擅长打篮球,……;
4. 不怕困难,学习努力,能保持学习和爱好的平衡;
5. 我相信,……
Dear Mr Wu,
I’m writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. He is one of the top students in my class. He has many strong qualities for this position.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Millie
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Wu,
I’m writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. He is one of the top students in my class. He has many strong qualities for this position.
First, Daniel is very confident. He always works hard to meet high standards and often comes up with great ideas. For example, he once suggested organizing a reading festival to encourage us to read more, which was very popular.
Second, he is kind-hearted. Last month, he helped a new classmate who was not good at English catch up with us by giving him extra lessons. He is also well-organized. He keeps his school things in order and can plan activities clearly.
Besides, Daniel is good at playing basketball. He leads our class team to win many matches, showing his teamwork spirit.
What’s more, he is not afraid of difficulties. He studies hard and balances his studies with hobbies well. His grades are always among the top in our grade.
I believe Daniel is the right person for the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,点明文章的主题;
第二步,根据题干中的要点,详细介绍他的聪明才智,做事有条理并介绍其爱好及成就,以及学习上的优异表现;
第三步,再次点明自己的写作意图,认为他是学生会主席的合适人选,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①come up with 想出,提出
②be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
①For example, he once suggested organizing a reading festival to encourage us to read more, which was very popular.(which非限定性定语从句)
②I believe Daniel is the right person for the chairperson of the Students’ Union.(省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25九上·广西梧州岑溪中学·月考)
某报社正在就“The person who has influenced me most”为题进行征文比赛。假设你的叔叔对你的学习生活影响非常大,你非常钦佩他。请你根据表格提供的有关你的叔叔的信息和要求写一篇英语文章向该报社投稿。
职业
Youth worker
年龄
四十几岁
品质
创造性
想出很多新主意
勤奋
熬夜,做额外的工作
乐于助人
乐于帮助……解决问题,献血好多次
爱好
唱歌
对弹吉他很有天赋,梦想成为一名成功的歌手
最爱的颜色
……
象征……(请自己发挥)
我的感觉
以前我并不……,但现在我意识到……
注意:
1. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 短文须包含所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯。
3. 词数不少于90。
The person who has influenced me most
I would like to talk about my uncle Tom who has influenced me most.
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【答案】例文
The person who has influenced me most
I would like to talk about my uncle Tom who has influenced me most. He is in his forties. He works as a Youth worker for many years. He has many good qualities. First of all, he is very creative and often comes up with many new ideas. He is so hard-working that he often stays up to learn advanced technology. What’s more, he is patient and he never minds doing extra work. He helps me a lot. He listens to my problems and tells me not to give up easily. He donated blood several times.
His favourite colour is red. He thinks red represents power and it’s helpful when he has difficulty making decisions. So he often wears red clothes. He has a great talent for playing guitar and dreams of becoming a successful singer. I didn’t realize he was such a person before. But now I realize that he is such a helpful person. He has not only donated blood several times to people in need but also has donated money to people in trouble. I admire him because he is a person with a heart full of love.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍叔叔的职业、年龄以及他的品质;
第二步,介绍他的爱好和最喜欢的颜色;
第三步,最后表达自己的感觉。
[亮点词汇]
① come up with想出
② what’s more此外
③ mind doing sth介意做某事
④ in trouble陷入麻烦
[高分句型]
①He is so hard-working that he often stays up to learn advanced technology.(结果状语从句)
②He thinks red represents power and it’s helpful when he has difficulty making decisions.(宾语从句,时间状语从句)
③I admire him because he is a person with a heart full of love.(原因状语从句)
主题03 人与自我——劳动实践
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西南宁第四十七中学·月考)
习近平总书记说:“人世间的一切幸福都需要靠辛勤的劳动来创造。”劳动可以增强体质,提升自信,培养责任感。在生活中,你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能,比如洗衣、做饭等。现学校英语报正在征集关于“劳动”的稿件,请你以“Labor (劳动) Makes a Better Life”为题,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:(1)你擅长哪些劳动技能(至少三项)?
(2)你平时如何进行这些劳动(时间、地点等)?
(3)劳动给你带来了什么感受和益处?
参考词汇:build up one’s body(增强体质) develop a sense of duty(培养责任感)
写作要求:1. 文章语言正确,要点齐全,行文连贯,书写工整;
2. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
Labor Makes a Better Life
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文:
Labor Makes a Better Life
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking, sweeping, and washing. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. Labor can also develop a sense of duty.
In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“Labor Makes a Better Life”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你擅长哪些劳动技能;
第二步,介绍你平时如何进行这些劳动的;
第三步,介绍劳动给你带来了什么感受和益处。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②on weekends在周末
③take good care of照顾好
④in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西南宁第三中学初中部·月考)
为了创造美好的生活,青少年在成长的过程中应掌握一些生活技能(如烹饪、种植、打扫房间等)。请结合下列提示和自身情况,以“A life skill I learned”为题写一篇短文,在英语课堂上分享。
写作要点:
1. 你学会了哪一项生活技能;
2. 你如何学会了这项生活技能;
3. 你的感受或期望。
写作要求:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:cook(v. 烹饪); plant(v. 种植); tidy up(整理)
A life skill I learned
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers.
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【答案】例文:
A life skill I learned
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. One important life skill I learned is cooking. I learned it from my mother, who is an amazing cook. I started by helping her in the kitchen, watching and learning as she prepared meals. Gradually, I moved on to trying simple recipes on my own while following her advice.
Cooking has taught me patience and creativity, and I really enjoy experimenting with new ingredients. I hope to continue improving and maybe one day cook a meal for my family that everyone loves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。介绍自己学会了哪一项生活技能;
第二步,具体阐述如何学会了这项生活技能;
第三步,书写结语,总结感受或期望。
[亮点词汇]
①move on继续前进
②on my own靠自己
③creativity创造力
[高分句型]
I hope to continue improving and maybe one day cook a meal for my family that everyone loves.(并列句;定语从句)
主题04 人与社会——其它
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西河池凤山县·期中)
国庆节就要到了,很多人偏爱外出游玩,也有人会选择待在家里,但无论如何,大家都会做一些有意义的事情,你的国庆假期打算如何度过呢?请用英语写一篇文章,描述一下你打算在假期里做哪些有意义的事情,期望有哪些收获。
内容要求:
1.你的计划是什么?
2.你做了哪些准备?
3.你期望收获什么?
其它要求:
1.内容充实、语言得体、逻辑清晰、结构明了;
2.不少于100词。
National Day is coming. Everybody should be happy to have seven days off. So am I.
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【答案】例文
National Day is coming. Everybody should be happy to have seven days off. So am I. My family have planned to go camping and spend a night in the countryside.
I am so excited about this tour. Living in the city, I hardly have a chance to get close to nature. Ever since my parents bought a tent, I never had the chance to use it. So, first of all, I want to learn how to pitch a tent. Second, I will bring my astronomical telescope. Light pollution is quite serious in the city, so I hope I can see clearer skies in the wild. Just three of us may be boring, so I will call more people to come camping with us.
I’m sure we’ll have a great time during the holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己如何度过国庆假期,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你的计划是什么;
第二步,介绍你做了哪些准备;
第三步,介绍你期望收获什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be excited about对……兴奋
②get close to亲近
[高分句型]
①Living in the city, I hardly have a chance to get close to nature. (现在分词作状语)
②Just three of us may be boring, so I will call more people to come camping with us. (so连接的并列句)
Passage 2
(23-24九上·广西南宁三美学校·期中)
“读万卷书,行万里路”。现在阅读已经成为我们生活中必不可少的一部分。你校英语校刊举行以“Happy reading”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文征文。 写作要点:
1.你的阅读情况 (阅读哪些类型的书、阅读时间、阅读习惯等);
2. 阅读带给你的好处;
3. 向同学们发出倡议。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80 左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: read(阅读);habit (习惯);improve (提高)
Happy reading
Reading has become a part of our lives.
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【答案】例文
Happy reading
Reading has become a part of our lives. Reading makes a full man. And it makes our life colorful, too. Every night, I spend about 30 minutes reading before going to bed. This habit helps me relax and sleep better. I love reading newspapers for the latest news. I’m also interested in novels and magazines.
I think reading provides me with different ideas on the matters we meet. It brings me both valuable knowledge and wonderful experiences. I think we should keep on reading. While we are reading, we are thinking. It’s good for us.
Love reading, and it will make you better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的阅读情况、具体包括读书类型、阅读时间和阅读习惯等;
第二步,谈谈阅读带给自己的好处;
第三步,向同学们发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
③provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①I think reading provides me with different ideas on the matters we meet.(定语从句)
②While we are reading, we are thinking. (while引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24九上·广西南宁天桃教育集团·期中)
运动中有快乐,运动中有泪水,运动中有成长。假设你校英语报刊正在开展以“My Sports Life”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文向报刊投稿,向同学们分享你的运动生活及感受。
写作要点:
1. 你经常参加哪一项运动?
2. 你在这项运动中遇到什么困难?
3. 你是如何解决这个(些)困难的?
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:run(跑步), skip(跳绳), swim(游泳)
My Sports Life
Sports are important for everyone. I often
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【答案】例文
My Sports Life
Sports are important for everyone. I often take part in many sports activities to keep myself healthy. One of my favorite sports is swimming. It is a great way to exercise.
However, when I first started swimming, I faced a lot of difficulties. I found it hard to breathe and I often felt uncomfortable in the water. But I didn’t give up. I started taking swimming lessons and practiced regularly. Slowly, I started to improve and got much confidence. Now I’m a good swimmer. Swimming can not only help me stay fit but also make me have a clear mind. Whenever I feel stressed, I choose to go swimming to relax.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求以“My Sports Life”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己经常参加哪一项运动;
第二步,介绍在这项运动中遇到什么困难;
第三步,介绍是如何解决困难的。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②a lot of许多
③give up放弃
④stay fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①However, when I first started swimming, I faced a lot of difficulties.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Swimming can not only help me stay fit but also make me have a clear mind.(并列结构)
Passage 4
(23-24九上·广西柳州柳江区·期中)
为创先增优,营造良好的初三备考环境,班级开展了主题为“如何做最好的自己”的英语演讲比赛,请以“How to be the best of ourselves”为题,用英文写一篇演讲稿,号召同学们在初中的最后一年中展现出最好的自己,给班级、给母校留下美好的回忆。演讲稿内容包括:
1.目的和意义(如让自己不断进步、班级更和谐、环境更舒适等);
2.自我管理方面(如该做什么,不该做什么,并说出理由);
3.师生关系方面(如该做什么,不该做什么,并说出理由);
4.寄语(自己想说的话)。
注意:
1.词数为80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:improve (进步), comfortable (舒适的),get on well with (和……友好相处)
How to be the best of ourselves
Hello, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
How to be the best of ourselves Hello, everyone!
Today, I am here to talk about how to be the best of ourselves and leave beautiful memories for our class.
Firstly, it is essential for us to constantly improve ourselves. We should set clear goals and work hard to achieve them. By doing so, not only can we gain knowledge and skills, but also build up self-confidence and a sense of achievement. Secondly, self-management plays a crucial role in our last year of junior high school. We should prioritize our tasks and manage our time wisely. Thirdly, building a harmonious relationship between teachers and students is also significant. We should show respect to our teachers and treat them as our mentors.
In conclusion, let’s make the most of our last year in junior high school. By improving ourselves, managing our time and fostering a positive relationship with our teachers, we will create a comfortable and harmonious environment for both ourselves and our classmates.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态: 时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示: 写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”,关注要点内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。在第一段写出“要成为最好的自己”,点明主题,引出下文。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别写出自我优化管理和处理好师生关系等方面的做法。
第三步,书写结语。表达对未来的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①leave beautiful memories 留下美好的回忆
②set clear goals 设定清晰的目标
③self-management 自我管理
④show respect to 尊重
[高分句型]
①By doing so, not only can we gain knowledge and skills, but also build up self-confidence and a sense of achievement. (使用not only...but also句型)
②By improving ourselves, managing our time and fostering a positive relationship with our teachers, we will create a comfortable and harmonious environment for both ourselves and our classmates.(使用by doing的方式状语)
Passage 6
(23-24九上·广西南宁第十四中学·期中)
我们在学习和生活中都会遇到一些问题,例如朋友相处、亲子关系、学业压力,但只要积极面对,就一定能解决。现我校正在开展以“积极面对问题”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 你遇到一个问题;
2. 你如何解决放个问题;
3. 你有什么收获。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 内容必须包含所有信息;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Everyone meets problems in life, but we can solve them positively.
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【答案】例文
Everyone meets problems in life, but we can solve them positively. I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share my story with you.
When I was in Grade 7, I failed a math exam. I felt upset because most of my classmates got good marks. To solve my learning problems, I asked my teacher for help. Mr. Wang taught me patiently and I knew that I needed to practice more. I worked harder than before and made great progress. When I worked out a difficult math problem, I felt really satisfied. I learned that we should face problems bravely, rather than being afraid of them. This makes me grow as a person who faces problems bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,不要遗漏内容提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你的问题是什么;
第二步,介绍你是如何解决的;
第三步,最后表达有什么收获。
[亮点词汇]
① would like to do想要做
② ask sb for help向某人求助
③ work out计算出
[高分句型]
① When I was in Grade 7, I failed a math exam.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② This makes me grow as a person who faces problems bravely.(who引导的定语从句)
主题05 人与社会——青少年问题/传统节日
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西钦州浦北县·期中)
假如你是李华,最近在学习上遇到一些问题。请给你们学校的心理老师 Andy写一封求助信。
求助内容:1. 你遇到的问题(至少两个);
2. 你希望得到的帮助。
写作要求:1. 字迹工整、规范;
2. 字数:不少于100词;
3. 语句通顺,无语法错误,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。
Dear Andy,
I am Li Hua and I am a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I do not know how I should deal with them. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Andy,
I am Li Hua and I am a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I do not know how I should deal with them.
Recently, I have been busy preparing for the high school entrance examination, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you a favor. There are two main problems that I’m faced with. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressed because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
As for these problems, I sincerely hope you can offer me some suggestions. I’d really appreciate it if you can lend me a hand.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时根据提示信息说明遇到的问题以及希望得到的帮助,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题。
第二步,根据提示信息具体说明遇到的问题。
第三步,对于这些问题,希望得到帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理,应对
②concentrate on专注于
③ask sb. a favor请求某人帮忙
④spend time on sth.花时间在某事上
⑤fall asleep睡着,入睡
⑥let sb. down使某人失望
[高分句型]
①There are two main problems that I’m faced with. (there be句型和that引导的定语从句)
②Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressed because I don’t want to let them down. (because引导的原因状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西南宁江南区·月考)
了解中国传统节日魅力,传承中国优秀传统文化。学校英文校刊正在进行以“我最喜爱的中国传统节日”为主题的征文,请你根据自己的喜好,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.节日名称及时间;
2.节日习俗或活动:
3.你喜欢的原因。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:celebrate v.庆祝; activity n.活动; traditional adj.传统的; Spring Festival 春节; the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节...
My favourite Chinese traditional festival
Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to share my favourite Chinese traditional festival with you all. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My favourite Chinese traditional festival
Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to share my favourite Chinese traditional festival with you all. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival. My favourite Chinese traditional festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October every year. People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion. They often give best wishes to each other at this special time. On this day, people usually go back home to get together, enjoying a large meal with their family. At night, they admire the full moon, share delicious mooncakes with their family and tell stories about Chang’e.
Spending the Mid-Autumn Festival with families can make me feel the love and warmth of my family. And another reason why I like it is that my mother’s birthday is on this day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示内容适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍最喜爱的传统节日——中秋节;
第二步,介绍中秋节的时间和庆祝活动;
第三步,介绍喜欢中秋节的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②get together聚在一起
③each other互相
[高分句型]
①People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion. (that引导的宾语从句)
②The another reason why I like it is that my mother’s birthday is on this day. (why引导定语从句,that引导表语从句)
主题06 人与自然——环境保护
Passage 1
(23-24九上·广西南宁邕宁区民族中学·期中)
地球是我们共同的家园,然而我们的地球环境受到各种污染,保护环境,人人有责。现校刊英文专栏以“How to protect our environment”为题征稿。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点:
1. 目前环境污染的现状(遍地垃圾,……);
2. 针对环境污染问题,提出你的一些建议(使用公共交通工具绿色出行,……);
3. 呼吁大家一起行动,保护我们的环境。
注意:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得透露个人信息;
3. 词数 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to protect our environment
The earth is our home.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to protect our environment
The earth is our home. The environment pollution is becoming more and more serious. We can see white pollution everywhere. There has been hazy weather in many parts of China in recent years. I suggest that we should try to take a bus or an underground instead of driving by ourselves. We should prevent factories from dumping the waste into rivers to reduce water pollution. We shouldn’t use disposable plates and bowls. We should plant more trees and grow grass to prevent it. We should also prevent people from cutting down too many trees.
We should take action together to protect our environment. If we try our best, the environment will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍目前环境污染的现状;
第二步,针对环境污染问题,提出你的建议;
第三步,最后呼吁大家一起行动,保护我们的环境。
[亮点词汇]
① white pollution白色污染
② instead of而不是
③ prevent...from doing sth阻止……做某事
[高分句型]
①I suggest that we should try to take a bus or an underground instead of driving by ourselves.(宾语从句)
②If we try our best, the environment will be better and better.(条件状语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24九上·广西南宁银海三雅学校·期中)
近期日本东京福岛核污染排海作业引发了全球讨论,世界人民再次关注到海洋生态问题。你们学校的报刊就这一话题刊登了一些图片,向同学们就保护海洋环境这一问题征稿,请结合图片的内容和写作要点投稿。
写作要点:1.海洋污染的危害(至少两点);
2. 解决措施(至少两点);
3. 你的感受和期望。
写作要求:
1.内容积极向上,包含题目所有要点信息,可适当发挥以使行文流畅。
2. 结构完整,语句流畅,条理清晰,语法正确,表达规范,书写工整。
3. 不得出现题目以外的人名、地名、校名及其它透露个人信息的名字。
4. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: release(释放) nuclear-contaminated wastewater(核污染废水) marine life(海洋生物) human(人类) ocean (海洋) destroy(破坏)
Recently, Japan released nuclear-contaminated wastewater. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. The situation of the sea is more and more difficult. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Recently, Japan released nuclear-contaminated wastewater. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. The situation of the sea is more and more difficult.
Firstly, marine pollution is causing significant harm to marine life. The wastewater contains toxic chemicals that are bad for marine life. Secondly, marine pollution is also affecting human health, because some people may eat the contaminated seafood.
To solve the problems, we need to take action. The government needs to make strict laws and regulations to limit the release of wastewater. Besides, people should raise the awareness of protecting the ocean.
The ocean environment is closely related to us, so we should try our best to protect it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,为说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,需做适当发挥,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍海洋污染的危害;
第二步,介绍解决污染的措施;
第三步,表达感受和期望大家保护海洋环境。
[亮点词汇]
①marine pollution海洋污染
②cause harm to对……造成伤害
③take action采取行动
④raise the awareness of 增强……的意识
[高分句型]
①The wastewater contains toxic chemicals that are bad for marine life.(that引导的定语从句)
②Secondly, marine pollution is also affecting human health, because some people may eat the contaminated seafood.(because引导的原因状语从句)
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专题07 书面表达
主题01 人与自我
Passage 1
(23-24九上·广西贵港市港南区·期中)
假设你们班在昨天的英语考试过后发现一张没有署名的试卷,这张试卷的得分很高,字迹工整,你们的英语老师想知道这是谁的卷子。请你根据以下内容提示,帮助你们的英语科代表分析这是谁的英语试卷,并把分析结果用英语写成一篇短文交给你们的英语老师。
提示:
李力
英语考试成绩一直都很好,但已经拿到了试卷;
吴海
书写很好,但害怕学习英语;
黄涛
英语成绩可以,但他昨天没来学校;
周梅
擅长英语,而且做事情总是很粗心。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
We had an English exam yesterday. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(25-26九上·广西南宁市青秀区新民中学·开学考)
健康是学业进步与愉快生活的基石。作为九年级学生,保持身心健康有助于我们更好地迎接毕业与升学的挑战。学校英语月刊拟开设“Health”专栏,现以“How to Keep a Healthy Life”为题征集短文,诚邀你从饮食、运动、心态三个方面,分享自己在日常生活中践行健康生活的做法,并提出你的倡议。
注意:
1.词数为80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:diet (n. 饮食), regularly (adv. 有规律地), positive (adj. 乐观的)
How to Keep a Healthy Life
Keeping a healthy life is important for everyone! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题01 人与自我——意见/建议
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西南宁天桃实验学校·期中)
近年来,随着科技的发展,电子产品越来越多。科技进步使得我们的生活变得更加便捷,但也带来了许多思考。因为电子产品的广泛使用,学生们的汉字书写能力大大降低,令人担忧。假如你是校书法协会的会长李华,为了让同学们重视书写,请你写一封倡议书,内容包括:
书写现状
电子产品过度使用、书写能力下降;
你的建议
多动手做笔记、养成手写日记的习惯......;
你的呼吁
......
写作要求:
1. 倡议书开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 词数为80左右。参考词汇: electric products 电子产品;handwriting ability书写能力;calligraphy (n.)书法
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to pay attention to our handwriting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Calligraphy Association
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西南宁第十四中学·期中)
规则意识在心中,实际行动在身边。假设你校英语俱乐部正在举办名为“Follow and Grow”的英文演讲活动,倡导大家做一名新时代的文明守纪好少年。请你根据以下写作要点,写一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加活动。
写作要点:
1. 遵守规则的重要性;
2. 如何遵守规则 (文明礼仪,课堂习惯……);
3. 发出倡议。
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给信息,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不能出现题目以外的个人信息,否则一律不予评分。
注意:
1. 内容必须包含以上的所有信息;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:3. 文中不得透露个人信息:4. 词数80词左右 (短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
Follow and Grow
Hello everyone! Today, I’m going to talk about our school rules. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
Passage 3
(24-25九上·广西南宁天桃实验学校·月考)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Alice来信和你提到她的一些烦恼。请你根据邮件中提到的问题,给她回信,帮她排忧解难。
Alice’s problems
Suggestions
1. 在学习中遇到困难
1. 向老师和同学寻求帮助;……
2. 在新的班级感到孤单
2. 尝试交新的朋友;……
3. 总是感到疲倦
3. ……
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚,行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:
tired adj. 疲倦的;
have trouble (in) … 在……方面遇到困难;
ask sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助;
make friends 交朋友。
Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to know that you are not happy these days. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
(23-24九上·广西南宁第十八中学·期中)
Sandy的父母即将出差,第一次独自在家的她感到非常的焦虑,于是她写信给New Standard Magazine的专家 Diana寻求建议。请你根据以下写作要点,以Diana的身份用英语给她写一封回信。
要点提示:
1. 学会独立是很重要的;
2. 提出学习、家务、运动和居家安全的建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数为80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名以及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Sandy,
I’m glad that you can tell me your feeling. But I think learning to be independent is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Diana
Passage 5
(23-24九上·广西南宁广西大学附属中学·期中)
假如你是李华,你即将初中毕业,请你结合三年的初中生活,以“How to have a better school life”为题,写一篇演讲稿,对初一的新生提些建议。
内容:
1. 学习上:制定学习计划;上课认真听讲;……
2. 生活上:锻炼身体;和同学友好相处;……
3. 提出美好祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to have a better school life
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I’d like to tell you something about the school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题02 人与自我——个人经历和信息
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西南宁广西大学附属中学·期中)
学会独立生活是中学生的必备技能,假如你是李华,你校将要举办以“My experience at home alone”为题的英语演讲比赛,你将作为你们班的学生代表参加,请你结合以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
提示:1. 你何时独自在家;
2. 你独自在家的活动(锻炼身体、阅读、做家务);
3. 居家注意安全事项(至少两点);
4. 你的感悟。
要求:1. 80词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确;
3. 包含以上所给信息,适当拓展;
4. 文中不得出现文外的姓名,校名及地名等信息。
My experience at home alone
I am Li Hua. I am glad to be here to tell you something about my experience at home alone. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西钦州共美学校·月考)
Daniel是你的同学,你们班的尖子生之一,他有很多适合当学生会主席的突出品质,你想推荐他成为学生会主席。请根据下列内容要点,用英语给吴老师写一封推荐信:
内容要点:
1. 自信,工作力求高标准,常能想出很多好点子:
2. 有爱心,……(举例);做事有条理。……(举例);
3. 擅长打篮球,……;
4. 不怕困难,学习努力,能保持学习和爱好的平衡;
5. 我相信,……
Dear Mr Wu,
I’m writing to recommend Daniel as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. He is one of the top students in my class. He has many strong qualities for this position.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Millie
Passage 3
(24-25九上·广西梧州岑溪中学·月考)
某报社正在就“The person who has influenced me most”为题进行征文比赛。假设你的叔叔对你的学习生活影响非常大,你非常钦佩他。请你根据表格提供的有关你的叔叔的信息和要求写一篇英语文章向该报社投稿。
职业
Youth worker
年龄
四十几岁
品质
创造性
想出很多新主意
勤奋
熬夜,做额外的工作
乐于助人
乐于帮助……解决问题,献血好多次
爱好
唱歌
对弹吉他很有天赋,梦想成为一名成功的歌手
最爱的颜色
……
象征……(请自己发挥)
我的感觉
以前我并不……,但现在我意识到……
注意:
1. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 短文须包含所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯。
3. 词数不少于90。
The person who has influenced me most
I would like to talk about my uncle Tom who has influenced me most.
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主题03 人与自我——劳动实践
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西南宁第四十七中学·月考)
习近平总书记说:“人世间的一切幸福都需要靠辛勤的劳动来创造。”劳动可以增强体质,提升自信,培养责任感。在生活中,你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能,比如洗衣、做饭等。现学校英语报正在征集关于“劳动”的稿件,请你以“Labor (劳动) Makes a Better Life”为题,写一篇稿件。
内容包括:(1)你擅长哪些劳动技能(至少三项)?
(2)你平时如何进行这些劳动(时间、地点等)?
(3)劳动给你带来了什么感受和益处?
参考词汇:build up one’s body(增强体质) develop a sense of duty(培养责任感)
写作要求:1. 文章语言正确,要点齐全,行文连贯,书写工整;
2. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
Labor Makes a Better Life
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西南宁第三中学初中部·月考)
为了创造美好的生活,青少年在成长的过程中应掌握一些生活技能(如烹饪、种植、打扫房间等)。请结合下列提示和自身情况,以“A life skill I learned”为题写一篇短文,在英语课堂上分享。
写作要点:
1. 你学会了哪一项生活技能;
2. 你如何学会了这项生活技能;
3. 你的感受或期望。
写作要求:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:cook(v. 烹饪); plant(v. 种植); tidy up(整理)
A life skill I learned
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers.
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主题04 人与社会——其它
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西河池凤山县·期中)
国庆节就要到了,很多人偏爱外出游玩,也有人会选择待在家里,但无论如何,大家都会做一些有意义的事情,你的国庆假期打算如何度过呢?请用英语写一篇文章,描述一下你打算在假期里做哪些有意义的事情,期望有哪些收获。
内容要求:
1.你的计划是什么?
2.你做了哪些准备?
3.你期望收获什么?
其它要求:
1.内容充实、语言得体、逻辑清晰、结构明了;
2.不少于100词。
National Day is coming. Everybody should be happy to have seven days off. So am I.
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Passage 2
(23-24九上·广西南宁三美学校·期中)
“读万卷书,行万里路”。现在阅读已经成为我们生活中必不可少的一部分。你校英语校刊举行以“Happy reading”为题的征文活动,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文征文。 写作要点:
1.你的阅读情况 (阅读哪些类型的书、阅读时间、阅读习惯等);
2. 阅读带给你的好处;
3. 向同学们发出倡议。
写作要求:
1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80 左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: read(阅读);habit (习惯);improve (提高)
Happy reading
Reading has become a part of our lives.
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Passage 3
(23-24九上·广西南宁天桃教育集团·期中)
运动中有快乐,运动中有泪水,运动中有成长。假设你校英语报刊正在开展以“My Sports Life”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文向报刊投稿,向同学们分享你的运动生活及感受。
写作要点:
1. 你经常参加哪一项运动?
2. 你在这项运动中遇到什么困难?
3. 你是如何解决这个(些)困难的?
注意:
1. 词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:run(跑步), skip(跳绳), swim(游泳)
My Sports Life
Sports are important for everyone. I often
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Passage 4
(23-24九上·广西柳州柳江区·期中)
为创先增优,营造良好的初三备考环境,班级开展了主题为“如何做最好的自己”的英语演讲比赛,请以“How to be the best of ourselves”为题,用英文写一篇演讲稿,号召同学们在初中的最后一年中展现出最好的自己,给班级、给母校留下美好的回忆。演讲稿内容包括:
1.目的和意义(如让自己不断进步、班级更和谐、环境更舒适等);
2.自我管理方面(如该做什么,不该做什么,并说出理由);
3.师生关系方面(如该做什么,不该做什么,并说出理由);
4.寄语(自己想说的话)。
注意:
1.词数为80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:improve (进步), comfortable (舒适的),get on well with (和……友好相处)
How to be the best of ourselves
Hello, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
Passage 6
(23-24九上·广西南宁第十四中学·期中)
我们在学习和生活中都会遇到一些问题,例如朋友相处、亲子关系、学业压力,但只要积极面对,就一定能解决。现我校正在开展以“积极面对问题”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 你遇到一个问题;
2. 你如何解决放个问题;
3. 你有什么收获。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 内容必须包含所有信息;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Everyone meets problems in life, but we can solve them positively.
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主题05 人与社会——青少年问题/传统节日
Passage 1
(24-25九上·广西钦州浦北县·期中)
假如你是李华,最近在学习上遇到一些问题。请给你们学校的心理老师 Andy写一封求助信。
求助内容:1. 你遇到的问题(至少两个);
2. 你希望得到的帮助。
写作要求:1. 字迹工整、规范;
2. 字数:不少于100词;
3. 语句通顺,无语法错误,符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。
Dear Andy,
I am Li Hua and I am a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I do not know how I should deal with them. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25九上·广西南宁江南区·月考)
了解中国传统节日魅力,传承中国优秀传统文化。学校英文校刊正在进行以“我最喜爱的中国传统节日”为主题的征文,请你根据自己的喜好,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.节日名称及时间;
2.节日习俗或活动:
3.你喜欢的原因。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:celebrate v.庆祝; activity n.活动; traditional adj.传统的; Spring Festival 春节; the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节...
My favourite Chinese traditional festival
Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to share my favourite Chinese traditional festival with you all. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
主题06 人与自然——环境保护
Passage 1
(23-24九上·广西南宁邕宁区民族中学·期中)
地球是我们共同的家园,然而我们的地球环境受到各种污染,保护环境,人人有责。现校刊英文专栏以“How to protect our environment”为题征稿。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点:
1. 目前环境污染的现状(遍地垃圾,……);
2. 针对环境污染问题,提出你的一些建议(使用公共交通工具绿色出行,……);
3. 呼吁大家一起行动,保护我们的环境。
注意:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得透露个人信息;
3. 词数 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to protect our environment
The earth is our home.
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Passage 2
(23-24九上·广西南宁银海三雅学校·期中)
近期日本东京福岛核污染排海作业引发了全球讨论,世界人民再次关注到海洋生态问题。你们学校的报刊就这一话题刊登了一些图片,向同学们就保护海洋环境这一问题征稿,请结合图片的内容和写作要点投稿。
写作要点:1.海洋污染的危害(至少两点);
2. 解决措施(至少两点);
3. 你的感受和期望。
写作要求:
1.内容积极向上,包含题目所有要点信息,可适当发挥以使行文流畅。
2. 结构完整,语句流畅,条理清晰,语法正确,表达规范,书写工整。
3. 不得出现题目以外的人名、地名、校名及其它透露个人信息的名字。
4. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: release(释放) nuclear-contaminated wastewater(核污染废水) marine life(海洋生物) human(人类) ocean (海洋) destroy(破坏)
Recently, Japan released nuclear-contaminated wastewater. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. The situation of the sea is more and more difficult. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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