高频话题17 旅游日记（同步写作讲义）英语八年级通用版

高频话题17 旅游日记 同步写作课讲义 “旅游日记”是中考记叙文写作的经典话题。它要求学生能以第一人称的口吻，清晰、生动地描述一次旅行经历。这不仅考察学生的语言能力，也考察其观察力、感受力和叙事能力。 命题方向通常包括： 1. 纯日记形式：直接以日记格式命题，如“请以你的一次旅行经历为题，写一篇日记”。 2. 游记叙述：要求描述一次参观/游览某个地方（如公园、博物馆、城市）的经历。 3. 活动报道：记述一次学校组织的春游或秋游活动。 4. 看图作文：根据一系列图片，描述一次完整的旅行过程。 核心要素： 时间、地点、人物、事件（经过）、感受。一篇优秀的旅游日记，不仅要写“做了什么”，更要写“看到了什么”和“感受到了什么”。 写日记要注意以下几点： 1. 日记的第一行要写清日期、星期和天气状况。日期和星期写在正文的左上角，月份与星期可以缩写。天气状况写在正文的右上角。如果是游记，还可以写明地点。 2. 日记通常使用过去时记录所发生的事件。若为议论、抒情或描述景物和人，为了生动，也可以使用一般现在时。 3. 日记的正文可以是叙事、描写、说明或议论等形式，且通常用第一人称。 4. 日记虽然是记录事件，但应该适当加一些个人感悟，写出亮点。 写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤： 第一步：介绍事件： 第二步：具体阐述事情经过，补充细节； 第三步：表达感想或总结该事件的意义。 典例： 一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以“A Wonderful Trip”为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容：内容提示： 1. 旅行的时间、地点、出行方式、同行的人…… 2. 旅行中的所见所闻（天气、活动、食物……）； 3. 你的感受。 写作要求： 1. 包括上述所有要点，可作适当发挥，要求语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 词数在90个左右。 A Wonderful Trip _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Wonderful Trip Last week, my parents and I went to Beijing by plane. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s very beautiful. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. We stayed there for four days. The weather was very hot, but I was still excited. The first day, we went to the Great Wall. We were so tired that we couldn’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience. The second day, we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. The third day, we went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. The last day, we bought lots of presents for my grandparents. And we ate many delicious food. Beijing Duck is my favourite. I will never forget this trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作的重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明主题，介绍去北京的时间、地点等； 第二步，具体阐述旅行中的所见所闻； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the capital of……首都 ②go boating划船 ③buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物 [高分句型] ①There are many tall buildings in Beijing.（There be句型） ②We were so tired that we couldn’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心词汇 · travel / trip / journey 旅行 · visit 参观 · tour 游览 · scenery 风景 · sightseeing 观光 2. 行前准备与交通 · go on a trip / make a trip to... 去...旅行 · set out / start off 出发 · by bus/train/subway 乘公交/火车/地铁 · take a taxi 打车 · arrive in/at 到达 · reach / get to 到达 3. 活动与观光动词 · enjoy 享受 · see / watch / look at 看 · climb the mountain 爬山 · row a boat 划船 · take photos/pictures 拍照 · have a picnic 野餐 · buy some souvenirs 买纪念品 · try some local food 品尝当地美食 4. 景点与描述形容词 · place of interest 名胜古迹 · park / square / museum / beach 公园/广场/博物馆/海滩 · beautiful 美丽的 · fantastic 极好的 · amazing 令人惊叹的 · interesting 有趣的 · crowded 拥挤的 · tired but happy 累但快乐着 5. 感受与收获 · have a great/good/wonderful time 玩得很开心 · be excited about... 对...感到兴奋 · be impressed by... 对...印象深刻 · broaden one's horizon 开阔视野 · learn a lot about... 对...了解了很多 · an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 ( 句式积累 ) 1. 开头句（交代背景） · Today was a sunny and warm day. My parents and I went to... 今天天气晴朗温暖，我和父母去了... · I had an unforgettable trip to... with my classmates last Sunday. 上周日我和同学们去...，度过了一次难忘的旅行。 · Early in the morning, we gathered at the school gate and set off for... 一大早，我们在校门口集合，出发前往... 2. 行程叙述句（文章主体，注意连接词和细节） · 时间顺序连接词： · First, ... Then, ... After that, ... Finally, ... · As soon as we arrived, we saw... 我们一到那儿，就看到了... · The next thing we did was... 我们接下来做的是... · 描写所见： · We saw many... such as... and... 我们看到了许多...，比如...和...。 · What impressed me most was... 最让我印象深刻的是... · It was so... that I couldn't help taking out my camera. 它是如此...，我情不自禁地拿出了相机。 · 描写所感： · I felt so excited when I saw... 当我看到...时，我感到非常兴奋。 · We were all amazed by the beautiful scenery. 我们都对这美丽的景色感到惊叹。 3. 结尾句（总结感受与收获） · Although we were tired, we felt very happy. 尽管我们很累，但我们都感到非常开心。 · It was a meaningful trip because I learned a lot about the history of the city. 这是一次有意义的旅行，因为我学到了很多关于这座城市的历史。 · We enjoyed ourselves very much and I hope to visit it again someday. 我们玩得非常开心，我希望有一天能再来这里。 · What a wonderful day we had! 我们度过了多么美好的一天啊！ ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以 “A Wonderful Trip” 为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容： 内容提示： 1. 去了哪里，和谁一起； 2. 去了多久，每天都有些什么活动； 3. 天气怎样，最喜欢的美食； 4. 你的感受。    写作要求： 1. 日记的格式要正确； 2. 语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确，适当发挥； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 假如你是Alice，你和家人“五一”假期自驾游览了牡丹江市旅游打卡地镜泊湖。请根据下面信息，写一篇旅行日记记录旅游经历。 时间 天气 活动 感受 5月1日、2日 晴、有风 1日  欣赏瀑布、赏月、放孔明灯 2日  坐船游湖、野餐、拍照留念 放松…… 写作要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁； 2. 词数90左右。 My Trip on May Day May 2nd __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 假如你是李华，刚度过了一个特别的国庆节(National Day)，请根据提示写篇80-100词的日记。 1.国庆期间，和家人坐火车去重庆旅游。 2.天气多云，凉爽。 3.游览了洪崖洞，千厮门大桥，乘船夜游，吃火锅，购物，拍照。 4.在重庆玩了5天，有点累，但是很开心。 要求： 1.注意日记格式，包含所有信息。 2.语言通顺，行文连贯。 提示：cave(洞)，The Thousand Gates(千厮门），hot pot（火锅) My vacation ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 假如你是李华，这个暑假你和父母乘火车去北京旅游。你们去了很多有意思的地方，玩的非常开心。请你用日记形式将你的旅游经历描述出来，并谈谈自己的感受。 要求： 1. 短文应包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、所在学校或班级名称及地址； 4. 词数：不得少于 70 词。 地点名词参照： 长城：the Great Wall          颐和园：the Summer Place （任选）     故宫：the Palace Museum      北海公园：Beihai Park Wednesday, July 20th                                    Sunny _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请你写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容： 内容提示： (1)去了哪里，和谁一起； (2)去了多久，每天都有些什么活动； (3)天气怎样，最喜欢的美食； (4)你的感受。 写作要求： (1)日记的格式要正确； (2)语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确，适当发挥； (3)文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； (4)不少于80词。 Sunday, August 18th _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） 假如今天是1月30，星期六。你和你的父母参观了一个以旧居而闻名的小镇。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语日记，记录你这次的旅游经历。 提示：1. How was the weather today? 2. How did you go to the town? 3. What did you do there? 要求：1. 短文应包含以上要点，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数70左右（日记格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 假设你和家人4月5号到北京旅游，根据下面所给表格内容写一篇日记，介绍一下你们的旅游经历。 How was your trip? Wonderful. How did you go to Beijing? By train. How long did you stay there? For six days. What did you see? Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, the Great Wall. What did you do? Climbing the Great Wall. What did you eat? Beijing Roast Duck. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （8） 2024年5月17日，习近平总书记指出，近年来，我国旅游发展步入快车道，成功走出了一条独具特色的中国旅游发展之路。加快建设旅游强国，让旅游业更好服务美好生活、促进经济发展、构筑精神家园，离不开每个人的努力。作为青少年的我们，更应该走在队伍的前列。请结合习总书记的讲话，联系你的生活实际，写一次你到某地的旅行。 要点： 1.描述一次旅行的经过。 2.旅行中遇到的问题，以及带给你的影响和启发。 要求： 1.文中不能出现真实的姓名、地名、学校； 2.语言通顺，表达正确，要点齐全，适当补充； 3.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：pay a visit to...去某地的旅行；make our economy stronger 使得我们国家的经济实力强大；build our spiritual home 构建我们的精神家园；make an effort to do sth 努力做某事 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频话题17 旅游日记 同步写作课讲义 “旅游日记”是中考记叙文写作的经典话题。它要求学生能以第一人称的口吻，清晰、生动地描述一次旅行经历。这不仅考察学生的语言能力，也考察其观察力、感受力和叙事能力。 命题方向通常包括： 1. 纯日记形式：直接以日记格式命题，如“请以你的一次旅行经历为题，写一篇日记”。 2. 游记叙述：要求描述一次参观/游览某个地方（如公园、博物馆、城市）的经历。 3. 活动报道：记述一次学校组织的春游或秋游活动。 4. 看图作文：根据一系列图片，描述一次完整的旅行过程。 核心要素： 时间、地点、人物、事件（经过）、感受。一篇优秀的旅游日记，不仅要写“做了什么”，更要写“看到了什么”和“感受到了什么”。 写日记要注意以下几点： 1. 日记的第一行要写清日期、星期和天气状况。日期和星期写在正文的左上角，月份与星期可以缩写。天气状况写在正文的右上角。如果是游记，还可以写明地点。 2. 日记通常使用过去时记录所发生的事件。若为议论、抒情或描述景物和人，为了生动，也可以使用一般现在时。 3. 日记的正文可以是叙事、描写、说明或议论等形式，且通常用第一人称。 4. 日记虽然是记录事件，但应该适当加一些个人感悟，写出亮点。 写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤： 第一步：介绍事件： 第二步：具体阐述事情经过，补充细节； 第三步：表达感想或总结该事件的意义。 典例： 一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以“A Wonderful Trip”为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容：内容提示： 1. 旅行的时间、地点、出行方式、同行的人…… 2. 旅行中的所见所闻（天气、活动、食物……）； 3. 你的感受。 写作要求： 1. 包括上述所有要点，可作适当发挥，要求语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 词数在90个左右。 A Wonderful Trip _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Wonderful Trip Last week, my parents and I went to Beijing by plane. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s very beautiful. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. We stayed there for four days. The weather was very hot, but I was still excited. The first day, we went to the Great Wall. We were so tired that we couldn’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience. The second day, we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. The third day, we went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. The last day, we bought lots of presents for my grandparents. And we ate many delicious food. Beijing Duck is my favourite. I will never forget this trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作的重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明主题，介绍去北京的时间、地点等； 第二步，具体阐述旅行中的所见所闻； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the capital of……首都 ②go boating划船 ③buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物 [高分句型] ①There are many tall buildings in Beijing.（There be句型） ②We were so tired that we couldn’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心词汇 · travel / trip / journey 旅行 · visit 参观 · tour 游览 · scenery 风景 · sightseeing 观光 2. 行前准备与交通 · go on a trip / make a trip to... 去...旅行 · set out / start off 出发 · by bus/train/subway 乘公交/火车/地铁 · take a taxi 打车 · arrive in/at 到达 · reach / get to 到达 3. 活动与观光动词 · enjoy 享受 · see / watch / look at 看 · climb the mountain 爬山 · row a boat 划船 · take photos/pictures 拍照 · have a picnic 野餐 · buy some souvenirs 买纪念品 · try some local food 品尝当地美食 4. 景点与描述形容词 · place of interest 名胜古迹 · park / square / museum / beach 公园/广场/博物馆/海滩 · beautiful 美丽的 · fantastic 极好的 · amazing 令人惊叹的 · interesting 有趣的 · crowded 拥挤的 · tired but happy 累但快乐着 5. 感受与收获 · have a great/good/wonderful time 玩得很开心 · be excited about... 对...感到兴奋 · be impressed by... 对...印象深刻 · broaden one's horizon 开阔视野 · learn a lot about... 对...了解了很多 · an unforgettable experience 一次难忘的经历 ( 句式积累 ) 1. 开头句（交代背景） · Today was a sunny and warm day. My parents and I went to... 今天天气晴朗温暖，我和父母去了... · I had an unforgettable trip to... with my classmates last Sunday. 上周日我和同学们去...，度过了一次难忘的旅行。 · Early in the morning, we gathered at the school gate and set off for... 一大早，我们在校门口集合，出发前往... 2. 行程叙述句（文章主体，注意连接词和细节） · 时间顺序连接词： · First, ... Then, ... After that, ... Finally, ... · As soon as we arrived, we saw... 我们一到那儿，就看到了... · The next thing we did was... 我们接下来做的是... · 描写所见： · We saw many... such as... and... 我们看到了许多...，比如...和...。 · What impressed me most was... 最让我印象深刻的是... · It was so... that I couldn't help taking out my camera. 它是如此...，我情不自禁地拿出了相机。 · 描写所感： · I felt so excited when I saw... 当我看到...时，我感到非常兴奋。 · We were all amazed by the beautiful scenery. 我们都对这美丽的景色感到惊叹。 3. 结尾句（总结感受与收获） · Although we were tired, we felt very happy. 尽管我们很累，但我们都感到非常开心。 · It was a meaningful trip because I learned a lot about the history of the city. 这是一次有意义的旅行，因为我学到了很多关于这座城市的历史。 · We enjoyed ourselves very much and I hope to visit it again someday. 我们玩得非常开心，我希望有一天能再来这里。 · What a wonderful day we had! 我们度过了多么美好的一天啊！ ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请以 “A Wonderful Trip” 为话题写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容： 内容提示： 1. 去了哪里，和谁一起； 2. 去了多久，每天都有些什么活动； 3. 天气怎样，最喜欢的美食； 4. 你的感受。    写作要求： 1. 日记的格式要正确； 2. 语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确，适当发挥； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 不少于80词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Wonderful Trip Friday, August 18th Last week, my parents and I went to Beijing by plane. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s very beautiful. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. We satyed there for four days. The weather was very hot, but I was still excited. The first day, we went to the Great Wall. We were so tired that we can’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience. The second day, we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace museum. The third day, we went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. The last day, we bought lots of presents for my grandparents. And We ate many delicious food, Beijing Duck is my favourite. I will never forget this trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记； ② 时态：一般过去时为主； ③ 提示：注意日记格式，内容提示已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单叙述和谁去了哪里； 第二步，具体叙述每天的活动、天气和最喜欢的食物； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① the capital of ……的首都 ② buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物 [高分句型] ① There are many tall buildings in Beijing. （There be句型） ② We were so tired that we can’t say a word, but we had a wonderful experience. （so...that引导的结果状语从句） （2） 假如你是Alice，你和家人“五一”假期自驾游览了牡丹江市旅游打卡地镜泊湖。请根据下面信息，写一篇旅行日记记录旅游经历。 时间 天气 活动 感受 5月1日、2日 晴、有风 1日  欣赏瀑布、赏月、放孔明灯 2日  坐船游湖、野餐、拍照留念 放松…… 写作要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁； 2. 词数90左右。 My Trip on May Day May 2nd __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Trip on May Day May 2nd This May Day, I went to Jingpo Lake with my family by car. On May 1st, it was sunny and windy, so we decided to watch the waterfall. It was very wonderful. In the evening, we admired the moon with a lot of people on the beach near our hotel and we also sent out the sky lanterns there. It was very exciting to watch them slowly rise into the air. The next day, we went boating on the lake. There were many people there. We enjoyed beautiful mountains and water along the way. It was very relaxing. At noon, we had a picnic under the trees. The air was very fresh. We enjoyed ourselves. We took quite a few photos there. Although we felt very tired, we were very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇日记； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍5月1日的旅游经历； 第二步，介绍5月2日的旅游经历； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②a lot of许多 ③enjoy oneself玩得开心 ④quite a few相当多 [高分句型] ①There were many people there.（There be句型） ②Although we felt very tired, we were very happy.（让步状语从句） （3） 假如你是李华，刚度过了一个特别的国庆节(National Day)，请根据提示写篇80-100词的日记。 1.国庆期间，和家人坐火车去重庆旅游。 2.天气多云，凉爽。 3.游览了洪崖洞，千厮门大桥，乘船夜游，吃火锅，购物，拍照。 4.在重庆玩了5天，有点累，但是很开心。 要求： 1.注意日记格式，包含所有信息。 2.语言通顺，行文连贯。 提示：cave(洞)，The Thousand Gates(千厮门），hot pot（火锅) My vacation ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sunday 7th Oct My vacation This summer vacation, I took a trip to Chongqing with my parents. We took a train there. The weather there was cloudy and cool. First, we visited Hongya cave. We also went to the Thousand Gates. During the daytime, it was so hot that we kept drinking water. In the evening, we arrived at Chaotianmen Wharf and enjoyed the beautiful scenery of Chongqing at night. As for food, we liked hotpot. We also went shopping and bought something special for our relatives. We took quite a few photos. During the five days’ stay in Chongqing, we felt a little tired, but happy. What a wonderful trip! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇日记； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍假期和家人去了重庆； 第二步，具体阐述在重庆期间游览的景点及做了哪些事情； 第三步，总结重庆之旅的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②quite a few很多 ③keep doing sth不停做某事 [高分句型] ①During the daytime, it was so hot that we kept drinking water. (so...that句型) ②What a wonderful trip! (感叹句) （4） 假如你是李华，这个暑假你和父母乘火车去北京旅游。你们去了很多有意思的地方，玩的非常开心。请你用日记形式将你的旅游经历描述出来，并谈谈自己的感受。 要求： 1. 短文应包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、所在学校或班级名称及地址； 4. 词数：不得少于 70 词。 地点名词参照： 长城：the Great Wall          颐和园：the Summer Place （任选）     故宫：the Palace Museum      北海公园：Beihai Park Wednesday, July 20th                                    Sunny _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Wednesday, July 20th                          Sunny Today, I had a wonderful trip to Beijing with my parents by train. We visited many interesting places and had a great time. In the morning, we went to the Great Wall. It was very long and magnificent. We took a lot of photos there. In the afternoon, we visited the Palace Museum. It was very beautiful and we learned a lot about Chinese history. Then, we went to Beihai Park. The scenery there was very beautiful and we enjoyed ourselves very much. I felt very happy and excited during this trip. I hope to visit Beijing again in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇日记； ②时态：主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示完成写作，介绍自己去北京旅游的经历；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍旅行的总体情况； 第二步，详细描述去的具体景点及活动； 第三步，表达自己的感受和希望。 [亮点词汇] ① have a great time 玩得开心 ② take a lot of photos 拍了很多照片 ③ learn about了解 ④ hope to do 希望做某事 [高分句型] ① The scenery there was very beautiful and we enjoyed ourselves very much. (and连接的并列句) （5） 一次旅游，一次经历，一次成长，一段美好的回忆。把点滴记录，把所感留存！请你写一篇旅游日记，包括以下内容： 内容提示： (1)去了哪里，和谁一起； (2)去了多久，每天都有些什么活动； (3)天气怎样，最喜欢的美食； (4)你的感受。 写作要求： (1)日记的格式要正确； (2)语意连贯、语言流畅、语法正确，适当发挥； (3)文中不得使用真实姓名及学校名称； (4)不少于80词。 Sunday, August 18th _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Sunday, August 18th     Last week, my family and I visited Hangzhou. We traveled by train and stayed there for three days. The weather was pleasant and sunny, perfect for exploring. On the first day, we visited the scenic West Lake, where we took a boat ride. The next day, we explored the Lingyin Temple, which was both serene and enlightening. On the final day, we walked through the bustling streets of the city and enjoyed the local food. My favorite was the Hangzhou-style Dongpo Pork, which was delicious. This trip was memorable, and I felt it deepened my appreciation for history and culture. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇日记； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍和父母去了杭州旅行； 第二步，接着具体阐述在杭州看了哪些风景，吃了哪些美食； 第三步，最后书写结语，表达旅行的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①serene and enlightening宁静而富有启发性 ②walk through走过 ③Last week上周 [高分句型] ①On the first day, we visited the scenic West Lake, where we took a boat ride. (where引导的定语从句) ②The next day, we explored the Lingyin Temple, which was both serene and enlightening. (which引导的定语从句) （6） 假如今天是1月30，星期六。你和你的父母参观了一个以旧居而闻名的小镇。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语日记，记录你这次的旅游经历。 提示：1. How was the weather today? 2. How did you go to the town? 3. What did you do there? 要求：1. 短文应包含以上要点，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数70左右（日记格式已给出，不计入总词数）。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： January 30th    Sunny Today the weather is fine. I went to a famous Chinese town with my parents. We went there by bus. It took us an hour to get there. The town is very beautiful. There are many old houses. In these houses, we could see many old trees. They are very tall. There are also many gardens with beautiful flowers. Though the houses are very old, they are still very strong. We visited them in the morning. And we had lunch in a restaurant. The food was delicious. Though I was a little tired, I was very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示问题介绍自己这次的旅游经历，注意要点齐全，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍今天的天气，旅行的地点，交通方式及时间； 第二步，介绍具体的活动内容； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①by bus坐公交 ②in the morning在早上 ③have lunch吃午餐 [高分句型] ①There are also many gardens with beautiful flowers.（there be句型） ②Though the houses are very old, they are still very strong.（though引导让步状语从句） （7） 假设你和家人4月5号到北京旅游，根据下面所给表格内容写一篇日记，介绍一下你们的旅游经历。 How was your trip? Wonderful. How did you go to Beijing? By train. How long did you stay there? For six days. What did you see? Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, the Great Wall. What did you do? Climbing the Great Wall. What did you eat? Beijing Roast Duck. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】On April 5th, my family and I went on a tour to Beijing .We went to Beijing by train. And we stayed there for six days. we first went to the heart of China-Tian’anmen Square.It is one of the largest squares in the world. On one side of the square is the Great Hall of the People and on the other side is the Museum of Chinese History. A lot of people from all over the world come to visit the square every day.Then we went to the Forbidden City,I thought that was really beautiful The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are! Next two days we visited the Palace Museum and felt excited. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum, you can go to Beijing and have a look.On the last day ,we visited the Great Wall. It is very long and old.. It has millions of bricks. Each brick is very big and heavy. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall.but I was happybecause I know the chinese saying：One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero！ As for food, I thought Beijing Roast Duck was tasty. I like it very much. I really enjoyed the trip to Beijing. 【详解】试题分析：这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。本文是一篇描述假期旅游的文章，所以主要时态是过去时态。当在描写景点时，可以根据需要用一般现在时。人称主要是采用第一人称复数。在写作时注意把景点描述全，同时适当发挥补充一些相关内容，是文章饱满，丰富。注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】这篇短文所给材料直接，不易发挥。但作者详细的描述了各景点的特色，可见英语基础的扎实。同时引用谚语One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero！不到长城非好汉。更给文章增色不少。为了写好文章，平时就要多积累一些词汇，名言等。 （8） 2024年5月17日，习近平总书记指出，近年来，我国旅游发展步入快车道，成功走出了一条独具特色的中国旅游发展之路。加快建设旅游强国，让旅游业更好服务美好生活、促进经济发展、构筑精神家园，离不开每个人的努力。作为青少年的我们，更应该走在队伍的前列。请结合习总书记的讲话，联系你的生活实际，写一次你到某地的旅行。 要点： 1.描述一次旅行的经过。 2.旅行中遇到的问题，以及带给你的影响和启发。 要求： 1.文中不能出现真实的姓名、地名、学校； 2.语言通顺，表达正确，要点齐全，适当补充； 3.词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：pay a visit to...去某地的旅行；make our economy stronger 使得我们国家的经济实力强大；build our spiritual home 构建我们的精神家园；make an effort to do sth 努力做某事 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Last weekend, I paid a visit to the Great Wall with my family. Climbing up the steps, I felt the history breathing in every brick. The view from the top was wonderful, making me proud of our country’s ancient achievements. During the trip, we got lost in the path. It was scary at first, but we worked together to find our way out. This taught me that when we face challenges, a team can turn difficulties into valuable lessons. The Great Wall not only increased my love for our country but also inspired me to make an effort to protect it. As a young person, I realize my role in building our spiritual home and making our economy stronger. I’ll continue to share my experiences and encourage others to explore more of our beautiful country. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己去的景点。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述旅行经过和遇到的问题。 第三步，书写结语，描述影响和启发。 [亮点词汇] ①wonderful美妙的 ②valuable有价值的 ③encourage鼓励 [高分句型] ①This taught me that when we face challenges, a team can turn difficulties into valuable lessons. （宾语从句） ②The Great Wall not only increased my love for our country but also inspired me to make an effort to protect it.（not only...but also...句型） ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $