高频话题12 成长变化（同步写作讲义）英语八年级通用版

高频话题12 成长变化 同步写作课讲义 “成长与变化”是初中英语写作的核心话题之一，它紧密联系学生的真实生活，易于激发表达欲望。这类题目通常要求我们： 对比过去与现在： 这是文章的基本结构。需要清晰地描述“过去是怎样的”和“现在是怎样的”。 突出“变化”的节点： 变化是如何发生的？是因为某件事、某个人，还是某个阶段的感悟？ 表达个人感悟： 对这种变化有何感受？是开心、自豪，还是对未来有新的期待？这是文章的升华部分。 常见命题形式： 直接命题： My Changes, How I Have Changed, I Am Not a Little Child Anymore 半开放命题： The Biggest Change in Me, I Have Changed a Lot in the Past Three Years 情境命题： “假如你校英语报征集题为‘My Growth’的稿件，请你谈谈你进入初中以来的最大变化。” 第一步：圈定关键词，确定“变化”的范畴 看看题目要求写哪个方面的变化。是写hobbies（爱好），learning habits（学习习惯），还是character（性格）？如果题目是开放的，就选择1-2个你最有话可说的方面。 第二步：确定时态——这是关键！ 描述过去的状态： 一律使用一般过去时。 描述现在的状态： 一律使用一般现在时。 描述变化过程或结果： 常用现在完成时，因为它连接了过去和现在。 例如： I used to be shy, but now I am more outgoing. I have made many new friends. 第三步：搭建文章结构（建议采用“总-分-总”结构） 开头（总）： 开门见山，点出主题——我发生了很大的变化。 主体（分）： 分段具体描述变化。建议写2-3个方面。 方面一： 学习方面 (e.g., 从讨厌到喜欢英语) 方面二： 性格或爱好方面 (e.g., 从内向到开朗，从爱玩游戏到爱运动) 方面三： 生活能力方面 (e.g., 学会做家务，更理解父母) 结尾（总）： 总结变化，表达感受，展望未来。 典例： 成长离不开改变。在过去的三年里，你一定发生了许多变化，这些变化使你成为一个更好的人。请以“Changes Make Me a Better Person”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在性格、学习和爱好方面的变化。 写作要求： （1）根据题目并结合自己真实生活体验写作，可适当发挥； （2）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数90—100； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 Changes Make Me a Better Person ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes Make Me a Better Person I’ve changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident. First of all, I’m more outgoing than before. I used to be shy and feel lonely, but now I’m active in all kinds of after-school activities and I have many good friends. Besides, I didn’t use to be interested in my studies, so I often failed the exams. However, I take my schoolwork seriously and make great progress now. More importantly, I used to hate sports and housework, but now I’m good at running and swimming. And I love cooking, too. As a result, I get on well with my parents. Progress is impossible without changes. It is changes that make me a better person. So it’s never too late to change ourselves. 【详解】【总体分析】    ①题材：本文是话题作文； ②时态：以一般过去时为主； ③提示：需结合真实经历，避免出现真实姓名/校名，可适当发挥。 【写作步骤】    第一步：开头点题，变化带来的积极影响； 第二步：写性格、学习、爱好的具体变化； 第三步：升华主题，进步让我成为一个更好的人，所以改变自己永远不会太晚。 【亮点词汇】    ①all kind of各种各样的 ② get on well with与……相处融洽 【高分句型】    So it’s never too late to change ourselves.（it固定句型） ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 时间状语 表示过去： in the past, three years ago, when I was in primary school, in my childhood 表示现在： now, at present, nowadays 2. 核心词汇（直接描述变化） 动词： change, improve (提高), develop (发展), grow (成长) 名词： change, difference, improvement, growth (成长) 形容词（过去 vs. 现在）： 身高外貌：short/tall, thin/strong 性格：shy/outgoing, quiet/active, lazy/hard-working, careless/careful 情感：afraid/brave, unhappy/happy 3. 常用短语 表示过去习惯： used to do sth. (过去常常做某事) e.g. I used to play video games after school. 表示不再做： not...any more, not...any longer, no longer e.g. I no longer get up late on weekends. 表示开始喜欢/做： become interested in, start to enjoy, fall in love with (爱上) 表示变化结果： have made great progress in... (在...方面取得巨大进步) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 开篇点题句 I have changed a lot in the past few years. Time flies! I am no longer the little girl/boy I used to be. Looking back at the past, I find I have made many changes. 2. 对比描述句（文章主体核心） 使用 used to 句型： I used to be quiet, but now I am active in class. I didn't use to like reading, but now I find it very interesting. 使用 Before/In the past 和 Now 对比： Before, I was afraid of speaking in public. However, now I enjoy giving speeches. In the past, I spent a lot of time watching TV. But now, I prefer to play basketball with my friends. 使用比较级： I am much taller and stronger than before. I am more confident and more independent (独立的) now. 3. 表达感受与展望句 I am very happy/proud of these changes. These changes make me feel more confident about my future. Although I have changed a lot, I will keep trying to become a better person. 自我认识与提升 1. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school.为了赶上我的同学，我开始每天放学后练习跑步。 2. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to stick to exercising.无论我遇到了什么困难，我都竭尽全力坚持锻炼。 3. I find it important to keep a positive attitude when we're in trouble.我发现当我们遇到麻烦时，保持积极的态度很重要。 4. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.然而，我认为它是一个挑战，也是一个提高我的英语水平的好机会。 个人成长 5. I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public.我过去很害羞，不敢在公共场合表达自己。 6. But with the encouragement of my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.但是在老师的鼓励下，我不仅变得更加外向，而且与周围的人相处得很好。 7. Making and keeping promises plays an important role in our lives.许下承诺并信守承诺在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 8. Don't spend too much time on hard thinking because only action leads you to success.不要花太多时间苦思冥想，因为只有行动才能带你走向成功。 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 生活中的每一段经历都在为成长助力。初中生活即将结束，回顾过去近三年的生活，你发现自己有什么变化吗？你是怎么改变的？假如你是李华，校英语报组织征文活动，从中挑选优秀作品登在校刊上。请用英文介绍至少一个成长变化，并分享产生变化的原因。 要求： 1．所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可适当发挥； 2．文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 How time flies! Almost three years has quickly passed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How time flies! Almost three years has quickly passed. Looking back, my most noticeable change is becoming more confident.     In the past, I was too shy to answer questions in class. But last year, my English teacher encouraged me to join a speech contest. Though nervous at first, I practiced daily and finally won third prize. This experience taught me that courage grows through challenges. Now, I actively participate in class discussions and even lead group projects. This change came because I realized: growth happens outside our comfort zone. Every small step forward builds confidence. Junior high taught me to embrace challenges bravely.   【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示信息讲述三年里发生的改变和怎样改变的； 第三步，这个改变给你的启发。 [亮点词汇] ①noticeable显著的 ②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ③at first起初 ④participate in参加 [高分句型] ①How time flies! (感叹句) ②This change came because I realized: growth happens outside our comfort zone. (because引导的原因状语从句) （2） 成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途也有美丽的风景，每一次改变都是这场旅途中的回忆。回首这几年的初中时光，你的生活中也一定会有一些变化，请你以“Great changes in my growth”为题，谈谈自己成长过程中的转变、收获及打算。 注意事项： 1. 短文须根据导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数100左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 Great changes in my growth Time goes by, and people sure change. I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                              Great changes in my growth Time goes by, and people surely change. I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be.    In the past, I used to be short and fat, like an ugly duckling because I always eat junk food. When I was young, I didn’t like writing or reading. I was a slow reader. But now, I am strong and healthy. I am good at so many things, such as reading, drawing and playing basketball. I often help my parents with housework and communicate with them. The new year is coming. I hope I can become better and let my parents be proud of me. Besides, I am going to study harder and get good grades to get into my ideal high school. I am also going to travel with my friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：注意不要遗漏材料已给要点，各部分进行适当阐述。 [写作步骤] ① 第一步，回忆过去的自己； ② 第二步，展示现在的自己，与以前做出比较； ③ 第三步， 畅想将来的计划和打算。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去是 ②be good at擅长；善于 ③communicate with与……交流 ④be proud of为……感到骄傲 [高分句型] ①When I was young, I didn’t like writing or reading.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope I can become better and let my parents be proud of me（宾语从句） （3） 在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长。请以“________ Help(s) Me Grow”为题写一篇文章，谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。 内容包括： 1.你过去的状态；2.你发生的变化；3.变化对你的意义。 要求：1.需先把标题补充完整，文章内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名字； 2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ________ Help(s) Me Grow As we progress through life, many things or people contribute to our personal growth and development. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Books Help Me Grow As we progress through life, many things or people contribute to our personal growth and development. In my case, books have played a significant role in shaping who I am today. In the past, I was shy and lacked confidence. I often felt lost and unsure about my abilities. However, through reading, I discovered new worlds and perspectives that inspired me to step out of my comfort zone. Over time, I noticed a change in myself. I became more confident, articulate, and open-minded. This transformation has been meaningful because it has not only improved my academic performance but also enriched my personal relationships. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你过去的状态以及你发生的变化； 第二步，介绍变化对你的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①played a significant role in发挥重要的作用 ②inspired鼓舞 ③not only…but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] ①In my case, books have played a significant role in shaping who I am today.（宾语从句） ②However, through reading, I discovered new worlds and perspectives that inspired me to step out of my comfort zone.（定语从句） （4） 从小学到初中，我们一直在变化中成长。 现在你作为九年级学长受邀跟七年级新入校同学做一次演讲，分享你进入初中以来发生的变化，以帮助他们更快适应初中生活。从以下各方面进行阐述： 最后，提出对七年级同学的期望。 注意：文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。词数：100个词左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, every seventh grader, I’m Li Ming, from Grade 9. In order to help you adapt to junior high school life faster, I will share the changes that have occurred since I entered junior high school. I have changed a lot since I became a junior high school student. I used to be shy in primary school, but now I dare to show myself in public thanks to my teacher’s encouragement. In the past, my parents drove me to school every day, but now I ride my bike to school to exercise. The biggest change is that I had no problem in studying in the past, but now I’m always feeling stressed because there is more homework and subjects are much more difficult. Although it’s not easy to be a junior high school student, I do wish you enjoy your junior high school life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主。 ③提示：题目要求根据思维导图提示写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的变化，要求从性格、学习以及生活等方面展开。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍演讲的目的； 第二步，介绍自己在性格、学习以及生活等方面的变化； 第三步，最后表达自己的对七年级同学的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去常常 ②thanks to由于 ③have no problem in doing sth做某事没有问题 [高分句型] ① I will share the changes that have occurred since I entered junior high school.（that引导的定语从句，since引导的时间状语从句） ② Although it’s not easy to be a junior high school student, I do wish you enjoy your junior high school life.（although引导的让步状语从句） （5） 人生是一个不断改变、不断成长的过程。在即将结束的初中三年里，你有什么变化吗？请以“How I have changed!”为题，写一篇作文，描述初中以来你在学习、生活、习惯、性格等方面的变化。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。 2. 词数不少于60。 3. 文中不得使用你的真实的姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I have changed! As time goes by, I grow up every day. Of course, I have changed a lot in the past three years. Let me show you my changes. I used to dislike studying. I couldn’t finish my homework on time. Now I realize the importance of learning. I always study hard. I used to eat junk food a lot. Junk food is harmful to health. I should eat more fruits and vegetables. I used to get up late and often came to school late. Now I get up early every day to exercise every day. Besides, I was quite shy in the past, so I was always silent in class. When I talked to people, my face often turned red. However, I’m much more outgoing than before. And I can give speeches for the whole school now. People surely change! I really believe my life will be better and better because of the changes! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时和一般过去时”为主； ③提示：要求以“How I have changed!”为题，介绍自己在初中三年里的变化，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达介绍自己三年里的变化； 第二步，从学习、生活、习惯、性格等方面具体介绍自己的变化； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①on time按时 ②be harmful to对……有害 ③give speeches发表演讲 ④the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] ①When I talked to people, my face often turned red. (when引导时间状语从句) ②I really believe my life will be better and better because of the changes! (宾语从句) （6） 每个人都在变化中成长。在三年的初中生活中，你一定经历了很多改变。假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号计划做主题为“My Change for Growth”的系列推送。请你写一篇英文稿件投稿，谈谈谁或什么事让你在改变中成长，你的感悟是什么。 提示词语： parent, teacher, reading, learn, realize, confident 提示问题： Who/What has changed you for better growth? What have you learned from it? 要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Change for Growth We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading. When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time. Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； 。③ 提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己在三年的初中生活中有很多改变； 第二步，介绍什么事让你在改变中成长； 第三步，最后表达感受或感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① fall in love with爱上 ② begin to do开始做 ③ feel like doing sth想要做某事 [高分句型] When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all.（when引导的时间状语从句） （7） 在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，比如父母、老师、学习、爱好等。他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长，丰富我们的生命。请你以 _____________ Help(s) Me Grow为题写一篇文章，通过一件事情谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。 注意：1. 请把标题补充完整；2. 词数100左右；3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。 _____________ Help(s) Me Grow ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Writing Helps Me Grow As we progress through life, a variety of things or people contribute to our personal growth and development. I used to be a shy person who never felt comfortable speaking in front of a crowd and I often felt like my voice didn’t matter. Growing up, I was often overlooked and felt like I was nobody. But all of this changed when I discovered my true love for writing. It helped me find my voice. I started to express my thoughts and feelings through my writing freely, which helped me grow more confident. Through writing, I was able to learn more about who I was and what I wanted in life. My growth and confidence have changed my life for the better. I have been able to realize my dreams with courage and faith. Writing has opened up many new doors for me and has made me into the person I am today. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题干，开门点题，介绍在我们成长的过程中各种各样的事情或人有助于我们的个人成长和发展； 第二步，通过一件事情谈谈自己成长中的变化； 第三步，最后表达这个变化对你的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①a variety of各种各样的 ②used to be过去是 ③be able to能够 [高分句型] ①But all of this changed when I discovered my true love for writing（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I started to express my thoughts and feelings through my writing freely, which helped me grow more confident. （which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③Through writing, I was able to learn more about who I was and what I wanted in life.（who和what引导的宾语从句） （8） “所谓人生，是一刻也不停地变化着的” ——列夫 • 托尔斯泰 我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展 “成长轨迹” 征文活动，题目是“How I’ve Changed!”。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇英语短文介绍你的变化，给该公众号投稿。 1. 从外貌、性格、爱好等至少从三个方面描述你的变化； 2. 介绍你的一个重要变化、变化过程及原因； 3. 你从中得到了什么启发。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I’ve Changed! How time flies! Three years has quickly passed, and I have changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m more outgoing and I like to make friends. I used to hate reading. However, now I have fallen in love with it. The most important change in my life was becoming interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading. What’s more, reading makes me happy and relaxed. As the famous saying goes, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” Thanks to the middle school life, I have changed so much and also become better and better. Never will I forget the valuable middle school life! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时” 和 “一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给的要点提示完成写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明文章主题； 第二步，从性格、外貌、爱好等方面对比自己的变化； 第三步，详细介绍自己最重要的一个变化过程； 第四步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be 过去是 ②fall in love with 爱上…… ③become interested in 对……产生兴趣 ④thanks to由于，幸亏 [高分句型] ①I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. (最高级句型) ②It was the most important change because I learned a lot from reading. (because引导原因状语从句) ③Never will I forget the valuable middle school life! (倒装句) （9） 一次家务的完成，一次独自的旅行，一次难题的解决，一次比赛的参与……，我们的进步和成长无处不在。然而在生活中，我们总是喜欢赞美他人，却常常忽视自己的进步和成长。近日，校刊英语专栏正在开展以“发现更好的自己”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你和你的成长故事。 要点提示： 1. 基本信息 (外貌、性格……的变化)； 2. 习惯 (饮食、运动……)； 3. 助你成长的一次经历 (事情经过、你的感受……)； 4. …… 要求： 1. 合理运用比较级； 2. 100词左右； 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Life is a journey (旅程) to find yourself. I find myself better and better. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Life is a journey to find yourself. I find myself better and better. I used to be a shy and introverted person with average looks. However, over the past few years, I have become more confident and outgoing. My appearance has also improved as I started paying more attention to my health and fitness. I now exercise regularly and eat a balanced diet, which has made me stronger and more positive.   One significant experience that contributed to my growth was participating in a school debate competition. Firstly, I was nervous and unsure of myself, but with practice, I improved my speaking skills and gained confidence. Eventually, I won the competition, which made me realize my possible and the importance of stepping out of my comfort zone. This experience taught me that with effort and willpower, I can achieve great things and become a better version of myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，引出“我”的改变这一主题； 第二步，具体阐述外貌、性格的改变； 第三步，举例是什么经历导致的改变。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be曾是 ②improve as改进为 ③pay attention to注意 ④contribute to导致 ⑤the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] ①I now exercise regularly and eat a balanced diet, which has made me stronger and more positive. (which引导的定语从句) ②One significant experience that contributed to my growth was participating in a school debate competition. (that引导的定语从句) （10） 假如你是Jack，是第一中学九年级学生。进入初中以来，你变化很大，记录自己的成长过程，并谈谈你的未来计划。 过去 1. 安静内向，不敢在人群中说话； 2. 不喜欢英语，害怕犯错； 3. ……（自拟一点） 现在 1. 更加外向，不再孤独寂寞； 2. 爱上英语，养成好的学习习惯； 3. ……（自拟一点） 未来计划 ……（一至两点） 要求： 1. 所写内容须包括所有所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不得出现真实的人名或校名； 3. 词数不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数. I’m Jack, a Grade 9 student in No. 1 Middle School. I have changed a lot during the last few years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Jack, a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School. I have changed a lot during the last few years. In the past, I was quiet and introverted, and I didn’t dare to speak in front of people. I didn’t like English and was afraid of making mistakes. Additionally, I was not interested in sports and preferred staying at home. However, I have become more outgoing and no longer feel lonely. I have fallen in love with English and developed good study habits. Moreover, I now enjoy playing basketball and often participate in school sports activities. In the future, I plan to continue improving my English and aim to study abroad. I also want to learn a musical instrument to enrich my life. I believe these plans will help me grow and achieve my dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”、“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写过去的我的性格和爱好是怎样； 第二步，写现在的我的性格和爱好变怎样； 第三步，写未来的我计划有哪些。 [亮点词汇] ①dare to do sth敢于做某事 ②fall in love迷恋 ③participate in参加 ④aim to do sth计划做某事 [高分句型] ①I believe these plans will help me grow and achieve my dreams.（believe引导的宾语从句） （11） 回首初中两年多时光， 同学们在变化中不断成长，也在成长中不断变化，从而成为更好的自己。为此，你校开展以“My Changes”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是 Scott，请你根据以下内容提示，撰写一篇以此为题的英语演讲稿。 内容提示： 1.根据图示描述你的变化。 2.针对你的变化谈谈你的感受（给自己带来了什么影响）。 3.说说你对将来的期望。 注意： 1.词数为80词左右； 2.可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出， 不计入总词数。 参考词汇：used to；heavy；quiet；carefully；stay up late；in the future My Changes Hello, everyone. I’m Scott. In the last two years, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My Changes Hello, everyone. I’m Scott. In the last two years, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways. I used to be a little heavy, but now I am not. Because I exercise every day. I used to be really quiet, but now I am outgoing. I enjoy staying with my friends and playing games. I didn’t use to listen to the teacher carefully in class. But now I always listen carefully and takes notes. And I study harder than before. I used to stay up late, but now I go to bed early and get up early. I am happy with all my changes. They make me better, and I am more confident. I expect more wonderful changes in the future. And I think I will make greater progress. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”和一般过去时为主。 ③提示：题目要求根据思维导图提示写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的变化，要求从外貌、性格、学习习惯以及生活习惯四个方面展开。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。（文章已给出） 第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍自己在外貌、性格、学习习惯以及生活习惯等方面的变化。 第三步，最后表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去常常 ②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ③in class课上 [高分句型] And I think I will make greater progress.（宾语从句） （12） 成长与变化，是生命的馈赠。 某英文网站正在开展以“改变”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你进入初中以来最大的改变，它是如何发生的，以及你的收获。 提示词语：used to, shy, face challenges, brave 提示问题： ●What is your biggest change? ●How did it happen? ●What have you learned from the experience? I have changed a lot in the last few years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Biggest Change I have changed a lot in the last few years. The biggest change is that my English has improved a lot. I used to be shy and faced lots of challenges in learning English. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office after school. She helped me with my problems. We made a plan for my English learning. She also encouraged me to answer questions. With her help, my English has improved a lot and I become more confident and braver. I am proud of my change and I feel that I am so lucky to have an English teacher. I like her very much. I really want to say thanks to her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己在过去几年中的改变以及它是如何发生的； 第二步，介绍自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do过去常常 ②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 ③be proud of以……为傲 [高分句型] ①I am proud of my change and I feel that I am so lucky to have an English teacher.（and连接并列句；that引导宾语从句） ②I really want to say thanks to her.（动词不定式作宾语） ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高频话题12 成长变化 同步写作课讲义 “成长与变化”是初中英语写作的核心话题之一，它紧密联系学生的真实生活，易于激发表达欲望。这类题目通常要求我们： 对比过去与现在： 这是文章的基本结构。需要清晰地描述“过去是怎样的”和“现在是怎样的”。 突出“变化”的节点： 变化是如何发生的？是因为某件事、某个人，还是某个阶段的感悟？ 表达个人感悟： 对这种变化有何感受？是开心、自豪，还是对未来有新的期待？这是文章的升华部分。 常见命题形式： 直接命题： My Changes, How I Have Changed, I Am Not a Little Child Anymore 半开放命题： The Biggest Change in Me, I Have Changed a Lot in the Past Three Years 情境命题： “假如你校英语报征集题为‘My Growth’的稿件，请你谈谈你进入初中以来的最大变化。” 第一步：圈定关键词，确定“变化”的范畴 看看题目要求写哪个方面的变化。是写hobbies（爱好），learning habits（学习习惯），还是character（性格）？如果题目是开放的，就选择1-2个你最有话可说的方面。 第二步：确定时态——这是关键！ 描述过去的状态： 一律使用一般过去时。 描述现在的状态： 一律使用一般现在时。 描述变化过程或结果： 常用现在完成时，因为它连接了过去和现在。 例如： I used to be shy, but now I am more outgoing. I have made many new friends. 第三步：搭建文章结构（建议采用“总-分-总”结构） 开头（总）： 开门见山，点出主题——我发生了很大的变化。 主体（分）： 分段具体描述变化。建议写2-3个方面。 方面一： 学习方面 (e.g., 从讨厌到喜欢英语) 方面二： 性格或爱好方面 (e.g., 从内向到开朗，从爱玩游戏到爱运动) 方面三： 生活能力方面 (e.g., 学会做家务，更理解父母) 结尾（总）： 总结变化，表达感受，展望未来。 典例： 成长离不开改变。在过去的三年里，你一定发生了许多变化，这些变化使你成为一个更好的人。请以“Changes Make Me a Better Person”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在性格、学习和爱好方面的变化。 写作要求： （1）根据题目并结合自己真实生活体验写作，可适当发挥； （2）语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数90—100； （3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 Changes Make Me a Better Person ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes Make Me a Better Person I’ve changed a lot in the past three years. Changes make me happy and confident. First of all, I’m more outgoing than before. I used to be shy and feel lonely, but now I’m active in all kinds of after-school activities and I have many good friends. Besides, I didn’t use to be interested in my studies, so I often failed the exams. However, I take my schoolwork seriously and make great progress now. More importantly, I used to hate sports and housework, but now I’m good at running and swimming. And I love cooking, too. As a result, I get on well with my parents. Progress is impossible without changes. It is changes that make me a better person. So it’s never too late to change ourselves. 【详解】【总体分析】    ①题材：本文是话题作文； ②时态：以一般过去时为主； ③提示：需结合真实经历，避免出现真实姓名/校名，可适当发挥。 【写作步骤】    第一步：开头点题，变化带来的积极影响； 第二步：写性格、学习、爱好的具体变化； 第三步：升华主题，进步让我成为一个更好的人，所以改变自己永远不会太晚。 【亮点词汇】    ①all kind of各种各样的 ② get on well with与……相处融洽 【高分句型】    So it’s never too late to change ourselves.（it固定句型） ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 时间状语 表示过去： in the past, three years ago, when I was in primary school, in my childhood 表示现在： now, at present, nowadays 2. 核心词汇（直接描述变化） 动词： change, improve (提高), develop (发展), grow (成长) 名词： change, difference, improvement, growth (成长) 形容词（过去 vs. 现在）： 身高外貌：short/tall, thin/strong 性格：shy/outgoing, quiet/active, lazy/hard-working, careless/careful 情感：afraid/brave, unhappy/happy 3. 常用短语 表示过去习惯： used to do sth. (过去常常做某事) e.g. I used to play video games after school. 表示不再做： not...any more, not...any longer, no longer e.g. I no longer get up late on weekends. 表示开始喜欢/做： become interested in, start to enjoy, fall in love with (爱上) 表示变化结果： have made great progress in... (在...方面取得巨大进步) ( 词汇积累 ) 1. 开篇点题句 I have changed a lot in the past few years. Time flies! I am no longer the little girl/boy I used to be. Looking back at the past, I find I have made many changes. 2. 对比描述句（文章主体核心） 使用 used to 句型： I used to be quiet, but now I am active in class. I didn't use to like reading, but now I find it very interesting. 使用 Before/In the past 和 Now 对比： Before, I was afraid of speaking in public. However, now I enjoy giving speeches. In the past, I spent a lot of time watching TV. But now, I prefer to play basketball with my friends. 使用比较级： I am much taller and stronger than before. I am more confident and more independent (独立的) now. 3. 表达感受与展望句 I am very happy/proud of these changes. These changes make me feel more confident about my future. Although I have changed a lot, I will keep trying to become a better person. 自我认识与提升 1. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school.为了赶上我的同学，我开始每天放学后练习跑步。 2. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to stick to exercising.无论我遇到了什么困难，我都竭尽全力坚持锻炼。 3. I find it important to keep a positive attitude when we're in trouble.我发现当我们遇到麻烦时，保持积极的态度很重要。 4. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.然而，我认为它是一个挑战，也是一个提高我的英语水平的好机会。 个人成长 5. I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public.我过去很害羞，不敢在公共场合表达自己。 6. But with the encouragement of my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.但是在老师的鼓励下，我不仅变得更加外向，而且与周围的人相处得很好。 7. Making and keeping promises plays an important role in our lives.许下承诺并信守承诺在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 8. Don't spend too much time on hard thinking because only action leads you to success.不要花太多时间苦思冥想，因为只有行动才能带你走向成功。 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 生活中的每一段经历都在为成长助力。初中生活即将结束，回顾过去近三年的生活，你发现自己有什么变化吗？你是怎么改变的？假如你是李华，校英语报组织征文活动，从中挑选优秀作品登在校刊上。请用英文介绍至少一个成长变化，并分享产生变化的原因。 要求： 1．所写内容必须符合征稿要求，可适当发挥； 2．文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 How time flies! Almost three years has quickly passed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途也有美丽的风景，每一次改变都是这场旅途中的回忆。回首这几年的初中时光，你的生活中也一定会有一些变化，请你以“Great changes in my growth”为题，谈谈自己成长过程中的转变、收获及打算。 注意事项： 1. 短文须根据导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数100左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 Great changes in my growth Time goes by, and people sure change. I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长。请以“________ Help(s) Me Grow”为题写一篇文章，谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。 内容包括： 1.你过去的状态；2.你发生的变化；3.变化对你的意义。 要求：1.需先把标题补充完整，文章内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。 注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名字； 2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ________ Help(s) Me Grow As we progress through life, many things or people contribute to our personal growth and development. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 从小学到初中，我们一直在变化中成长。 现在你作为九年级学长受邀跟七年级新入校同学做一次演讲，分享你进入初中以来发生的变化，以帮助他们更快适应初中生活。从以下各方面进行阐述： 最后，提出对七年级同学的期望。 注意：文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。词数：100个词左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 人生是一个不断改变、不断成长的过程。在即将结束的初中三年里，你有什么变化吗？请以“How I have changed!”为题，写一篇作文，描述初中以来你在学习、生活、习惯、性格等方面的变化。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。 2. 词数不少于60。 3. 文中不得使用你的真实的姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） 每个人都在变化中成长。在三年的初中生活中，你一定经历了很多改变。假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号计划做主题为“My Change for Growth”的系列推送。请你写一篇英文稿件投稿，谈谈谁或什么事让你在改变中成长，你的感悟是什么。 提示词语： parent, teacher, reading, learn, realize, confident 提示问题： Who/What has changed you for better growth? What have you learned from it? 要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，比如父母、老师、学习、爱好等。他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长，丰富我们的生命。请你以 _____________ Help(s) Me Grow为题写一篇文章，通过一件事情谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。 注意：1. 请把标题补充完整；2. 词数100左右；3. 文中不得出现真实校名和姓名等信息。 _____________ Help(s) Me Grow ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （8） “所谓人生，是一刻也不停地变化着的” ——列夫 • 托尔斯泰 我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展 “成长轨迹” 征文活动，题目是“How I’ve Changed!”。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇英语短文介绍你的变化，给该公众号投稿。 1. 从外貌、性格、爱好等至少从三个方面描述你的变化； 2. 介绍你的一个重要变化、变化过程及原因； 3. 你从中得到了什么启发。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （9） 一次家务的完成，一次独自的旅行，一次难题的解决，一次比赛的参与……，我们的进步和成长无处不在。然而在生活中，我们总是喜欢赞美他人，却常常忽视自己的进步和成长。近日，校刊英语专栏正在开展以“发现更好的自己”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你和你的成长故事。 要点提示： 1. 基本信息 (外貌、性格……的变化)； 2. 习惯 (饮食、运动……)； 3. 助你成长的一次经历 (事情经过、你的感受……)； 4. …… 要求： 1. 合理运用比较级； 2. 100词左右； 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Life is a journey (旅程) to find yourself. I find myself better and better. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （10） 假如你是Jack，是第一中学九年级学生。进入初中以来，你变化很大，记录自己的成长过程，并谈谈你的未来计划。 过去 1. 安静内向，不敢在人群中说话； 2. 不喜欢英语，害怕犯错； 3. ……（自拟一点） 现在 1. 更加外向，不再孤独寂寞； 2. 爱上英语，养成好的学习习惯； 3. ……（自拟一点） 未来计划 ……（一至两点） 要求： 1. 所写内容须包括所有所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 不得出现真实的人名或校名； 3. 词数不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数. I’m Jack, a Grade 9 student in No. 1 Middle School. I have changed a lot during the last few years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （11） 回首初中两年多时光， 同学们在变化中不断成长，也在成长中不断变化，从而成为更好的自己。为此，你校开展以“My Changes”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是 Scott，请你根据以下内容提示，撰写一篇以此为题的英语演讲稿。 内容提示： 1.根据图示描述你的变化。 2.针对你的变化谈谈你的感受（给自己带来了什么影响）。 3.说说你对将来的期望。 注意： 1.词数为80词左右； 2.可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文开头已给出， 不计入总词数。 参考词汇：used to；heavy；quiet；carefully；stay up late；in the future My Changes Hello, everyone. I’m Scott. In the last two years, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （12） 成长与变化，是生命的馈赠。 某英文网站正在开展以“改变”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你进入初中以来最大的改变，它是如何发生的，以及你的收获。 提示词语：used to, shy, face challenges, brave 提示问题： ●What is your biggest change? ●How did it happen? ●What have you learned from the experience? 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