高频话题15 情感与情绪（同步写作讲义）英语八年级通用版

高频话题15 情感与情绪 同步写作课讲义 常见命题形式： 1. 叙事抒情：描述一件让你感到开心/感动/遗憾/成长……的事。 · 例：An Unforgettable Day（难忘的一天） · 例：A Thankful Heart（一颗感恩的心） · 例：The Moment I Felt Proud（我为自己感到骄傲的时刻） 2. 观点论述：谈论你对某种情感（如幸福、友谊、勇气）的看法。 · 例：What Is True Happiness?（什么是真正的幸福？） · 例：The Importance of Smiling（微笑的重要性） 3. 应用文体：在书信、邮件中表达情感。 · 例：写一封感谢信给老师/父母/朋友。 · 例：写邮件安慰考试失利的朋友。 审题指导“三步走” 第一步：确定核心情感 · 仔细阅读题目，圈出关键词（如 happy, moved, thankful, proud, sorry）。 · 明确主旨：你这篇文章最终要传达的核心情感是什么？全文都要围绕这种情感展开。 第二步：锁定关联事件 · 思考哪件或哪几件具体的事例最能体现这种核心情感。 · 原则：事件不求大，但求真实、具体、有细节。 · 错误：My mother is great. I love her very much.（空洞） · 正确：The night before the exam, my mother brought me a cup of warm milk and said, “Don’t be nervous. I believe in you.” That moment, I felt...（具体） 第三步：规划情感脉络 · 情感很少是单一的。可以设计一个简单的情感变化过程，使文章更真实、丰满。 · 常用脉络： · 先抑后扬：nervous (紧张) → encouraged (受鼓励) → confident (自信) · 由悲转喜：sad/disappointed (难过/失望) → comforted (被安慰) → moved/hopeful (感动/充满希望) · 感悟成长：angry/confused (生气惑) → understood/realized (理解/明白) → grateful/peaceful (感激/平静) 典例： 汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。 要求： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to share a heartwarming memory. Last Mid-Autumn Festival, my whole family gathered on our balcony to admire the full moon. My grandmother told the legend of Chang’e, while my father played the guitar softly. My younger brother and I helped mother arrange mooncakes and fruits on the table. The silver moonlight mixed with the golden lantern light created a magical atmosphere. This memory includes my parents, grandmother, brother and me. Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift. The shared laughter and stories under the moonlight will forever warm my heart. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头点名主题；   第二步，分享一件家里发生的有意义的事情； 第三步，表达自己的感受。   [亮点词汇]   ①admire the full moon 赏月 ②silver moonlight 银色月光 ③be happy to do sth开心做某事 [高分句型]   ①Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift.（though引导让步状语从句）   ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心情感词汇 高兴 happy, glad joyful, delighted, cheerful, pleased 感动 moved touched, warmed (感到温暖的) 兴奋 excited thrilled, overjoyed (欣喜若狂的) 自豪 proud a sense of pride (自豪感) 感激 thankful grateful, appreciated (感激的) 伤心 sad upset, sorrowful (悲伤的) 紧张 nervous anxious, stressed 害怕 afraid scared, frightened 生气 angry mad, annoyed (恼怒的) 遗憾 sorry regretful (后悔的) 孤单 lonely a sense of loneliness (孤独感) 有信心 confident a sense of confidence (信心) 2. 实用短语 · be filled with joy / happiness 充满快乐 · tears of joy 喜悦的泪水 · a smile on one’s face 某人脸上的微笑 · burst into tears 放声大哭 · cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 · be proud of 为……感到自豪 · be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事感激某人 · from the bottom of my heart 从我心底里 · lose one‘s confidence 失去信心 · face the difficulty bravely 勇敢面对困难 ( 句式积累 ) 1. 描述事件起因（为什么会有这个情绪） · The reason why I was so moved is that... （我如此感动的原因是……） · I will never forget the day when... （我永远忘不了……的那一天。） · What happened today made me feel... （今天发生的事让我感到……） 2. 描述内心感受（核心段） · Upon hearing the news, I felt so excited that I could hardly say a word. （一听到这个消息，我激动得几乎说不出话。） · My heart was beating fast with a mix of nervousness and excitement. （我的心因紧张和兴奋而砰砰直跳。） · A warm current flowed through my body. （一股暖流涌遍全身。） · Tears came to my eyes, but they were tears of happiness. （泪水涌入我的眼眶，但那是幸福的泪水。） · All my worry and anxiety disappeared at that moment. （我所有的担忧和焦虑在那一刻都消失了。） · I felt as if I were on top of the world. （我感觉自己仿佛站在了世界之巅。） 3. 表达观点与感悟（升华段） · This experience made me realize that... （这次经历让我意识到……） · I came to understand the true meaning of... （我开始理解……的真正含义。） · From then on, I have learned to... （从那时起，我学会了……） · I will always remember this feeling and treasure it in my heart. （我会永远铭记这份感受，并将其珍藏在心。） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） Write at least 60 words on the topic “The ________ person I have ever met.”（在生活中你每天都在遇见不同的人，有些人擦肩而过，消失在茫茫人海中；而有些人却会令你印象深刻。请结合一件具体事例，以“我遇见过的最________的人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。写作前先把题目补充完整。） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则是不予评分） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以 “珍惜” 为主题的演讲比赛，请根据以下图示，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要求： 1. 演讲稿必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word Bank: respect v. 尊敬 Value Important Things Around Us Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. Life is colorful. There are many important things we should value in our daily life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening. （3） 假如你是李华，马上就要毕业了，回首在Shine U学校的三年，你一定有很多收获，也有很多话要说： 1. 你在学校里学到了什么？ 2. 你想感谢谁？为什么感谢？ 3. 你有什么希望或者祝福？ 请根据以上提示，写一封信，表达你对学校、老师、同学的感谢之情及祝福。 写作要求： 1. 信件内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 3. 词数80左右。 Dear ______, How time flies! We’ll leave our lovely school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely Li Hua （4） 在我们的生活中，总会有一些特别的物件或事情，它们或许微不足道，却能在我们的记忆中留下深刻的印记；这些特别的存在，或许是一本书、一张照片、一个礼物，或许是一次旅行、一次比赛、一次与朋友的相聚，甚至是一次失败或挫折。它们之所以特别，是因为它们与我们的人生经历紧密相连，承载着我们的情感、回忆和成长。现在，请你以“A Special Thing in My Life”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍你生活中那个特别的物件或记叙你生命中那件特别的事情。 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 幸福是什么？幸福是热气腾腾的早餐，幸福是失意时的鼓励，幸福是奋斗后的喜悦，幸福是你孤独时父母的陪伴，幸福是在你遇到困难时朋友伸出的援手……我们在生活中会经历很多令我们幸福和快乐的事情。请以“One Happy Thing in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文分享你的经历。 写作要点： （1）叙述让你感到幸福的一件事情； （2）阐明此事让你感到幸福的原因。 写作要求： （1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； （3）词数不少于80词。 One Happy Thing in My Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） 假如你是李华，你们学校英语角留言板本月的主题为“致我最想感谢的人”，请根据所给提示，用英语写一则留言，谈谈你最想感谢谁，以及你感谢他/她的理由。 提示问题：●Who do you want to thank? ●Why do you want to thank him/ her? 提示词语：support, encourage, advice, helpful, patience 注意：（1）提示词语仅供选用。 （2）短文不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 This is a thank-you note to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 成长路上，父母之爱如涓涓细流，藏于日常点滴。那些他们日复一日坚持的小事，却常被我们忽略。为引导同学们感悟亲情、学会感恩，校刊英语专栏以“Discovering My Parents’ Hidden Love”为题发起征文。请结合个人经历，从这些事情中任选一件或几件进行简述，并谈谈你现在对这份爱的感悟，然后分享你将如何用行动回报父母的恩情。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．仔细读题，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3．图中提示部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 4．文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 Discovering My Parents’ Hidden Love ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （8） 父亲如巍峨山脉，沉默却坚实。父爱似永不熄灭的灯塔，在深夜照亮归途。没有父亲的辛苦付出，就没有我们现在的生活。父亲节即将来临，假如你是Li Hua，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向父亲表达自己的感谢之情。 内容要点： 1．What do you want to say to him? 2．What was the most unforgettable thing between you and your father? 3．How will you thank him on Father’s Day? 要求： 1．内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2．不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3．词数100左右。作文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad, Father’s Day is coming! I am writing ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Li Hua （9） Write a passage according to the information given. (30—50 words) 初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，假如你是李华，请给你的老师写一张感谢卡，表达感激之情和美好祝福！ Dear Miss Liu, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua （10） 在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母、老师、同学等。题目要求考生以“The Person I Want to Express My Thanks”为题，介绍自己最想感谢的人。 (1) 你感恩的人；(2) 简单介绍这个人 (相貌、性格、特点等)；(3) 叙述他／她对你影响最深的一件事；(4) 你想怎样感谢他／她。 The Person I Want to Express My Thanks ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （11） 友谊是人生中重要的一部分。真正的朋友能分享快乐，在困难时给予帮助和鼓励。最近，你们学校英语俱乐部围绕“怎样才算好朋友? ”展开了讨论。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇短文, 谈谈你的看法。 内容包括： 1. 好朋友应具备的品质（诚实、善良……）; 2. 你与朋友之间的真实经历; 3. 如何维持牢固的友谊（提出1-2条建议）。 注意: 1. 词数为80词左右; 2. 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 4. 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 参考词汇: trust（v. 信任）, support（v. 支持）, communicate（v. 沟通）, unforgettable（adj. 难忘的） A good friend is like a shining star in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频话题15 情感与情绪 同步写作课讲义 常见命题形式： 1. 叙事抒情：描述一件让你感到开心/感动/遗憾/成长……的事。 · 例：An Unforgettable Day（难忘的一天） · 例：A Thankful Heart（一颗感恩的心） · 例：The Moment I Felt Proud（我为自己感到骄傲的时刻） 2. 观点论述：谈论你对某种情感（如幸福、友谊、勇气）的看法。 · 例：What Is True Happiness?（什么是真正的幸福？） · 例：The Importance of Smiling（微笑的重要性） 3. 应用文体：在书信、邮件中表达情感。 · 例：写一封感谢信给老师/父母/朋友。 · 例：写邮件安慰考试失利的朋友。 审题指导“三步走” 第一步：确定核心情感 · 仔细阅读题目，圈出关键词（如 happy, moved, thankful, proud, sorry）。 · 明确主旨：你这篇文章最终要传达的核心情感是什么？全文都要围绕这种情感展开。 第二步：锁定关联事件 · 思考哪件或哪几件具体的事例最能体现这种核心情感。 · 原则：事件不求大，但求真实、具体、有细节。 · 错误：My mother is great. I love her very much.（空洞） · 正确：The night before the exam, my mother brought me a cup of warm milk and said, “Don’t be nervous. I believe in you.” That moment, I felt...（具体） 第三步：规划情感脉络 · 情感很少是单一的。可以设计一个简单的情感变化过程，使文章更真实、丰满。 · 常用脉络： · 先抑后扬：nervous (紧张) → encouraged (受鼓励) → confident (自信) · 由悲转喜：sad/disappointed (难过/失望) → comforted (被安慰) → moved/hopeful (感动/充满希望) · 感悟成长：angry/confused (生气惑) → understood/realized (理解/明白) → grateful/peaceful (感激/平静) 典例： 汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。 要求： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Family Memories Hi, everyone. I am very happy to share a heartwarming memory. Last Mid-Autumn Festival, my whole family gathered on our balcony to admire the full moon. My grandmother told the legend of Chang’e, while my father played the guitar softly. My younger brother and I helped mother arrange mooncakes and fruits on the table. The silver moonlight mixed with the golden lantern light created a magical atmosphere. This memory includes my parents, grandmother, brother and me. Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift. The shared laughter and stories under the moonlight will forever warm my heart. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头点名主题；   第二步，分享一件家里发生的有意义的事情； 第三步，表达自己的感受。   [亮点词汇]   ①admire the full moon 赏月 ②silver moonlight 银色月光 ③be happy to do sth开心做某事 [高分句型]   ①Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift.（though引导让步状语从句）   ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 核心情感词汇 高兴 happy, glad joyful, delighted, cheerful, pleased 感动 moved touched, warmed (感到温暖的) 兴奋 excited thrilled, overjoyed (欣喜若狂的) 自豪 proud a sense of pride (自豪感) 感激 thankful grateful, appreciated (感激的) 伤心 sad upset, sorrowful (悲伤的) 紧张 nervous anxious, stressed 害怕 afraid scared, frightened 生气 angry mad, annoyed (恼怒的) 遗憾 sorry regretful (后悔的) 孤单 lonely a sense of loneliness (孤独感) 有信心 confident a sense of confidence (信心) 2. 实用短语 · be filled with joy / happiness 充满快乐 · tears of joy 喜悦的泪水 · a smile on one’s face 某人脸上的微笑 · burst into tears 放声大哭 · cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 · be proud of 为……感到自豪 · be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事感激某人 · from the bottom of my heart 从我心底里 · lose one‘s confidence 失去信心 · face the difficulty bravely 勇敢面对困难 ( 句式积累 ) 1. 描述事件起因（为什么会有这个情绪） · The reason why I was so moved is that... （我如此感动的原因是……） · I will never forget the day when... （我永远忘不了……的那一天。） · What happened today made me feel... （今天发生的事让我感到……） 2. 描述内心感受（核心段） · Upon hearing the news, I felt so excited that I could hardly say a word. （一听到这个消息，我激动得几乎说不出话。） · My heart was beating fast with a mix of nervousness and excitement. （我的心因紧张和兴奋而砰砰直跳。） · A warm current flowed through my body. （一股暖流涌遍全身。） · Tears came to my eyes, but they were tears of happiness. （泪水涌入我的眼眶，但那是幸福的泪水。） · All my worry and anxiety disappeared at that moment. （我所有的担忧和焦虑在那一刻都消失了。） · I felt as if I were on top of the world. （我感觉自己仿佛站在了世界之巅。） 3. 表达观点与感悟（升华段） · This experience made me realize that... （这次经历让我意识到……） · I came to understand the true meaning of... （我开始理解……的真正含义。） · From then on, I have learned to... （从那时起，我学会了……） · I will always remember this feeling and treasure it in my heart. （我会永远铭记这份感受，并将其珍藏在心。） ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） Write at least 60 words on the topic “The ________ person I have ever met.”（在生活中你每天都在遇见不同的人，有些人擦肩而过，消失在茫茫人海中；而有些人却会令你印象深刻。请结合一件具体事例，以“我遇见过的最________的人”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。写作前先把题目补充完整。） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则是不予评分） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The kindest person I have ever met The kindest person I have ever met was an old man at a bus stop. One rainy day, I saw a woman struggling to push her broken bicycle. Without hesitation, the old man offered to help. He pushed the heavy bike for her all the way to a repair shop, even though his clothes got wet. His warm smile and selfless act touched me deeply. That day, I learned that true kindness makes the world brighter. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍事情发展的具体经历； 第二步，分享感想。 [亮点词汇] ①without hesitation没有犹豫 ②offered to do主动提出要做 ③selfless act无私的行为 [高分句型] That day, I learned that true kindness makes the world brighter.（宾语从句） （2） 漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以 “珍惜” 为主题的演讲比赛，请根据以下图示，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要求： 1. 演讲稿必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word Bank: respect v. 尊敬 Value Important Things Around Us Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. Life is colorful. There are many important things we should value in our daily life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening. 【答案】例文： Value Important Things Around Us Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua. Life is colorful. There are many important things we should value in our daily life. First, we should value our lives. We should stay away from dangerous things like fire. We should pay attention to our safety. Second, we should value our health. We should do much exercise and get enough sleep. Third, we should value our family and communicate with them more. We should show love and respect for the elderly. For friends, we should trust each other and help them in need. We should get on well with them. Lastly, we should value the time and make good plans for our study. Don’t waste time on useless things. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。 ② 时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”。 ③ 提示：根据提示写作，不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接给出的开头，另起一段； 第二步：介绍如何珍惜生命、健康、家人、朋友以及时间等； 第三步：承接给出的结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①show love and respect for 对……表达爱和尊重 ②each other 彼此 ③make good plans 制定好的计划 [高分句型] Don’t waste time on useless things. (祈使句) （3） 假如你是李华，马上就要毕业了，回首在Shine U学校的三年，你一定有很多收获，也有很多话要说： 1. 你在学校里学到了什么？ 2. 你想感谢谁？为什么感谢？ 3. 你有什么希望或者祝福？ 请根据以上提示，写一封信，表达你对学校、老师、同学的感谢之情及祝福。 写作要求： 1. 信件内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 3. 词数80左右。 Dear ______, How time flies! We’ll leave our lovely school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear teachers and classmates, How time flies! We’ll leave our lovely school. These three years at Shine U School have been wonderful. I’ve learned not only knowledge but also how to be a kind and helpful person. I want to thank my teachers most. They always encouraged me when I faced difficulties and helped me solve problems. Their patience and love made me grow. I also want to thank my classmates for their friendship and support. I hope our school will be better and better. May all teachers be healthy and happy. Wish my classmates have a bright future! Sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，回顾过去，阐述收获； 第二步，介绍最想感谢的人及原因； 第三步，书写结语，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage鼓励 ②want to do sth.想要做某事 ③better and better越来越好 [高分句型] ①I’ve learned not only knowledge but also how to be a kind and helpful person. (not only...but also...并列短语的使用) ②I hope our school will be better and better. (省略that的宾语从句) （4） 在我们的生活中，总会有一些特别的物件或事情，它们或许微不足道，却能在我们的记忆中留下深刻的印记；这些特别的存在，或许是一本书、一张照片、一个礼物，或许是一次旅行、一次比赛、一次与朋友的相聚，甚至是一次失败或挫折。它们之所以特别，是因为它们与我们的人生经历紧密相连，承载着我们的情感、回忆和成长。现在，请你以“A Special Thing in My Life”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍你生活中那个特别的物件或记叙你生命中那件特别的事情。 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Special Thing in My Life In my life, there’s a special thing — a handmade notebook. It was a gift from my best friend on my 12th birthday. The cover is decorated with our photos and doodles. Inside, there are pages full of her encouraging words, our shared jokes, and plans for future adventures. Whenever I flip through it, I’m flooded with warm memories. This notebook isn’t just paper and words; it’s a symbol of our unbreakable friendship. It reminds me of the joy of pure companionship and how true friends shape our lives. Every time I look at it, I’m determined to cherish our bond forever. It will always hold a precious place in my heart, reminding me of the beauty of sincere connections. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：围绕题目要求，介绍生活中特别的物件“手工笔记本”，通过其承载的友谊回忆体现情感价值。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，直接引出特别物件“手工笔记本”； 第二步，详细叙述笔记本的来源（朋友生日礼物）、外观细节（贴照片涂鸦的封面）及内页内容（鼓励话语、共同回忆），并结合翻笔记本时的情感体验展开； 第三步，结尾升华主题，将笔记本升华为友谊象征，强调其对自己的意义及珍惜之情。 [亮点词汇] ①handmade手工制作的 ②decorate装饰 ③unbreakable牢不可破的 ④cherish珍惜 [高分句型] ①Whenever I flip through it, I’m flooded with warm memories.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②This notebook isn’t just paper and words; it’s a symbol of our unbreakable friendship.（“not just...; it’s...”的对比结构） （5） 幸福是什么？幸福是热气腾腾的早餐，幸福是失意时的鼓励，幸福是奋斗后的喜悦，幸福是你孤独时父母的陪伴，幸福是在你遇到困难时朋友伸出的援手……我们在生活中会经历很多令我们幸福和快乐的事情。请以“One Happy Thing in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文分享你的经历。 写作要点： （1）叙述让你感到幸福的一件事情； （2）阐明此事让你感到幸福的原因。 写作要求： （1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； （3）词数不少于80词。 One Happy Thing in My Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 One Happy Thing in My Life One of the happiest moments in my life was when my best friend surprised me on my birthday last year. I thought everyone had forgotten because no one mentioned it at school. But when I got home, I found my friend waiting outside my door with a small cake and handmade gifts. This made me incredibly happy for two reasons. First, I realized how much my friend cared about me—they remembered the date when even I felt overlooked. Second, their effort to prepare everything secretly showed true friendship. That day taught me that happiness often comes from small, sincere gestures rather than grand things. Even now, remembering that surprise fills me with warmth. It wasn’t just about the gifts; it was the feeling of being valued that made it special. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作提示中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述让自己感到幸福的一件事情； 第二步，具体介绍自己感到幸福的原因； 第三步，书写结尾，总结升华。 [亮点词汇] ①incredibly难以置信地 ②rather than而不是 [高分句型] ①One of the happiest moments in my life was when my best friend surprised me on my birthday last year.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②That day taught me that happiness often comes from small, sincere gestures rather than grand things.（宾语从句） （6） 假如你是李华，你们学校英语角留言板本月的主题为“致我最想感谢的人”，请根据所给提示，用英语写一则留言，谈谈你最想感谢谁，以及你感谢他/她的理由。 提示问题：●Who do you want to thank? ●Why do you want to thank him/ her? 提示词语：support, encourage, advice, helpful, patience 注意：（1）提示词语仅供选用。 （2）短文不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 This is a thank-you note to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 This is a thank-you note to Amy, my closest friend during junior high school. I deeply want to express my gratitude for her unwavering support and warm-heartedness. When I first started junior high, I was incredibly shy and struggled to make new friends. Amy was the first person to reach out to me, and from that moment on, our friendship has blossomed and continued to this day. Throughout our journey together, Amy has been an incredibly helpful friend. She always listens to me with patience, no matter what problems I face. She encourages me to be brave and voice my thoughts without hesitation. She offers me valuable advice on my studies and helps me make steady progress. It is truly Amy who has shaped me into a better person. I seize this opportunity to thank her once again and to wish this wonderful, warm-hearted girl a bright and promising future. Thank you, Amy! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括中文和英文问题提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：点明这是一则写给艾米的留言； 第二步，通过具体事例详细阐述对艾米感恩的原因； 第三步，再次表达对艾米的感激与美好祝福，强化感恩主题。 [亮点词汇] ①struggle to do sth.尽力做某事；挣扎着做某事 ②without hesitation毫不犹豫地 [高分句型] She always listens to me with patience, no matter what problems I face. (no matter what引导让步状语从句) （7） 成长路上，父母之爱如涓涓细流，藏于日常点滴。那些他们日复一日坚持的小事，却常被我们忽略。为引导同学们感悟亲情、学会感恩，校刊英语专栏以“Discovering My Parents’ Hidden Love”为题发起征文。请结合个人经历，从这些事情中任选一件或几件进行简述，并谈谈你现在对这份爱的感悟，然后分享你将如何用行动回报父母的恩情。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．仔细读题，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3．图中提示部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 4．文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 Discovering My Parents’ Hidden Love ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Discovering My Parents’ Hidden Love I used to think that my parents didn’t care about me. But I have discovered their hidden love on my way to school. Every day, after breakfast, my parents said, “Goodbye!” and went to work. They didn’t give me a lift. My home is far from my school. I thought they wouldn’t meet me at my school gate. But to my surprise, every time I reached the school gate, I could see my father or my mother standing there. I pretended not to see them and hurried to the classroom. Of course, I never told them about it. This small act touched me a lot. I came to know that they loved me. I felt so sorry for what I had done to them. I decided to respect them and communicate with them. I am happy to find that I have grown up. I can understand their love. I will share more time with them and tell them more about what I think. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍父母隐藏的爱； 第二步，介绍自己对于父母隐藏的爱的感受； 第三步，介绍如何用行动回报父母的恩情。 [亮点词汇] ①care about 关心 ②far from 远离 ③decide to do sth 决定做某事 ④grow up 长大 [高分句型] ①But to my surprise, every time I reached the school gate, I could see my father or my mother standing there.（时间状语从句） ② I felt so sorry for what I had done to them.（宾语从句） （8） 父亲如巍峨山脉，沉默却坚实。父爱似永不熄灭的灯塔，在深夜照亮归途。没有父亲的辛苦付出，就没有我们现在的生活。父亲节即将来临，假如你是Li Hua，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，向父亲表达自己的感谢之情。 内容要点： 1．What do you want to say to him? 2．What was the most unforgettable thing between you and your father? 3．How will you thank him on Father’s Day? 要求： 1．内容可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅； 2．不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 3．词数100左右。作文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad, Father’s Day is coming! I am writing ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks again for everything you have done for me. Love, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Dad, Father’s Day is coming! I am writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Do you remember the rainy day when I failed my math exam? I was too afraid to tell you, but you noticed my sadness. Instead of scolding me, you spent the whole night teaching me the formulas I didn’t understand. Your patience and gentle words made me realize that failure is just a step toward success. That night, you not only helped me with math but also gave me the courage to face difficulties bravely. It’s the most unforgettable thing I’ll always keep in mind. On Father’s Day, I want to make you a special breakfast—your favorite eggs and coffee. Then I’ll take you for a walk in the park, where we can talk about my dreams and your stories. Finally, I’ll give you a handwritten card to tell you how much I love you. You deserve all the happiness in the world! Thanks again for everything you have done for me.   Love,   Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：邮件开头及结尾已经给出，按照要求向父亲表达自己的感谢之情，要突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接邮件开头，引出话题； 第二步，结合具体事例，表达对父亲的感激之情； 第三步，规划父亲节行动，抒发祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①instead of代替 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 ④keep in mind记住 [高分句型] ①Do you remember the rainy day when I failed my math exam?(定语从句) ②Your patience and gentle words made me realize that failure is just a step toward success.(宾语从句) ③It’s the most unforgettable thing I’ll always keep in mind.(定语从句) （9） Write a passage according to the information given. (30—50 words) 初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，假如你是李华，请给你的老师写一张感谢卡，表达感激之情和美好祝福！ Dear Miss Liu, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Miss Liu, Thank you for teaching me so well. You’re very kind to me. In the past few years, you have given me so much encouragement and help. I have made great progress. I wish you health and happiness forever. Everything goes well!     Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：以一般现在时为主； ③ 提示：需包含“感激之情”和“美好祝福”两个核心要素，注意卡片格式规范。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表达感谢； 第二步：说明具体帮助； 第三步：送出祝福。 [亮点词汇] ① make great progress 取得巨大进步 ② health and happiness 健康与幸福 ③ Everything goes well 万事如意 [高分句型] In the past few years, you have given me so much encouragement and help.（现在完成时强调持续影响） （10） 在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母、老师、同学等。题目要求考生以“The Person I Want to Express My Thanks”为题，介绍自己最想感谢的人。 (1) 你感恩的人；(2) 简单介绍这个人 (相貌、性格、特点等)；(3) 叙述他／她对你影响最深的一件事；(4) 你想怎样感谢他／她。 The Person I Want to Express My Thanks ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Person I Want to Express My Thanks The person I want to thank most is my mother. She has kind eyes and a warm smile that always makes me feel safe. Though she is busy, she never forgets to care for me. What touches me most happened last winter. When I had a high fever, she stayed up all night putting cold towels on my forehead and checking my temperature. Her hands were tired, but she never stopped. That night, I realized how deeply she loved me. To express my thanks, I made a special card with my own hands. On it I wrote: "Mom, you are my hero. I promise to study hard and make you proud." I will also help her with housework and give her hugs every day. My mother not only gave me life but also taught me about love. I will remember her kindness from the bottom of my heart forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生需涵盖感恩对象、人物介绍、具体事例和感谢方式，并适当扩展细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点明要感谢的人 (母亲)； 第二步，描述人物外貌性格特征； 第三步，叙述具体感恩事件 (生病照顾)； 第四步，说明感谢方式 (手工卡片/家务帮助)。 [亮点词汇] ①kind eyes and a warm smile 善良的眼睛和温暖的笑容 ②stay up all night 彻夜未眠 ③from the bottom of my heart 发自内心 ④not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①Though she is busy, she never forgets to care for me. (though引导的让步状语从句) ②That night, I realized how deeply she loved me. (how引导的宾语从句) （11） 友谊是人生中重要的一部分。真正的朋友能分享快乐，在困难时给予帮助和鼓励。最近，你们学校英语俱乐部围绕“怎样才算好朋友? ”展开了讨论。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇短文, 谈谈你的看法。 内容包括： 1. 好朋友应具备的品质（诚实、善良……）; 2. 你与朋友之间的真实经历; 3. 如何维持牢固的友谊（提出1-2条建议）。 注意: 1. 词数为80词左右; 2. 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 4. 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 参考词汇: trust（v. 信任）, support（v. 支持）, communicate（v. 沟通）, unforgettable（adj. 难忘的） A good friend is like a shining star in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A good friend is like a shining star in our life. In my opinion, a true friend should be honest and supportive. They always trust you and offer help when you need it. Last year, I failed an important exam. I sat alone in the classroom, feeling very sad. At that very moment, my good friend, Lingling, appeared. She stayed with me, encouraging me to keep trying. Her kindness made that day unforgettable. To keep a strong friendship, we should communicate openly and care for each other. Remember, friendship needs time and love to grow. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明主题，用比喻句 “A good friend is like a shining star in our life.” 引出对好朋友的看法，阐述真正朋友应具备的诚实、支持等特质； 第二步，通过讲述去年考试失败，朋友 Lingling 给予鼓励的具体事例，生动展现好朋友的重要性； 第三步，结尾提出维系友谊的方法，强调沟通和关爱，点明友谊需要时间和爱来滋养，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①shining star 闪亮的星星 ②in my opinion  在我看来 ③offer help 提供帮助 [高分句型] ①A good friend is like a shining star in our life.（运用明喻的修辞手法，将好朋友比作闪亮的星星，增强文章感染力） ②To keep a strong friendship, we should communicate openly and care for each other.（动词不定式作目的状语） ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $