高频话题18 感谢信（同步写作讲义）英语八年级通用版

高频话题18 感谢信 同步写作课讲义 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。 感谢信一般分为三个部分： 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因； 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助； 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。 邀请信一定要将活动的时间、地点、内容写清楚，用词须准确、简洁，写作过程中不要遗漏要点，可以遵循以下写作套路。 第一段，简要说明活动并邀请对方，含：（1)问候；（2)自我介绍；（3)写信背景；（4)写信目的。 第二段，具体介绍邀请的原因，含：（1)活动的时间、地点及参与人员；（2)活动的主题、方式、组成部分；（3)活动的意义。 第三段，期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢，含：（1)希望对方能来；（2)感谢对方读信； （3)期待回复。 典例： 假设你是李华，近日，你参观了一个关于中国传统文化的展览，深受启发。你决定写一封感谢信给展览主办方 (organizers)，内容包括： ▶你参观展览的时间和感受； ▶展览中你最喜欢的部分及原因； ▶你对文化传承 (cultural inheritance) 的看法。 注：信中不得透露你的真实信息 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Organizers, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the wonderful traditional Chinese culture exhibition. I visited it last weekend and was deeply impressed by the rich displays. My favorite part was the ancient calligraphy section, where I admired the elegance of brush strokes and learned about its historical significance. It truly showcased the beauty of our cultural heritage. This exhibition strengthened my belief that cultural inheritance is vital. By preserving and promoting traditions, we connect the past with the future. Thank you for your meaningful efforts! Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍参观展览的时间和感受； 第二步，具体介绍展览中你最喜欢的部分及原因； 第三步，写出自己对文化传承的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be impressed by对……印象深刻 ②the elegance of brush strokes笔法的精妙 ③historical significance历史意义 ④cultural heritage文化遗产 ⑤connect...with...将……和……连接起来 [高分句型] My favorite part was the ancient calligraphy section, where I admired the elegance of brush strokes and learned about its historical significance. (where引导的定语从句) ( 词汇积累 ) heartfelt adj.衷心的 gratitude n.感激 grateful adj.感谢的，感激的 sincerely adv.真诚地 kindness n.善良 hospitality n.热情好客，款待 express v.表达 do sb. a favor 帮忙 in person 亲自 from the bottom of one's heart 从心底 ( 句式积累 ) 闪亮篇首句 How time flies!时间过得真快啊！ I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。 How is your stay in...?您在······待着感觉怎么样？ I am writing to you because I want to tell you a piece of good news that....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。 I am writing to you because I want to thank you for your hospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。 I'm writing to express my thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。 I am writing to you because...因为······,我给您写这封信。 I'm writing to thank you for your great help!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！ 出彩篇中句 Many thanks for your kind and warm help.多谢您善良热情的帮助。 Thank you for your generous hospitality.多谢您的款待。 Thanks to your help,I can get the prize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。 精彩篇尾句 I hope I can express my thanks to you in person.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。 I'm sincerely grateful for all your help.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。 Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。 Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。 I am glad to hear that you will visit our school soon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 假如你是李华，在英语老师Mr. Li的帮助下，你在学校组织的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请根据所给要点，给Mr. Li写一封不少于40词的感谢信。 要点： 1. 感谢他在英语学习方面给予你的帮助； 2. 告知你取得的进步及比赛结果； 3. 邀请他本周六到家里做客。 要求：要点齐全；表述畅通；简洁得体；称呼落款已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Li, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （2） 假如你是Li Hua，在你的成长路上，父母和老师们给予你很多关爱和帮助。在新年到来之际，你想向他们表达你的感激之情，请你用英语给父母或老师写一封感谢信。 要求： 1.80—120词左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 1.感谢父母或老师（二选一）： 2.表达你对父母或老师的感激之情：照顾、陪伴、关心、教育、鼓励… 3.为了感谢你的父母或老师，你打算… 4. … Dear________. New Year’s coming, I want to say thanks to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Wish you all the best! Yours, Li Hua （3） 假如你是李华，初中阶段你与同学们在一起学习，参加各种活动，互相帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。现校园网英语论坛开辟了“Thank-you letter”专题，请给你的同学刘明写一封不少于40词的感谢信。 要点： 1. 刘明性格：为人友善，耐心，乐于助人； 2. 感谢原因：刘明经常在学习上帮助你；让你变得更开朗； 3. 诚挚祝福：对刘明表达感谢和祝福， 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。 Dear Liu Ming, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua （4） 假如你是校报“English World”的记者李华，11月10日的早上，你的同学John在骑自行车去学校的路上碰到了一起交通事故，事故受害人是一个16岁的女孩。在John的帮助下，女孩得救了，事后女孩写来一封感谢信。请你根据John的事迹，并以“John saved a girl from a car accident”为题，为校报撰稿写一篇新闻报道。 提示： 1．How did the car accident happen? 2．What did John do? 3．What should we learn from John? 要求： 1．内容应包括所有提示要点，可以适当发挥； 2．用上本学期所学的语法（过去进行时）； 3．词数80左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） “一朝沐杏雨，一生念师恩”，老师是值得我们永远尊敬和感恩的人。假如你是李华，即将初中毕业。请根据提示，结合自身经历给你最敬爱的英语老师Ms. Zhao写一封信。感谢她在初中三年里对你的帮助。 In study: Taught English humorously; Encouraged you… In life: Listened to your problems; Offered… 要求： （1）包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； （2）不得出现真实的人名和校名。 （3）词数：80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ms. Zhao, I’m writing this letter to thank you for _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Yours, Li Hua （6） 时刻拥有一颗感恩的心最为可贵。在生活和学习中，我们要学会感恩，感恩父母、朋友、老师……初中生活即将结束，为了表达谢意，你可以给他∕她手工制作一件小礼物，写一封感谢信，邀请他∕她看一场电影或为他∕她做一顿可口的饭菜…… 请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇以“感恩”为主题的英语短文。 内容包括:1. Who do you want to thank most? 2. What did you do for him/her to show your thanks? 3. What are we supposed to do to show our thanks to others? 要求:1.词数不少于 80，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；3.参考词汇仅供参考。 In my life, there are many people I want to thank. Among them, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 假如你是李华，在外教 Mr. Smith 的指导下，你和你班的同学们合作在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请代表同学们给 Mr. Brown 写一封感谢信，并说一说你们在此次比赛中的收获。 写作要点： 1. 非常感激 Mr. Brown 的帮助。 2. 介绍你们参加比赛的情况 （1）参加比赛时的心情：紧张 （2）比赛时表现良好。 （3）比赛的结果。 3. 说一说你们在此次比赛中的收获。 Dear Mr. Brown, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （8） 感恩是中华民族的传统美德，懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段，一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际，以信传情。 请你根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，心怀感恩。 内容要点： 1. 表达对他/她的感谢； 2. 回顾过去暖心的经历； 3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （9） 凡人微光，处处闪烁。4月底以来，在疫情防控、社区守护、物资保供等方面，数万普通人站出来担当志愿者，共同守护家园。 某英文网站正在开展为社区防疫工作者写一封感谢信的征文活动。假如你是李华，请结合你在社区、村镇的所见所闻，为这些可敬的“凡人英雄”写一封感谢信，表达你对他们的敬意并谈谈你的感受和收获。 提示词语：community，check identification(身份)，take a COVID-19 test，respect，proud 提示问题： ·What did you see? ·How do you feel? ·What have you learned from them? Dear heroes, I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to all of you for your hard work. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （10） 假如你是李明，初中三年你与同学们在一起学习，参加各种活动，互相帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。你们即将毕业，校园网英语论坛开辟了Thank-you letter专题。请你按照要求给你的同学王星写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 王星给你的印象（外貌、性格特征等）。 2. 简述感谢的原因，包括王星对你的帮助和影响，适当举例。 3. 你对未来的期待和对王星的祝福。 词数80左右（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数），不能透露任何个人信息（如具体学校和姓名等等），否则不予评分。 Dear Wang Xing, The high school entrance examination is coming, and our 3-year junior school life is going to be over. I would like to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming （11） 假如你是Sandy，新冠疫情防控期间，你看到很多志愿者积极投入到社区防控工作，请用英语给志愿者们写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 对志愿者所做的工作表示感谢（至少三项工作）； 2. 自己想当一名志愿者的心愿。 要求：1. 词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 参考词汇：nucleic acid test核酸检测 Dear all the volunteers, I’m very happy to write this letter to you. During the covid-19 prevention and control (新冠疫情防控), ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With best wishes. Yours, Sandy （12） 假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席李华，你的学校上学期开展了丰富的课后延时服务课程，其中由学校外教Mr. Blair负责的英语特色课程特别受同学们喜爱。校长想让你代表参加该课程的学生给Mr. Blair写一封感谢信，请根据以下提示完成信件。 要点： 1. 写信目的：表达感谢与喜爱。 2. 回忆课堂活动（至少两个）及收获。 3. 期待与希望。 参考词汇：课后服务 after-school service 要求：1. 80字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Mr. Blair, I’m Li Hua from the students’ union. I’m writing to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua. （13） 假定你是李华，刚刚从伦敦游学归来。请你写一封信，对在英国给予你悉心照顾的Green 一家表示感谢。内容包括： 1. 表达感谢和感受；2. 谈谈你做了什么，学到了什么；3. 邀请对方来中国。 注意： 1. 词数 80-100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. and Mrs. Green, I have returned to my home. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua （14） 假定你是李华，你所在的杭州国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员。请你写一封感谢信参与投稿，内容包括：1. 表达谢意；2. 个人感受；3. 表达信心。 注意：1. 词数：80左右      2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：传染病epidemic     新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus Dear medical workers, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频话题18 感谢信 同步写作课讲义 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。 感谢信一般分为三个部分： 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因； 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助； 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。 邀请信一定要将活动的时间、地点、内容写清楚，用词须准确、简洁，写作过程中不要遗漏要点，可以遵循以下写作套路。 第一段，简要说明活动并邀请对方，含：（1)问候；（2)自我介绍；（3)写信背景；（4)写信目的。 第二段，具体介绍邀请的原因，含：（1)活动的时间、地点及参与人员；（2)活动的主题、方式、组成部分；（3)活动的意义。 第三段，期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢，含：（1)希望对方能来；（2)感谢对方读信； （3)期待回复。 典例： 假设你是李华，近日，你参观了一个关于中国传统文化的展览，深受启发。你决定写一封感谢信给展览主办方 (organizers)，内容包括： ▶你参观展览的时间和感受； ▶展览中你最喜欢的部分及原因； ▶你对文化传承 (cultural inheritance) 的看法。 注：信中不得透露你的真实信息 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Organizers, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the wonderful traditional Chinese culture exhibition. I visited it last weekend and was deeply impressed by the rich displays. My favorite part was the ancient calligraphy section, where I admired the elegance of brush strokes and learned about its historical significance. It truly showcased the beauty of our cultural heritage. This exhibition strengthened my belief that cultural inheritance is vital. By preserving and promoting traditions, we connect the past with the future. Thank you for your meaningful efforts! Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍参观展览的时间和感受； 第二步，具体介绍展览中你最喜欢的部分及原因； 第三步，写出自己对文化传承的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be impressed by对……印象深刻 ②the elegance of brush strokes笔法的精妙 ③historical significance历史意义 ④cultural heritage文化遗产 ⑤connect...with...将……和……连接起来 [高分句型] My favorite part was the ancient calligraphy section, where I admired the elegance of brush strokes and learned about its historical significance. (where引导的定语从句) ( 词汇积累 ) heartfelt adj.衷心的 gratitude n.感激 grateful adj.感谢的，感激的 sincerely adv.真诚地 kindness n.善良 hospitality n.热情好客，款待 express v.表达 do sb. a favor 帮忙 in person 亲自 from the bottom of one's heart 从心底 ( 句式积累 ) 闪亮篇首句 How time flies!时间过得真快啊！ I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.我写信是想表达我衷心的感激之情。 How is your stay in...?您在······待着感觉怎么样？ I am writing to you because I want to tell you a piece of good news that....我给您写信是因为我想告诉您一则······的好消息。 I am writing to you because I want to thank you for your hospitality.我给您写信是想表达一下对您热情周到的招待的感激之情。 I'm writing to express my thanks for...我写这封信是为了表达我对······的谢意。 I am writing to you because...因为······,我给您写这封信。 I'm writing to thank you for your great help!我写信来谢谢你巨大的帮助！ 出彩篇中句 Many thanks for your kind and warm help.多谢您善良热情的帮助。 Thank you for your generous hospitality.多谢您的款待。 Thanks to your help,I can get the prize.多亏了您的帮助，我才得到了这个奖。 精彩篇尾句 I hope I can express my thanks to you in person.我希望能够亲自向您表达谢意。 I'm sincerely grateful for all your help.对于您的帮助，我真的非常感激。 Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favour.对于您的善意的帮忙，我向您表示感谢。 Many thanks for all the good things you have done in helping us to...非常感谢您为帮助我们······所做的一切。 I am glad to hear that you will visit our school soon.听说您很快会来我们学校参观，我特别高兴。 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 假如你是李华，在英语老师Mr. Li的帮助下，你在学校组织的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请根据所给要点，给Mr. Li写一封不少于40词的感谢信。 要点： 1. 感谢他在英语学习方面给予你的帮助； 2. 告知你取得的进步及比赛结果； 3. 邀请他本周六到家里做客。 要求：要点齐全；表述畅通；简洁得体；称呼落款已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Li, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Li, I’m writing to express my thanks to you. Thanks for helping me with my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English and won the first prize in the school English speech competition. I would like to invite you to come to my home. Thank you for everything. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和现在完成时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先表达感谢，接着阐述感谢的原因，再说明在帮助下取得的成果。 第二步，最后发出邀请，再次感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①make great progress 取得巨大进步 ②win the first prize 获得一等奖 ③invite you邀请你 [高分句型] With your help, I’ve made great progress in English and won the first prize in the school English speech competition.（并列结构） （2） 假如你是Li Hua，在你的成长路上，父母和老师们给予你很多关爱和帮助。在新年到来之际，你想向他们表达你的感激之情，请你用英语给父母或老师写一封感谢信。 要求： 1.80—120词左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 1.感谢父母或老师（二选一）： 2.表达你对父母或老师的感激之情：照顾、陪伴、关心、教育、鼓励… 3.为了感谢你的父母或老师，你打算… 4. … Dear________. New Year’s coming, I want to say thanks to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Wish you all the best! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr.Li, New year’s coming, I want to say thanks to you. Thank you one million times for helping me to be a better person. I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago. You always work hard and treat us kindly. You are strict with us in study and also take good care of us. It’s easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively. During my school life, we can get along well with each other. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave. You have given me so much. I will study harder in the future. Thank you again for what you’ve done for us.     Wish you all the best! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容表达对老师的感激之情，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细表达对老师的感激之情； 第三步，讲述自己今后的打算。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of好好照顾 ②get on well with sb.和某人友好相处 [高分句型] ①When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Thank you again for what you’ve done for us. (what引导宾语从句) （3） 假如你是李华，初中阶段你与同学们在一起学习，参加各种活动，互相帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。现校园网英语论坛开辟了“Thank-you letter”专题，请给你的同学刘明写一封不少于40词的感谢信。 要点： 1. 刘明性格：为人友善，耐心，乐于助人； 2. 感谢原因：刘明经常在学习上帮助你；让你变得更开朗； 3. 诚挚祝福：对刘明表达感谢和祝福， 要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。 Dear Liu Ming, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Liu Ming, I just want to say thank you. You are such a friendly, patient and helpful classmate. You always helped me with my studies when I had difficulties. Thanks to you, I have made great progress in my studies. You also encouraged me to be more outgoing and I have become more outgoing now. I really appreciate your kindness and support. I wish you all the best in the future. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，介绍他的性格以及感谢他的原因； 第三步，表达自己的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事 ②make great progress取得巨大进步 ③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①You always helped me with my studies when I had difficulties.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②You also encouraged me to be more outgoing and I have become more outgoing now. （and连接的并列句） （4） 假如你是校报“English World”的记者李华，11月10日的早上，你的同学John在骑自行车去学校的路上碰到了一起交通事故，事故受害人是一个16岁的女孩。在John的帮助下，女孩得救了，事后女孩写来一封感谢信。请你根据John的事迹，并以“John saved a girl from a car accident”为题，为校报撰稿写一篇新闻报道。 提示： 1．How did the car accident happen? 2．What did John do? 3．What should we learn from John? 要求： 1．内容应包括所有提示要点，可以适当发挥； 2．用上本学期所学的语法（过去进行时）； 3．词数80左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： John saved a girl from a car accident On the morning of November 10th, John rode his bike to school. On the way, he saw a car accident. A girl was crossing the street when a car came up. The girl didn’t see it coming because she was playing with her phone at that time. The car hit her and ran away. The girl broke her leg and had a nosebleed. At that time, John got off his bike and ran to the girl. He called 120 at once. And John took care of the girl until the help arrived. Thanks to John, the doctors took the girl who was hurt to the hospital in time. Now the girl is in good health. John’s story is a typical example of kindness. He helped others without thinking twice. I think he is a good example for us to learn from. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇新闻报道，为材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时，过去进行时； ③提示：结合写作要点，介绍John是如何救下这个女孩的，避免遗漏要点，确保行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍这场车祸是如何发生的； 第二步：介绍John是如何救下女孩的； 第三步：谈谈我们应该从John身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①run away 逃跑 ②take care of... 照顾 ③at once 立刻，马上 [高分句型] ①Thanks to John, the doctors took the girl who was hurt to the hospital in time. (who引导限制性定语从句) ②I think he is a good example for us to learn from. (宾语从句) （5） “一朝沐杏雨，一生念师恩”，老师是值得我们永远尊敬和感恩的人。假如你是李华，即将初中毕业。请根据提示，结合自身经历给你最敬爱的英语老师Ms. Zhao写一封信。感谢她在初中三年里对你的帮助。 In study: Taught English humorously; Encouraged you… In life: Listened to your problems; Offered… 要求： （1）包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； （2）不得出现真实的人名和校名。 （3）词数：80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ms. Zhao, I’m writing this letter to thank you for _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Ms. Zhao, I’m writing this letter to thank you for helping me these years. When I first entered junior high school, my English was not good. You taught me English humorously and encouraged me to persist. If you keep on, you will succeed in time. So my English was getting better and better, and now my English is among the best. In life, you always listened carefully to my problems and provided me with solutions to these problems. When I was sad, you always found a way to make me happy. I am so grateful to you for your help that I decide to work harder. I hope you’ll be happier and healthier than before. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。 ③提示：文章为第一人称，结合自身经历向老师表达感谢，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写信目的，要感谢赵老师； 第二步，讲述自身经历，对赵老师表达感谢； 第三步，表达对老师的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ②provide sb with sth向某人提供某物 [高分句型] ①When I first entered junior high school, my English was not good.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I am so grateful to you for your help that I decide to work harder.（so…that引导结果状语从句） （6） 时刻拥有一颗感恩的心最为可贵。在生活和学习中，我们要学会感恩，感恩父母、朋友、老师……初中生活即将结束，为了表达谢意，你可以给他∕她手工制作一件小礼物，写一封感谢信，邀请他∕她看一场电影或为他∕她做一顿可口的饭菜…… 请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇以“感恩”为主题的英语短文。 内容包括:1. Who do you want to thank most? 2. What did you do for him/her to show your thanks? 3. What are we supposed to do to show our thanks to others? 要求:1.词数不少于 80，首句已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；3.参考词汇仅供参考。 In my life, there are many people I want to thank. Among them, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In my life, there are many people I want to thank. Among them, my friend Lisa made me gradually realize the amazing power of company, which is full of warmth and touching details. So I desire to thank my friend most. In order to show my thanks, I wrote a long letter. While writing, I recalled plenty of our impressing memories. Despite that, I prepared two popular books for her because I sincerely hoped that she would have a bright future and become more knowledgeable. I put them into a beautiful box. Without doubt, she was surprised to see my gift. As far as I am concerned, we are supposed to show our thanks in a meaningful way. We don’t need to spend a lot of money buying gifts. As long as we put our hearts in the gifts, people who receive them will surely feel our thanks and love. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为 “一般过去时”和 “一般现在时”； ③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己要感谢的人； 第二步，具体介绍自己表达感谢的方法； 第三步，给出应该如何表达感谢的建议。 [亮点词汇] ① be full of 充满 ② plenty of 大量，很多 ③ without doubt 毫无疑问 ④ as far as I am concerned 就我而言 [高分句型] ① Among them, my friend Lisa made me gradually realize the amazing power of company, which is full of warmth and touching details. （which引导的非限制性定语从句） ② Despite that, I prepared two popular books for her because I sincerely hoped that she would have a bright future and become more knowledgeable.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句） ③ As long as we put our hearts in the gifts, people who receive them will surely feel our thanks and love.（as long as引导的条件状语从句；who引导的定语从句） （7） 假如你是李华，在外教 Mr. Smith 的指导下，你和你班的同学们合作在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请代表同学们给 Mr. Brown 写一封感谢信，并说一说你们在此次比赛中的收获。 写作要点： 1. 非常感激 Mr. Brown 的帮助。 2. 介绍你们参加比赛的情况 （1）参加比赛时的心情：紧张 （2）比赛时表现良好。 （3）比赛的结果。 3. 说一说你们在此次比赛中的收获。 Dear Mr. Brown, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Mr. Brown, Firstly, thank you for your help in winning the prize in the English Opera Competition organized by the school. I still remember those other teachers who tirelessly guided me during their lunch break. Even if we made a mistake, you just smiled a little. Under your guidance, my oral and performance skills have greatly improved, which has enabled me to achieve such good results. We were all very nervous at the beginning of the competition. But we quickly calmed down and participated in the competition seriously. In the end, we won the first place. Through this competition, we truly understand the importance of cooperation. To thank you for your help, I would like to invite you to my house as a guest. If you can come, please let me know in advance. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】［总体分析］ 题材：本文是一封感谢信； 时态：本文的时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； 提示：本文的要点已给出，注意要点衔接顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，总述写信的目的感谢帮助； 第二步，具体介绍参赛时的心情，比赛的表现和比赛的结果； 第三步，讲述比赛的收获。 ［亮点词汇］ Under your guidance在你的指导下 Even if即使 ［高分句型］ To thank you for your help, I would like to invite you to my house as a guest.（不定式结构作目的状语） If you can come, please let me know in advance.（条件状语从句） （8） 感恩是中华民族的传统美德，懂得感恩是生命中的大智慧。初中阶段，一定有人帮助你、陪伴你、感动你。值此毕业之际，以信传情。 请你根据要点提示，给你最想感谢的人写一封信，心怀感恩。 内容要点： 1. 表达对他/她的感谢； 2. 回顾过去暖心的经历； 3. 传达对他/她的美好祝愿。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Ms. Lee, I want to say “thank you” to you. In my junior high school life, you helps me a lot. You take good care of me and often help me with my English. When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. Thanks to you, I have made great progress in English and am becoming more and more interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that you have done for me. I hope that you are healthy and happy every day. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要感谢谁，表达感谢； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍过去经历； 第三步，书写结语。表达美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of好好照顾 ②encourage鼓励 ③upset烦恼的 ④made great progress取得极大的进步 [高分句型] ①When I am in trouble, you always encourage me to face my difficulties and give me good advice.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. （that引导宾语从句） （9） 凡人微光，处处闪烁。4月底以来，在疫情防控、社区守护、物资保供等方面，数万普通人站出来担当志愿者，共同守护家园。 某英文网站正在开展为社区防疫工作者写一封感谢信的征文活动。假如你是李华，请结合你在社区、村镇的所见所闻，为这些可敬的“凡人英雄”写一封感谢信，表达你对他们的敬意并谈谈你的感受和收获。 提示词语：community，check identification(身份)，take a COVID-19 test，respect，proud 提示问题： ·What did you see? ·How do you feel? ·What have you learned from them? Dear heroes, I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to all of you for your hard work. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear heroes, I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to all of you for your hard work. Recently, as volunteers in our community, you are busy organizing people to stand in a line and checking identification of them when they need to take a COVID-19 test. I am so proud of you. I want to express my respect for you because of your patience, kindness and the selfless spirit. From what you did, I’ve learned that I can do many things to serve people and make my efforts to help others. In a word, please accept my thanks and my best wishes for you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求向疫情中的“凡人英雄”写一封感谢信。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段谈谈自己在社区的所见所闻；第二段表达自己的感情和尊敬；最后一段介绍自己的收获。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 （10） 假如你是李明，初中三年你与同学们在一起学习，参加各种活动，互相帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。你们即将毕业，校园网英语论坛开辟了Thank-you letter专题。请你按照要求给你的同学王星写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 王星给你的印象（外貌、性格特征等）。 2. 简述感谢的原因，包括王星对你的帮助和影响，适当举例。 3. 你对未来的期待和对王星的祝福。 词数80左右（信的开头已给出，不计入总词数），不能透露任何个人信息（如具体学校和姓名等等），否则不予评分。 Dear Wang Xing, The high school entrance examination is coming, and our 3-year junior school life is going to be over. I would like to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】范文： Dear Wang Xing, The high school entrance examination is coming, and our 3-year junior school life is going to be over. I would like to thank you. You’ve been kind and helpful since we knew each other. I’ll never forget all the help you’ve given me. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about my lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind others. You also encourage me to be confident. Since then, we’ve been very close friends. Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I’ll always stay in touch with you. I wish you success in the future. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一封感谢信；要求包含所有提示内容。 2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；采用第二人称和第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：表达写信目的；第二段：阐述对好朋友的印象、感谢的原因、他是如何帮助你的以及你对未来的期待；第三段：表达祝福。 （11） 假如你是Sandy，新冠疫情防控期间，你看到很多志愿者积极投入到社区防控工作，请用英语给志愿者们写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 对志愿者所做的工作表示感谢（至少三项工作）； 2. 自己想当一名志愿者的心愿。 要求：1. 词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 参考词汇：nucleic acid test核酸检测 Dear all the volunteers, I’m very happy to write this letter to you. During the covid-19 prevention and control (新冠疫情防控), ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With best wishes. Yours, Sandy 【答案】例文： Dear volunteers, I’m very happy to write this letter to you. During the covid-19 prevention and control (新冠疫情防控), you have been actively engaged in the fight against the epidemic and made your own contribution. You helped sick people at the risk of being infected. You delivered necessities to people’s homes in our community. You took people’s temperature and did nucleic acid test. You helped regulate the traffic. I am so proud and touched by your work and effort. With the outbreak of the epidemic, I realized that I should do something to help others and make a contribution to our great society. I want to be a volunteer. I would like to join you and play my part in the fight against the epidemic. With best wishes. Yours, Sandy 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，向新冠肺炎爆发期间付出努力的志愿者写一封感谢信。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文以第二和第一人称来写作，时态综合使用一般过去时和一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，向志愿者表达感谢；第二段描述志愿者在疫情期间做了什么以及自己的感受；第三段表达自己想当一名志愿者的心愿。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 （12） 假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席李华，你的学校上学期开展了丰富的课后延时服务课程，其中由学校外教Mr. Blair负责的英语特色课程特别受同学们喜爱。校长想让你代表参加该课程的学生给Mr. Blair写一封感谢信，请根据以下提示完成信件。 要点： 1. 写信目的：表达感谢与喜爱。 2. 回忆课堂活动（至少两个）及收获。 3. 期待与希望。 参考词汇：课后服务 after-school service 要求：1. 80字左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Mr. Blair, I’m Li Hua from the students’ union. I’m writing to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua. 【答案】参考范文： Dear Mr. Blare, I’m Li Hua from the students’ union. I’m writing to express our gratitude for your excellent English course for the after-school service in our school. Your English class was so interesting and meaningful that we enjoyed it and learned a lot. I remembered in the first class, you taught us an English song. We sang it along happily and learned some useful expressions from the song, which aroused our bigger interest in learning English. The most impressive class was the drama class. You showed us how to act different roles in an English drama. We not only learned some knowledge about drama, but also practised oral English and learned to be more confident. Thanks to your class and hard work, we have made great progress. We are looking forward to more English classes given by you next term. Thanks again for offering such wonderful after-school service to us. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求给负责英语特色课程的Mr. Blair写一封感谢信。注意写作时要点要齐全，可合理发挥。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、二人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时，在回忆课堂活动时用一般过去时；写作时注意承接上文，然后回忆课堂中学英文歌及戏剧课活动，最后提出期待与希望；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点，可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写及语法运用的准确度。 （13） 假定你是李华，刚刚从伦敦游学归来。请你写一封信，对在英国给予你悉心照顾的Green 一家表示感谢。内容包括： 1. 表达感谢和感受；2. 谈谈你做了什么，学到了什么；3. 邀请对方来中国。 注意： 1. 词数 80-100。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. and Mrs. Green, I have returned to my home. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Mr. and Mrs. Green, I have returned to my home. Thank you very much for your help and kindness while living with your family. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay there such a happy experience. I’ve learned so much, not only English but also culture. Besides, I become more independent, which makes my parents amazed. And I really enjoyed a great deal, the fun and laughter we shared with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember this trip as well as your kindness. Welcome to China when it is convenient for you. I’ll be very glad to show you around my country. And you’ll surely have a pleasant visit here. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】题干解读：题目要求给Green 一家写一封信表示感谢；要求包含所有内容提示。 写作指导：此作文时态以一般过去时和一般将来时为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式：第一段：感谢对方的帮助以及描述自己学到了什么；第二段：邀请对方来中国；第三段：表达祝福。 （14） 假定你是李华，你所在的杭州国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员。请你写一封感谢信参与投稿，内容包括：1. 表达谢意；2. 个人感受；3. 表达信心。 注意：1. 词数：80左右      2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：传染病epidemic     新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus Dear medical workers, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear medical workers, I am Li Hua from an international school. On behalf of my school, I would like to express the sincerest gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel coronavirus. In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all admiration and love! Such a few words can’t fully convey our thankfulness for your great contribution. I hold the firm belief that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求向医护人员表达感谢之情，讲述个人感受并表达信心。 2.写作指导：本文用第一人称和第二人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，向医护人员表达感谢之情并讲述个人感受叙述完整，条理清晰。 ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $